Date: 14 Feb 2022 8:33 PM Title: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription
Congrats I know how hard it is to finish a story and to hear all of our thoughts. Thank you for sharing your story. Be well.
Date: 14 Feb 2022 6:13 PM Title: Chapter- 44: Bottomless Love
So glad they found their way it took so long to get here. They are cute together.
Date: 14 Feb 2022 4:32 PM Title: Chapter- 43: Mine, Bitch!
James lust for Edward was a good switch in his usual obsessions.
Date: 14 Feb 2022 1:02 PM Title: Chapter- 41: Move Into My Heart
Okay what is Charlie's damage?
Date: 14 Feb 2022 11:02 AM Title: Chapter-36: My Vampire Girl
Thud! Yeah they got off too easy. Bella and Edward were harder on each other at the bar when they first met.
Date: 14 Feb 2022 4:18 AM Title: Chapter-34: Thanks For Fucking With My Life
LONG OVER DUE!
Date: 13 Feb 2022 10:04 PM Title: Chapter-33: Halloween Horror Stories
Good progress with trust kids. Now we know that the harpy and the dog will show up later right?
Date: 13 Feb 2022 7:21 PM Title: Chapter-31: Who the Fuck is Ian?
Usually in fandom Edward is the mercurial one but throughout this whole story Bella is the mercurial one.
Date: 13 Feb 2022 6:47 PM Title: Chapter-30: What? How? WOW!
It's funny the family aspect of this chapter. Well confusing I guess. Renee is provocative and modern enough to ask if Bella had it rough or slow in bed with Edward in front of her father but antiquated/patriarchal enough to marry her off with a stranger to Bella anyway. Why did they go though all of that with the Cullen's visit and then not stay together as husband and wife. Why is Charlie acting like they shouldn't show affection. It was a little confusing. Edward's gift was so freaking sweet but so is he. I'm glad they are falling for each other.
Date: 13 Feb 2022 3:37 PM Title: Chapter-29: A Little Piece of Me
Seriously, Charlie protective and possessive dad mode? For kissing your daughter his wife. Who you married off like Forks is in the Victorian era. Yeah the kids need to blast the parents big time. Put Bella's bitchy snark to good use. It would satisfy the parch throat of the slow burn.
Date: 13 Feb 2022 3:07 PM Title: Chapter-28: The Geek and His Nerd
This is a modern story right? What did Alice mean about ancient times? How old could the Cullen's or Swan's be 45-55? And the birthday rules don't apply to these two they don't even know each other how can Edward magically buy Bella the perfect gift without asking someone like Rose or Jasper. I am happy the finally have found a rhythm . I hope they fall in love before the last chapter.
But most importantly I'm waiting for the blow up they layout on their parents it's long over due. Just saying.
Date: 13 Feb 2022 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 25: Whom Exactly Are You Deceiving?
Yeah I wish she unleashed her bitch on Esme. Well deserved I say. But if you're starting to have the feels have them. It's 20+ chapters deep. Let's not wait until the epi to figure it the fuck out kids. That would be sad.
Date: 12 Feb 2022 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 24: Decepticons Prepare for Battle
Two steps forward and...
why is where they sleep any of the Cullen's business? They didn't care about the kids emotional well being with this plan. And and yes they did make a mistake they should know what these kids have been through and it's not remotely perfect.
Date: 12 Feb 2022 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 23: Tentative Friendships
23 chapters and we have friendship lift off, thank fuck! ;-D
Date: 12 Feb 2022 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 22: Eruption of Bella-vius
Oh these two can work a nerve. All this assumption, guessing, conjecture and no facts. When has the guy had a chance to have an affair Bella? You are on the same team and live together. I hope they have a real talk soon it's long overdue. The kissing is a waste without knowing what's what. Question do they even wear wedding rings? Seems odd no one has noticed.
Date: 12 Feb 2022 5:52 PM Title: Chapter-21: Back to Square One
I don't care if we redeem Alice. Sorry. She's not the main concern because Bella and Edward are drowning in this mess their parents created. Bella and Edward are both shy and apparently not very communicative outside their college educated brains. They save all the best talking for themselves. And they are supported by knuckleheads. How hard would it have been for Alice to tell Bella what sweet and sad thing Edward said the night before? All the family and friends do is meddle, push, threaten, act childish and plot. Be helpful, sit them on the sofa and make them a Hendricks and tonic and make them talk damnit! Mean really Emmett you are the 'older brother' you show up to dinner every night watch the childish display and even participate in it? Come on dude! Maybe they should annul this marriage.
