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Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 20

I wasn’t even expecting the baby to happen.

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Date: 17 Mar 2021 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 19

I was hoping the tree action would happen!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great depiction of his dad!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 17

Bella & alice are growing apart.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 16

Edward was ready to lock her down so he won’t lose her! And he called her a lovee name!

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Date: 17 Mar 2021 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 15

They need the hotel room badly!

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Date: 17 Mar 2021 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 14

that was perfectly edward!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 13

Love EPOV.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

Kiss kiss kiss!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

Edward’s internal battle is so real. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

So much compassion with taking in kids that have been in foster care or negected for so long.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 9

His honesty was hard to hear but good for him to say.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 8

I know she can’t eat much but Everytime i read she’s eating rice cakes, i want herto put some peanut butter on them. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 7

Those snuggled whispers were the best!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 6

Jake was very good to her.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 5

I’m not ready to start crying.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 4

At least he is thinking more about her.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

she is affecting him.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

He considers himself a nobody bc nobody wants him. That’s very sad.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2021 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not sure why i haven’t read this yet, but it should have more reviews.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2016 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 20

had tears and smiles

Reviewer: Payton79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 20

Found this on an old TBR list a friend shared with me over a year ago and I'm glad I did.
I loved how they got their own little Jacob in the end.
Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Paragod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2015 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 20

I loved it.

 

thanks,

v

Reviewer: bran Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 20

Oh my I needed a box of tissues for this I loved it  

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 20

wow!!!!! such a great story ;) thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 20

That was so cool Jacob came back to them love it  Thanks so much for another great story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 19

As long as it works for them Im happy.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 18

What a way to meet the dad but it turned out good.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2014 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 17

That was c so sweet

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2014 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 16

Everyone can see the love

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 15

They are very serious and in love life is good.  Where is his dad now

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 14

He came to her and did all the right things

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 13

That is good but how is he going to handle that

Reviewer: flightlessbirdje Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 20

*clapping my hands*

Hahaha i loved it

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 20

:-)

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 19

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Reviewer: bommer1and Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 20

too short, but very sweet

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 20

Sniff!  Loved this story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 19

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 18

:-)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 16

Wow! I wasn't expecting that. I was expecting the sex but not the proposal.
:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 16

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2014 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 15

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 12

Love this story!  Cant wait to get Edwards back story. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2014 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 12

great first date.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2014 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 11

Neither one knows how to act or react to one another

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 10

He has a hard time with feelings but he is having them

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 11

Really good

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 10

Really good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 9

He is so sweet and then so sower but she gets him

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 8

Boy, he's got it bad if he's thinking of going to the mall with Alice.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wow Big step in opening up and showing love

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 7

Edward's walls have came down love it

Reviewer: Foreverpeetaslove Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 7

I really love this chapter. I am so glad Edward let his guard down. He really is a sweet and beautiful person. 

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

:)
He's come along way.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 7

loved this

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 7

I want another up date I sooooo want to read more

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 6

:-)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 6

Poor Jake.....

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 6

OMG tear running down my face so sad.  Jacob and Bella understood each other it is so sad to lose a part of yourself.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

Edward if finding it harder to be an ass to her

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 4

Hope you post soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

She's got his interest, whether he is willing to admit it or not

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm still guessing cancer. Renee was pretty cool in regards to Edward.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 4

He needs to know but he is afraid to care

Reviewer: bommer1and Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 3

????????????

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 3

loving this

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

What's w/ Bella? At first I thought anorexia but now maybe cancer. Can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

What is wrong with her??  His parents where happy he was not being to mean to her

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2014 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 2

;-)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 2

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Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2014 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

Really good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 2

So happy you are back.  What is Edwards problem he is trying to hate everyone how long will that last and why.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

I can't wait to find out what is up with Edward

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds like it will be good.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

LOVE this Edward an Bella can't wait to get the next chapter

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