STARS Library :: cofey

i have followed this fic on fanfic and absolutely love it .. r u transferring the fic to this site and then updating on both sites or will it just b here????

xoxo ety

13. IThinkINeededThat

14. judo_lin

luv ur style of writing and ur storylines

xoxo

15. justginger

16. kuntrygal

i love ur style of writing ... ur ability to convey ur message using appropriate english and the way ur characters interact - i feel that i'm a close friend and share their highs and lows

thanks for writing and sharing ur fic

xoxo ety

17. Latuacantante83

18. lmlx8

19. MarieCarro

love ur style and work so far

20. MidnightKat

i love the storyline .. esp that edward doesnt react with disgust and horror at bella's scent but rather allows her scent to call to him as her mate ... intense and tho sad, there is potential for a happy ending ... bella needs to open up and trust her feelings for edward .. they need to have hot passionate sex which will liberate both of them

xoxo ety

21. Morgaine Swann

i love the way u infuse humour into ur fics ... some of the things they 'say' and their reactions eg eric to niall's note ... simply brilliant .. cant wait to see eric's reaction to sookie's news!!!!!!!!!!! and i am sure that eric will b there for dinner when niall meets sookie ... eric will prob have a better appreciation of adele now with this new development ... also wonder what niall wants

will they keep sookie's heritage a secret???? esp from sophie .. after all she is already pissed that eric has the telepath and that eric wont marry her .. this will b like a red flag to a bull

i'm loving sookie's innocence and not only her honesty but her lack of stubborness

thanks for sharing

xoxo ety (tbens on fanfic)

22. mustlovertp

23. Pears13

i'm really enjoying not only ur fic but ur writing style ... i really loved 'the fan' and am equally engrossed in the sequel ... i can totally understand where bella is coming from .. they really havent discussed much in their whirlwind romance ... as much as they love each other they need to talk about their expectations for the future and of each other ... bella often works from home even b4 she met edward and took significant amounts of time off to attend the games so why cant she continue at least for the moment .. work more from home, go to the games and watch edward .. would it b so bad for them for her to accompany him on the road trips at least unitl the baby needs the routine of sleeping in his own bed ... i was surprised that edward said and that bella didnt pick up on edwards comments about being petrified about being a dad ......... bella being the person she is cant comprehend not working and this is one of the urgent matters requiring discussion .. where they settle will also b affected by this decision ... during the interview edward gave his reasons and they are quite reasonable .. no decisions about relocating shld b made yet ... they have too many other issues to resolve ...

also, bella tends to b extreme in her reactions and really needs to learn to open up and not only to look for possible explanations but also to talk about what's bothering her ....

i'm really looking forward to more of ur fic

thanks for sharing

24. PeppahLouie

25. Prillylove25

26. rachelcullen77

this is such a powerful fic ... emotionally its a rollercoaster thinking that bella now has edward but he needs to do more than just b there for her ... its a start but she needs help to fight her demons ... such abuse as she's encountered has and does occur and its literrally criminal to treat anyone like that ... hopefully she'll feel she can trust edward and in turn the cullens ...

pls update soon ...

xoxo ety

27. rbsschess

thanks for sharing ... love ur storylines/characterisations/style of writing ... all of it ... everything

xoxo ety

28. rmcrms5

thanks for an emotionally difficult but amazing fic

hugs ety

29. shadowcat2009

i was so excited to see updates to this fic then realised u were reposting .. hanging out for new chapters

xoxo ety

30. SouthernLady23