Date: 12 Feb 2022 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 20: Time for Drunken Dancing!
*sigh*
Date: 12 Feb 2022 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 19: Truce?
These two should stop having these in-depth internal conversations and talk to each other instead. Because snarky internal Bella wants Edward to do all the work why can't she ask him out? The shy leading the shy.
Date: 12 Feb 2022 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 18: Nosey Pantoprazole Lover
Are you going to explain the Papa Mase thing Emmett mentioned? And these two are exhausting. 🤣hehe I rarely agree with Emmett because he's usually immature in fanfic but he's right they need to go at it hard over the sofa or in the supply closet because it will occupy there mouths and give them a good dose of happy with some natural dopamine release.
Date: 12 Feb 2022 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 17: Strike Two
Oh my god take it down a thousand Bella. I'm routing for Edward to put something big in her mouth to shut her up. There I said it! Sorry but shouldn't she try to be nice. It's like all she wants to do is be mad. And why does she keep asking if he has women? Bella you did this because you trusted your dad so trust. They are a mess. I'm running my hand through my hair like Edward waiting for them to click. Please click kids and stop being assholes. Carrying on...😉
Date: 12 Feb 2022 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 16: Grocery Shopping and Cereal Boxes
Jesus these two. They are both so defensive. And that grocery shopping trip was like watching two fourteen year olds or as if they split a blunt in the car. 🤣 Well work is going to be awkward right?
Date: 12 Feb 2022 2:42 PM Title: Chapter-15: Who The Hell Doesn’t Like Coffee?
Men. Buying hot water. Haha He doesn't have a kettle that's not very English. I agree with Bella they should have met prior to the wedding at least they could have avoided the first meeting mess. And they still haven't discussed work. Odd.
Date: 12 Feb 2022 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 14: Step Into My Life
Okay Bella girl time for a chat, you weren't strapped with a bomb when you married Edward so you had pleanty of opportunity to back out but you didn't. So what I'm saying is forgive the first meeting and stop being bitchy. The guy is trying here. If you don't you make it hard to cheer you on.
Date: 12 Feb 2022 2:15 PM Title: Chapter-13: Seriously… who are you?
Seriously what do Charlie and Billy do on those fishing trips that makes him have Billy around at inappropriate times. This was not the event to invite him to. At least when the kids look back they would have had a lovely wedding. Also given the extent how long had Renee and Esme been planning this because it wasn't thrown together. Those meddling mommies.
Date: 12 Feb 2022 5:01 AM Title: Chapter-12: Married to… who, now?
Well he may have been rude at the bar and he was but Bella was bat shit crazy here. She had ample opportunity to say no to this wedding up until I do so...you're in it so be in it. Wipe the slate clean.
Date: 12 Feb 2022 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 10: Haunted
The subconscious is amazing right?! Okay buckle up kiddies it's about to get real. I always find little Bella and Edwards so cute.
Date: 11 Feb 2022 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 9: Strike One
Well that sucked. So they are physically attracted to each other but hate each other. Bummer separate bedrooms for sure now.
Date: 11 Feb 2022 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 8: Preparations for Doomsday!
Sorry but their parents are setting them up to look like idiots right? I mean she is going to be partnering with her husband per her boss and she doesn't know it. Why not tell them they work at the same hospital? Why the secrecy? And if what Esme said to Bella is true how has she never met them since they moved to England? I'm overthinking I know sorry but I feel bad for the kids.
Date: 11 Feb 2022 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 7: Emergency Best Friend News Alert
So will he and Emmett meet Bella and Rosalie when the go to Joe's on Wednesday. Also I love that they both hate blondes.
Date: 11 Feb 2022 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 6: Pixie Inquisition
This is so odd how everyone is okay with this. And Bella girl it seems you are getting romance regency style anyway. Arranged marriages were the rage after all. So Edward is obviously the doctor Jasper was ranting about right? And Rosalie is gonna flip I'm sure.
