Date: 24 Mar 2017 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue
Loved it!
Date: 06 Dec 2016 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue
Yes, I'm on facebook! I don't think my settings will allow you to search me out though. How can I find you?
Author's Response:
Good! Just look for Dinia Steel Fan Fiction or my personal wall Dinia Steel. Be sure and tell me who you are if you use a different name on Facebook.
Looking forward to see you on Facebook too!
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Dinia
Date: 05 Dec 2016 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 25 Outtake - Another Cullen Wedding
Yay!
Author's Response:
Thank you! If you'd like a pdf that contains picture, please go to my Facebook group, Dinia Steel Fan Fiction, and go into the files and click on heading My FBI Guy.
Thank you again, for your support!
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Dinia
Date: 05 Dec 2016 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it! Emmett is great!
Author's Response:
Again, thank you so much for your support!
Hope to hear more from you in the future!
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Dinia
Date: 05 Dec 2016 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
Liking it so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you! As I think I told you about the first one, I had a great deal of fun writing them! I'm so happy that you like them also.
Looking forward to "more" from you.
Are you on Facebook by any chance?
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Dinia
Date: 04 Aug 2016 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 25 Outtake - Another Cullen Wedding
How do you just keep outdoing yourself? Another awesome story with people I want to live and work with. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Again thank you. I just love this stuff.
I think I would like to get to know you Darlin'.
Did you read my profile? I'm no spring chicken.
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Dinia
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 24
Their world is getting brighter, Though no doubt shadows will cross their paths. Love the world, the people who live in it, and the way you write their adventures.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Are you mostly a Harry Potter fan?
Do you belong to Facebook? I have a group called Dinia Steel Fan Fiction where I've got all of my completed fics in pdfs in the "files" ready to be down loaded.
Thank you soooooooooooooooo much for your wonderful reviews!
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Dinia
Date: 03 Aug 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
Very definitely my kind of world. There's also no doubt in my mind that Gloria Swanson could talk to Bella, Edward, or any of them if she so wished.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I love to get these types of reviews! Thanks again.
Hope to hear more from you.
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Dinia
Date: 03 Aug 2016 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 13
Such real and normal people. Could easily live in this world.
Date: 03 Aug 2016 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
Who, or what, did they catch? Enjoying this adventure very much.
Date: 03 Aug 2016 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
Having just as much fun with this story. Really like your writing style.
Date: 24 Mar 2016 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 25 Outtake - Another Cullen Wedding
Another wonderful story! Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I've started a third part of the characters in my The Down On The Bayou Detective Agency - Case Files that I hope you'll give a try. It's pretty much pre-written so there's no chance that I'll not finish it as happens so often with FF writers.
Please let me hear from you again.
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Dinia
Date: 22 Nov 2015 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
If the swap is effected, eventually the water would too, and so would the group, I would think. A fairy made them think the cat was talking to them, lol
Author's Response:
Yes, in reality you are correct. However, this is fiction and I have license! *grinning*
Yes the Queen of Fairies of the Swamp Basin.
So Happy you're enjoying this!
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Dinia
Date: 22 Nov 2015 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
I had a feeling the gypsies would take care of it. From what I remember they handled those that broke laws within their own group. So Edward is staying, hell yeah!
Date: 22 Nov 2015 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 12
Whoa, all those people and most were unaware, nice.
Date: 22 Nov 2015 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
Some gypsies are coming to the party? The family is pretty much all together. Let's see what's in store for the group
Date: 22 Nov 2015 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 9
Does Edward remember any past lives? What a great reading. Now who is this Maria and what's her reasoning for killing children? Onto the next chapter!
Date: 22 Nov 2015 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
Heading down to where the gypsies are camped isn't the best of ideas. You'd have to be prepared. My grandmother always warned us about a group that lived nearby.
Date: 22 Nov 2015 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
Don't worry about responding, I'll just keep reading. Angela's OBE was interesting, I wonder what that group was.
Date: 22 Nov 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward has a sister named Alice. Bella's best friend in college was named Alice, but was murdered. Wonder if this Alice and Bella will be friends. About three weeks and no leads, something tells me this is the calm before the storm
Author's Response:
I love that your enjoying this so much. Thank you. I truly appreciate your taking the time to review as you read. I hope you don't mind if I don't respond to each.
I love it.
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Carol
Date: 21 Nov 2015 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
The version of la llorona that I heard was close to the prologue. She had two children, and her husband was abusive, and realizing his intension to kill them, flees and when she figures out there's nowhere to go, she jumps into the river, only to lose her hold on them. Her spirit haunts any body of water singing her haunting song to lure children to her, in search of her own babies.
