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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2015 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 11

terrible ending but good story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) loved this story.  Looking forward to reading the sequel

Reviewer: Twilightlove4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 12

Cant wait for the sequel!!!! Hope you update and continue the sequel very soon!!!!! 



Author's Response:

The sequel is not coming soon but, definitely this year. In the mean time tomorrow I'm posting Alice and Jasper's outtake I hope you like it. :D

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 11

:)

Reviewer: Twilightlove4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Aww its almost over! Well it was a great story,  hope maybe there will be a sequel soon!!!! Wink wink. Lol



Author's Response:

Well, the sequel is coming so don't worry. :D

Reviewer: Twilightlove4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 11

Please continue and update this story hopefully very fast and very soon!!!  Please!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Don't worry, tomorrow I'm going to post the last chapter and then the day afther tomorrow the outtake. :D

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 10

And so their group gets bigger;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 9

This was a very brave - and stupid - thing if her to do...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 8

Yay! He made it there safe and sound;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 7

See, strength in numbers;)

And with both Alice and Jasper, if they can keep their hands to themselves for now, they should have a good chance to get the golf cart. And maybe even to get to Bella's apartment for her car...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 6

I honestly can't blame the towns people for trying to run, but as most movies have shown us, most strength lies in numbers... And so I think, I would have stayed and tried my best with the Quileute;)

Hm... I'm not sure that his welcome to Bella, if he can find her will be a pleasant one in the beginning...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 5

Just in case... That's not sounding to good... And these guys just leave her fighting for herself? How nice if them:(

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad he knows how bad he fucked up, but I'm not sure he's going to get out of it as easy as he hopes...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

At least she has had the upper have this time...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm curious why he changed his treatment of her so drastically and if the next meeting will be more pleasurable for her than this...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm not that much into Zombies as you seem to be, but your summary has had me very intrigued;)

the first chapter sounds great as well, I think I'm staying to the end of it, to see what you'll come up with

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 10

Nice. What about Rose? 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

Bad Edward. :(

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting, I'll take the ride.

Reviewer: Twilightlove4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 10

Please continue and update soon please!!! I really would love to know what will happen next!!!! Please hurry and update and continue very soon!!!!! =D

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 5

i'm terrified for her .. 

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

i really hope she put him through hell , he's awful , teenager my ass , how could he do this and six years later he matured .

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

he's an ass !!!

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

pleaseee tell me Bella doesnt become a zombie :(

Reviewer: nanie057 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 10

Déjà lu ce chapitre

Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2014 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 10

:):)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love it! Just a great story.

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 10

Can't wait for more 

Reviewer: suckingdick Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 9

I NEED MORE!!!!



Author's Response:

More is coming don't worry! :D

Chapter ten is coming and I hope you like it, because I love it!...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

P.S.

Don't forget to vote on the Fanatic Fanfics Awards!

Voting poll will close on Monday April 14th, 2014.

Remember that I'm nominated on the Favorite Work-In-Progress Fanfic!!!

http://www.fanaticfanficsawards.blogspot.mx/2014/03/voting-is-now-open.html

 Hugs and love!

 

 

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2014 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great update! So I wonder if all three of them made it to Bella's apartment? And of course Bella is going to make it there! She is a survivor! So I am hoping mabe EPOV next time? I guess I'll see, hopefully soon!

Will be anxiously awaiting the next update!

peach



Author's Response:

Hey Peach!

Well all I can say is that Edward is next!
And that all of you are going to have a pleasant surprise. :D
Next chapter is coming so stay tuned!

Thanks for reading a reviewing!

P.S.

Don't forget to vote on the Fanatic Fanfics Awards!

Voting poll will close on Monday April 14th, 2014.

Remember that I'm nominated on the Favorite Work-In-Progress Fanfic!!!

http://www.fanaticfanficsawards.blogspot.mx/2014/03/voting-is-now-open.html

Chapter ten of Haystack is coming and I hope you like it, because I love it!...


Hugs and love!

 

Reviewer: ElusiveRob1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

ok, sorry. I see now that it's about zombies. I should have looked better at the picture.

Author's Response:

It's okay, but if you liked what you've read so far, give it chance, it's a love story too, and is going to have an happily ever after so. :D

But if you don't like this kind of stories, I understand.

Thanks for give it a try.:D

Reviewer: Twilightlove4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 9

Please continue and update soon pls!!! =D



Author's Response:

I'll do my best!

Thanks for reading a reviewing!

Reviewer: ElusiveRob1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 4

is this story about vampires???
I don't see any place where this was mentioned that this was a supernatural story.

Author's Response:

No, it's not about vampires, if you check in the catogery you'll see that it reads: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Iniverse.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 9

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading a reviewing!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 8

loving this story



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words!

Thanks for reading a reviewing!

Reviewer: nubian cutie Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2014 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 8

Nice adventure and plot. Cant wait for your next update.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you like it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

Aaargh. No update until Wednesday! ;) Excellent so far. Can't wait to find out who busted in. 



Author's Response:

I'm happy that you are enjoying this little story.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 8

So we have Alice and Jasper joining Bella on her journey, though who knows if all three will make it to Bella's. And now we have to wait and see who arrived at the apartment. Is it Bella and Company, or some others! 

Can't wait to see what happens next! Will be awaiting the next update!

peach



Author's Response:

Who knows what's going to happen at this point. Lol! :D
You'll have to wait and see!

Expect a new chapter next Wednesday!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm so excited about this story. It's so much fun, dark, and exciting. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

I'm happy that my story is making a good impression on you. Thanks for your kind words.

Expect a new chapter next Wednesday!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mrsmadkins Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 6

ok Edward stupid behavior aside hurry up and find Bella



Author's Response:

He is going, don't worry. :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 6

Eeek! Hope he finds her. 



Author's Response:

Don't worry I'm on it! :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: nanie057 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

j'aime ton histoire



Author's Response:

Merci!

je suis content que vous l'aimez. :D

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 6

I can't wait for more. It's so exciting.



Author's Response:

Glad you like it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 6

 

Gah! Update ASAP!! Ya got me going...!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

Yes!! Updates! And at least we got a look at Edward's POV and his stupid teenage reasons for what he did to Bella in High School.

Can't wait to see how Bella makes it back to her apartment, if she does. And to see her reaction to Edward coming for her. Should be interesting to say the least.

Will be anxiously awaiting the next update(s)!

peach



Author's Response:

That Edward! He reminds me an ex-boyfriend that I had, in high school. Lol!

Bella's journey to her apartment is going to be interesting. you'll see. ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ohhhh Edward. Meh! At least he figured it out. I love that I JUST found this story and already have an update. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Yes, that Edward was, all hormones! Lol!

I'm glad that you're ejoying it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

I'm anxious to read more. Great story so far.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words. :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mrsmadkins Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

Edward is a jerk



Author's Response:

He is doesn't he? :D

But don't worry he is going to redeem himself. ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 3

I like it! I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you like it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: FangMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

So, so, soooooo! Happy to see this here! Yay! Kisses 💋💋💋



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm happy to be here! :D

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