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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 5

intriging beginning ;) lots of questions with no answers yet ;) btw bella was called ms swan instead of cullen in chapters 3&4 :) are you going to do a bpov? are the cullens vampires? and if so are they going to be sm canon? i hope you can come back soon with more on this story ;D

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 5

This story is interesting. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2015 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

The box on his doorstep is not a good thing and I hope Mike can find out who is stalking Edward and Bella. It bothers me a lot that he keeps feeling someone watching him! Alice showing up at the park was weird, too, especially her rambling. Edward thinks she is a little off anyway and that sort of confirmed it for him! Frankly, I hope Bella and Edward do a bit more than discuss work!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2015 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 5


Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 4

Okay more crime scenes and she is obviously the one iwth Red Eyes. Hmm playing games with old Doc Masen. LOL bad girl.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2015 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 3

It is a super great beginning and I love it. I am a NCIS, CSI, Roselli and Niles, Murder in the First.. etc avid watcher..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2015 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

interesting. So the Cullen family plus Bella are a vampire investigative team..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love crime mysteries.. good start

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm really wondering why she appears at the foot os the bed, gets him all worked up and then vanishes! It sure is frustrating the good doctor! Carmen and Eleazar sound like they really care for him, and her cooking probably keeps him going. If only there was something to be done about his poor crippled leg!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 4


Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2015 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 3

Completely lovin this!!!

Reviewer: zanath Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2015 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

Great start of this story.  I loved Crossing Jordan and all of the others you mentioned.  I once took a special test that would give you three occupations you would probably like to be in based on how your answers to questions matched up to answers from people who wer happy in their jobs.  The three I was told to investigate was architect, forest ranger and crime scean investigator.  I guess I hqave a natural bend for CIS stuff.  HA HA but I chose architect to follow.  Thanks for your hard work  0 Xanath

Reviewer: k1942 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2015 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 3

Even if he had two good legs, it wouldn't do Dr. Masen any good to try to run! Those red eyes are a dead give away, there's a vampire in that cave! Most likely the one who's been doing all the damage around Chicago. I hope Bella saves Edward before he's bitten; or maybe not! If he was turned, his leg would probably be healed in the transformation, end of nerve pain! I'm going to make a wild guess that wasn't an hallucination last night, and Bella really was at the foot of his bed, because she's as drawn to him as he is to her!

Reviewer: RoseE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

Your story is so riveting! I've always liked Twi writers who base their canon characters on skilled investigative workers. It seems a very difficult genre to write.

Suspense, mystery, "crime", UST - your story has it all! And it's so compelling. I can't wait to see where you take them. 

 I'm really looking forward to your update! Thank you😊 ~RoseE. x

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh sure the Cullens are a special unit, Edward just doesn't yet know how very special thay all are!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really like this start, since I'm a big fan of CSI and Crininal Minds! It's different to have Edward suffering a handicap of any kind, too, plus being friends with Mike.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 2

I am really liking your story.  I like the roll reversal with B & E.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 2

loving the story

a whole new cast of characters brought in and i am excited

loving it

thank you

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

love the story

i am hooked and look forward to more

love CSI and criminal minds

thank you for writing

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