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Reviewer: roxhall1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2021 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

I fucking love this Isabella Swan!!!! How kickass is she!!!! Her and Demetrius is priceless!!

Reviewer: skyyblnde Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2020 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 20

The epilogue seems so very fitting to the story! Don’t know why anyone would find it out of place. Loved the whole story! 

Reviewer: dpesa89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2019 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 20

This story was amazing! Did not see that coming in the epilogue 

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2019 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 20

That was crazy.good job

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2019 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 20

That was crazy.good job

Reviewer: emikaelson Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2019 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 20

*blinks* Uh... damn. Okay. I was NOT expected that at all. 

But I like it. She has this life played out in her head but in reality,  she's lost on grip on it. 

I love the ending.

Reviewer: Freoborn Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2018 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 20

The epilogue was bloody brilliantly written loved it mind blown thank you very much !!!

 

Reviewer: Cmoore Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2017 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 20

This was awesome especially the ending.

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2016 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Bella!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2016 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2016 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2016 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 8

I really hate Edward, Alice and Rosalie!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2016 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2016 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 6

Stupid Edward!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2016 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2016 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2016 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2016 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2016 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Bella is amazing!

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2016 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 20

oooh interesting twist in the epilouge I liked.

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

I wonder if Edward behaves so dangerously because he thinks he's soulless anyway or he's so vain he thinks he's above the law. I am quite eager for them to catch up with him! This chapter was a bit sad but really needed. 

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 6

Merciful? Oh yeah, I bet Victoria would have been real merciful slowly pulling Bella's intestines out with her bare hands and winding them around her neck... Lol, Carlisle and Esme seem almost stuck in some bad parody of a 50s TV show. They never learn. Tsk. I am curious as to how deep Eddie's current daliance goes...

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 5

I *love* her confidence! Confident Bella is one of my favorite Bellas! I love the way Demetri coached her through feeding. Also, love declarations! (Okay, caught up on reviews. I started reading and realized I hadn't reviewed a single chapter so I went back and fixed that.)

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 4

I really liked the way the meeting went. I also liked the respectful tone Bella took with the Kings, given that they *are* kings.

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

Their banter is fantastic! 

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

I liked the sharing in this chapter. I also really liked the pace. 

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

I came here in search of a story I could no longer find on FFN and found this gem! I love this beginning. Ironic, I was searching for the BellaxJasper version of this story (beginning-wise). Anyway, excellent first chapter!

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 20

the ending was pretty funny i dont think it was dark at all just a twist, great non the less :)

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 14

i feel like she deserved nothing less than what he said

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2015 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 13

oh man how will Demi take this esp with Jasper around

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2015 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 5

seems bitchy not to care for humans when she was just one herself not to long ago. what gives?

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

i had to search for a picture of the car and that is just too funny! 

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2015 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

aawww he is super sweet, how do you imagine him?  i see him as this 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 20

interesting end even before the epilogue.   Poor Janey.

 

ROFL for Epilogue.  Ty for writing and sharing.

ty



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  Yeah, I hated killing off Jane.  I really loved her character in this.

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 19

Yup  even more convinces its Skankya and her sisters.  Is Laurant with them too?  Oh wait....it could be Heidi too or Heidi working with Denali's since she wants Demi back???

Ceremony sounds good.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 18

Yummy lemons and great plans.   Rerun???   Gawd I'm old, I know that reference:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_2rDgZWqvhY

Awww she proposed

Thinking the unknown is Skankya maybe plotting revenge?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 17

Glad they talked things out.  Wine tasting and horseback riding sound like a great day to me

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 16

Glad J got to leave unscathed.  hmmm the kings are happy but everyone else isn't...hmmmm.

 

Love Jane not taking crap or diversion from B.  Kinda figured it was Felix.  Glad he talked to D.  

 

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 15

hmm guessing since she is only shielding the kings, e is gonna read J's mind and blurt it out as the reason B spoke for J.  

 

Well at least Carlisle admitted everything.  Wow  Rose surprised me.  Well until the end with the glare.   Stupid Biatch.  

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 14

B is def dark in this chapter.  hmmm who followed her.  Jane or Felix I bet.

 

Well at least she finally told him.  Can't blame him for being upset though.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 13

oooh Jane called her out.  Very perceptive. Glad Felix talked to her. Glad the fight went well.  Sounds like D isnt very happy though.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 12

ROFL for Peter teasin her about singing.  She really needs to tell D before he finds out from someone else.  Think D is going to regret telling her not to talk about it.  

 

Good plans.  Still think she needs to tell him.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh my  what are you doing Bella?!?!?!  Yup  channeling Renee indeed.  Hope she tells D before E reads it from J's mind and blurts it out.  