Onto the next chapter, happy claps.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
I had a feeling that something would change between Edward and Bella if given a chance. It probably helped that Edward witnessed her falingt and hitting her head. Now why would a Dryad become involved with humans. I wonder if it has anything to with the area, that they need Bella's help to protect it. Can't wait to see
Date: 21 Nov 2015 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
That was an interesting development. Poor Rosalie having to witness such a thing. I wouldn't sleep for weeks after seeing something like that.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind word on my story. I have appologize to you about not getting back to you right away, but I only just saw your reiview, as I didn't get a notice that I had one.
Please forgive me.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 21 Nov 2015 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue
That is a considerable number of children, surprised the feds hadn't come knocking yet. Yay, can't wait to see how this case is resolved.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2015 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 25 Outtake - Another Cullen Wedding
excellent sequel ;) i hope you come back to do a part 3 of this with the kids ;D
Author's Response:
Thank you. I had a great deal of fun writing those two. If and when the characters decide to come back into the building I will try to get a third story about the group.
Thannk you again,and I hope you'll give some of my other stories.
If you do Facebook, look me up as Dinia Steel.
Hope to hear from you soon.
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Dinia
Date: 22 Jul 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
alice??? i thought edward only had a brother emmett???
Author's Response:
Sorry I didn't get back to you soon, I just wanted to make sure I was remembering correctly. In the first few paragraph of Edward Cullen, FBI it's mentioned that Edward had a brother and a baby sister.
Looking forward to what you choose to read next!
Hard Hugs
Dinia
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 25 Outtake - Another Cullen Wedding
Great outtake! Bella giving birth to twins on Emmett's wedding day. Haha!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I've been considering doing a story about the twins and calling it "Up on the Levee". I have so many different ideas for stories. It's hard to get a large readership unless it over flows with sex, which just isn't my "style".
See you next time, and once again, thank you for reading and reviewing.
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Dinia/Carol
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for such a fun journey!
I will add this to my favorites so any new thoughts you want to share will be readily available to read.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your entertaining comments. I hope you understand that I've not been able to answer them all, but that doesn't mean I didn't appreciate and read each and everyone of them. It's been close to two years since I finished my FBI Guy stories. I'm considering doing more using these characters.
I'm wondering if you're on Facebook? I'd like to get to know you better. I loved your sense of humor and to be honest you "got" what I was writing. I go by the same name on FB, just friend me and tell me who you are. My memory isn't what it was when I wore a younger woman's cloths, so I need "prompts" a lot. You see, I'll be 73 in August. :D
Thank you again for your reading and reviewing each and every chapter. You are one of my Rocks, and in life we need as strong a foundation we can get for projects we do. :D
See you next story. I look forward to what you have to say about them.
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Dinia aka Carol O'
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 23
Emmett has a lot of catching up to do if he wants to hang with this tough crowd.
I've enjoyed the adventures of Edward Cullen and his band of psychic friends!
I look forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow, that is the funniest image you have planted in my head! Emmett once again dumbfounded by a fairy. One that believes he, a human, could become her consort-husband. Haha
I'm wondering if Lauren will have a say in this matter? ;)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 21
Edward rushed his plan of making Bella's his wife. He needed to ensure his words and actions reflect his heart and soul. He needed to say I love you in a private setting. Argh, Edward you jumped the gun!
I hope Bella doesn't take too long to say yes.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
It's not very often that Emmett is rendered speechless! Haha
Date: 24 Jun 2015 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
How adorable was it for Emmett to come back for more time with Lauren!
Besides, the group sounds like it could use another set of hands.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
The timing is finally right for both Edward and Bella to seek comfort in each other. Shutting out any distractions the world and family brings with them.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm surprised the Cullens are still hanging around.
Will Jasper ever make an appearance?
Emmett and Lauren, a different sort of pairing.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
There have always been laws in place to keep balance. Even if we think modern ways are best, sometimes the old ways render better results.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is finally getting the life she has dreamed of with a supportive family and friends.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
I've had a flashback to Fern Gully! Haha
Author's Response:
I understand that, though I did my research when it comes to the "weird and wodnerful" and not on line. You should see my library. :)
Thanks for enjoying this. I know I had fun writing it.
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Dinia
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 13
I guess I'm no different than Emmett. I wanted a more solid form of closure. Something my eye and ears could grasp on to telling me it is finished.
