[Report This]Date: 22 May 2022 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
I liked his description of what he loves about a woman's body.
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2022 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
I liked his description of what he loves about a woman's body.
Date: 04 May 2020 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
I switched to here since u mentioned it had more juicy stuff and it was worth it..
loved this chapter
Date: 30 Jan 2020 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 38
It's their baby!!! She's pregnant!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2020 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 40
I really love this story. It's my go to the story when I can't find anything new to read. Thank you for sharing your work
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2019 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 40
Second time reading and I loved it just as much. A strong confident Bella but still vulnerable. Acocky leading Edward but still able to take aback seat to her. Not to mention everyone else.
Date: 08 Jun 2019 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 40
Second time reading and I loved it just as much. A strong confident Bella but still vulnerable. Acocky leading Edward but still able to take aback seat to her. Not to mention everyone else.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2019 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 40
I love your work. This story is amazing. It's my go to story when there is nothing new to read. Thank you for sharing your gift
Date: 19 Feb 2019 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 29
Wow amazing story
Date: 19 Feb 2019 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 29
Wow amazing story
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2018 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 40
Lol. I love the story
Date: 15 Oct 2018 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 40
Very cute story. Loved reading it.
Date: 15 Oct 2018 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 40
Very cute story. Loved reading it.
Date: 30 Jul 2018 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it! Bella is amazing!
Date: 29 Jul 2018 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Bella is a badass!
Date: 31 May 2018 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 40
Omg this was a awesome ride what want there to love. Your Bella as kick ass but vulnerable in a realistic way for me. She could be cold as ice but still feel overwhelmed and scared and so forth. Lots of depth there with her. Then your Edward the perfect temperament to balance her out. Loved all the nicknames it was super cute. Overall super enjoyable read I was sad to see end.
Date: 31 May 2018 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 40
Omg this was a awesome ride what want there to love. Your Bella as kick ass but vulnerable in a realistic way for me. She could be cold as ice but still feel overwhelmed and scared and so forth. Lots of depth there with her. Then your Edward the perfect temperament to balance her out. Loved all the nicknames it was super cute. Overall super enjoyable read I was sad to see end.
Date: 08 Dec 2017 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 40
Thank you ladies I always enjoy revisiting this story. ;-)
Date: 10 Jul 2017 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 40
This was an amazing story!!! I loved it so much and didn't want it to end. I can see this being one of my go to stories when I'm waiting for updates on my other stories. I read it straight through and got very little accomplished over the weekend. I didn't don much other than read all weekend!!! Such an awesome story!
Sincerely,
Virginia
Date: 13 Jun 2017 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 40
Great story! Thoroughly enjoyed it! Looking forward to catching up on more of your stuff!
Date: 13 Jun 2017 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 40
Great story! Thoroughly enjoyed it! Looking forward to catching up on more of your stuff!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2017 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 40
Lol love it
Date: 10 Jun 2017 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great story so far. Quick question...did I miss the Albatross explanation? So confused...
Date: 10 Jun 2017 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great story so far. Quick question...did I miss the Albatross explanation? So confused...
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2017 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 13
For him to keep saying that she's too young, he sure is hitting on her.
Date: 06 Jun 2017 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 40
Did I tell you how much I loved this story? But 8 kids? Holy hell....great job, ladies...I will really miss these two, and Chaos as well!
Date: 06 Jun 2017 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 40
Did I tell you how much I loved this story? But 8 kids? Holy hell....great job, ladies...I will really miss these two, and Chaos as well!
Date: 04 Jun 2017 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 39
I don't understand why Tanya had to make an apperance in the story.
Date: 12 Apr 2017 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 40
Loved it.
Wow, 7 and one on the way. Wow.
Please let Bella deal with sasha.
She is so stupid.
Love Tanya.
Thank you for sharing.
Date: 12 Apr 2017 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 39
Loved Tanya. Wondered what she was playing at at first, but it all became clear.
Can someone put a bullet in sasha. Please.
Will she ever learn.
Love the day the babies were born.
Date: 12 Apr 2017 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 38
Pregnant.
Damn that chaos is good.
Love that wedding. Sasha won't ever learn. Bella's gonna take her out one-day. Haha.
Date: 11 Apr 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 37
Yay.
So happy for them.
As if she would walk away.
Puft.
Renee just knew see.
Date: 11 Apr 2017 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 36
Yay.
God the volturi were just as dense as the blacks.
Never underestimateba woman. Esp Bella. Lol
Date: 11 Apr 2017 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 35
Badass Bella is scary.
That was some revelation she had to deal with, but Edward was there for her. She was once worried he would run when he found out. Yeah he did, but to her. He's proving everyday how much he loves her.
She has a fab man there.
They will always make a great team.
Date: 11 Apr 2017 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 34
Oh!
Yeah. He really underestimates Bella's abilities.
Now she knows she'll leave no stone unturned.
Just like Jake underestimated Edward. Haha.
Date: 11 Apr 2017 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wow.
Didn't see that one coming.
These people are going to be going down in spectacular form.
Don't mess with the Masens and Bella.
Date: 11 Apr 2017 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 32
Uh oh.
Is it about daddy?
I'm hoping it's not about Edward and his family.
She is a wizz kid with computers.
Billy wasnt happy to find out about Bella and Edward.
Date: 11 Apr 2017 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 32
Uh oh.
Is it about daddy?
