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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591738
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

naughty girl lol 

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Really good but I am always waiting , wondering ...is he still being faithful ???????

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

Aw just what I was waiting on . Go Allison , Ana has a spy so to speak ..great. Christian is very stressed right now though. BUT Christian is a natural with Tommy .Love this !!!! I would love Anna to have more time out with Kate ...shes great and doesn't give a shit about Christian and Ana seems to rebel against him which I like when she's with her ! Is Leila going to cause trouble ohhhh .I like when Christian gets jealous when Anna gets all the attention from the hot males!!!!! How often do you give us a chapter ? I am reading it for the second time...brilliant ! Nearly finished again too .I am sad I know but it's sooooo good. It's al I do in my free time lol Give it to us baby ...can't wait on the next chapter ...love ya xxxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

excellent x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

I hope he is not getting too cocky with the comment about my women meaning .....him messing around ! But its  GOOD not him messing around I mean x I so hope he's not xxxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Aw bless xxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Love your style xxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Easy reading ...brilliant x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Awwwww is that no beautiful   .......bless xxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Really enjoying the banter between them all . Great stuff x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

great xx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Oh my how I love this family and you x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

Love it ..... Its always Ana who has to hear the women ...what about him for a change eh ...lol x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Oh a bit crabby is he not ?  mmmmm 

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

oh what next ?mmmmmmm 

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Can you explain when Christian had his  thing with Amy he said the only time he touched her was to control her. But they still got their sexual gratificatiion ....so what did he still do to get it ..nipple clamps, toys please reply . It has been annoying me x  AND they still got naked !



Author's Response:

As I remember I think I wrote that they went their separate ways if they needed any sexual gratification. When they were in the playroom it was all  about power exchange.

Thanks for asking.

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love the bit where he says Ana my Ana xxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Aw I just love em xx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Lovely ...he adores her xxxx great writing xxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

You never disappoint us ...thanks. BUT why is Christian scared that Ana leaves him ? Hot stuff great xxxxxxxx I also love the bit about him finding his breakfast lol xx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Aw I truely hope she is ok ...........brilliant I so love how you bring the kids across......what are you gonna come up with next AND Jose mmmm Until next time ...love ya x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

As uaual spot on .Your research is excellent as well as I also had Preeclampsia and had a seizure after an emergency c so well done ! Cannot wait for next chapter xxxxxxxx



Author's Response:

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Excellent ! Your bringing back all the memories now ....forgot to say last Saturday when you started with the preeclampsia it was my daughters birthday weird or what .....Thanks again ! Cannot wait on the next chapter 123 aw ..xxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

ah thats better .....was so getting into that there lol ...well until next time .As I said today brilliant natural ....I could go on . I hope you had a good holiday and enjoyed all your family x Cannot wait for the next chapter ...so much appreciation for all your time and energy xxxxxxxxxx  thanks x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Ah just what I needed lol .......poor Teddy and what might happen at the night club mmmmmmmmmm   Thanks again cannot wait for next chapter xxxx

 

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

Brilliant ....you are such a tease ...all these tip bits that need following lol . I remember when my daughter got a bit better and she was just about to leave special care and I wondered how this baby needed care cause he looked healthy enough ..yip mum took drugs then there was a beautiful baby girl that was to be given up for adoption too . I was there when  the mother came in to say goodbye oh my heart was bursting .Anyway...your story is fabulous and I really cannot wait on the next chapter. Will the young lady who started at Grey House have some more information or what about this coming club ..any old friends from Christians past mmmmmmmm love ya have a great Chistmas Thanks again xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

Brilliant . Loved the banter with the kids as uaual and the kink lol Thanks xxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

Awwwwwwwwwww I was just getting into that. I was just having a very pleasant conversation with one of my friends about how some of the FSOG stories are too far fetched and not keeping in with the original characters but you are spot on everytime x I really hope it was the weather or Portland that kept Christian away after Gails suprise reaction mmmm What will happen in L A ????????? Thanks love ya xxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW you do it every time I'm just getting into it then bang it's finished .......your discription is excellent ...love love love the Club ....oh what will happen next ...somebody from his last visit mmmmmmmm ...Oh hurry up and and post the next chapter love ya Pretty PLEASE x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

Yes .....thank you ...Stallion ...I nearly choked lol ..oh here comes trouble

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

Jesus that was hot .......amazing , you never fail xxxx Oh what next lol Thanks Keep it coming forever !!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Excellent ....What a great dad Christian has turned out to be eh !!! What Greys ? Oh what will happen to the happy couple next ? Thanks again ! love ya ........Next x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

