Reviews by BridieM
Summary: Past Featured Story

It has been a few months since the last encounter between the Cullens and the Volturi. Carlisle and Esme travel to New York for a medical conference. Alice has predicted that they will return to Forks with a new member to their family, a chronically ill human at that. With the Volturi battle still fresh in their minds, how will everyone cope with the new addition?

 

*Book 1

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Esme
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 93297 Read Count: 5700
[Report This] Published: 29 Jul 2016 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This was such a good chapter to read. The imagery was spot on and the economy of words left all the junk out and included all the important points. Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you :) I was worried that I had too much medical jargon in it that would leave non-medical professionals and non-spoonies (a chronically ill person) confused as anything. Glad that it was relatively understandable :)

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

You've gotta feel for Amelia. Good chapter. Thanks.

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hard to read about someone so young going through a medical crisis. Acute or otherwise. I know it happens but it's still not easy to hear or read about. Really good chapter. Thanks

Author's Response:

You are definitely correct there. It does suck, especially when it is a largely incurable condition and all that you can do is manage it, and hope like anything that it works.

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good chapter. Thank you.

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Such a good, yet difficult, read. Thank you

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Nice touch to have Alice and Rosalie appear in her room.

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bittersweet. It makes you wish the FF Cullens could save all the desperate children inRL.

Author's Response:

Tell me about it!

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

At least she has some closure re Bree.

Author's Response:

I agree with you there. If nothing else, Amelia has that closure. I wish that Bree could have had her happy ending.

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Another wonderful chapter. Thank you. Just as a side note, the formatting on this page, and some previous ones, is all over the place in regards to font size. It is quite frustrating. Just FYI

Author's Response:

Hi there! I am so sorry for not responding sooner! I wrote a massive exam on Friday which had me studying frantically for the past three weeks. I do apologise for the formatting. I was having such difficulties trying to get it all the same, I hoped that it would be correct but I guess not. Thanks for alerting me to it. I will try to get it right. Do you know how to format decently? Thanks :)

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Poor girl. A good read. Thank you

Author's Response:

I seem to be unable to re-reply on the previous message. I just browsed through some of the chapters. I swear I just wanted to claw my eyes out. That was supremely painful to see those massive formatting differences. I am working on it. Will reupload the appropriate chapters once I figure out exactly which ones are affected. Many thanks again for letting me know!

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Gees! How could anyone do that to her? Bastard! Good chapter. Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you! You'll hear more of Amelia's story later on. She's holding a lot of it back to protect Esme. It all comes out later on :)

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Date: 30 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

sweet chapter. thank you

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Date: 30 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Reading this chapter made me think about ordinary people, on average incomes, providing medical support for their sick children. No wonder marriages breakdown in these types of circumstances. The stress and worry, financial and emotional, must be extraordinary. A chapter to reinforce the Cullen's firm hold on their humanity. Thank you. Oh. Just noticed that you have replied to some of my reviews. Thank you. It is lovely to get your input. Thank you, also, for looking at the formatting. And no. Sorry. Long ago I was really good with formatting, but that was when electricity was a new fangled invention. Hope the hard work with your exam has paid off. Best Wishes.

Author's Response:

Thank you for alerting me to the errors! I started uploading each chapter as a text document so hopefully it doesn't become an issue again. If you do pick up a glitch on another chapter, please do let me know :)

I speak from experience when I say that it is supremely difficult trying to afford all of the medication on top of everything else. Medical aid only covers so much, and often you have to pay for the bulk of it yourself. Fortunately, my sister was involved in a few medical trials so then the medication is free because of its research value. With the ten year age gap between us, I had a better start to life, medically speaking, than she did (yay for medicine advances!) but my mom often said that there were times when she went without lunch simply to make sure that my sister had all the medication she needed, times when she worried where the next meal was going to come from. "We didn't have two beans to rub together, but we made it." It's tough, but when your sick child needs the medication, you make sacrifices :) And in the bigger scheme of things, our medical condition is minor compared to what some families go through. Mucous Plugging Syndrome (affects 1% of Chronic Asthmatics), which is what we have, is honestly nothing compared to cancer kiddies, for example. Marriages do breakdown, relationships end. It's reality because it is really stressful. I don't know how parents do it.  But I am grateful that they did :)

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Date: 30 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Can you imagine the look on the face of a 300 + year old man when he is greeted by a young girl saying 'sparrow's fart'? LOL. A very positive chapter. Bella's sense of humour is refreshing. I am looking forward to her meeting the rest of the family. Patience. Patience. ;D

