So far, chapter 1 has me very much intrigue.

Ok I have to admit a FB friend I just met from England Carole Long begged me to start reading this saga and I admitted I hem hawed about it, I mean it is like four or five stories and I love sagas but they take so much out of you! But you have me hook, line and sinker! 

And nd not till the wedding was I sure about this story! Esp., this chapter! I thought Bella was acting a little slutty, needing money I understand but to pimp herself out to the scumbag Carlisle! Thank God Edward saw her FB page and was intrigued! Oh Edward, she has you, hook, line and sinker my friend and you will walk happily into that church waiting for the "one your Nanny has been telling you about since you were a little boy! 

I hope Bella can make Alice a little more refine but who knows! These women walk right into this line of business, with their eyes wide open. They have too, if they didn't they would be killed right away! Bella understands a little, she probably understands more with the job Edward is giving her tomorrow! I think he will be a nervous wreck! It will probably be her last job from him. He will not risk her anymore, esp., when he realizes his true feelings about Bella! I think he will be true to her, please make him true to her, once they are a commited couple. I could not bare to see her being disrespected by any man but esp. Not Edward!

I once saw a show where the actor who played Carlisle said he was the compassionate vampire, did nothing really stunning! Well you my friend have made him a total douchbag! I hate to think him and Esme will have children and if they are boys how they will treat the women in their lives! I hope you make him grow the hell up!

Last thing I am going to say! nanny is a hoot! I love her and at her age I know she will not be around for all the stories! I will hate to see her go but what a profound statement she told Bella and I hope she gives it a lot of thought before she marries Edward. I think he will not cheat on her, in fact I think all the other men will think something is wrong with him for being faithful to Bella! But the good lord and you have ways of cursing men like Edward in his bachelor days, they are called daughters! If he and Carlisle have daughters they will lose their minds! To know their are men ot there who are or were like them and they are out on the loose with their daughters running around! Edward will have a heart attack by the time his daughter reaches her twenties! I am looking forward to that! Great story!

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Reading this and I thought this was a good chapter, and yes it was violent but it is a Magia story and if you are going to write one that is as real as you can make it, than there will be violence! The Mafia Families are violent and they protect their families and there terrority as good as they can!

what I do not understand and hopefully someone can explain it to me! Why go after Bella? It was explained in this chapter that the wife's and children are never touched! It is the rule of all families! Is this some kind of rogue team or is this a plot to really get Bella and not Edward. Does someone want Bella gone? I do not know but I fell this is more than what it seems.

one thing I do know is that if the BOSS ever gave the order for Bella to be hit/killed, Edward would kill everyone before he would let anyone else kill his Bella. And I am sure if Bella did die by the MOB or just a car accident or some other just plain accident if they did not have any children before she would die, Edward would follow her. He would kill himself in a second, he could not live without his Bella.

This chapter broke my heart! And Bella saying I did coke and drank,,,, I killed it! I cried right alone with her. I feel for both but Carlisle is right, even though Edward doesn't want to hear it. He is way too selfless right now to have a child or children. It he thinks it isn't safe for Bella because he has pissed off the wrong guys, do you think they will think twice about hurting his children? They were willing to kill Bella. This SC game that includes these Russian guys, I do not trust one bit and I sure would not trust them with Edward's family. I know they will try for a child, right away, usually women who have had a miscarriage want a baby as soon as possible, to take the empty feeling out of them. Bella said it herself, she feels empty.

as for her parents, I am with Edward, they put her into a heavy stress that could have started the miscarriage. I think I am with Edward, maybe not kill him but I think the man and his right hand Man Sam and even Renee need to be taught a lesson and they need.to be told their presence there did not help, it might have been the cause of it.

