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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2015 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 20

AWESOME story!!! ;) i loved that everyone was still alive and they will have 3 kids ;) thanks for sharing this on here and i hope you can come back with some o/t, f/t ;D 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 20

it was wonderful



Author's Response:

Thanks for you wonderful reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 19

BRAVO

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 17

AWESOME

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 16

I<3 THIS STORY

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2015 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 4

a little slow at this point but I am intrigued

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2015 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

interesting

Reviewer: greeneyes84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2015 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 20

OMG! Thanks so much for all your kind words, support and love. I really did not think this story would get this much love when I first posted it. I wanna say thanks to all those who read, followed and kept up with me even though I didn't post as often as I wanted to. You all rock!

Thanks again for reading as for those follwoing Blood Trails, it's with a beta and chapter 3 is gonna be posted this weekend.

 

Lots of love

 

Greeneyes84

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2015 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 20

Happy that Edward and Bella had a family. If I were Bella I would have destroyed Aro and been done with him. I am sad that this story is ending. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I will miss reading about your characters.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2015 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 20

Sweet end.  TY fro writing and sharing

ty

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2015 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 20

I really look forward to Blood Trails, but am sorry to come to the end of this! It was such fun and so different for Bella to be a witch! I also loved the Cullen version of family planning! I suppose when you have eternity, you can really space those pregnancies out! I will say once more how much I enjoyed this story, from the intriguing title right on down the line!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2015 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 20

:) loved this story

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2015 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 20

that was a great story thank for writing it

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 20

Loved It!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 19

Perfect wedding.  Loved what Aunt Dora did to Lauren and Jessica. Lol.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 19

god i love it  great ch

Reviewer: zanath Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2015 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 19

I loved it thankd - xanath

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2015 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 19

:) :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2015 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 19

This was great! They had a wonderful wedding and a fabulous place to honeymoon. What could be better? See you with the epilogue!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2015 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wonderful wedding.  Love the irish additions.

Reviewer: sassy973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 18

loved it update soon

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 18

That was a lot of fun! Bella sure left Sorin and his pack better off than when they started! Her powers just continue to grow and evolve! As her aunt and mom said, she will be quite the queen of witches, and Edward a worthy consort!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 18

OMGosh,  I loved Bella come into her half hour more and more. Love how she handled the wolves.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2014 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 18

Go bad ass Bella!!!! 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 18

can't wait to see what you write next

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMGosh!!!!!!!! Loved it!!!!!! Who are these 3 men????? Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter! It was a surprise that Eleazar is a protector of Danu, but it pretty much makes sense. Poor Irina, I kind of felt sorry for her, but Bella really didn't hurt her and did show her the happy future in store for her and her sisters! No need to have a confrontation with Tanya since she wasn't the one with issues!I'm going to hate to see this story end, but am looking forward to the continuation of Blood Trails!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 17

Meh  Tanya could still try something.   Hope Irina realizes whats up and knocks it off. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 17

:)

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 17

let me guess it peter and gertte and alistair for the guys love this story

Reviewer: detsinbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 17

Your right i throught It would be Tanya but it worked just  right.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 16

Ugh  Lauren always was a hateful skank.   So glad Angela is her friend though.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 16

can't wait to see what she does to tonya keep up the great job

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 16

Can't wait to see what happens with the Denalis. I have a feeling that Bella is going to have some fun with Tanya. 

Reviewer: Chiisuture Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 16

i really liked this chapter. i love the relationship bella and angela have as friends. can't wait to see what will hapen with the denali clan

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved the whole thing! Too bad Bella restrained herself, I would have enjoyed seeing something slightly injurious happen to Lauren and Jessica! I look forward eagerly to Bella meeting the Denali family! See you soon, I hope!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 16

:)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

So excited to get this update.  I am glad that you did not kill Charlie off. Hope you can update again really soon.  

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2014 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 15

Bon chapitre, je suis très satisfait que Charlie a été sauvé!

