[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2022 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 26
surprises
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2022 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
sometimes she is an idiot
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2022 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
yeah dirty diapers can sometime be a bio hazard
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2022 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
a feisty kitten who needs to nap whenober excited
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2022 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
great start
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2022 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
think I have read before but not sure I guess once it won't let me review I will know but if it is the one I think I liked it
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2021 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 22
so so good
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2019 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
great little story although it could use some proofing for proper spelling, grammar etc.
Date: 28 Sep 2015 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 30
cool story some parts were a bit confusing but i loved the end result so no complaints ;) thanks for sharing this on here ;D
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2015 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
This has a good premise but it's a little choppy.
Author's Response:
well i never said i or the story is perfect ;-)
but thank you for reading and leaving reviews.
i love to hear what you are thinking, all critic is good.. it is the way it is said that can hurt.
And we don't want to be hurt....
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2015 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
He sounds like a creeper.
Author's Response:
realt? hmmm yeah i can see you can feel that way....
he is watching her and knows a lot....
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hmmmm. We'll see how this goes.
Author's Response:
hahaha read on and find out ;-)
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2015 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 30
:) loved this story
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 28 Nov 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 30
hmm wonder how many other neices/nephews they have running around due to their nasty father. The journals are nice tough. Interesting lett to edwaed.
TY for writing nad sharing.
Author's Response:
thank you for reading and all those awesome reviews.
I just posted a new story..
Reindeer and what? - a christmas story, maybe you like that one too.
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 29
awww new baby. oh yes coitus interuptus doesn't work well at all. Glad E/R and A/J are all happy too.
Author's Response:
LOL :-)
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
aww sucks thate he's gonna lose the cabin. Glad they hade a nice nanny. Pictureing Mary Poppins in my mind. LOL Vegas!!! Yey my hometown. Glad she found a special dress. Glad A/J are ok too. Go Em for coming through with rings. Nice tattoo idea. Yummy end.
Author's Response:
thank you, my beta has this great idea of the dress... i think maybe she designed her own fantasy dress hahaha
sttt don't tell anyone i told you that.
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 27
hmm sounds like Edward knows even more. Was E in the neighboorhood for a mission or something? hmm Wonder what story they'll come up with
Author's Response:
I think Edward still has a lot to tell Bella about himself...
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh wow Uncles huh? Wonder what they'll do now. Wonder if Aro et al will be able to keep thier mouths shut.
Author's Response:
who knew? right!
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 25
Hope E can keep B& the kids safe. Glad Jenks is bringing in a helo. Sucks they are pinned down in cabin. Oh my is Aro's Jake's grandpa or something?
Author's Response:
hoping with you
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 24
wow surprised Em could wait that long. Smart plan Rose. Glad they have "the boys" on thier side. Tugs???
Author's Response:
tugs are the badguys
Emmett can be smart if he needs to be ;-)
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 23
well at least E/R found them. Oh no Aro happy doesnt bode well for A/J. I'd feel sorry for Lucas if he wasn't a gangster too.
Author's Response:
Aro does have a temper... hope he doesn't let go and shows them
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 22
Hope Mr Jenks doesn't betray them. aww nice speech edward. Glad she said yes.
Author's Response:
it is hard to trust someone you have never seen before..
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 21
Drake? wow he's a comedy of errors walking. Bella in Hell? Not Even.
Author's Response:
hahaha lol
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
ugh Edward. Must suck to not be able to help. Well at least he told her. I was wondering if he had an emergency phone or walkie talkie or something.
Author's Response:
a smart person would be prepared wouldn't he
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
grr now who is the arsehole? hope they don't find J&A. Well at least J&A know something is up. they should have left when they knew they were being watched. Phew for Em and Rose getting the alarm. Hope Rose can track them.
Author's Response:
i would like to see your face when you read, i have this feeling you show your emotions real heavy hahahaha
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yummy play time.
Author's Response:
LOL
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 17
stupid gangster wanting to hurt our girl and kiddies. Hope they don't get Alice or Jasper.
Author's Response:
yes..
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
Little to late thinking about the BC now. Glad the kids are happy with the presents.
Author's Response:
the heat of the moment....
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 15
hope they remember to get dressed before the kids get up and find them naked. LOL
Author's Response:
hahaha
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
ooooh happy lemon dance
LOL
Author's Response:
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
oooh horny bella is coming out to play.
Author's Response:
get ready for it
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 12
aww great idea to make something. Hmm at least the bullet was in the hop and not a little further to the left.
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
lol a squirel. Yea don't tell the kids about dinner.
Author's Response:
that squirel is funny, i could see it running with a naked ( or with the towel) running after it while writing it
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 10
awww nice to get a tree but I was thinking the same as her with the going out thing. At least she gives him a hug at the end.
Author's Response:
yes, but he is also right...those bears are out there. the cold is dangerus too..
Than again, i can understand her too.. fresh air and all
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well at least they have hot water now. Glad she's being a litte more grateful even with the anger.