I hope Bella let's Edward call Emmett! He needs to know, she is close to him and he could possibly give her a comfort that Edward just does not understand but Emmett does as he was with her when she went through the first miscarriage.

i did not for one minute did misunderstand Carlisle's talk with Edward! In my mind, Carlisle all but told him he did sleep with that girl but I have a feeling it might not have been the one Edward thinks. He is a pig! But he does have his good qualities! I just would not want him for a husband, he will drive Esme crazy all during their marriage.

great chapter. Although it is a sad one!

If there was ever a stupid Jacob in a fanfiction story, yours takes the cake! Number One all the way! He is with a Mafia gang, a Mafia family and he sleeps with a capo's wife! Yeah he was young but I think one of the first rules that would be mention if not automatically known was the no sleeping with wife's , and Nicole now understands more than she probable ever wanted too. I feel for Bella, she will be the only one who will ever mourn the kid, he was nice to her, a friend and I even feel for Jasper because he had to finish a nasty job that was done in Edward's club, it is just a good thing that Edward was more worried about getting to Bella and than slapping around the idiots for doing this in his club!!! 

I loved!!!! Your humor between Aro, Edward, Carlisle,Emmett, and Dam about being a father and what that details, ESP. For them! I was drinking something when I read the line about Carlisle biggest job will be keeping Hannah of the pole!!!! And being a lunatic Edward's kid will only have half a chance of being normal!!! These guys have not been around Bella too much, the kid stands no chance at being normal! Poor Soony! I wonder why Edward changed the name they decided on, was he in such a fog that he totally forgot on what they decided? Well since I know there will be two sons, we know what they will name the second child!!!! Great story! Can not wait for the birth. I know what you mean, I wanted Bella pregnant so bad and than I wanted her to already have the kid! Because you made her real! You made her whiny and a brat and that is what a lot of women get when they are expecting a kid, ESP., when they have a husband who buys them lots of gifts to keep them happy and also to say sorry I messed up again!

Momma Bear Esme. I force to be reckon with. Now Edward is going to fallow her to Charlie and Sue's house to get her stuff and he will have to deal with a very piss off Charlie and Jacob. I wonder what else could be broken, maybe a arm or leg. God knows he deserves it but it takes 2 to let a marriage fail, I suspect Bella isn't as blameless as Edward wants her to think. Should be interesting when they start therapy.

I am LOVING this new installment so much more than the Quiet Storm, do not know why but I think it is the kids! They are all so sweet but not so innocent, being Bella and Edward's children they would not be. Only Kylie is sweet and only sweet but the reason is because she is a baby.

Edward is a wonderful father, although I think I would have to have a talk with him, telling Sonny about sex by letting him watch a prono movie, not good! Yes it shows him the basics but not the feelings, how a man can like a woman, not really love but like. I Al all for sexual experiments, if you do not experiment how will you know when the frog you are dating turns into your prince. Even Bella and Edward did not feel true love right away, although it was fast. Sonny and Dam has such a great journey ahead of them!, lots of good memories along with the bad memories, the not Miss. right forever but the Miss. right for now but I hope they do not become the man whores that their father and uncle was. I hate to think they are going to hurt young girls hearts but I guess it is just going to have to be that way, it is called learning about life! You are so right Edward and Bella will never win parents of the year.

i can not wait to see hoe the Sandy and Roger thing turns out! Edward understands Bella to well not to think she does not need friends, it was one thing that she missed out in school and he loves her too much to let this go on for long, he will help her, so she can Brag about her husband and her children and it will kill too birds with one stone! Gives Bella friends that knows who she really is, no more hiding the rings and it tells Roger, hands off, she is mine and has been for about twenty years now, right? I can not wait to see his reaction when big tough gangster Dom Edward Cullen tells him, hands off my woman!

Carlisle is about to face "the coming of Jesus moment and Bella is playing God right now. It is time to get it all out in the open so he can see what damage he has done, to his wife, his children. They will never believe anything he tells them. If their oldest daughter finds out it will break her hurt and trusting you father well that is going to go down the tube. She will take sides, with her mother. 