Date: 11 Feb 2022 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meet the In-Laws
Yay the Cullen's are awesome and not weird even though this arrangement is odd. So how come Bella didn't know they were her parents best friends? So do I understand correctly, Jasper dumb in this or is this just Bella's blonde theory? Hilarious!
Date: 11 Feb 2022 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 4: Resigned Acceptance
Why are his parents so desperate? I hope for their HEA but they are both young and both parents are showing an incredible lack of faith in their kids. It's kind of sad. Edward and Bella both have just taken a hit to confidence.
Date: 11 Feb 2022 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 3: Temper Tantrums
Poor Bella. Charlie and Renee are awful. She's only 23. Why are they so desperate?
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2020 1:38 AM Title: Outtake-3: A Secret Hunt
Thought I had read this years ago it’s been sitting on my STARS account for a long while. It’s been a great way to spend a few days. I really loved this story. Ajfflady
Date: 03 Dec 2018 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 5: Meet the In-Laws
Loved it!
Date: 03 Dec 2018 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 2: Urgent Calls
Loved it!
Date: 03 Dec 2018 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life
Loved it!
Date: 05 Mar 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 23: Tentative Friendships
Loved it!
Date: 05 Mar 2017 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 22: Eruption of Bella-vius
Loved it!
Date: 05 Mar 2017 7:29 PM Title: Chapter-21: Back to Square One
Loved it!
Date: 05 Mar 2017 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 20: Time for Drunken Dancing!
Loved it!
Date: 04 Mar 2017 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 19: Truce?
Loved it!
Date: 04 Mar 2017 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 18: Nosey Pantoprazole Lover
Loved it!
Date: 04 Mar 2017 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 17: Strike Two
Loved it!
Date: 04 Mar 2017 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 16: Grocery Shopping and Cereal Boxes
Loved it!
Date: 04 Mar 2017 10:35 AM Title: Chapter-15: Who The Hell Doesn’t Like Coffee?
Loved it!
Date: 04 Mar 2017 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 14: Step Into My Life
Loved it! Poor Alec!
Date: 04 Mar 2017 8:25 AM Title: Chapter-13: Seriously… who are you?
Loved it!
Date: 04 Mar 2017 8:09 AM Title: Chapter-12: Married to… who, now?
Loved it!
Date: 04 Mar 2017 7:48 AM Title: Chapter-11: It’s Happening!
Loved it!
Date: 03 Mar 2017 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 10: Haunted
Loved it!
Date: 03 Mar 2017 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 9: Strike One
Loved it!
Date: 03 Mar 2017 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 8: Preparations for Doomsday!
Loved it!
Date: 03 Mar 2017 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 7: Emergency Best Friend News Alert
Loved it!
Date: 03 Mar 2017 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 6: Pixie Inquisition
Loved it!
Date: 03 Mar 2017 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meet the In-Laws
Loved it!
Date: 28 Jan 2017 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 4: Resigned Acceptance
Loved it!
Date: 21 Jan 2017 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 4: Resigned Acceptance
Loved it!
Date: 21 Jan 2017 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 3: Temper Tantrums
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 21 Jan 2017 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 2: Urgent Calls
Loved it!
Date: 21 Jan 2017 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2016 4:08 PM Title: Outtake-3: A Secret Hunt
I love this story it is very sweet, funny and just plain awesome.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2016 2:05 PM Title: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription
Great story, maybe a sequel coming??
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2016 3:58 PM Title: Chapter- 42: New Year, New Beginning
Yeah!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter-37: Sprinkle of Love
Yes Finally!👏
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2016 7:13 PM Title: Chapter-34: Thanks For Fucking With My Life
Bad bad bad parents
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2016 2:26 PM Title: Chapter-33: Halloween Horror Stories
Come on when are they going to say the words and do the deed??
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2016 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 25: Whom Exactly Are You Deceiving?
They need to get on with it!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2016 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 22: Eruption of Bella-vius
YES Finally getting there
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2016 11:41 AM Title: Chapter-21: Back to Square One
These two
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 17: Strike Two
Oh my, communication is needed in this relationship
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2016 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 6: Pixie Inquisition
Fast
Date: 01 Jun 2016 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 17: Strike Two
I'm not sure I'm liking this Bella. She's really short-fused and irrational. Edward is not much better but at least his first instinct is not to attack her. In every instance where he said something out of turn it was directed at someone he didn't think was her. She is a little mean and at times contrary towards him for no reason.