Awwwwwwwwwww always so quick but you never disappoint us thanks .Can't wait on the next chapter ....love ya xxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 132

His dick lol ........Fandabby ......you get us all hot and bothered and then you stop ohhhhhhhhhhh brilliant !!!!!! What next please don't stop !!! Thanks again Nuwriter ..you are the best by far , love ya xxxNEXT

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

Fantastic....assth puckin lol.........Hey what has happened with his grandmother ? Worl relations with her boss ?.........AND the bitch Leila ????? What about the new maid ??.......Cannot wait until next week baby lol ....Love ya xxxxxThanks again

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

Brilliant stuff ...just read it my lap top froze all weekend grrrrrrrrr ! Well what is going down will Colton or her hot boss ? Is Christian really where he says he is ? Or will he maybe have to go to Togo after all ? Oh the possibilities lol ! What is with the new maid ? Thanks again ! You never dissappoint ! NEXT !!!!!! x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 04 May 2014 Title: Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Excellent ! Thanks for that, much appreciated ! Your story is the best and the same standard as James . I know . I read FSOG 17 times lol !! Please never finish or a fourth one ????? Thanks again xxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

Excellent and so spot on !!! As I have told you before , my daughter was 11 weeks early and I was told about the mile stones and also that she would never be good at maths but hey she is in the top English class at school . Reads all the time and her school work is like Russian to me lol. I still had to work extra hard with mile stones etc and chronic lung disease as well . We had our fair share lung conditions and visited the hospital often. Also when she started school at 4 the teacher noticed Remy always needed a little more push because of my constant one to one which we do as mothers . I just wanted her to be normal as the doctors told me at the begining that they didn't know if she would be brain damaged or not and would know when she hits her mile stones ...like walking etc. Also they told me that the girls are better than the boys and have a higher survival rate . Thanks again Nuwriter xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

Thanks my friend ......another great one ! So the teacher thought Christian was hot and needed cooling down .....BITCH Well here's hoping it flies in until next week because I can't wait ....Thanks again Nuwriter xxxxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

Loved it as always ......I was imagining that dress Angelina wore 2 or 3 years ago with her hair in a pony . Christian at his balls lol ...so normal , your a natural. Well now I cannot wait until next week . I wonder what that guy wanted to talk to Christian about mmmmmmmmm???? Thanks again Nuwriter your the best xxxxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

Thanks x Well you live and learn alittle every day ! Excellent xxxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

Yip ...lovedit.comasusual .......     you are so dedicated to your work and always the pro ! I cannot wait for next weekend as usual xxx Thanks xxxxxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

Loved it , brilliant x Thanks

Back to Us by wordrunner Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

"And even though I know somewhere in his twisted heart he loved me as much as I still love him—maybe more, in some ways—I know I couldn't stand to live with him anymore. He was killing me, slowly and painfully, and I had to go."


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 205120 Read Count: 65049
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2013 Updated: 25 Feb 2016
Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

brilliant x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

brilliant xxxxxx every single bit x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

At last ....I thought it would never happen but worth the wait xxxxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

It's about time she showed him!!!!!! lol

All's Fair by Greytosteele Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 161]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Christian Grey has proven himself in the business world. At thirty-one, he finds himself bored with life. The world of mergers and acquisitions no longer holds the same thrill. He wants more. Frustrated with government red tape and corrupt politicians, he decides to run for the Senate. Enter Anastasia Steele, an up and coming star in the political arena. AU fanfic.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134692 Read Count: 26481
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2013 Updated: 10 Mar 2021
Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Coming out

Oh what will happen with her ex ....ass x

Summary: Past Featured Story

Short Stories of Christian and Ana Grey- Twenty Years Later.  No cheating.  All about the love.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156478 Read Count: 23187
[Report This] Published: 16 Dec 2013 Updated: 17 Dec 2013
Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 13: The Pick Up- Chapter 13

Brilliant

My Life as a Sub by ordlas Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 135]
Summary: Past Featured Story

What was it like to be one of the fifteen? This is the story of a CG submissive, some time between Leila and Susannah; it takes place before Ana comes into his life.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 87651 Read Count: 29474
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2014 Updated: 17 Feb 2017
Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 8: I Can't Get No

Brilliant Thanks xxxx