What was Carlislye thinking, I guess he was not thinking, he was letting his favorite appendage do all the talking. This is only going to end up in tragedy. I will be surprised by the end of this story if Carlislye will be dead, he takes to my chance with the female race and he might meet Attila the Hun woman was and if he does HER dirty as he has done to so many women she may just put a bullet in the back of his head. 

As as you can probably see he is not my favorite man, he is a slimy dog and deserves everything that is going to him!

flirty Nanny, cute and she is flirting with Aro, poor guy! he gets shit from Lauren (24/7), has to take care of his kids and he goes to skips house and his nanny is flirting with him.i have a nasty feeling about Lauren, just a gut feeling I think she is going for a ride to get any the wealth she can from Aro. I am afraid one day she is going to leave because of another man. Just something about the way she acts with him.

last thoughts if I was Aro I give the twenty back to Sonny. He protected family and that is what the older generation teach the younger boys, treat your mother, sister, cousins like they are your queens and hopefully when they grow up they will be great husbands like their father,Uncle Edward. Love how he wants only Bella and never ever goes into a room,office or even closet to do the nasty wit some woman who works at the places he hangs out and most likely own. Keep the good work going. See you when I read another chapter.

I am starting ti read chapter 19 and I can not believe the flax Lexi got for making Edward what and who he is! He is first and formost a mobster and he was taught that his whole life, you just can not forget that and while he may never cheat on Bella, he knows it is a way of life for them. I think Bella and the kids have changed him for the good but he has also changed Bella, gone is the door mouse begging for attention from an unloving mother and father, in her place is a gusty woman who would never cheat on her husband and would go to the ends of the earth for him and her children, can not see Rene doing that ever and Charlie all he did was belittle her. They are their own yang and yang, they complete themselves and if the other dies first from a bullet or old age, I have no doubt that the other would follow close behind.

please can someone assure me that Aro finds a good woman, not that heartless bitch he is married to now. He needs someone who loves him and his children. I have no doubt that while Lauren was in Jamaica with her boy toy her and Aro's children were in California with her parents.

now on to the drama that is sure to happen in chapter 19, I doubt they are threw with trying to kill Ship.

Ok, this must have written recently because when I read this story there wasn't any children. I am so happy that Edward and Bella had two kids and that Roselie found true happiness and children. I will retread this story since I found that a lot of stuff happened that I did not even know had happened. You have made this story even better than it was. I am going to your page and read all of your stories. Well done.

If this was a REAL STORY and Lauren was a REAL WOMAN and if this story wasn't already written and complete I would be killing me some Lauren. She was an adult who raped a 14 1/2 year old boy, she needed to go to prison! I hope in this story Edward and Bella find out and they let Bella loose on this pedophile. I know they know the kids, are good friends with Aro, hell Kylie may even marry Lauren and Aro's son but it is not right that she did what she did. I say get Bella mad or drunk mad and let her go to town on the bitch! They will never find the body.

i love AJ and Anthony, they are a hoot together but it kind of sicken my stomach that at one time they hooked up. After all they are almost related with the families so close. I am liking Lexi's free thinking of Gays but I do worry like Carlisle does! The gay factor does not sit well with the wise guy imagine. I know they would have Anthony's back, never let anything happen to him but as we all know you have to sleep and can not keep watch of people 24/7, things happen. I hope he and AJ find good partners.

i get such a kick out of the aging Edward and Carlisle who do not like to meddle in anybody's lives, what happens in a home is not their business but you have the two biggest meddlers when it comes to their kids! Edward and Carlisle better trend carefully, they do not want a Esme/Carlisle situation where her dad made him marry his daughter and other than their children, the union was a disaster and has left the kids scared with having to live down their mother's suicide and their father's whorish reputation. Still at 53 Carlisle is still having to prove himself to Alex, he'll to everybody over and over again. People do change, not often but it does happen. And on the matter of the twins, I am a 58 year old woman and going home to two toddlers with A.D.D. Would drive me insane! It is true the older you get, the more you want quiet!

