Reviews by bracken
Summary: Past Featured Story

Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145605
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

So nice .....it all started here x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I thought my heart was going to pop out seriously ....I thought it was happening to me ........Christian is an ass wipe x



Author's Response:

Hang in there. It gets a lot better. they have a great love going on.

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

good times .......

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I love the new Ana and I love the way Christian noticed all the attention she got xx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Awwwwwwwww xxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OH MY GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I like when you fill in the blanks about the subs. Brilliant x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Super end .....especially the meeting with Flynn xxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Reading for 3rd time . I think it's always good to re-read a story , you miss so much cause I'm so excited I miss the tiny detail lol xxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well he should have kept his torn trousers for Ana .....asswhole 

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Excellent chapter ...who knows maybe in the future Ana may find the contract between Amy and Christian......just thinking xx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Go Ana xxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Brilliant chapter ...loved it x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Brilliant ...reading this again for the 6th time and I think this song should be played ...LOVER ALTERBRIDGE x THANKS

Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138644
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Brilliant..spot on .I nearly died when I was pregnant, high blood pressure and thats exactly what I said ..save my baby first please .She was 11weeks early 2lbs 8oz ,she had to fight too ,got her last rights as well .Now she is 14 and gives me headache lol but I love her to bits xxx Hey I thought Christian got rid of the playroom when they split up ?  When he asked her to go back later to the playroom ...see I did'nt miss that lol ...Your the best ...love ya 

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

he really never takes a telling from Ana tut tut x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Keeps getting better xxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

this thing called love .....aw nice

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

yip another good one xx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Again, I love how you explain things with Flynn ....Excellent x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Aw so nice and getting to know the subs too x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Really good x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

awwwwww

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

troll lol

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

brilliant

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

keeping it real ....brilliant

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

bitch troll ......

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

great

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

brilliant x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

brilliant 

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

great xxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

aw great

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

brilliant x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

oh so sad xxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

aw you are so good xxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Ok you keep delivering ........brilliant xxxxx 

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Great book now for the biggy ......loving it xxxxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yip.........Still loving ya ! Thanks xxxxxx

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Hopefully he will see sense or Ana should kick him to the curb...How can he do this to her ...to them . Please write more ...the kids are brilliant .....you have brought them to life . Please make it a happy ending or I have truely lost my love for Fifty Shades and don't want to read it anymore , hard since I have read the 3 books 17 times ...I know you have done a fab job so far .....PLEASE

 

 

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

Briilliant and so sweet. Will they adopt ? Will it be one too many ? Oh the possibilities ! Thanks for the update . xxxxxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

Excellent ...you are in a class of your own !!!  What is happening with Tommy's mum ? Also Leila ? The Night Club Ana's boss too ?? You have far too many roads to go to finish up now lol!!!!!!!!! New York ! and the young girl who started H R too .....love ya Thanks again ............NEXT xx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

Brilliant but it always is ! Noooooooooooooo Leila bitch ! Or is it Tommy's mum ?mmmmCliff hanger too ...your nasty ...we have to wait until next week now TUT  Well update soon and thanks again ....love ya x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

Amazing ....fxxking Brilliant really...smoking hot and funny ...you are the BEST and what a suprise finding this chapter tonight just before going to bed lol ....now I'll never sleep haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa       please when's 123 coming ???????? THANKS x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

never boring xxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Excell ent......very touching...they are such loving people and you make it happen x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Very touching x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Hot ....brilliant as usual but so sad now cause we will have to wait until next week .It is the highlight of my week . I remember reading that you wrote twice a week in reviews . Plesae pretty please just cause your the best lol xx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Ok another great chapter.....you are the best  .......love ya x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

You are so good at this .......x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

nice ..refreshing x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Great reading ...brilliant

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

MMmmmm ..well done ..did it again ! At least he listened to her this time .....so far ..we will just have to wait and see ....so didn't see that coming , brilliant twist ! Oh what next ........please hurry up and update lol ...you know you want to !!!!!!!Thanks ! love ya xxxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

mmmmmm 

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

It's good for Tommy and Christian ....bonding xxxxx healing xxxxx Brilliant

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Thanks again , I really do appreciate your hard work ....brilliant and Teddy is so cute as are Gracie and Tommy ...excellent .I reaaly cannot wait until the next chapter.....nearly finished reading yout books for the third time . Thanks again x

 

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

I truely hope he has not got himself a new sub !!!!!!

