Reviews by avery elisabeth
Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I like Isabella's pet name for him...the Devil.  lol

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love it- it's funny, and cooky( ery entertianing). Makes me laugh out loud

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

The lemon was great. Umm, but is Edward a little bit on the possesive side.

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yeah, he's super hot that way, but he's just gonna be possessive not crazy and violent, right? So I can't wait to see how he reacts to guys coming on to Bella in front of him. Ha, Ha! It's gonna be good. I really like this story.

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh Edward he's such a bad boy. He needs to be spanked...hard. Please don't change him, but don't make him psychotic. =)

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh.My.God. I can't believe your readers are whining about updates and the length of the chapters. Fuck me- you need to tell them to stop cryin' like bitches and be thankful you update regularly at all. There are stories I have been PATIENTLY waiting ffor updates for almost a year now. I haven't said a peep to those writers because you know real life can be a bull sometimes. And sometimes you just need to tread softly. Jeez- what fucking prigs. I'm sorry that pisses me off. I am sorry that you had to even condone that with a response. And Edward is perfect the way he is-do not change him!!!! 

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think the investigation into Seth's drug use is a bit much-after all he didn't cause the accident. I agree with the community service, though.

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow, looks like dickward isn't so in love as he says. I wonder what our little Bella will get into with Damon. I feel bad for angela though. I hope she doesn't get caught in the crossfire.

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

THat's funny I haven't done all the reviews but I just can't stop reading> I'm sorry. God you write some good stuff. Caveward wants that baby to hold Bella to him permanently. Aaawww- he's so cut.

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Nice!!!!!! I love your Charlie fucking telling Renee to shut the fuck up. I love it. I never have liked Renee. Something about her character just doesn't sit well with me. Cool beans how Eddie stood by her and took everything they dished.

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Well I'm gonna say that I am not sure who would put Damon up to this. Who has an interest in breaking B&E except for tanya? If I go back and reread can will I find a clue? Great work by the way!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64099
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Savoring Every Moment

It really is sad. It's even sadder when you have actually experienced it. When Navy boys board and prepare to get under way, it's a sight to behold. The emotions,however, are even stronger when it's your loved one and you're future is uncertain. I am really enjoying this story. It's different.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

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Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole

well-this definitely is a dark family and with Edward as the head no less. but howdoes jasper feel about bella?

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

I am really enjoying this story. Regardless of how fictional it is- it's still lovely. I can't wait until you next update. I hope the wedding happens sooner though. I mean how much can go on if you're not going to introduce them for another 5 more chapters.

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

I found this story days ago and saved it because I was intritgued by the Tudors' banner. I enjoy the show very much- considering i am a history buff. I've taken numerous courses in college and read counltess texts on history. I so enjoy the era. Of course I find Brandon Duke of Suffolk (Henry Ccavill) much more appealing than Henry.  But that's jsut me. ;)

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions are Forever

So far it's exciting, intriguing, and is action packed. Nice! To me, so long as you get the point across- all the rest is water under the bridge. =)

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between

This plot is very intriguing with Esme and Edward hating each other so. Makes the suspense of they Why very titillating. It's also sad that Carlisle is such a ruthless man even with his own blood.

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Becoming Whole Again

What's evil daddy Carlisle gonna say to all that is happening? I can't wait to read on.

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Introducing The Demon

Hmm? Papa Carlisle is going to put his two cents worht in even if it's not wanted. Okay on to what that sick fuck jacob has done to her.

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Have You Seen My Innocence?

Well-Jacob sure is one sick fuck!! And Bella is going to feel like she's not worthy of Edward after everything Jacob put her through. Now I feel that Jake needs to get his just desserts-but knowing this story needs to be antogonistic, I know that I'll shall have to wait until that time comes. Right? Ok well- on with it then...=)-

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Demon Comes Out to Play

Damn, well i guess I was wrong...Jacob did get his just desserts after all. I just assumed that scum-sucking pig Aro would use him to get a jump on Edward. I suppose I'll wait and see what you have in store for us. =)

Summary:

moon

"Grrraaannngggeeerrrrr...." his voice called tauntingly. He was close. Too close. I ran faster, looking for somewhere to hide. I threw myself behind the first object I came across. "You can run, but you can not hide.."


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2444 Read Count: 2544
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2010
Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is the first Draco/Hermione that I read and it is riveting. I enjoyed it, and I loved the dark Draco.

Summary:

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 He was my forbidden fruit. A man so close, almost too close, yet so far out of reach. He loved me, took care of me, but did not crave me the same way I did him. I wanted everything, yet had nothing. But things were going to change. I could feel it. Mature


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19236 Read Count: 15389
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Drifting

I didn't get that last bit after the 'my sleep would be peaceful now'. Did she go into another dream sequence?  Are you going to write this in Edward's POV as well. Reason I ask is because her explanation of Edward's dating life seems as if he already might harbor some unexplored feelings for her. He obviously loves her, but he just doesn't realize the type of love he has for her? One more question how will you be updating will it be on a schedule or random?  No pressure intended just a mere inquiry. I really like the premise of your story line. I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Simple

It's intersting and witty. It's funny how she got caught daydreaming- it's happened to all of us. You know teachers asking you a question to put you on the spot because you're not focused. Don't kid yourself they notice when their students are not paying attention.

Summary:

moon

Sequel to Full Moon. Draco Malfoy is a werewolf who has successfully completed the first bond of mating with Hermione Granger. How receptive is she going to be when he initiates the second bond...? Dark and Possessive Draco


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3845 Read Count: 2522
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 Oct 2010
Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow,  this wasmuchmore intense. I truly do enjoy a possessive man- fictionalor not. Nice work with your writing- it's electrifying.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the lovely Madam Akyria

 

 

Five years following the events in New Moon, the Cullens are living in New Hampshire and Edward is finally getting married.  During a wild night out on the town, some of the Cullens run into a happy, more confident Bella.

Jasper/Bella Pairing.  Humor/Romance.  AU/OOC.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532667 Read Count: 144919
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2011
Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OHmy fucking god! this is the fucking funniest shit I have read in a long time. I can't get over how over the top hilarious this is. Daayyyum! Keep this shit up!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you're having fun reading this story.  I truly appreciate your review.  XOXO