Date: 01 Jun 2016 3:42 AM Title: Chapter-11: It’s Happening!
That was awesome! I was grinning ear to ear during the bridal March.
Date: 01 Jun 2016 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 6: Pixie Inquisition
I was a little skeptical at first but I can see where you're going with this and the story is entertaining so far!
Date: 15 Jan 2016 3:00 AM Title: Outtake-3: A Secret Hunt
Really liked this story. thanks for sharing. :)
Date: 28 Nov 2015 12:56 AM Title: Chapter- 48: My English Boy
I would of thought that he would have his fisrt beer in a pub at the age of 18 as that is the legal age here in England. i'm 53 years old and very rarely hear people say mate. But I am from the north east but I did live in London in the 1970's.
Date: 10 May 2015 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 3: Temper Tantrums
So far so good..
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2015 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life
Nice.. Start..
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2015 12:07 AM Title: Outtake-3: A Secret Hunt
thanks for sharing these o/t with us ;D
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2015 11:37 PM Title: Outtake-1: The Other Side of The Cookie
i LOVED this story ;) thanks so much for sharing it on here with us ;D
Date: 20 Mar 2015 5:15 AM Title: Outtake-2: Just Got Prescribed
I so love them that was so cute makes me swoon lol
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2015 4:24 PM Title: Outtake-3: A Secret Hunt
I love this couple. I will miss them.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2015 9:07 PM Title: Outtake-3: A Secret Hunt
First and foremost You know I think you're truly awesome. You have the magic to bring words to life. It was good reading another chapter even if it was too short (lol) I truly miss reading this story. May I be so bold as to make a suggestion... would you PLEASE! consider writing " TRUST ME LOVE ME" as a LONG! LONG !!! LONG!!!!! (he he he ) chapter story? I honestly think its an awesome story and I believe your followers would also LOVE Reading it. Please just think about it. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 16 Feb 2015 8:46 PM Title: Outtake-3: A Secret Hunt
They are too cute together.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2015 3:00 PM Title: Outtake-3: A Secret Hunt
This outtake was sweet, funny and oh so true. As ever, your writing and imagination are amazing!
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2015 3:04 AM Title: Outtake-3: A Secret Hunt
Love these 2 ; )
Date: 16 Feb 2015 2:12 AM Title: Outtake-3: A Secret Hunt
This is so great! Edward is so sweet! :)
Date: 16 Feb 2015 1:41 AM Title: Outtake-3: A Secret Hunt
I got so excited to see another of these two so cute and he knows all the right things to make her happy witch makes him happy. Thanks so much
Date: 15 Feb 2015 7:34 PM Title: Outtake-3: A Secret Hunt
Happy one year anniversary! !!!!! Loved this. at 1st I thought Edward and Bella weregoing to get kicked out of VS. LOL
Date: 23 Dec 2014 6:45 PM Title: Outtake-2: Just Got Prescribed
This is so fanfriggentastic!! I couldn't stop reading it once I started!! I am really happy about the outtakes! I love when there is always more of the story to read!!! :)
Fantastic story. I will miss these characters!
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2014 4:27 PM Title: Outtake-2: Just Got Prescribed
Loved it. Can't wait for more. I love this couple.
Date: 10 Dec 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter-33: Halloween Horror Stories
omg are they ever going to get there
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2014 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 25: Whom Exactly Are You Deceiving?
hope so
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2014 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 4: Resigned Acceptance
kind of bazaar for modern times
Date: 07 Dec 2014 6:21 PM Title: Outtake-2: Just Got Prescribed
; )
Date: 04 Dec 2014 7:31 PM Title: Outtake-2: Just Got Prescribed
Love this outtake. I have missed your Bella and Edward since finishing this story. I was excited to get this outtake. Thanks.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 2:38 PM Title: Outtake-2: Just Got Prescribed
ewww for victoria Awwww for baby and Daddy's reaction
Date: 24 Nov 2014 8:51 PM Title: Outtake-1: The Other Side of The Cookie
Thank you for giving us Edward's POV on the proposal. I am putting you on notice alert for future outakes. Hope to hear from you. Thanks again for sharing.
Date: 24 Nov 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription
Love love love this story. Thank you for sharing this great story with us. You are really a good writer. I have truly enjoyed reading your story.