Reviews by BridieM
The Moment by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

One moment, I was a young, carefree girl and the next, I was writhing around on the ground, as the venom surged through my body. NC-17 for language and lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Fics to Read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53585 Read Count: 35494
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Nov 2010
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Nice mystery developing. Thanks

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh. Wow. Thanks

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Gees. She can't catch a break at the moment. Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oops. Looks like he caught her afterall. 🤓

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Enjoyable read. Thanks

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is really interesting. Thanks

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good backstory and Edward is always Hawt

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Good fight scene

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This really has turned into a compelling read. Thanks

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Good one

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh!!!

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I like how you've twisted BD into this storyline as well as all the associated characters.

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Love vamp stories. Loved read this one. Thank you.

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Sweet. Not saying anything about Jerkob. He's such a little prick

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Date: 16 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Nice one. Thanks

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh. Didn't expect Eleazar. Edward is so sweet. Confused but sweet. Thanks

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Lol. You know I'm so hypocritical. If canon Jerkob came out and said 'she's mine' that would be so repulsive and icky. But when Eddie says that well let's just say there is a lot of swooning happening around here. LOL

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2669063
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 39: Oobotz

Wonderful. Thanks

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Date: 28 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 41: Parts of life

Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 17 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 6: The Game

So very enjoyable. Thanks

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Date: 17 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 6: The Game

So very enjoyable. Thanks

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Date: 17 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Aruba

Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 17 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Aruba

Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 17 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Aruba

Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 18 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Round One

really enjoyable chapter. Love Nanny. Thanks

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Date: 18 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Round One

really enjoyable chapter. Love Nanny. Thanks

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Date: 18 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Round Two

Their lives will never be mundane. Lol.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Round Two

Their lives will never be mundane. Lol.

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Date: 18 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Light my Fire

Wonderful. Thanks

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Date: 19 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Lousy Day at the Slots

Excellent chapter. I reckon it's Charlie. Glad Emmett and Edward are trying to make their relationship work. Thanks Really having a hard time trying to get my reviews through to you. Just the reviews. Nothing else. :(. ???

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Date: 19 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Bad Taffy

Wow. Still think it's Charlie and the Russian is coincidence. I know I'm so totally wrong. Lol.

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Date: 19 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 16: The Trouble in Little Odessa

Yep. I was so wrong Charlie was behind the threat to Bella. Really good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 19 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 18: A Bitch Named Karma

Wonderful and pretty true to life without the 'E' factor.

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Date: 20 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 19: When Shit Rolls Downhill

So good

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Date: 20 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Wrapped Around my Finger

Edward's instincts are spot on

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Date: 20 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Boxed In

Excellent

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Date: 22 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Something in the Water

Really good

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Date: 22 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Prove It

Really enjoyable. Thanks

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Date: 22 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Every Dog Has Its Day

I loved seeing E&B so happy too. Really enjoyable. Thanks

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Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 33: SunSational Day

Really good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 34: This is it

Complex. Intriguing. Compelling. Thanks

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Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 35: Par for the Course

Wonderful plot

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Date: 24 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 36: Checks and Balances

Excellent. Thanks

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Date: 24 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 37: Baby Blues

Wonderful. Thanks

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

A Kingdom Reborn Banner 1

Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 101998
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
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Date: 16 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Ruling

This is a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing your immense talent with us. I hope you are well.

Ginnungagap by ahommel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 165]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Ginnungagap Banner: the castle, the servant, the Queen, and the land.

Forced into a marriage with a man she fears, Izabel must choose between changing him or falling in love with a stranger. 

 


Ginnungagap has been

  • Nominated for the TwiFanfictionRecs Top 10 Completed fic in May. Vote here! Polls close on June 30th!

 

  • Rec'd by The Other Realm.


  • Featured on Fic Central as an "Under the Radar" fic.

 

  • Listed on TWCS under "Featured Stories"

**Banner from TwiFanfictionRecs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149484 Read Count: 42210
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 23 May 2016
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Dreams May Come

Really enjoyed this. Thank you

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Nightmares

It's very interesting. My pronunciation is also interesting. Lol

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Maze

Fascinating.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Raven

Really interesting. Thanks.

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Date: 06 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Valkyries

So interested to find out where and how you will take me on this journey.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Hunt

Fascinating. Both the chapter and your A/N. Thank you

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Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The First Encounter

I am loving this world of intrigue punctuated with interesting characters. Thanks

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Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Stories

A good chapter. You may have struggled with getting the details and the momentum just right, but as a reader I never would have suspected it. Thank you

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Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Training

Loving the story and the history lesson too. Thanks

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Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: The Spy

Yep. Did get the panic attacks and lack of sleep. Can't help but wonder where her sisters get themselves off to. They don't seem to be around when she needs them. This story certainly makes the old brain cells work. Loved this chapter. Thanks

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Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Afternoon Games

Liked it a lot. :D

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Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: An Afternoon Picnic

Really enjoyed.