No one knows how the demon was disposed of or where it is now.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
Interesting that the Gypsies left at the same time?
So Emmett was in on the plan.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
I wonder if Emmett will meet Rosalie Hale at Sam's birthday bash?
How is Lauren coping with all the additional people on the boat? Is it messing with her ability to see the future?
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
I want Lauren to find happiness with someone special. She can't remain attached to her sister and brother-in-law indefinitely
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
Yeah, team Steel! Another fun chapter.
I wonder if Lucy got the same reading that Lauren has been seeing regarding E&B's future?
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2015 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is trying out his mind reading on the cat, hilarious.
Angela must be able to recognize the face of her astral projection attacker.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2015 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
Who saw and was able to touch Angela?
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2015 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
Is Bella aware of Edward's family members other than Emmett? I thought for sure she would ask about Alice.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2015 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
What did the confirmation of the Dryad's words do for the group?
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
I have read the Jason and Modea tragedy, but not the Spanish version.
Similar folklore in all cultures.
I wonder what will break this case open and who figures out the connection of love lost between parents and the children are pawns in the game.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Once again Isabella Swan finds herself surrounded by a supernatural force she can't explain!
But the reward is Edward Cullen! Not too shabby!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
A tree spirit, hmmm......
Bella's very own guardian?
Has Lauren been visited by Phoebe before?
What is Miss Hales real story? Was she seeing an apparition due to some connection with children?
Author's Response:
Please forgive me for not answering this sooner, but I just saw it tonight. I didn't get a notification I had one!
Thank you so much for your questions and comments, but I'm sure by now they've been answered if you've continued read.
I really appreciate your attention and your support.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue
This should be an interesting case for Edward.
Of the five he is the only one having had a son.
Date: 05 May 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 25 Outtake - Another Cullen Wedding
I loved following this wonderful group on their journey!! I hope that you do write another story. I'd also lived to see some of the joys and trials of raising gifted children! I think that would be so awesome!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I've been kicking around the ideas of the talented children and calling it something like, Up On The Levee - but not ready to work on it as yet. If you have me on alert, you'll see it when I do get it out of my head and onto paper. *grinning*
Thank you so much for enjoying my characters. I take it you read Edward Cullen, FBI Special Agent and Psychic?
If you like stories about the supernatural and or the occult, I have a trilogy that I'm almost finished posting the second part of called, Keeper of the Flame. The first part is called Parapsychology 101. When Keeper is done, the 3rd and last part is called Carrying the Torch. Eventually these 3 will make up my first e-book. :)
Hope to hear from you soon.
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Dinia
Date: 23 Apr 2015 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
I just love this story :) I love how it's not all about sex it's about the actual story. Sex in a story is fine but lately in one's I started it will b good until they sleep together then that seems to b all it's about so thank u for writing such wonderful story:)
Author's Response:
WOW! Thank you so much. I'm afraid that you're in a manority in not liking lots of sex in your Fan Fiction stories. LOL. I'm with you. When it comes to sex, I tend to try and "fade to blacK" technique. Have you tried the sequel to this? Edward Cullen & Friends - Down on the Bayou? I've written others along the same supernatural/occult lines that you might like also. :D Looking forward to hearing from you again.
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Dinia
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2015 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 25 Outtake - Another Cullen Wedding
; )
Author's Response:
Thanks!
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Dinia
Date: 04 Mar 2015 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 25 Outtake - Another Cullen Wedding
What a wonderful, happy outtake! Loved revisiting these characters. ..thanks!
xoxo Sus
Author's Response:
Thank you! I enjoyed writing it. As for continuing...don't know. The characters have not been talking to me. :(
I appreciate your taking the time to not only read what I've written but to also respond to it.
Hope you read more of my work and let me know what you think of them.
Until then, Hard Hugs
Dinia
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 25 Outtake - Another Cullen Wedding
:) :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! ;)
Date: 30 Aug 2014 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thanks, Dinia! I hope you do continue this somewhere down the line. These characters are wonderful! I love non-canon Emmett being with someone other than Rosalie. And I love this Edward and Bella!
Thanks xoxoSus
Author's Response:
Thank you. I get bored with canon all the time, though I have a hard time dealing with Bella being with anyone other than Edward, unless it a 3some with Jasper. I know bad Dinia! LOL.
Thanks again!
Can I keep you???
