Reviews by Ni Ra Di
A Fresh Start by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 588]
Summary:

Bella is a recent divorcee, reeling from the abrupt ending of her marriage. In walks a certain green-eyed stranger. Can he convince her trust and love again? Or will she just ignore his advances? ExB, AU, AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271752 Read Count: 339523
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
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Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Epilogue

I used to work with children with autism. I volunteered for summer programs. It was by far my most rewarding job. I loved when I was able to communicate with them. I had won boy with a facination with plastic. The sound it made. So I'd tye plastic bags all over my apron and he start to play, play, play. He didn't like people but he's interact when you had plastic. I had one boy who I thought was non-verbal because that's what his family told me. We were having clean up time and I started singing. His eyes lit up and he sang with me. It was the shock of a life time. We then sang every Disney song I could remember. But that's how he communicated sing/talking. 

This was a great story. I would like to thank you for all of the sleepless nights. I'd have to just finish a chapter and three chapters later it would be 3 am. I enjoyed your writing style. Kinda mad and happy with the way things ended. For now. lol You're now my favorite author on TWCS



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for sharing those stories about the children with autism...The little boy and the singing got to me (music teacher...anything with music gets to me). Wow! 

Hugs!!

Josie

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Date: 16 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: The Parties...Still

I got a little confused why Edward did all that changing so quickly. lol He put on dress pants and a tie in once paragraph and then scrubs and a name tag in the next. Glad they finally kissed. who would have thought Mike was shitballs crazy. 

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Date: 16 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: The Courtdate

I can't believe you made Jacob, Quil and Embry all gay! I needed a 10 min break just to laugh it out. Too funny.

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Date: 17 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: The Realization

OOOOOO now I get the lemon reference. O_O wow!

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Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 17: The Talk

Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh. Don't let mike  be that cray cray that he killed someone. Damn rich family covered it up for him ahhh. I can't take it. I need a xanax and a hit from my inhaler. 

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Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 22: The Birthday

You get a 10!!!

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Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 26: The Conferences and Concerts

Bella pissed me off. Why not go to the cops after spotting the car. AHHHH I can't deal. I can not take these cliff hanger. I can't! I need to take a hit from my inhaler.

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Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 27: The Accident

I HAD to look up a three carat diamond to see how big this thing is, WOW

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Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 37: The Dress and Weddng Preparations

XOXO

Summary: Past Featured Story

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
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Date: 20 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: In the Dark About So Much

My heart is beating so fast like he really knew she did it. AHH

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

AIDA

Nominee

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299861
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
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Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Broken Fairy Tale

Oh mu goodess. Thi sstory is so facd paced! *checking on tickets to Brazin* I need a vaca.

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Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Tales of a Manwhore

I think that Bella will be all about being sexed up and that will be all good for Edward in the beginning but he will fall for Bella and lie about his feelings to himself and to her. 

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Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Flipping Out

Sorry, but I totally laughed at Bella falling. I've fallen like that and giggled until I tried to get up and fall again. No bueno. But still funny. 

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Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Trouble in Paradis

I think Huilen is stealing her butt off. Why sin't security looking for her butt to keep her off the property?

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Date: 14 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Some Day my Prince will Come...in a White Lab Coat?

OMG I just remembered that Jimmy kept calling Edward Eddie, being an ass about it. He knew who Edward was all along. Alice had to have told hime about her brother and showed him pictures of her family. OOOOOOOO this is getting good. I think Becca and the doc will get hitched asap!

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Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Stormy Weather

nooooooo be good Eddie. I like the convos and all the sharing time. Keep your panties on Bella!

 

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Date: 06 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Questions and Answers

I feel incomplete

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Date: 03 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Closing One Chapter...

Wait they were supposed to join the mile high club!

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Date: 05 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Confrontations

I just love when Charlie is like this. lol I forgot all about Becca. Lordy I hope that girl is alright. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Ni Ra Di Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

He better ask Bella, duuuuh. lol

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Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hope Paul shows up again. He needs to be junk punched!

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Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

OMG!

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Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

oh noooo, you know how to make a girl worry. I'm all teared up. Why did he leave? Awww man!

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Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

*Chanting* Do it! Do it! Do it!

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Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Rose was only with Emmett to get to Edward. She was a stalker and now they have pissed her off and someone's bunny is going to get cooked! Am I right? Am I Right!?

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Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Oral fixation much Edward? lol 

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Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

He is totally head over heels, bat shit cray cray for some Bella. 

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Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I really hope she isn't going to deny deny deny and push Edward away. grrrr

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Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I do hope Alice is ok! I think Jakey will get handsy and Bella will have to hurt him!!!

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Date: 11 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

i thought Emmmet would have figured it out right then and there. Geeez. & Taco Bell is not Mexican. Here in Texas saying tha toutloud would start a fight. lol 

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Date: 11 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Grrrrr back off blindie he's taken! sort of. 

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Date: 11 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Whew. I was sweating. Totally thought blindie wanted Eddie. no bueno. 

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Date: 11 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Oh my goodness. All of this has my head spinning, What is Rose took all of Edwards trust money and paid his firm to represent her with it? Where did she get the money from? How can snayone be that eveil. AHHH

Summary: Past Featured Story

CITF_Chandra

Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082143
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Ni Ra Di Signed starstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

What a great filler chapter. I am so glad that she told Emmet her story but I don't think it as any of his business. Bella is too nice. I would have been just as much of an ass as he was beign to her. I'm nto sure if I like this delicate Bella. I like her snarky. H really think her momma set that fire trying to scre her back to florida. Did Bella have no frined in Jacksonville, does no one miss her there? 

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Date: 20 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Oh man, I was so thinking Bella's business should be called Black Swan. BUUUT She's nice and sweet so White swan is Perfect. I'm excited to see her business bout to pick up yeah!

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Date: 15 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

When the red-head walked in I got nervous. I thought it was the person following him. Don't scare me like that!

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Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I don't know much about Chicago other that what my bestie tells me so Table Fifity-Two and Naha and on my list of places to each! Fancy schmancy Mac & Cheese. Yum! I love food!

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Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

You better not hurt Edward. Paaaallleeaasse don't

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Date: 17 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

This is an emotional story for me. So much happening. I hope they will have their first kiss. He should sleep over so they can both get some great rest. I have a feeling it was her momma who set the fire. Trying to scare her back to Florida. 

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Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

You often reference Edward has having hair sweapt from his brow. I just can't imagin it that long? Is it like an onld justing Bieber haircut? Like s hort sketer boy cut? Brad Pitt model locks? Does Edward have mangs? (man bangs)

 

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Date: 30 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Is it sad that when they said the therapist person's name was Pam, I invision Pam from TrueBlood. lol AND in honor of today being National Cheesecake Day I will got the the Cheesecake Factory and have a slice of white chocolate raspberry. 

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Date: 12 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

I know the chaptpers are shorter but I feel like it's dragging a bit. I'm not into feeling sorry for Bella for some reason. Hmmm. She actually makes me kind of mad. The helpless dame from those old school romatic movies. Not the smart alec, funny girl. I understand the story is building but still makes me wish for a stronger lead. I'll be patient.