Reviews by jlove34
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JavaMasta

Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives.  But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl.  Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family.  Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124850
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2014
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Fabulous story. Thanks for sharing it.

That Derby Fic by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Edward is dragged unwillingly to witness his first roller derby bout when his little sister Alice joins the league.  He's uncomfortable in the dense crowd until a star rollergirl takes notice of him and he's positive he just lost his heart. 1st person EPOV.

Lemony AH oneshot written originally for Hev99 for general awesomeness.  Title comes from some late-night IM razzing from college buddies ;-) 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12115 Read Count: 1456
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Apr 2011
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great one shot. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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This awesome banner made by the awesome DivineInspiration


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

This is a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing.

Summary:

THIS AWESOME BANNER WAS MADE BY MIST.  SHE IS SOOOOO COOL!!!


After the wolves kill Laurent to save Bella they start to encounter more vampires that are coming to Forks for her. There is not enough of the pack to fight them all. Bella goes on the lam with the last wolf that she would ever expect to protect her. On the run together they find a world of adventure, danger and love.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Paul
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Wolf Girl
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64687 Read Count: 6796
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2012 Updated: 24 Jan 2014
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oooh man. That was fricking hilarious. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

It always makes me happy when someone likes my stories. Thank you soooo much for reading me.

PG

 

 

 

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Bwahahaha. Very funny. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

You are making my day!!!! Thank you sooo much sweetie for reading me and leaving me a response. It means a lot to me.

 

BIG HUGS!!

PG

 

 

 

 

555-TALK by LegendaryDiamond Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 92]
Summary: Past Featured Story

What happens when Bella dials the wrong number one night and instead of getting her Mom she gets an erotic radio station's hotline? "Hello, this is Edward speaking, tell us your deepest fantasies or real life sexy stories."555-Talk banner by ysar




THANK YOU SO MUCH YSAR FOR THE BANNER! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44950 Read Count: 31096
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2012 Updated: 23 Jan 2016
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Temptation

Nooooooo. I ran out of chapters! I like this. Can't wait for another update.



Author's Response:

I updated. I apologize for the long wait. Happy New Year!

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281021
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great chapter.

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow. Edward is one hurtin' unit. Hope everything works out.

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

great story. Can't wait for more. Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

mdd

Bella is a divorced English teacher, who doesn't know she has a vampire in her class.

"Please don't push me away, Bella. Isn't it my choice if I want to be with you? I'm not a child in the way I feel."

"I'm not the older woman who's going to spend a season educating a teenage boy so he can go off and remember me fondly. I'm looking for forever."

"How do you know I couldn't..."

" Because you're a boy, Edward, a beautiful, sweet, confused, boy! You've got your whole life ahead of you. This kind of thing doesn't work out."

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 453800 Read Count: 80995
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2013 Updated: 30 May 2014
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Firsts

Love this story. Can't wait for more. Merry Christmas to you, too!



Author's Response:

Aww thanks a bunch. 

Summary:

BANNER BY: MINA

Summary: Can someone who has known nothing but hurt and dysfunction find love after the age of forty? Only time can tell, if 'the things that make you click' can bring you happiness. Bella/Edward pairing, all human, rated NC-17.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26672 Read Count: 2356
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2013 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this! Thanks for sharing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

alitd

 

On one of history's darkest days, Edward finds his other half. Bella wakes to find that her guardian angel may just be a figment of her imagination. A journey of two lost souls as they find the light when darkness surrounds them.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120996 Read Count: 29935
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2014 Updated: 13 Jul 2014
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Ok, I'm cheating and have this favorited on multiple sites. Saw this when I was uploading my new story. This was a great chapter. Thanks for sharing!!



Author's Response:

*laugh* Not cheating. and I love that! Thank you. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

CITF_Chandra

Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1081940
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 175: Epilogue

Aww. Great conclusion. Thanks for sharing! :-)~ Jamie

Savage by honeyandholywater Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Bella's parents never split up, Renee never followed her dreams and escaped Forks. Thus, Bella has grown up in a constantly overcast small town with a police chief father and a mother who's checked out emotionally.  She's still the straight A student whose never met a boy who peaked her interest but she did find other ways to escape her suffocating life. 

Edward and the Cullens move back to Forks as they did previous to the first novel, only Bella is already there.  Edward is still a vampire with an Edwardian man's sensibilities, and he's still drawn inexorably to Bella, despite her pasttimes. 