Merci.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2014 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 15

Good for you! I couldn't kill off Charlie either so I'm thrilled there was magic to save him, and destroy Victoria! Bella sending fire inside her was really neat! Face it, it was no more than what that evil bitch deserved! I loved this chapter, as always when the good guys win!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 15

sneaky sneaky with the Charlie switcharoo.    Buh Bye Tricky Vicky

Reviewer: detsinbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 15

great

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 14

Love the story and I would love to see Bella hand Victoria her ass

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 14

ack  What a cliffy!   SHould have known the biatch would go after Charlie.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

I sure wish Bella hadn't been unable to zap Victoria and save her dad!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 14

OMGosh!  I can not believe that she did not do anything.  She could have just zapped her. Can't wait for your next update. 

Reviewer: greeneyes84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

I wanna thank everyone for their kind reviews. All of you rock so much and you have no idea what it means to have so many people who like this.

 

Greeneyes84

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 13

I love, love, love your story so far ;-)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved the proposal and the celebration of it, so sweet and sexy! I look forward to learning how Leah became a white wolf!(sounds pretty) This chapter came in my email today, #13, plus 14, 15, and 16! Only one small problem, TWCS hasn't posted them to your story! I hope to see the other three chapters soon!



Author's Response:

Sorry about that. There was a glitch in the system and I posted like 3 extra chapters which were blank. They will be posted soon, chapter 14 is halfway done. Thanks for the reviews.

 

Greeneyes84

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

Woo hoo for proposal, and yummy lemon time, and Leah!!!

dl

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 13

So excited to get this update.  AWESOME! !!!!! Loved it!!!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 12

Love her taking out rose.   Glad jake will have Leah to distract him.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 11

lol  the Renee and Phil thing has me picturing Bewitched in my head (ack I'm dating myself).   

ROFL for Charlie trying to shoot E.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 10

awwww B and A are cousins!!!.     LOVED B handing E his arse.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 9

LOVE it.   I kinda figured that Dora would show up.   hee hee for jane getting a measure of his own medicine.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 8

Kinda always thought it was stupid that Charlie wouldn't know with growing up there and all.

Doofus with the water thing

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

OMG  LOVED LOVED LOVED her handing Paul his arse. 

Our Girl when she's mad:

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 6

wow  she's going back already?   she's just started learning?  Ah well.  Hopefully she'll be able to pop soon.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

Go Bad Ass Bella.   Love that she can protect herself now.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

lol for the little girl being Adrian's. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wish I had an old Irish Aunt come whisk me away.  Bet B's gonna have words for Renee and Charlie when she sees them again.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

ooooh this is getting goooood.   Renee can teleport?   hmmmm  Does Renee know what the cullens are and never said anything?   Surprised the werewolf comment didn't make her think of Snakey Jakey ( I'm not a Jake fan can you tell?)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start.  She should have slapped Newton.   Never liked Fig Newton

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 12

I was so excited to get this update. LOVE this story. I busted out laughing when Bella sent fire balls around Rose. Lol. Can't wait for the next update. Glad Jacob is off their back. Loved that.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 12

I too liked Bella putting Rose in her place, about time for payback for all the snippiness! I think everyone was pleased about Alice being Bella's cousin, and that Bella was a witch and future queen! That was a slick way to get Jacob out of Bella and Edward's hair and also nice for Leah to find her someone! Now, on to taking out Victoria! Plus, of course, letting Alice plan the wedding!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 11

Lol I love that Charlie shot his gum at Edward.  Don't get me wrong,  I like Edward and glad he is back with Bella but Charlie shoring at him was funny.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

I have said it before but I love your twist on this story.  I LOVE  that Alice and Bella are family.  I was a little worried that maybe Edward and Bella were going to be some type of kin since Bella's great...Grandmother's name was Elizabeth and Edward's mother's name was also Elizabeth.  Lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 9