as for Alex and Dame, I think they are just mixed up! She is lonely, needs to talk to her husband (that has stayed the same from the last story, she never wants to talk to him, always frighten of the unknown) and he just wants to find Miss. right and settle down. He is not going to find that with his aunt, as she told him it would tear the whole families apart and the guilt would eat at them. He will find her, just like Sonny will find his soulmate and I do not think it is Katie. When you love somebody as passionately as Edward and Bella do you do not look to find some jollies with other people. Both Sonny and Katie like the filmilur and have not found who they are to be with till their dying breath. I do think the baby may just be Sonny's and what a can of worms would that open up! If Aro hates Sonny now, he will really hate him if Sonny is the father.

i love this story the most out of the three so far, with Quite Storm a close second!

Never would I blame Maggie, this is all on Damion's shoulders and he is going to have to face what he did and what he is still doing! Something is very wrong with him,mahatma only a professional can help him, how to cope and what is proper and what is out of bounds. If he is so in love with Amelia than why is he thinking the way he is??? You would think he is Carlisle's son, he is acting just like him when he tried to get Bella from Edward all those years ago. I hope Sonny beats his ass up, someone has to teach that boy what the word respect means.

Don't know who wrote the poem, but if it isn't about Bella and Edward, well I don't know what is. They stand tall through everything! Personally glad Caius is gone, never liked him, he was to disrespectful to Edward's sons. I would not have taken the ribbing he gave Sonny or Dame, he would have been in the hospital or dead if I was Edward. Felt sorry for Edward, it is always hard to learn you should not have trusted a friend or someone who worked for you. Love your story Lexi. Make Edward take Bella to Hawaii! She has always wanted to go. And like he can't afford it, by my count he found like close to ten million dollars. Of course this story is already written and so my request is mute!

Personally I loved this chapter, it was all I was thinking, Sonny is an addict and they can not stop by themselves. I hope Edward and Bella see this and help their son, or maybe Dame will help Sonny, as he said Edward does not take kindly to addicts even if one is his own son. Nothing destroys lives, businesses and makes people go to prison than being an addict, there is no loyalty for an addict, all they want in the end is their next fix.

Jordan if she truly loves Dame and I do believe she does will accept his family, she may not like what they do to have money but that does not mean she can not come to terms and love his family like he does.

what in the hell is it about women having sex with each other that is so hot to men? I don't get it, I do not get off watching two men having sex! I do have to admit I love stillittoes! I think they make a woman's leg look great, hell to wear but look fantastic!

can't wait for the next chapter!

I so love this story! I even like Phoebe being totally mean to her dad, mom and Alex! Like I said she is the female version of Christian Grey!

Just started reading this story and so far I am loving it!!!! I am a BIG HUGE FAN OF ANA AND CHRISTIAN STORIES!!!! Esp. If they have HEA!!!!! I sometimes like a cheat story but only when they do get back together. So many cheat stories the main characters become so ugly and mean to each other and that just isn't my Ana and Christian. 

I would like to suggest a story of Ana getting pregnant again with Phoebe and the story told mostly by Christian's P.O.V. I would love to see a infant than toddler etc. That is wrapped around her father's little finger!!!!!! Christian as a daddy's girl! Priceless!! The reactions between Teddy and Phoebe would be to cute, jealous rivalry, not to mention boyfriends. If Christian doesn't have a stroke by the time Phoebe will be full grown will be a miracle!!!! Also being Teddy Greys sister would be a nightmare all it's own (you know dad would teach him to protect her.) I read a story where 15 month old Phoebe saw a beautiful bracelet when she was shopping with her daddy and of course he bought it for her!! The bracelet only cost 800,000.00 but she wanted it and she is princess! SIGH!!!! Wish I had a daddy like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work! Look forward to more stories!!!!!!!