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 29 Aug 2014 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 24
That was a nice little added moment for Emmett to propose to Lauren, and her rings sounded gorgeous! It looks to me as if Edward and Bella are embarking on a wonderful life together. I can hardly wait until you are inspired to tell us some about them and their friends and the fascinating work they do! See you around!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 24
Both stories were wonderful and had the correct amaount of spice.
Date: 23 Aug 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 23
Ah...you need to keep this going! Part 3???
Thanks, bb...
xoxoSus
Date: 23 Aug 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh, Emmett....you're so funny! And E&B are engaged! Yay!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 23
They are spot on when it comes to teasing Emmett, he falls for it so easily! I look forward to reading some more stories about this fun bunch of folks!
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am surprised Emmett could even see Phoebe
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
you and your crew make a good team
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2014 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 17
hmmmm Lauren and Emmett, maybe a new member to the team
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2014 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
what did he bind it to
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2014 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
so maybe this is a case more up Bella's alley
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2014 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
you are one of the best unreviewed writers out there and deserve better
Author's Response:
Thank you! I just found your review. Don't know why. There seems to be a bunch I did not recieve notifications on. Please forgive me.
I hope you finished this one and went on to the 3rd and final story line of my FBI Guy. It's completed on and here on TWCS, it's called The Down On The Bayou Detective Agency - Case Files
I hope you enjoy it too.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2014 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
great so far but hate the tiny font
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2014 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
your stories are lways wonderful, waited before I started this cause I wanted to give you a headstart and I am impatient to wait for updates
Author's Response:
I am so upset! I just saw your review tonight. I never got a notice that I had it waiting for me. I hope that you've continued reading and my not getting back to you put you off it!
Please if you have anything else you'd like to say about the story line, you mail email me gardiniasteel@gmail.com that way I know I'll get it.
Thank you again, and I truly apprecite your kind support.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2014 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue
I want to know how to make an avacasdo BLT taste so good
Date: 15 Aug 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
It's great that Bella made the right choice and I'm happy for them! The fun is going to be in Emmett's encounter with Ariel, and Lauren's reaction! Since this is the next to last chapter, I hope you will write about the Bayou Bureau again.
Date: 09 Aug 2014 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, that was sudden! I'm as surprised as Bella!
xoxoSus
Date: 08 Aug 2014 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
I can understand Bella's hesitation, she really hasn't known Edward that long, plus he's not said the words to her until now. I am sure they are destined for each other, so won't worry that she will say yes, only about when she will say it! Ring sounds drop-dead gorgeous, by the way!
Date: 08 Aug 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow got to give it to Edward, not many men could handle her telling him that. I hope Bella has he AHa moment soon. She could lose him otherwise.
Date: 08 Aug 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
please tell me she says yes!!!!! They are too perfect not to be together in every way!
Date: 02 Aug 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
This isn't the end of the story, is it? Hope not....
Glad they were able to help Phoebe and the pond!
xoxoSus
Date: 01 Aug 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 20
Yay the pond and area around it is on the path to healing. Poor Emmett, is he gonna get an education on the mythological side of life?
Date: 01 Aug 2014 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
Now that the authorities with power to put an end to the dumping have taken this case, I really hope that the culprits are punished! Phoebe is grateful at least! It was funny to see Emmett's reaction to seeing a dryad!
Date: 28 Jul 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
Such a fun story! Love everything you interject into it. And I love all the psychic references, and things going on!
xoxoSus
Date: 25 Jul 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
Emmett can't bring himself to leave Lauren right now, and I think Lauren is very happy about that! Now they know what the pollution is, next step is who is doing it! Then comes the part where they stop it!
Date: 25 Jul 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
Somehow I knew Emmett wouldn't be able to leave just yet.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 18
YAY!!
Finally! It will be wonderful for Edward and Bella to have their own place, won't it? Your chapters are worth the wait.....
xoxoSus
Date: 18 Jul 2014 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ready for the next step, houseboat plans in hand! With the acceptance of his resignation from the FBI, Edward can go full-steam ahead with the detective agency he and Sam have discussed. I wonder what they will name it?
Date: 18 Jul 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yay! Loved this chapter. The songs were awesome
Date: 11 Jul 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Now you have me speculating on what Lauren saw! Could it be a future between her and Emmett? That might be an addition to the detective group on the bayou! Next up, what Edward wants to talk about with Bella!
Date: 11 Jul 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Are E&B ever going to get it on? I know this isn't that type of story, but hey, they're in love, aren't they?
xoSus
Date: 11 Jul 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well, it's sad, but I hope justice does come to Maria! Killing children is such a tragedy!
xoSus