I'm hoping it's not about Edward and his family.
She is a wizz kid with computers.
Billy wasnt happy to find out about Bella and Edward.
Date: 11 Apr 2017 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 31
Sasha needs to sod off.
I think she's still jealous of Bella regardless of the fact she saved her worthless life.
Edward needs to tell her to shut up.
Love how the men underestimated her. Haha.
Date: 11 Apr 2017 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 30
Love Edward.
He is just so sweet.
Them kids. My heart melts for them.
Everyone is stepping up for Bella.
Now they know why they want her
Date: 11 Apr 2017 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 29
Wow.
Loved it.
I've put Peter in the same category as Jasper. He needs shooting. Lol.
If Aro is good with it then Peter needs to be good with it. And as Edward said he's now head of the family. So back the fuck off.
Yeah I don't like people who try and get between Edward and Bella
Date: 11 Apr 2017 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 28
Bella will come in very handy with family.
So that would explain why Jacob was set on having Bella and why he thought he could Lord it over Edward.
Now they are together I guess it's hard for Edward to accept that Bella is just as good if not better than he is.
But she needs her answers
Date: 11 Apr 2017 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 27
Wow.
That was some list.
So who's the white haired man that eleazar met? Who he thought was dora.
So now we know who penny was that Edward was stroking himself himself too that fateful night sasha tried to jump him.
No wonder Bella is such a great fighter.
Poor Bella she really thought Edward was going to leave her.
Date: 11 Apr 2017 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow.
That was some chapter.
Yeah she can handle herself alright. She made sure the kids were safe before anything else. That surely has to make Edward love her more.
Eleazar described dora as this guy. Is dora working both families or was eleazar lied too. He has a connection to remy after all
Date: 11 Apr 2017 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 25
She's going to have to tell him now.
Too many people know her real identity.
Edward will love her regardless.
Hmmm, so Edward knows or has already met miss honey and Guido.
I think the cabin is that connection.
I'm really not liking Jasper right now.
Date: 11 Apr 2017 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
I think Anna may know Bella as remy?
She was quick to usher Esme out of the room for a chat.
Stark needs to listen to his little albertross more often.
Sasha isn't going to take that lying down.
But she is messing with the wrong people.
I get a feeling that as Jasper is good with the searching that that maybe also runs in the family and that Peter may be dora.
Date: 11 Apr 2017 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 23
I was holding my breath in that.
He's going to have a tough time breaking down the rest of Bella's walls.
But she can't stay strong fiercer.
Sasha is an idiot.
Glad Bella wanted to watch.
Date: 11 Apr 2017 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 22
It was Bella that had got him so worked up and he was already said he was about to embarrass himself. It's just a shame it was the skank that finished him. See I said he should have told Bella before.
She promised not to run and did the opposite.
Could chaos be a guard, or some electronic thing she was on about that she built?
Date: 11 Apr 2017 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 21
He really needs to warn Bella about sasha too.
I really don't like Jacob.
He is a jerk. He is really stupid if he don't know who Edward is. God he thinks he's gods gift and people own him. Well he has pissed off the wrong person.
Jasper needs to be shot to be taught a lesson.
Ans maybe Bella needs to come clean now.
Gee his mean gossip like woman.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
That's what miss honey and Guido said Edward would protect her.
Maybe Bella needs to tell Edward. His mum knows, she needs to start trusting people.
Edward has it bad for sure.
But he's also trying to protect Bella too
That's fab.
I can understand Jasper but he needs to start trusting his boss.
Even Aro said when we met him you should go with your gut.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love leaning more and more about Bella.
She guards herself so much.
I guess I can see why.
But maybe she should let Edward in.
Loved Cullen and his cooties. Haha.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
I think Jacobs family placed the hit maybe?
That they blamed Aro to take them out?
Jacobs team can't be that good if they don't know who Edward really is. I mean come on even Bella knows.
So Jessica or Jane was planted.
Mike's trying to take Edward down, but for who, the police or someone else?
Date: 10 Apr 2017 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm not trusting Mike.
He's sleezy.
Edward has it bad.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
Aros friend is gonna do some digging. Will they find what Jasper couldn't?
Bella is admitting some things. It's a start.
Mike is a douche.
Loving Bella's nick names for everyone.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
Well it was hinted that Bella would be looked after. So she's not some snitch trying to bring Edward down. But she is also worried she'll bring hurt and pain his way so obviously something to do with the past she said she couldn't face before.
Mike is a really Ass, so marmaduke isn't him. Lol
These two are going it be epic once it all comes out and settles.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow that was a chapter.
Jessica or whoever she is working for is gonna be on the warpath. Esp now she's messed up.
Are they going to end up hurting each other in the long run?
Date: 10 Apr 2017 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
She's already in too deep.
But she's always on the look out for them kids.
I think it was Jessica who was in Edwards office.
Hell is about to be paid with her.
How did she get through the checks.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Donkey. Hahaha, love it.
She's gonna have to tell him.
It's gonna get bad before it gets good.
Donkey really needs to go
I'm intrigued to see what Bella may find on her.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm guessing marmaduke is Jacob. Lol
Isn't it also the name of a dog. Lol
Or could be Mike.
So she says it could blow her cover.
That's not good.
I'm trying not to think the worst cause this is Bella and Edward were taking about and it has to work out. Lol.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love the chemistry these two have. It's funny to watch.
But it could get messy.
The kids love her though.