Author's Response:

Patience indeed ;) Haha I never actually thought of that. Now I'm literally laughing as I type this. Aaah you have made my day :D Amelia has an amazing sense of humour, which is very uplifting. When you're chronically ill, laughter gets you through some really rough days :) 

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Date: 30 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

i have to agree with her on the Aston and Bentley. Not the Merc though. Merc's quality control and reliability, plus their lack of innovation, has really suffered over last decade. The bulk of their sales is made up of the smaller,cheaper models. or as one car industry commentator likes to call them 'shit boxes'. lol. Shall we not mention VW and their criminal actions? Wonderful chapter. your proportional breakdown of crowd behaviour was pretty good. there's always one couple...

Author's Response:

VW... Please. Do not even go there. Not sure what they did (criminal actions? No mention of it in my country at least - I think we live in different ones), but my mom has one and their after-sales service is atrocious. It's sad really, because her car is great. I used her experience as a stepping stone and got a Toyota which I am so happy with. My dad loves it too. It's his favourite car. Sadly for him, he can't drive it (he drives like a turkey.. There is a reason we all buy manual transmission - so that our cars are safe from Dad!). Darn, I really liked Merc. But even so, I could liken VW to them as well. Take the Polo Vivo, it's essentially a Citi Golf engine, in a Citi Golf body made to look like a Polo. It's no "stronger", structurally speaking, than a Citi Golf. Merc's only problem for us was the handbrake on the older models - it was foot controlled apparently which made renting a car a nightmare for a certain member of our family. I believe the newer models are electronic and finger controlled (which I like actually - though I do prefer a physical handbrake over a little lever in the centre of the console). Merc is very pricey over here though, unaffordable to the average Joe. So I cannot really comment, although the new A Class is very ncie to look at... 

Aston... When I go to the rich people's mall (very touristy too), I always walk past the dealership and stare... I may or may not fantasise about owning one. Bentley is luxurious as well. Jaguar is not too bad either, wouldn't mind getting one. I find that Porsche is becoming very popular and it's very annoying. It's everywhere you look! 

Yes, there is always one couple... Always. 

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Date: 30 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

*smiling from ear to ear* Thank you.

Author's Response:

Patience paid off ;)

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Date: 30 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Who's going to have a disruption to their sex lives. The new parents of course! Amelia seemed particularly well over this day. I wonder if humidity has a positive or negative impact cystic fibrosis?

Author's Response:

Haha!! I love how Esme feels like a new Mom, it's so sweet. I actually have a one shot idea where Amelia inadvertently interrupts them while they are hunting in the forest and.. other activities... and they come sprinting out of the forest all dishevelled and their clothes are wrecked and she just packs out laughing. She wasn't needing their help, Emmett snuck up on her or something and she got a fright, but their very tattered state could make for a hilarious one shot. What do you think? (only reason it's a one shot is because the story is basically done :P)

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Date: 30 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Even though Amelia's circumstances are not positive you have succeeded in making this a positive read. Without the love and affection this story would be 'angst ridden and depressing. instead, you are writing a 'the joy of life'.

Author's Response:

Aw thanks! I like to think that it's about living your life when you're terminally ill, and in Amelia's case, rediscovering what it means to have a family. There will be some angst, but she is coming into her own. It also shows a bit how important it is to surround yourself with family and people who care for you when you are at your sickest. Maybe that's just my glorified opinion (haha) but family makes all the difference. Amelia had no one to fight for, and now that she has a family, she will fight a little harder. 

Thank you for all of your lovely reviews :)

Chimera by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1017]
Summary: Past Featured Story

chimera

 

Summary: Bella Swan has lived a sheltered life, and chooses to go to college as far from home as her strict parents will allow. She runs into Edward Cullen, a gorgeous law student. They become friends and one night cross the line of friendship in a way that will alter the life of both of them more than anyone can ever believe. When DNA doesn't tell the same story Bella tells, how will her young life be altered?
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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256985 Read Count: 332882
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2016 Updated: 30 Mar 2017
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Good update. Thank you

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Date: 23 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

A wonderful chapter. Thanks

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Date: 06 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Gee this chapter covered a lot of territory. So pleased she has such good support. The ending was a good way to round off the chapter. Thanks

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Date: 09 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Thanks

Safe Harbor by OzellaMarie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

After receiving unsettling news, Bella Swan has found herself in the small, quiet town of Safe Harbor, and the daunting task of saying goodbye to the only man she ever loved. But what happens when a secret threatens what she thought was true love and another walks into her life promising forever?