I decided to look up this story on this website because of the pictures you were talking about and I love them! From now on I think I will read this story from here instead of Fanfiction.net! I find this website doesn't put restrictions like the other one does and I like that! I can understand the need too, my young nieces read fanfiction but I try to guide that to only PG stories, so I am keeping this website a secret!

love, Love, LOVE this story and I will tell anyone to read this story but to the fans who look and read reviews, just not to confuse readers I have nicknamed Tanya! I only call her Twit Twat! Because she is a Twit for abandoning her child and Twat for thinking a piece of her is all a man wants, esp., Edward at the hotel! She deserves the nickname!

read this story everybody esp., if you love Daddyward! I sure do, I try to find any story where Edward has a baby or a cute talking toddler! I just love baby language!

Oh my God! I love this! I just started reading it and I love the pictures! Esp., the one with the side views of Edward and Jasper! I hardly recognized Jasper! I also love Edward's WTF look! He is not ready to get married but I think that all will change when he meets Alice roommate! No one but Bella could stand to live with Alice! Rosealie would shoot her, esp., if she is still the pixi that everyone calls her! On to chapter two and Edward's first look at Bella. I think Bella is not going to be too impressed with Mr. macho Man who all the girls throw themselves at! And God help any men who look at Bella the wrong way!

I am sorry but I think Edward right now is one stupid jackass! The real victims are Bella and little Ethan. I hope that the deceit that Alice and Angela is pulling off is discovered and soon. What a fool Edward will think he is and if he is not blaming himself for the situation now, he will when he finds out that Angela with help from Alice has been playing him. I wonder if there is a Ben or was that someway to keep Edward at Angela's side.? As for this Alice, she can fall in a sinkhole and stay there. I do not think I have ever read such an evil Alice and a in mature Alice. I hope when this is all over and Edward goes back to Bella on his damn knees begging for forgiveness that Alice's parents wise up about their daughter and take away all finical help except taking in Alice's baby to raise. Alice to me makes a horrible mother. Also what ever happen to the Edward who told his own father it would not matter if Bella's son was not his own flesh and blood, guess he has forgotten about that. So, so, so many people are going to have to humble themselves to Bella and ask no beg for forgiveness and if I was Bella as of today I would tell them all to go to hell and slam the door in their faces. They do need to have a major talk, tell the truth on everything that they know and I am sure both will be surprised at what is found out and I think Edward will be the one who is more in shock than Bella will be, his whole world as he knows it will come tumbling down!

I have been reading some reviews on this website and others and am I missing something, everyone seems to think Edward and this slut Janine are together and I do not think that at all. Sure he may have been tempted after he found Bella but she was ignoring him and a slut can make the strongest man weak if the one he really wants is always pouring hatred at him. Well deserved hatred but as much as Edward can he is trying to be good to Isabella. I think he was also weak for Janine the three years he did not know where Bella was. Mafia women are conning, they get what they want because if they were raised in the family they think they are diva's and princess's and all should bow down to what they want, Isabella is not like that, so hence the attraction both brothers feel for her. I am happy that she is wishing up, she better because with this life you are on your own to a certain degree and if she does not become aware of what is going round her it could get her killed.

As for the reviewers who say she is a hypocrite for yelling at Anthony about keeping his mother in the dark about not being dead and she will not even think about her parents, we'll all I have to say to that if you go back and read Danger In New York it was her own father who started this whole thing off. He surely was not thinking of his wife and daughter when he decided to turn in the CULLENS and he paid dearly for that decision. I think Isabella owes her father no loyalty at all, he knew what they were capable of doing and he was either stupid or very naive to think his wife or daughter would not suffer for his actions. I think it is best to leave her mother alone, she has probably gone on with her life, may have a new husband and if she is happy why drag in the dirt to just feel the pain all over again. Nothing she or Iasbella or Charlie or even the CULLENS can do to fix things, to make everything all right. The past is just that the past and Isabeela better start thinking about her future and what she wants out of it. Does she want to be part of the family? If yes, than she better take off those blinders she is wearing and live in the reality which is her life.