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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 14: Step Into My Life

I love it.  They both have the same love for there familys so sweet.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. :)

Ready for another sweet chapter? I hope you're ready to meet adorableward! ;)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: briarrose20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life

One of the most wonderful fanfics ive read. 

Cant wait for the next chapters.

 

 



Author's Response:

Awww.... Thank you. It means a great deal to me to know someone is actually loving my crazy story. :)

I hope to hear more from you in the future.... *hint* *hint*

If you like OTC, you can try my other one-shots... Change My Mind and Yes!

Let me know what you think of them if you do read them. :)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2014 9:23 AM Title: Chapter-13: Seriously… who are you?

It is love so sweet



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Get ready for an awwwww.... moment in the next chapter! ;)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2014 8:47 AM Title: Chapter-12: Married to… who, now?

I hope that is out of the way 



Author's Response:

You'll have to wait and read on to find out... ;)

Thank you for the review.

The next chapter is going to be up soon.

Take care

Ann

Reviewer: trixielou Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter-11: It’s Happening!

Enjoying your story. Can't wait to see how the chemistry works out for them. 

Encase you didn't known your updates are not "updating" to our time line. 

Thank you for sharing with us. 



Author's Response:

You're welcome.

Thanks for the review.

I'm glad you like the story so far. :)

Thank you for letting me know the update problem. Actually I am doing my dissertation right now so most days I get so lost in data sheets and MRI scans that by the time I update more than 24-hours have passed. That coupled with the 10-hour gap my country has with the US is a major problem. But I'll try to do better. :)

The next chapter will be up soon.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter-11: It’s Happening!

Well they are there now is she going to run or kick him in the balls lol



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

You'll have to wait and see what see does... but I can tell you this what's gonna happen is too damn funny! :P

The next chapter will be up soon.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2014 1:58 PM Title: Chapter-11: It’s Happening!

I love this story! I hope there isn't too much drama between them as they learn to be husband and wife. 

The storyline is awesome :-) I can't wait for the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

I'm glad you like the timeline. :)

But about the drama part... I can't promise no drama. It's almost zero-angst story but there'll be some drama. Hopefully good drama though. ;)

The next chapter will be up soon.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 10: Haunted

OMG I can not wait till they see each other so excited ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

It seems like you're the only one reading OTC in TWCS. So I am glad you like it so far to stick with me.

The next chapter is here...

Enjoy!

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 9: Strike One

That is going to be interesting when she sees him when she is walking down the to him she may just turn and run.  I cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Lol. I would've ran if I was in her place... :P

Thanks for the review.

The next chapter is gonna be up soon.

Enjoy and take care.

Ann

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2014 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 9: Strike One

Oh man I had a feeling that was going to happen...now I bet they find out they are working together and that won't go well...lol



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

This scene was the first one that actually came to my mind when I came up with the plot. :D

The next chapter will be up soon.

Enjoy and take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 8: Preparations for Doomsday!

She is going to marry him and work with him they will have time to get to know each other a little backwards but I cant wait.  Are they going to meet before at the club??



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

I know it's a little backwards but that's the idea :)

The next chapter will be up within minutes... I hope that answers the questions you have.

Take care

Ann

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 7: Emergency Best Friend News Alert

More please!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

The next chapter will be up within a few minutes and you'll get more of wedding prep.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 7: Emergency Best Friend News Alert

The best friends taken care of



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

You got it!

The next chapter will be uo within a few minutes.

Take care

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 6: Pixie Inquisition

I cant wait till they meet.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

It's another 3 chapters before the meeting happens... till then you have to have a little bit more patience. ;-)

The next chapter will be up within a few minutes  :)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 5: Meet the In-Laws

Alice is in love with Bella already and Bella just wants everyone happy



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Yeah, Bella is a bit of a push-over in the beginning. But it will change as she evolves with the story and realizes what she wants...