 

 

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 10

Glad she's at least trying to talk to him. Love Peter.  He is a blast.     Oh no  Jasper...what have you done?!?!?



Author's Response:

Wow, I just noticed all of the wonderful reviews you've left so far.  I thank you!  I am so glad that you are enjoying the story!  It's my first completed fic ever and it's pretty dear to my heart.  I would caution though, that If you want your happy ending, DO NOT READ THE EPILOGUE.  It's a choice really, that I wanted to leave to the reader.  I know it's a temptation to go ahead and read it even if you wnat the happy ending, and if you have the ability to brush off the epilogue, then feel free.  But if a twist, and I do mean TWIST is going to ruin it for you, then I would advise against it.  I love the happy ending, but I also couldn't resist a dark twist.  It's just in my nature.  I think that's why I love the Volturi so much.

Anyway, thanks for reading and I hope that you venture into my other stories too.  They are all different, but hopefully just as enjoyable.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 9

LOVE Bella tearing up Rose.  Em is a saint for dealing with her.  Edward bowling....lol.

 

Glad Jane is making her talk things out.  Marcus kicked her arse???  Ha ha.

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

Poor emotionally stunted B.  Not like she had alot of positive role models growing up in that arena.  Hope Heidi doesn't get any ideas.  

 

Jane is hitting the nail on the head.  B is scared.  I'm loving Jane in this story.  

 

Rose the same bitchy self as always.  Em always was a big teddy bear.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 7

wow  Eddie's been at it a long time huh?   lol for shopping and Felix and the boob tube. awww poor Ashley.  Hope someone finds a mate with her.   Stupid Edward.   

 

Fuckward has a lot to answer for and the rest of the idiot "family" for allowing it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 6

ROFL for her not liking Heidi.  oooh going after the Cullens huh?  WOnder how they found out to begin with?

 

Love Felix not wanting to lose.  Ah  the Victoria angle.  Wonder why it took her so long to go to the V though.

 

Love how C&E blame B for everything.  Its all E and A's faults.  oooh  Eddie is at it again huh?  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 5

Glad she solidified her memories.  Also glad you didn't drag out her turning.

 

Alec was funny.  Go bad ass bella

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

Can't blame her for being a little nervous.  Like that he prepared her a bit ahead of time. Felix is too funny.  Glad the first meeting went well.  Woo Hoo for turning already.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

LOL  Love her internal talk when she woke up.

 

ROFL for being scared of the plane.    

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2014 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved their talk and esp the end.  Yummy lemon dance

ld

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

OOoh Loving the start already!!!!!

Reviewer: jill parker Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wow what a brilliant epilogue, not what I was expecting!!! 

Thank you for an amazing story x



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you!  I'm glad you liked it!  And you're very welcome.  I am happy to share it.

Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 20

I read this last night and was truly shocked - didn't see it coming - thought this was just a nice "different" story line about Bella - Upon reflection after reading it again this morning I actually think this is probably closer to the truth of how Bella's life would have turned out.  Thanks for the fun ride!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the thoughtful review.  I'm really glad you enjoyed it!  Not everyone appreciated the way I chose to end it.  LOL

Reviewer: phoenices24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 20

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO WAYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Such a good story but...I still cant get my head wrapped around the twist!!!!!! You are a great author!

Author's Response:

LOL  I'm glad that you enjoyed the story and the twist.  Also, thank you for the compliment.  This was my very first completed story, so it's kind of dear to me.  I'll miss it.

Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh wow! What a way to propose.... Hot chapter!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 18

hmm..

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 18

I was very grateful to see the update in my inbox! I love this chapter, and I can't wait to see Dimitri and Bella get their happily ever after :-)



Author's Response:

I'm happy that you enjoyed the chapter!  That's why I write!  Thank you for reading and reviewing!  You guys make it all worth it.

~Spudzmom~

Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 17

I have to say this is a very good story! Bella finally made up for her craziness....



Author's Response:

So glad that you like it!  Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 17

Oh man!  Now I have to wait for updates!! I am so glad I gave this story a chance :)



Author's Response:

Don't despair, I usually update every other day at the most.  Sometimes once a day.  I was a reader much longer than I've been writing so I understand not wanting to wait for updates. :-)

I'm glad you gave my story a chance too!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 16

aw demi tell her yes she a newbron after all

Reviewer: LilMcG Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 11

Ah bella, bella, bella SMH 

I love this story!



Author's Response:

So glad you're loving it!  I love writing it.

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 15

i kind of fell sorry for them all but eddie lol



Author's Response:

Aw, that's a bummer.  I didn't mean to make you sad, but they had to die.  They broke the law.  LOL  I tried not to make it too brutal (well, except Edward).

 

Thanks for reviewing!  I appreciate you taking the time!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2014 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 14

wow i can't wait for more

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