You know how much I love this story.  So glad you don't have to worry about FF taking it down :)

Love you guys!

~Jenn

I got my alert :)

*sigh* I sure do love creepy Aro.  I love you both and love that y'all are writing this twistedly yummy story.  I think I'm caught up and need to go preread to see what's going on.

LOVE YOU GUYS!!!!  MWAH!!!

Father Aro is super creepy but I love him that way.  The story wouldn't be the same if we actually liked him.  Carlisle redeemed himself a bit there.

Oh, I could totally see Carlisle secretly giving Bella birthcontrol so she couldn't be a chosen one.  Of course the only reason I could see him doing that would be for Edward's sake.  Yeah, I may have lost the plot with that idea but a girl can dream.

Obviously Esme is not pleased with Aro and what he's doing/done to Bella.

Another great chapter as usual!  Love you both!

You're brainwashing sucks ass, Aro!  Bella is still in there and fighting for her existence :)  I'm really loving Esme more and more.  I can totally see Carlisle slipping Bella some brithcontrol pills or something to ensure she is not a "chosen" one.  You can do it Daddy C.  Protect Edward and your family.

Aro is a dirty old man that needs a new hobby.  Maybe he should take up knitting like Rhage ;)

I think Father Aro would be the easy guess as to who is watching them.  I'm going to go against the norm and say that Felix is watching them.  I think after running into Charlie at the bar he is really feeling guilty having "converted" Bella and he might be scoping everything out and maybe he'll help Charlie get her out.

So, where's all of this wonderful smut Jenny wrote in reflection.  I demand to see the smut!

I wondered how the hell you were going to approach the whole ceremony.  I like how you ladies did it.  You know how now a days it is so easy to break your hymen and not even bleed your first time?  I wonder if they have ever encountered that here.  If so, does Carlisle do something to ensure that his daughter would bleed no matter what?  Just errant thoughts running through my mind while I was reading.

I love that this is what it took to finally break through to Bella that something wasn't right.  Now I'm dying to know what happens next.

I love your evil minds :)

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Testing Gareth's skillz again.  Has he learned anything?

I love you both so much and am so happy to have a good home for TTSS.  I've loved this story from the beginning :)

Yes, Edward, I would love to play *evil grin*

Love you ladies.  Mwah!

Poor, Bella.  Totally clueless as to what a monster James is and what he's thrown her into.

I have a feeling little things like Edward holding her hands down will freak her out now and then.  She's been through a lot.

I'm afraid to know who the guests are.

OMG, please let that be Edward, Jasper, and Emmett at the door.  Bella has already been through so much.  The last thing she needs is Carlisle showing up and being pissed because she isn't a virgin.  If Demetri and Carlisle gang rape her that will destroy her.

Please don't make us wait too long with that evil cliffy.

I'm so glad you didn't go the easy route and have Edward and Bella live happily ever after right after Carlisle died.  Both of them definitely needed extensive therapy.  I couldn't help but smile at the end at Edward's nervousness.  Can't wait for the epi and your original novels.

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I love the Cullens for keeping her busy throughout the day.

Okay, I think Mike is more irritating than in the book.  Great job with that :)

I wonder if Bella will be upset when she realizes the smell form her blanket is Edward.

Loved Charlie!  Nothing better than him going into over-protective daddy mode.

I'm really enjoying this story and so happy to see it over here.

LOL!  What's the use of a plan if Bella's gonna throw it out the window?  Thanks so much for the great laughs while I'm at work.  They are greatly appreciated :)

That was quite an interesting photo shoot.  I love that Leah got those awesome shots of Bella and Edward.  I wonder how Edward will react to them when he sees them.

Bella, dear, I think Edward was ready for bed before he even picked you up.

I'm really enjoying this story.  Thanks so much for sharing it with us :)

They are so cute together.  Rose doesn't waste any time getting to the tough questions :)  Hopefully the press won't make their relationship too hard.  This has been my fluffy feel-good story to read.  I just wonder how long the happy will last.

I'm trying to be good and not run to FF and read everything there.  I want to review as I go here.  Anyway, another great chapter. 

You definitely didn't let me down.  They are so cute with their teasing and banter.  My heart melted when he showed up at her hotel room door :)

Awe, Edward is so sweet giving her a massage and spooning her afterward.  Well, if James is that intense throughout the filming, I don't see them having a problem reproducing those reactions.  After hearing hints dropped about Charlie I can't wait for him to show up :)

I think Jacob needed to get this cleared up more than any of them.  They were really screwing with his life bad saying he beat Bella up.  I like the way they handled it.

Wow, six months in New Orleans.  That could be quite tricky for Bella and Edward to get time together.

At least they got to end the press nightmare on a good note barebacking it in the pool :)

*sigh* Still loving this.

Edward and Bella are so cute together.  They practically live together anyway so why not move in together.  When you're in love like they are what's the point in waiting.

I was totally expecting Esme to be at the door. but I'm freaking excite for the Charlie visit.

LOL.  I totally lost it when Edward sniffed his notes.  That was greatness.

Yay Angela for saving Bella from Mike.

I love that sneaky little pixie for sending Bella to the third floor.  I would say it is Edward that closed and locked the door.  I'm not quite sure how your Edward will react so I'm excited to see what happens next.