Awesome job with this chapter.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love how you are adding your own twist. Great job.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 11

This chapter has already been posted as chapter ten, so there must have been a gremlin in the internet, I guess! Sure looking forward to your next real chapter eleven!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wow, I can't believe Charlie tried to shoot Edward! Then Renee shows up and tells Charlie that Bella needs to be free to take care of a dangerous problem. I get a kick out of Alice thinking Bella's powers are so cool!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 9

Well, well, well! What must Edward and Alice be thinking now? I dearly loved Bella taking on  all the Volturi and when Pandora showed up just in time to set things right!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 8

It really is kind of nice that Charlie knows as much as he does, but I, like Bella, wonder if he is aware of what Edward and the Cullen's are? I had to smile when Bella decided to go cliff- jumping, she just can't resist !

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 7

Nice move there with Bella suspending Paul in midair!  I think the wolves were impressed, too! Now that Jake knows what she is, they can keep each other's secrets!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 6

Too bad Bella didn't have nerve enough to look for Edward in the fountain! The scene with Laurent was really cool, she more than held her own, until the wolf pack showed up! Wonder why Charlie needs her all of a sudden, so she gets sent back home?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 5

Maybe now she knows she has a bit of magic , Bella will feel better about herself! I thought it was cool as hell that she saved Bailey from harm, using that electricity  quite well I thought!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 4

Just as Dora said, Bella doesn't see herself clearly. I have always kind of wondered how her self-esteem got squished  like that? I hope Dora knows that everything will turn oyt okay, especially between Bella and a certain golden-eyed vampire!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

I'm liking Aunt Dora a whole lot, especially since she has Bella in Ireland! I've always wanted to do there, to see where my dad's people were from! Of course, for Bella, it's a lot better because her family seem to all be magical!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 2

If Bella comes from a long line of witches, it makes perfect sense that she fell in love with a vampire! How Charlie and Renee kept this from their daughter is a wonder!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Pentagram hanging from the rearview mirror? Who is Aunt Dora, and what are she and Charlie arguing about?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 7

Love how you are including the book but also changing it and making it your own. Loved that Bella stopped Paul in mid air and then when she put him down she told him to stay. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 6

I am so glad that I found this story.  I am loving all the magic.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 5

Bella's got powers!!!!!!!!!!! Loving this story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am loving this story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow, Bella sure has a lot to take in. I sure she really believes that she is going crazy. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 2

Boy Bella has always been around the super natural.  Heck she is super natural.  Lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Who is Aunt Dora??

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 9

OMG

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 4

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 3

blown away

so much for bella to come to grips with

she is from some pwerful women

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 2

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

i almost gave up on this story but i continued to read and i am hooked

i am so looking forward to more

keep writing

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 9

This is so cool, I'm starting to think I'm psychic! Ha! Okay next chapter...*presses fingers to temples in deep thought*...I get sent a check for a million dollars!

I hope Bella gets to be the one to off Victoria. And, if the witches are basically immortal, then she wouldn't need to be turned, right?

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 8

Ha, I spoke too soon about the accent! I bet she is Elizabeth!

I hope she gets carted before the Volturi for not being allowed to know about vampires, then schools them all with her awesome witch powers.

So did the Laurent thing really happen? It was hard to tell if her being there was a hallucination through the tapestry or not, even though Jake pointed out that the pack did actually kill him.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 6

It's weird that Bella us suddenly speaking in an Irish accent...is she supposed to be a reincarnation of the great grandmother, and it's starting to bleed through? Otherwise it would be crazy to pick up an accent that fast.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 4

This story is fun! Don't worry so much about the accent...people can hear it in their head, once they get into the story and know the background of the characters.

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

Love it.  Read number 10 on fanfiction.  This is one kick ass story,  Especially how the Volturi bowed to Pandora.  Love this and I need more.

Jukie

Reviewer: Lovestwilite Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

This story is precious.  Can't wait for updates.

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