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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 15

continue please!!!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 15

I really hope you'll continue this little gem, because I couldn't stop reading it right from the moment I started!

They really have a great chemistry and I have a feeling Angela is right with her observation, especially after knowing whom stayed the night at Edwards on Friday... AFTER he saw her with Demitri that is:(



Author's Response:

Thanks SO much for leaving feedback!  I really appreciate it.  I'm happy to say that the story is 99% finished over on FFN, minus an epi.  I've been so busy writing that I haven't had time to post the complete story on TWCS yet.  If you'd like to check it out, you can search under my winterhorses author name.  :)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2014 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

This should be interesting, as I doubt she's able to fool him;)

Reviewer: anangel20 Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 15

This has been one of the BEST stories I have read in a while! I love this version of Bella, and this mysterious, moody Edward definitely intrigues me and catches my attention. You have me hooked on every single chapter and I am just relishing each and every page and nearly cried when I had to stop! So please, please keep this story going! There's nothing worse then when a talented author stops a magnificent story, even though their reasons are valid (: haha honestly though please update soon !!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 8 - First Kiss

Wow that was a Hot and intense scene..

Author's Response:

:)  It's the chemistry, lol!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

WOW!!! That was some "first take"!! I think I need a moment, before proceeding to Chapter 4. ;)

You have me totally hooked!!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 2

This story is so good. I love Jerkwards, so your Edward if really pulling me in. I have a feeling there is going to be a good reason for his attitude. Can't wait to get to the filming. If I were Bella, I'd probably throw up all over him, from nerves. ;)

Thanks for another great chapter.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

I like that there hasn't been a lot of banter between the two yet it gives a air of mystery to who an why Edward seems so smug



Author's Response:

Their interaction builds slowly over the course of the story.  :)  He's definitely a mystery.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Author's Response:

Thanks!  :)

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

:-)

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

I've always felt bad for young stars as their coming of age. It seems like they have to go to extremes to brake free from their adolescents to be seen as adults. If I get hooked after these 3 chapters I'll probably hop on over to FFN.

Author's Response:

I agree!  It seems difficult enough to handle it as an adult, but I can't even imagine dealing with that as a child/teen.

I hope you enjoy the story, and thanks for leaving your thoughts!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 3

Love how fast the chapters our being posted



Author's Response:

:)  I'll try to post at least once a day until all my finished chapters are posted.  There will be 31 regular chapters and an epi.  Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

Sweet

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I loved this first chapter. As far as "learning as you go", I think you don't need to learn. You already KNOW!! Your writing is so concise, and so captivating. This was a beautifully written chapter. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I'm looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  This journey in FF--both reading and writing--has been amazing so far.  I can't believe I only now found it.  :)

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hope Edward is a jerk



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  Your wish is my command.  ;)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

I AM ONE OF THOSE READERS WHO ENJOY A FAST PACE AND TO THE POINT STORY BUT I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE. SO YOUR OFF TO A GOOD START SO FAR. READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

I'd almost suggest this is more like a mystery or suspense story--what is Edward's problem and why is he like this?  There are a lot of layers and "clues," and I sorta hope that once someone finishes the story, she wants to go back and read it again after learning about his past.  :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!  

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