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 4: Resigned Acceptance

He will be so surpised and happy she is not what he is making her out to be.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Well.... you'll have to wait and keep reading for a little bit more to see what happens... ;-)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 3: Temper Tantrums

She does not see herself clearly at all why are they doing this to her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 2: Urgent Calls

Poor girl she knows she is in for something but what lol



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Haha poor girl indeed. :D

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life

I am excited to see where this goes



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I am excited to welcome you to OTC.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 6: Pixie Inquisition

I added your story yesterday and couldn't stop reading so I figured I'd leave a feedback on the last chapter. I love the arranged marriage concept and the idea that they won't meet till the wedding...but Edward is already looking out for Bella's feelings. I'm thinking that they maybe working partners as well as husband and wife. Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

It's nice to hear that you liked the story so far... ;)

You are welcome to leave a review for every chapter... I don't mind responding to each and every one of the reviews... *hint**hint* ;)

The next chapter will be up within a few minutes so you'll get more soon... :)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 5: Meet the In-Laws

I'm intrigued...  Can't wait for more!!!  :)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

It's nice to hear I've got you intrigued... ;)

The next chapter will be up within a few minutes so you'll get more soon... :)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2014 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meet the In-Laws

Shopping!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

The next chapter will be up in a few minutes... then you'll see if you're right or wrong. ;)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 2: Urgent Calls

THANKS;)

Author's Response:

You're welcome.

If you are reading it in ffn though leave me your thoughts! :)

TWCS will be brought up-to-date with ffn soon... hopefully!

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 3: Temper Tantrums

a bit of a shock poor bella

i guess if i were her i wouldn't stick around to hear the details

 

look forward to morr



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Yeah, Bella kind of have a push-over streak here... but I hope to change that with time... when she meets a certain doctor! ;)

Chapter-4 will be up in a few minutes.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life

what is your name on FF

Author's Response:

It's TwiAddictAnee... :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 3: Temper Tantrums

ok this sound promising

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I should probably warn you though... it's gonna be a slow burn.

The first 16 chapters are already published in ffn but I am moving the story here as well... so until they are both on the same level there'll be daily updates in TWCS! :)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 2: Urgent Calls

Great start! I look forward to see where you take it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I should probably warn you though... it's going to be a slow burn.

The first fifteen chapters of this story is available in ffn but I am moving the story here. So for now there will be daily updates! :-)

Chapter-3 is up! Enjoy!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 2: Urgent Calls

This sounds like it is going to be interesting.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I hope to keep it interesting. ;-)

I should probably warn you though... it's going to be a slow burn.

The first fifteen chapters of this story is available in ffn but I am moving the story here. So for now there will be daily updates! :-)

Chapter-3 is up! Enjoy!

Reviewer: maja296 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life

sounds great can't wait for more




Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I should probably warn you though... it's going to be a slow burn.

The first fifteen chapters of this story is available in ffn but I am moving the story here. So for now there will be daily updates! :-)

Chapter-3 is up! Enjoy!

Reviewer: tibbs8482 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 2: Urgent Calls

its off to a good start and I can't wait to see what happens



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I should probably warn you though... it's going to be a slow burn.

The first fifteen chapters of this story is available in ffn but I am moving the story here. So for now there will be daily updates! :-)

Reviewer: redbug Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 2: Urgent Calls

Really like it. Keep going. Can't wait for the next chapter's.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and for liking my story.

I should probably warn you though... it's going to be a slow burn.

The first fifteen chapters of this story is available in ffn but I am moving the story here. So for now there will be daily updates! :-)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life

OH SWEETIE I AM SO GLAD YOU'VE DECIDED TO CUM HERE WITH YOUR STORY. THE EASE AND "TEA CUPS" WILL BE WORTH POSTING HERE. I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR MAGIC HERE AND WAIT PATIENTLY FOR YOU TO BRING THIS STORY UP TO WERE YOUR AT OVER AT FFN.  READ YOU SOON!!!



Author's Response:

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's so good to see you here. I have posted Change My Mind here because a community in ffn said it was not properly rated... (insert eye roll here... :-P) and then thought of posting OTC here as well in case they think it's too adult-like for M rating. Because I am definitely going to put dirty stuff in this one... even if at the very end. After the next few days of daily updates hopefully TWCS will be parallel to ffn so that I can post at both sites at the same time.

P.S. Chapter -16 is almost done... ;-)

Ann

Reviewer: angel hall Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 2: Urgent Calls

sounds great can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I should probably warn you though... it's going to be a slow burn. The first fifteen chapters of this story is available in ffn but I am moving the story here. So for now there will be daily updates! :-)

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 2: Urgent Calls

Looking forward to reading more please.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. It's going to be a slow burn. The first fifteen chapters of this story is available in ffn but I am moving the story here. So for now there will be daily updates! :-)

Reviewer: trixielou Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life

She really never stood a chance. Poor Charlie.  Can't wait to see where you go with this.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. It's going to be a slow burn. The first fifteen chapters of this story is available in ffn but I am moving the story here. So for now there will be daily updates! :-)

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