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Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2017 8:49 AM Title: After a Few Decades Chapter 2

After some decades everyone's parents will be dead. Mine are and I'm not a vampire. Eddie is really stupid and selfish.



Author's Response:

Exactly the point! I mean, it was a really good line. Quite dramatic, and Pattinson delivered it well.

But if you give it some thought ... people you know die all the time. When I was 15, a friend of mine was killed in a car crash. When my mother died, she was only 58—I was 34. I felt like an orphan even though I had a husband and two kids. (Well, still have the husband and two kids ...)

But yeah, Edward was being his dramatic self.

Thank you!

Reviewer: Shemilliah Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 7:57 AM Title: After a Few Decades Chapter 1

Alright.
So bella has no love for edward then. The mating connecting is one sided I take?
Her goal is to become a vampire?
Anyway im not shocked because in the originals, she came across like that too.
imagine only two chpaters and you've got me analysing stuff lol I like it haha.
Thanks for replying!

Author's Response:

You are welcome for the reply. I try to reply to everyone who writes a review or sends a message.

As I see it, Bella's epiphany came when she saw how her "life" would be if she actually married Edward. He would never have changed her, and he would have held her prisoner in order to keep her safe. He was practically doing it in the books.

So, I used Bella's "ability" to put things together and the way she would have those visions/day dreams/dreams and had he see herself in the future. she would be a dead human.

That, and I'm closer to the end of my days than the beginning. I think about stuff sometimes.

Thank you for your review! Analyzing is good.

 

Rick

Reviewer: Shemilliah Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2014 7:30 AM Title: After a Few Decades Chapter 2

Im confused, did Bella choose Edward or to leave?
lol early morning brain!

Author's Response:

Hello!

Well, Bella went to Jasper. I'd like to think he would be the best one to "raise" her as a vampire. Edward's being raised by Carlisle didn't really help Edward out much.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Rick

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2014 4:11 AM Title: After a Few Decades Chapter 2

Loved Gertrude! :) Can't wait to see what happens next! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Good mornin'.

Sorry, honey, that was the end. At least for now. I may get a wild hair and decide to revisit it one of these days. One never knows where the mood or muse may end up.

this was more an exercise to get thoughts on paper. Of course, I see Bella with Jasper. Who would truly choose a nancy-boy over a man?

Thanks you for reading and reviewing!

Rick

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2014 2:22 AM Title: After a Few Decades Chapter 2

Tease...but oh so good.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sweetie!

Tease? But it leaves room for another story somewhere along the line. Or, maybe somebody else will be inspired and take off with an idea.

Ya never know.

Thanks for reviewing!

Rick

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 6:44 PM Title: After a Few Decades Chapter 1

I like it. I am looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

These are, primarily, thoughts stuck in my head I wanted to get down on paper. Kept nagging at me, so I wrote it. This will be a short one.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench

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A preview of *After a Few Decades chapter 2*

Bella stared, unseeing, down at her hands in her lap, thoughts ricocheting through her head once again. She'd held Edward off for months, and she knew her time was coming to an end. She could feel it in her bones, much like the cold that was seeping through her coat.

She rubbed her frozen hands together and then paused as she considered the bare, third finger of her left hand and breathed a quiet sigh of relief.

 

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Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 1:45 PM Title: After a Few Decades Chapter 1

Great start! Can't wait to read more! ;)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Hello!

These are, primarily, thoughts stuck in my head I wanted to get down on paper. Kept nagging at me, so I wrote it. This will be a short one.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench

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A preview of *After a Few Decades chapter 2*

Bella stared, unseeing, down at her hands in her lap, thoughts ricocheting through her head once again. She'd held Edward off for months, and she knew her time was coming to an end. She could feel it in her bones, much like the cold that was seeping through her coat.

She rubbed her frozen hands together and then paused as she considered the bare, third finger of her left hand and breathed a quiet sigh of relief.

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