 

for images related to this go to my tumblr: honeyandholywater.tumblr.com


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19563 Read Count: 13534
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2014 Updated: 06 Aug 2015
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

When you're in the process of posting a chapter, you recieve an error code, which I almost always do when I post, contact the site director and give them your penname, post date, and name of story in an email, along with the error code. They'll fix and place it on the recently updated page. I have to contact them every time, it seems. Its an unfortunate flaw in the coding that the site director can't remedy for some users, for one reason or another. Hope that helps! - great story so far, btw. 

Jamie

Fairy Godfather by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 79]
Summary:

Young doctor Edward pulls a beautiful girl out of harm's way, and finds that he may have just stumbled onto his greatest desire. Daddykink, so if that's not your thing, go elsewhere. For abadkitty.


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33156 Read Count: 40017
[Report This] Published: 26 Sep 2014 Updated: 25 Mar 2015
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh, Good. Emmett isn't the best person to run into at the moment. Hope he doesn't tease Bella to much.

Run Me Over by reinla Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Running from her problems in Forks, Bella literally runs into the sheriff of Area Five in Dallas. Will she survive an encounter with the nightwalkers, or will she forced back into her old life at the hands of the Cold Ones?

 

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Godric/Bella
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33169 Read Count: 9353
[Report This] Published: 30 Dec 2014 Updated: 06 Nov 2015
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Discussions

OH, I have an inkling that Carlisle and CO. are up to something. However what I don't understand is why, if the patriarch is collecting talents, they'd left Bella alone in the first place. Obviously it wasn't "for her own safety" as was the reason in canon. That makes me super curious what Vickie found in Daddy C's files.

So, is the Captain and Char going to be in this story, too? As Jasper, I love them to death.

I can't wait to see what kind of bond Bella and Godric have.

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Jasper Explores Dallas

I can't hardly imagine my Jasper as anything other then a blond. On the other hand, if I imagine him as Jackson Rathborne, then the picture is so deliciously clear. * fans self *

Wonder what has Bella's feathers all ruffled? She's definitely feeling something.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

There were so many secrets people carried in their minds.  For this reason I told them the mind often whispered and I didn't hear it unless I listened closely.  I lied.  Lying is part of who I am: A vampire pretending to be human, a mind reader pretending I don't know the things I know, an old lover pretending to be a novice.  When she asked if I'd ever been interested in the beautiful Rosalie--I lied.   

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55884 Read Count: 5448
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2015 Updated: 24 Mar 2015
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 First Love

This is wonderful, so far. Though all his trials with false love, I can see just how easily Edward became attached to anyone who might love him. His telepathy is a blessing and a curse. He sees so much in the deep, dark reassesses of other people's minds that he doesn't take the time to form meaningful relationships, nor does he relate well to others. Not that he doesn't have meaningful relationships with his family members, but that why Bella is such a perfect partner for him. He's forced to get to know her, fall in love with her. I think, outside of her blood, that Edward would've overlooked Bella had he been able to read her mind. Seeing her POV in the books, we know that, outside of her slight maturity, she's still merely a teen—with the same, thoughts, lust, and desires of any girl her age.

I enjoy all of your stories, my favorite was the post-BD Carlisle/Bella story. Would you like me to make you a banner? I love playing with Photoshop, and I'm ecstatic when I get to make someone something to add to my favorite stories. If you're curious about my work, you can see my banners on my page (some of them are older, and I've gotten better since I began. My newest is An unfortunate Sept.), or go to photobucket under jstoaks, where I've made many more for other authors.



Author's Response:

Sorry it's taken me so long to respond.  I'm in the midst of packing and getting ready to move, and I had too much to do at the time.  I've also been giving them a week to simmer, so I don't squee if it's good, or lash out if it's not.  I really appreciate someone who takes the time to review like you have.  Of all the "superpowers" to get, I hope I'd never get mind reading.  I don't know what would be worse, seeing what people thought of me, or seeing how little the subject even crossed their minds.  I agree, if Edward had been able to read Bella, I doubt he'd have given her a second look.  This story sort of sprang from the idea of how mind reading would really affect someone.  Plus, I couldn't resist making Edward a typical seventeen year-old boy.  

I'm glad you enjoy my stories.  I think my Carlisle/Bella story was in my top two.  This one practically wrote itself, so it's a favorite of mine.  As to a banner, I would love one!  Even as I say it, I'm intimidated.  I don't know the first thing about adding an image to a story.  This old dog was born before computers, and they're still counter-intuitive to me.  I've written a couple original novels, and I'm stuck on the "What do I do now" part of publishing.  It must be nice to be able to work with that softwear and come up with something that makes you proud.  

