Date: 08 Jun 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
intriging beginning ;) lots of questions with no answers yet ;) btw bella was called ms swan instead of cullen in chapters 3&4 :) are you going to do a bpov? are the cullens vampires? and if so are they going to be sm canon? i hope you can come back soon with more on this story ;D
Date: 20 Dec 2015 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
The box on his doorstep is not a good thing and I hope Mike can find out who is stalking Edward and Bella. It bothers me a lot that he keeps feeling someone watching him! Alice showing up at the park was weird, too, especially her rambling. Edward thinks she is a little off anyway and that sort of confirmed it for him! Frankly, I hope Bella and Edward do a bit more than discuss work!
Date: 19 Jul 2015 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm really wondering why she appears at the foot os the bed, gets him all worked up and then vanishes! It sure is frustrating the good doctor! Carmen and Eleazar sound like they really care for him, and her cooking probably keeps him going. If only there was something to be done about his poor crippled leg!
Date: 16 Mar 2015 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great start of this story. I loved Crossing Jordan and all of the others you mentioned. I once took a special test that would give you three occupations you would probably like to be in based on how your answers to questions matched up to answers from people who wer happy in their jobs. The three I was told to investigate was architect, forest ranger and crime scean investigator. I guess I hqave a natural bend for CIS stuff. HA HA but I chose architect to follow. Thanks for your hard work 0 Xanath
Date: 16 Mar 2015 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
Even if he had two good legs, it wouldn't do Dr. Masen any good to try to run! Those red eyes are a dead give away, there's a vampire in that cave! Most likely the one who's been doing all the damage around Chicago. I hope Bella saves Edward before he's bitten; or maybe not! If he was turned, his leg would probably be healed in the transformation, end of nerve pain! I'm going to make a wild guess that wasn't an hallucination last night, and Bella really was at the foot of his bed, because she's as drawn to him as he is to her!
Date: 16 Nov 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
Your story is so riveting! I've always liked Twi writers who base their canon characters on skilled investigative workers. It seems a very difficult genre to write.
Suspense, mystery, "crime", UST - your story has it all! And it's so compelling. I can't wait to see where you take them.
I'm really looking forward to your update! Thank you😊 ~RoseE. x