That was an interesting look into Edward.  I still wonder if Alice saw him changing her or if that was a snap decision on his part.

From that chapter I fear she will harbor feelings for Jasper that she shouldn't.  Oh my, that could be very bad.  I can't wait to see her reactions to everything now.

I knew it was killing him to see Bella relying on Jasper and asking for him.

LOL, why do I have a feeling that Edward will be in the dog house for quite a while so to speak.  I don't think Bella seemed to happy that it was THEIR house.

I wonder how long Bella can drag out her anger at Edward for taking away her choice.

I love Alice.  I can see her and Bella scheming together to find ways to make Edward work for Bella's forgiveness and love.

I loved the play date with Em and Bella.  What a cool way to learn about being a vampire.

One of these days Edward will learn not to force his likes onto Bella. *shakes my head*  Silly vampire.

There's nothing better than a big brother Emmett.

I never thought about Carlisle feeling responsible since he's the one that created Edward.  I'm glad you aren't making Edward a wallowing mess.  I have a feeling that would just piss Bella off even more.

I liked how you were able to give Bella closure with her mother.  I never thought that Bella mourning her humanity and the loss of her family and friends would bring her and Edward together.  I love that I can't predict what you will do next.

Charlie really made me tear up.  That was so true to character for him to try to comfort Edward.  Great job with Charlie :)

OMG, Edward, did you really sit there and remember with a smile being with another female?  If so, good luck digging your way out of this one.

I cringed when I reading the lust consuming them.  OMG, I just knew some how, some way that what was building between Bella and Jasper would come out.  I'm glad she didn't give in to Edward.  I just wonder if he is wondering the forest or if he went to their house.

OMG, the last line once again has me so thankful that I don't have to wait for the next chapter.

I think you were absolutely right.  I love that you had Bella struggle with her bloodlust.  I never liked the idea that she just skipped the whole new born phase in Breaking Dawn.  You've done a great job portraying that bloodlust and keeping true to how intense SMeyer intended it to be.

You were totally right.  I don't think she would've ever gotten past her issues with Edward if she hadn't lost control and taken a human life.  Honestly it would be easier for her to resist someone she loved like Charlie or even Angela because of how much she loved them.

I'm so glad I caught this on the random stories and took the time to read it.  I'm thoroughly enjoying it and can't wait for your next chapter.

That's gotta suck being that attracted just from looks.  4 years is acceptable age difference yet being her teacher makes it off limits.  They are both truly fucked.  Hmm, I wonder if Edward will use Tanya to try to distract himself from Bella.

Poor Edward.  Bella's winding him up so tight it won't take much for him to snap.

I totally understand what Edward is saying and why, but poor Bella only sees it as rejection.  Bless her heart.  I have a feeling Edward is going to feel so guilty and pissed when he finds out the real reason B was late and what J&A were talking to her about.

Thanks for that little bit of lemony goodness :)  You've done a great job making me feel the attraction they have for each other.  There's no way either of them will be able to resist much.  I just wonder what is about to happen.  Of course they won't be all sunshine and rainbows until she graduates.  There's too much at stake.

LOL, does everyone just think Ben Cheney is the perfect little drug dealer?  I swear if the Cullens aren't the ones dealing the shit then little Cheney is.  It's freaking hilarious.

I knew Edward wouldn't be able to deal with the whole Friends with Benefits thing.  I just wonder how their whole relationship is gonna work out.

I don't care if Kate has the tightest sweetest pussy Garrett's ever had, you don't do that shit to a friend.  I would've hit him if I was Edward.

Oh shit!  I seem to be saying that quite a bit, huh?  Please tell me Daddy Swan has some connections and get this douche Demitiri taken care of. 

Please tell me Charlie is all mobbed up and is going to deliver a world of hurt to Demitri.  Drug lords don't have shit on the mob :)  OMG, how did readers stand waiting for chapter updates.  It's killing me when I have to pause to answer the damn phone.

Yay for Bella calling from a payphone!

I'm glad Edward got the balls to talk to Daddy Swan.

You do realize I'm totally hooked and avoiding working, right?

Yay!  Edward showed up just when Bella needed him.  OMG, I died laughing when Charlie walked in.  Good thing she's legally an adult.

I have a feeling the next chapter or two is going to be intense.  At least Edward was finally able to tell her he loves her :)  I should really be writing, but I have to know what happens next.

I'm so glad Bella was able to move past the shit Demitri did to her and reconnect with Edward intimately.  So sweet and good.

I was ready to beat the shit out of Carlisle for his attitude.

I can't believe it's almost over.

I think you handled the trial beautifully.  We really didn't need detailed accounts of everything.  The scene with Rose and Bella making up was perfect for them.

Yay for a guilty on all counts verdict :)  And honestly, if Laurent was still alive in prison the DA would've been a fool not to bring him in to testify and that would've helped back up Bella's testimony.

That was such a good happy ending :)  And, hello, who wouldn't try to seduce Mr. Cullen.

I have a feeling the harpy lived up to her nickname.  I bet she never really wanted Bella, she only didn't want Charlie to have her.  I'm afraid to find out what Bella has lived with her whole life.

Edward was so sweet :)