Thanks for taking the time to read and respond. 

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Epilogue

I was seriously confused when I opened this chapter, at first. I said to myself, "how'd we get from Italy to Ness's wedding?" I went back to the previous chapter and shrugged, still confused. Then I said, "To Hell with it " and read the whole thing. Boy was I surpised to find the rest of the story after the wedding. It was great, even though I'm dumb. I can make banners, but apparently I can't read worth a damn. Lol 😄

Now, I'm thinking about how to make a banner for the Carlisle/Bella story. As one of my favs, it needs a banner, too! Want another?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, and sorry for the confusion.  I did something here I usually don't do, which is rely on what readers know from the original.  Since I wanted to take this story through Edward meeting Bella, I did write the early part of their relationship.  Bue I didn't want to keep repeating history and retelling what happened in canon.  I did make a big leap.  Even worse, I intended it to be confusing at the beginning.  I'm crazy in that I like to keep readers guessing, even at the end of a story.  I wanted there to be some ambiguity about the wedding, where it looked like it was Bella--not Ness.  

You're awesome at banners.  I had to get my son to help me with this one.  Between one site messing up the instructions and my own tech dead-zone, it might never have made it.  He didn't do it your way, but it made it!  If you want to make one for Cold Fragile Hearts, I'm certainly not going to complain.  I think people have a tendency to read those with covers, and skip those without.  

Thanks for reading, and for the great five-cup rating!       

Summary:

Made by: Falling Star

 

After Bella’s first day at Forks High, Edward fled to Alaska. What if, when he got back, the rest of the family were less than inclined to help him get the girl? Just how far will some go to make sure Bella ended up with who she was meant to? Most importantly, what happens when the one she’s meant for finds out? Twi-rewrite. AU, NC, Crossover, rated for future gore, adult situations and naughty language. Part 1 of 3


Categories: Twilight, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Klaus
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Design Trilogy
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12926 Read Count: 24129
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2015 Updated: 27 Feb 2015
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This looks promising! Can't bcc wait for more of this and SOTF.

Summary: Past Featured Story

bannner

Isabella is an English woman, trying to escape a marriage she doesn't want. Edward is a Scottish Laird, with a soft spot for a damsel in distress and a hate for the English Redcoats that pursue her, but what does he do with her now that he has saved her? He has no choice, other than to bring her home, but he wasn't counting on falling for the lass on the journey to Castle Menzies.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32098 Read Count: 136771
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2015 Updated: 07 Jun 2015
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh, Scottish Edward can manhandle me anytime! :-) Great update!

Summary:

Isabella, desperate for a job after college agrees to move across the country to apply to be governess for two young children. She soon finds out that the Cullen Estate and the Master that resides within are dark and frightening. For the sake of her charges, she must attempt to find a way to reach the heart of the man who looks at her as no more than a servant. Read warning!    


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81972 Read Count: 48018
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2015 Updated: 16 Jun 2018
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh, Lord! She needs to wear a skirt or a dress. 'Cause the Master would've definitely gotten "freaky" with the governess. Lol ")

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Eek. The intrigue is killing me! Great chapter.

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ugh. Heavy stuff, there. Edward and his staff are very backward in the times. (Jerks, too!!) You might see a gentleman act similarly toward his children/staff upward into "vampire" Edward's era. So why is everyone acting as if they were living in a previous century? Also, I'm not quite sure what to make of the headstone. Is it an ancestor, or a placeholder? 'Cause they way he's been pushing her, it might just end up the latter. So intriguing. Thanks for sharing! :-)

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, damn. I think Isabella will be a good influence in the Cullen house. Though I'm fearful that she might be on the business end of that temper of his before she saves the children from his wrathful behavior.

Summary:

Edward was warned to stay away from Bella. When he didn't, Jacob and Embry decided to do something about it. Twilight AU. Crackfic, humor. Language. Written for the Tricky Raven's April Fools' Advanced Drabble-Writing Challenge Week of 03/29 - 04/04/2015 (Week 13). Jacob, Embry, Quil, Bella, Charlie Swan, Edward.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Crackfic
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Friendship, Humor, Parody/Crackfic
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 684 Read Count: 765
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2015 Updated: 06 Apr 2015
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Tick Fricassee

God, that picture is priceless! Hahaha Did you or HappyGoast make that? This was completely and utterly hilarious. Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

I made that one. Three layers of fire on Edward's head. LOL

 

Thanks!