A/H Edward/Bella Romance-Humor-Hurt-Comfort HEA Mature Content and Strong Language.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13400 Read Count: 4869
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2016 Updated: 19 Aug 2019
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Safe Harbor

Interested to see how this is going to go. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 2: An Officer and a McAsshole

This was good fun. Like the punchline of a joke that everyone else gets but you. :D

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Rubber Duckies and Bastard Cousins

Lol.

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Date: 16 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: The Truth of the Matter

Oh. And. Oops. And a few other monosyllabic words.

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Date: 16 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Now What?

Really enjoyable. I'm looking forward to seeing how this story will develop. Thanks

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Date: 22 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Overheating Tight Fits

A good chapter. Fate seems intent on putting people or obstacles in her path. At least she hasn't given up on positive thinking. Lol.

Summary:

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You know what brings a smile to my face? Memories of you… I wonder if your dreams are your reality. How I wish your life turned out exactly how you imagined it in your seventeen-year-old brain. Mine not so much.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11393 Read Count: 4701
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2016 Updated: 07 Jan 2018
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Dear Edward

So sad and lonely. Nice start. Thanks

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Date: 13 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Smile

Moving. Nice chapter. Thanks

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Date: 13 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 3: We are alive

Um. I can't help wonder how Edward will feel reading these letters. And, of course, therein lies the story. Good chapter. Thanks

Summary:

 

The Prince

In the hot, dry desert, can the Prince find true love or will an arranged marriage dry his heart into sand, or it will she be an oasis to his heart? E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1756 Read Count: 4893
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2016 Updated: 09 Oct 2016
Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Looking forward to reading more. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Enjoyed this read enough to make me want to come back again. Thanks. Feel better soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Online

 

 

 

Bella has a problem. She has fallen for her online friend and the handsome green eyed man she met at a wedding. Who will she choose? HEA B&E

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11408 Read Count: 3716
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2016 Updated: 29 Sep 2016
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Enjoyed this tale. Thanks

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Antique or Ikea, Beautiful inside or out, maim or kill, he had decisions to make today that would change his life.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 75 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 214108 Read Count: 157514
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2017 Updated: 27 Oct 2018
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Date: 27 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Excellent chapter. Thanks for writing a page turner. I vote for finding out what's happening. ðŸ‘

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Date: 03 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fun start. Thanks

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Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

More confused but an enjoyable update. Thank you

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Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

More confused but an enjoyable update. Thank you

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Date: 03 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Edward is a prick. Interesting character. Thanks

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Date: 03 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Now that's gotta hurt.

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Date: 03 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Interesting. Glad she's suspicious. Thanks

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Date: 03 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well played lol.

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Date: 03 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh A challenge. Lol. Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 03 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Enjoyable

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Date: 03 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Lol. Brilliant. Thanks

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Date: 04 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Good chapter. I wonder if Charlie was the out of town police chief. Thanks

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Date: 04 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Interesting. Very interesting

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Date: 04 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Really enjoyable. Thanks

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Date: 04 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loving Rosie and Emmy. Lol.

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Date: 04 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

She is a smart cookie. Loved it. Thanks

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Date: 04 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

A small world indeed. Lol

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Date: 04 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Loved it. Thanks

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Date: 04 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Intriguing. Thanks

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Date: 04 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wonderful. Thanks

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Date: 04 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So. Good. Thanks

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Date: 04 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Sweet. I loved it. Their first real conversation that included communication But lacked the usual shouting and four lettered f words . *huge sigh*

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Date: 08 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

So enjoyed this chapter. Thanks

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Date: 13 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Compromise. It has possibilities. Really enjoyed reading these two. Thank you for updating

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Date: 21 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Sorry that you've had a hell of a week. Hopefully this next one will make up for it. In the meantime, a thrilling chapter Thank you

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Date: 05 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Really enjoyable. The mystery continues and remains an intriguing read. Thank you

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Date: 10 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Good chapter. A lot of fun. Thanks

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Date: 06 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

So very hot!!!!!