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Unknown

I knew the King was sounding her out and keeping his true intentions and motivations to himself. Excellent chapter. Thanks

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Other

Wonderful chapter. Your husband has good instincts. But then again so do you. ;D

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Time

Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Distractions

Good chapter. Out takes are always interesting. Thank you.

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: He Knows

Wow!

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Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: One Night

fantastic

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Confession

This was a wakeup call for her. I do keep expecting your dream to become reality. But I guess her trials would need to continue until she has earned her HEA...if she gets one that is. The things done, in history but also today, in the name of justice, revenge and greed are really too terrible to dwell on. Excellent chapter.

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Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Lesson

Never did I suspect collusion between those two. my skin crawls at their deceit. I imagine that poor boy met a painful death. Will Nada go to Tyr to get help I wonder? Excellent chapter.

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Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Desperate

Wonderful chapter. Knew her people would win out. However, it was a surprise to find they country already given to the King of Tyr.

Recs: love vamp stories. Simply can't get enough. Check out my FF net page under BridieM. But I have two authors (on FF) that have/ are writing good suspense dramas. Jam11 has Red Dawn. And Trillionschiffer has completed New Eclipse with the sequel Horizon still a WIP. He warns it is about to get very dark. No warm and fuzzier here! Other WIPs are Monolith by NewTwilightFan which is fascinating. The Last Word by LadyLibre. A completed story She Tames the Beast Within by deJean Smith.
And that's just for starters. I am so fortunate to have read, and am still reading, some amazing authors.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Vision

A wonderful chapter.

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Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Death

Difficult to read. But brilliant writing.

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Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Escape

Excellent

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Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: The Temple

Interesting.

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Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: The Return

Wow!

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Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Death (EPOV)

So good

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Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Burning

Wow. really enjoyed the en...cliffhanger. thank you so much for sharing this with us.

Save Tonight by ahommel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

AU - It's been nine months since Edward fled the woods in Forks, fled from her for her. Each day his willpower crumbles a little more, feeling the insistent pull to return to her side. Upon returning, a passionate night will erupt between them.

Bella and Edward


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16688 Read Count: 6788
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2012 Updated: 26 Nov 2012
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Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

My personal bias is against canon Jerkob. To me he is a sociopath. It's all about him . His wants, needs and wishes. He is an abuser in training. I think you captured his essence quite nicely. Thank you for writing

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Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Wonderwall

Again, wonderful. Thank you

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Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Rolling in the Deep

I wondered if Jerkob would make an appearance. Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Breathless

Wow! Wonderful. thanks

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Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: In a Little While

Well written but oops...a dream. Thank you for writing

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Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: All Fall Down

Heartbreaking. Never ceases to move me.

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Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Everything

Wow. This is brilliant. Thank you

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent start.  :)

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Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting.  :)

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Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i find this fascinating.  :)

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Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh!  4 tails.  What could you do with those?  ;P

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272042
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
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Date: 06 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Powerful. Wonderful. Singing along with you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

mdd

Bella is a divorced English teacher, who doesn't know she has a vampire in her class.

"Please don't push me away, Bella. Isn't it my choice if I want to be with you? I'm not a child in the way I feel."

"I'm not the older woman who's going to spend a season educating a teenage boy so he can go off and remember me fondly. I'm looking for forever."

"How do you know I couldn't..."

" Because you're a boy, Edward, a beautiful, sweet, confused, boy! You've got your whole life ahead of you. This kind of thing doesn't work out."

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 453800 Read Count: 80907
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2013 Updated: 30 May 2014
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ghosts

Just found your story. It looks like its going to be fun. Thanks

Author's Response:

I would have responded sooner, but I had some issues accessing my account.  Thank you for your kind words.  

Summary:

everythingIneeded_zps20a89799

 

Bella had been lucky to land the job as the nanny to Esme and Carlisle's two girls, but when Carlisle's younger brother arrives in New York in need of a fresh start and some help with his own brood, Bella's world is quickly turned upside down. It was just supposed to be a job, but they quickly became everything she needed. 

 

Check out Edward's POV, Everything I Wanted.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99082 Read Count: 87251
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Apr 2018
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Lovely. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Lovely. Thanks

Summary:

lwoc

Summary: After her parents are murdered, Bella and her brothers flee to the protection of their Godfather. When Bella discovers information that puts her life at risk, her only choice is to marry a man that she hates. Edward is a hard man, one that wants nothing to do with his reluctant bride. Can this pair ever learn to love each other...before their enemies destroy them? AH E/B


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25286 Read Count: 66585
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2017
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Enjoyable. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 01 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 01 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Unexpected. Understandable. But so public? Anger management? ;P Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 01 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Bella behaved well. Edward does need anger management. After all the best weapons are those that are never used...the threat of his anger should be enough as Mobward.

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Date: 31 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Interesting. Is this a case of no pain no gain? Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 01 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh! Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 01 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Please don't let trolls infect your life with their diseased cynicism. They are to be pitied. Good chapter . Thank you

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Date: 31 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Maybe Edward will be the last one to realise her importance. Good chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I do enjoy backboned Bella. Thanks