Sharp Left Turn by fyrebyrd89 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 295]
Summary: Past Featured Story

slt

 

In an instant your life can take a sharp left turn. Can you find the strength to lose it all and gain the unknown? Lives will be shattered, including your own.  

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155558 Read Count: 62544
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2015 Updated: 26 Jan 2016
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Road Work Ahead

Great story so far. Can't wait for more! :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! There's 8 chapters posted so already, so we'll see what you think then ;) Definitely a sharp left turn headed your way :)

Fyre

Submission by Jersygal101 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 89]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"I submit because I need it. I submit because for the first time in my life things feel right, and because I've never felt freer then when I'm kneeling before you with your collar around my neck engraved with your iniials." AH/Non-Canon

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Aro
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66899 Read Count: 23822
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2015 Updated: 06 Aug 2016
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Misunderstanding

Ah hell, I think I'd find myself flabbergasted, too, should he single me out. He's certainly got an air of authority about him that makes him seem all the more intriguing to the reader, and Bella. Definitely drool worthy on both counts. Are you emulating Christian Grey for Aro's strong personality, or just how commanding he appears in canon?

Great story so far. I'm looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

With Aro's character I just took the level of authority he portrayed in the books and amped it up a little bit. I'm glad you're enjoying the story though! 

The Willing by saphire18 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

We all have a little darkness within all of us. A darkness that lies inside, waiting for us to give in... It won't let you though, not until you're willing… CONTAINS DARK THEMES AND ADULT LANGUAGE

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Categories: Twilight, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17870 Read Count: 939
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2015 Updated: 18 Jul 2015
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Revenge and Manipulation

Wow, you got me so confused, and maybe intrigued? Yeah, so I can wait for more so I can piece together what I know and what I don't understand. Bella seems like she came into herself again, almost like she died and was introduced in a new body. A split personality, perhaps. At leat that's my guess, for now. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Fear

(Sorry my phone keeps adding and deleting reviews. I'm trying to send you love. It's frustrating!) Usually I hate Alice, but I loved her here! And dark, commanding Jasper is hot as hell! All blood, carnage, and rage wrapped up in a blond, sexy body. Yum. Carlisle and company are clearly in over their heads. Plus Eddie needs to shut up or he's gonna loose his, permanently. Hehe! LookS like the patriarch is laying low, definitely wary. I'd be too! :-)  I wonder what's got the trifecta all up in arms? They were plum scared to death. I'm certainly intrigued. Can't wait for more

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Damn. Still confused. Lol

Summary:

 

 

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Two people wronged by those they thought they knew. What happens when they met up? Well, the obvious, obviously. But then what happens afterwards? What happens when they combine their hate for those that betrayed them? You know the age-old saying, don't you? Knowledge is Power. Originally a one shot, but will soon be a multi-chapter. CONTAINS MATURE THEMES AND ADULT LANGUAGE.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7101 Read Count: 502
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2015 Updated: 13 Jul 2015
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How come this is labeled J/B when Peter clearly claimed her. Am I'm missing something? Our is he coming later? Not that I don't like the pairing of P/B, because I like the him almost as much, only I clicked on it and a previous story due for my love of all things Jasper. I like it though, so I'll stick with it for now until I get more info. Great chapter.


P.s.I adore the way Bella destroyed Eddie's piano! :-) lol

 

Charmed by saphire18 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

                                            

     

She was tired of being used, betrayed; let down by those she cared about. She was tired of anything having to do with putting trust in anyone but herself. Trying her damndest to hold in her tears, she knew it was only a matter of time until her efforts would be useless. Originally a one shot, but will be a multi-chapter. CONTAINS MATURE THEMES AND ADULT LANGUAGE


Categories: The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Crossover
Characters: Klaus/Other Character
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6945 Read Count: 469
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2015 Updated: 13 Jul 2015
Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story so far, but you might consider adding a tag about the fact that this is clearly a x-over. I love TVD and the Originals, especially when Elijah or Klaus is coupled with Bella as a love interest, but someone else might not. And also why is this labeled J/B when Klaus clearly claimed her with a bite. I clicked on this because of the stated pairing. Hmm. I like it so far, so I'll stick with it until I know what's going on in later chapters. (LOVE the demise of Edward. That was pretty cool.)