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Date: 06 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Another exciting, character driven chapter. Wonderful. Thanks

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Date: 26 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Fantastic chapter. Love your characters. Thanks

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Date: 26 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Brilliant on many levels. Thanks

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Date: 04 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

They handled the awkwardness of the situation wonderfully. A case of 'sit on it and rotate'. I bet 2 of the Mrs Cullens looked like they were sucking on lemons. Lol. Wonderful update. Thanks

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Date: 12 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Thoroughly enjoyable. Thanks

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Date: 17 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful. Every word was a joy to read. Thank you

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

So very good. Thanks

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Really good. Many questions as you intended. Thanks ðŸ˜

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

So very good. Thanks

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Really good. Thanks

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

😌

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Excellent chapter. I suspect I know where this is going, but I'm always wrong. You'll surprise me big time. Thank you for writing

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Wonderful. You've managed to strike the right balance of excitement, fear and creakout. Thank you for writing.

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

So good. Thanks

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Date: 21 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Never noticed but I love these characters. They're complex and I quite like that the mob stuff takes a bit of a backseat to other necessities in Edward's life. Wonderful chapter. Thank you for updating

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Date: 21 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

So very good. The tension is building and the plot is thickening. Thank you.

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Date: 20 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

An understandable reaction to her kidnaping. Thank you for writing

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Date: 21 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Ah! Everyone will lose something as this betrayal resolves itself

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Date: 21 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Excellent. Thanks

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Date: 15 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Congrats on getting through and being on the mend. I have enjoyed these chapters. I view them as character development. Bella has shone through. These suckers have no idea. I hope Edward lea4ns some anger management sometime or other. ☺ï¸

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Date: 25 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Really good. Enjoyed APOV. Thanks

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Date: 25 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

So exciting. Thanks

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Date: 25 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Excellent chapter. Really enjoyed the power plays and the intrigue. Thanks

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Date: 08 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Wow! Excellent. She is doing well. Th

Married to the Mob by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 688]
Summary:

MOTM

 

Edward Cullen is the heir-apparent to the most infamous crime families in Chicago. He was notorious for his time with his enemies, his many dates and his ruthless skill in the board room, the front for the illicit dealings of the Cullen Crime Consortium. However, to take over the family, his father reminded him about the stipulation that Edward needed to be married. Edward hated that stipulation, but he agreed to it and he had less than a year to make it a reality.

 

 

 

Isabella Swan is a struggling graduate student, working as a waitress in a local diner, The Swan Dive. On a chance meeting, Edward finds Bella to be enchanting and the perfect woman to marry. He makes an indecent proposal, suggesting marriage and paying for Bella’s tuition, and then some. Will Bella accept his proposal, with the possibility of having her dreams come true, but married to a sexy, enigmatic rich businessman? Or will she figure out the truth, that her future-husband is Married to the Mob?

 

Banner by Clo! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 221384 Read Count: 145926
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2017 Updated: 16 Jan 2018
Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

So good. Fantastic cliffhanger

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Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Things really are hotting up. Wow

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Date: 01 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wonderful chapter. Full of tension. Good place to leave us hanging too! Lol

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Date: 01 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Excellent. Thanks. And happy New Year

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

It's the reality of the lives they lead. Sad but a good read. Thank you for writing

Summary:

Banner

Edward and Isabella Cullen run MC Enterprises and the Cullen mafia, making them Seattle's most important power couple. But what will become of them all when she's sick of the business?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12695 Read Count: 16973
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2017 Updated: 21 Dec 2017
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start. Thank you

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Post BD. A vision foretelling the Volturis return, a secret life revealed opens up a whole new world to the Cullen's.  A prophecy made decades before. Dumbledore convinces the Cullen's to join him in Hogwarts, but is this magical sanctuary a real safe haven or an even bigger fire for them to fall into?

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Categories: Harry Potter, Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: None
Genre: Adventure
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 157747 Read Count: 28645
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2017 Updated: 18 May 2018
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Visions and prophecy

Still good. Thank you again

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Date: 08 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The High Inquisitor.

I can't help but wonder if scent masking abilities of the disillusionment charm will come into play later. As always a wonderful re-read. Thanks

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Date: 08 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Christmas

Really good setup for what is to come

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Date: 08 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8– An attack and shared minds.

Wonderful chapter. Thank you

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Date: 08 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - First term Umbridge makes her mark.

Just as wonderful. Thank you again

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Date: 04 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12– Revelations.

I got a lot of the prophecy except for the thunderbird and the vow of stone. Never thought of Masen. Gotta love Emmett's way with a tense situation. He does crack me up. Loved what happened to Toad Face! Brilliant. Thank you so very much for this update.

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Date: 27 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Jacobs Cross

I would like to think that the pack will hear the words of wisdom spoken by Charlie et al. But, I think humility will come at a high price for that lot. Wonderful chapter. Thank you so much for writing