Hello, I started with your first story "Quiet Storm" from a recommendation off one of the fanfic groups I'm in and I really enjoyed it. Now I'm reading the sequel and am enjoying it even more! I love the realism in the story is no matter how graphic it may be, you don't sugar coat it and that's just how real life is and I deeply respect that.  Obviously I have a long way to go in the story but these previous chapters have been mind blowing especially these past few with Edward,  his dream was so chilling but it was so clear I thought it was beautifully done.  Also with his jealously towards Aro and him practically raping Bella,  it's those emotions you don't wanna see but at the same time know you have to see if you wanna understand how these characters work. I personally can't stop reading and don't wanna stop reading.  I haven't read any reviews because I have quite a ways to go with the story and I don't want any spoilers,  but I do read your notes and see that some people don't like the way you portray these characters...well I say there jealous dumbassess who wish they could make these characters as real as you do. I say for them to get a life, because this is a work of fiction from a fictional story,  your not perverting anything,  if anything the flamers are because they wish they had half the imagination you do. I say screw em and keep up the good work! Can't wait to read more.