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Great but I do hope he never strays again....

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

I love this chapter. This is what I'm talking about . Brilliant . Not always Christian fighting the women off. This should happen more often xxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Aw ......I was just getting into that ..lol Sorry I checked on Saturday and Sunday andddd again today lol but I thought we were at chapter 119 sorry ...Thats what I look forward to at the weekends . NOW  what about that night club ....sexy dancing , men rubbing up Ana mmmmmm x Thanks love ya xxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

nice that Christian is finally opening up to the love x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

Brilliant ! He better not be going to Togo or else lol ! Hope not .....he wouldn't tell porkies or would he ? Oh well and Ana is off again to ...to maybe do some work with her hot boss ! What happened to the carry on with Leila ? mmmmmmmmmm the many paths to take eh ? Will either of them take the wrong one lol Thanks Next lol xxxxxx 

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

Loved it so x Cannot wait for next week and starting the playroom again xxxxxxxx Thanks you're BRILLIANT xxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

Yip.........Brilliant !  Well I think as usual Christian will put up a fight only to back down ! BUT how bad a fight will this be ? Will it break them or make them stronger ? Oh well . Is Colten going to be a good boy this time ? Will every thing push Christian too far to breaking point ? Mmmmmmm ! Well thanks again my dear x.........love ya x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144

Smoking !!! Excellent writing !!! I hope you are not tying up the loose ends here and ending this beautiful story ....if yes a 4th !!!!!! story ! Thanks xxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Aw I love you .....thanks ...I was so depressed yesterday ,I was on a downer all day . Sad I know .........Keep it coming.but there is still something about Elaine in New York I don't trust mmmmm love ya x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

yip gooood x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

mmmmmmmmmm nice x raunchy though 

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Brilliant but did Christian and Amy really not have sex ? mmmmmmm?

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

interesting 

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Oh you are such a tease ....first with Elaine who just happens to send girls who have safe word red nailvarnish then wakes up a mess ...why , now we have a maid who has the same hair AND is pretty like Elena mmmmm keeping us on our toes xxxxlol

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

brilliant x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

God bless them x...Brilliant 

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Well explained ......thankyou xx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

yip ...spot on xxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

never a dull moment ....great x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

just gets better xxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Thanks for filling in the blanks again. You have no idea how much I love reading this. I really love when you talk about life before Ana with the subs. Love to hear more about his life at the office and how they all want him .I would like to see more of the men falling down to get Anna as well to see his reaction...thanks ,brilliant x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

Brilliant and so sweet x You really are great at taking us right there with you and enjoying their fun with them. xxxxx Cannot wait until next weekend xxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

loved it ...brilliant x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

nice x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

This is what Iam talking about ....love it xxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I love when they have make up sex ...brilliant x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Aw true love ...shucks lol xxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Excellent ..this is what I am talking about .....your so good xxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

You really go into this ....interesting xxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Whats lemons ? You write it all the time ....arguements ? Please tell xxx



Author's Response:

In fanfiction writing, lemons are sex scenes. Hope that helps,

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

xxxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

I just love the kids and the way you put them across...brilliant x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

You are so funny ........great x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I truely love Ana ...everyone makes Christian out to be the be all but without Ana there is no story ...end of x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

fabo .....never dull x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

fantastic x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

am lovin it xxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

funny xxxx  I love playful drunk Christian x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

I love how Grace is just a mini Christian .......brilliant x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Bleeping brilliant ...my heart is breaking ...they are so right for each other xx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

good stuff x

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Keep up the great work xxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Oh I just love this .....give us some of this anytime but I would really like for some hot young male to approach Christian and say what he would or wouldn't do to get Anna into bed without him knowing who she is ...what would his reaction be mmmmm

Reviewer: bracken Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

this stuff is amazing xxx