Author's Response:
* thumbs up* - smiley
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh that shower thing was evil. No heat or hot water in the middle of winter??? Is he insane??? Two little kids I think are gonna get pneumonia. Did he bring 3-5 months worth of food, diapers, and such? Or is he gonna try to hunt?
Author's Response:
wow you are really into the story...
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
Can't blame her for being scared. He's not exactly making it easier on her. Wow talk about a remote cabin. Winter on Litte House on the Prarie.
Author's Response:
you're right...he is not easy on her
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ah at least there was another female there at least for a little bit. lol yes babies love to leave diaper surprises.
Author's Response:
hahaha diaper surprises hahaha
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
hmmm wonder if she believes him or hot. How would they tap her phone? broke in or an in at the phone company? Ugh she fainted. at least she was sitting down
Author's Response:
i like your reviews, thanks.
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
hmm a war vet huh? Wonder why he's in her crappy neighborhood then.
Author's Response:
who knows...
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor scared bella. Hope he is a cop or something and not a serial killer.
Author's Response:
read and find out :-)
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow glad he was watching over her. hmmm is he going to kidnap them? Is he a cop maybe?
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow Jake is an arse and its her fault he was hit by a bus??? Moron inlaws. Ugh sucks that her parents aren't around to help. At least she got a little insurance $$. Surprised Jake's parents didn't try to get it/take it. Wonder if they'll play a part in this later?
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading
yes her inlaws are stupid people... she did good walking away from that
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
Wow what a crazy ride but with a beautiful happy ending thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you.
And thank you for reading it.
Date: 12 Sep 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 30
Thanks so much but it seems like you left it open for more to come. So when is that going to happen??
Author's Response:
Hahaha we'll see... we'll see
Thank you for reading and reviewing
Date: 11 Sep 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 30
Sounds like you left it open.... Maybe a sequel? Loved it.
Author's Response:
Hahaha we'll see, we'll see.
Thank you for reading it
Author's Response:
Hahaha we'll see, we'll see.
Thank you for reading it
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 30
Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us, I really enjoyed reading it my friend. xoxo, Kasi~
Author's Response:
Oh thank you sweety, it means a lot to me that you liked it.
Luv ya
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 29
Wonderful story. Great Job!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 01 Sep 2014 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 29
I have enjoyed being on this ride with you I have loved ever moment of it. I am so happy they are safe and happy. Thanks
Author's Response:
thank you
for reading
for reviewing
and all you kind words
love flightlessbirdje
Date: 01 Sep 2014 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 28
That is a great honeymoon start so sweet
Date: 31 Aug 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 29
A lovely story I have thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you.
Author's Response:
thank you
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 29
Love it!!!
Author's Response:
thank you
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 28
It was so sweet.
Author's Response:
thank you
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved the story so much I couldn't seem to stop and review after each chapter!
Author's Response:
Ah that is sweet.
Thank you...
We are almost at the end... hope you like the last part too
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2014 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
:) :) :)
Author's Response:
:-)
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2014 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
too funny
Author's Response:
Thank you.
It was fun to write... i just saw it happening in my mind
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2014 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
wonder why he is helping her
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading.
well it will all explaned in the next few chapters :-)
Date: 22 Jul 2014 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
In ever story I read with her in it she faints. She faints a lot. Hmm
Author's Response:
She got a lot to proces don't you think?
Getting kidnapped
Gangsters going after her
Left alone to raise two small kids
The one who kidnapped you is in secret the one who saves you.. or isn't he??
And she knows it is her problem, shutdown by her body with to much stresss...
But she willl do better the further in the story, i promiss
Date: 21 Jul 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it.... Hate to see them a part
Author's Response:
They said it won't be long before they will be together again...
So we have to wait and see..
Date: 21 Jul 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 27
I am just so happy Edward has said he is going to marry her.
Author's Response:
:-)
Glad to hear that
Date: 20 Jul 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well this looks like a promising story
Author's Response:
Thank you, hope you like the rest of it too.
We are 3 chapters away from the end...
Enjoy :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you, hope you like the rest of it too.
We are 3 chapters away from the end...
Enjoy :-)
Date: 14 Jul 2014 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow that is a surpise
Author's Response:
Who would have thought?
So what happens next?
Date: 14 Jul 2014 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh my what did he find about Bella and thank god they got there in time and saved them.
Author's Response:
Yes they are save...
But mr jenks... read on and find out
Date: 13 Jul 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow that was a great twist.
Author's Response:
Thank you :-)
Date: 12 Jul 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 26
Fascinating! Nice update, thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you :-)
Date: 06 Jul 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
Now I'm very much intrigued, wonder what he has to say.
Author's Response:
Hope it is not some horrific thing...
Date: 01 Jul 2014 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great one....
Author's Response:
thank you :-)
Date: 01 Jul 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 24
Shit has hit the fan. Edward has to have traps set up???
Author's Response:
we have to wait for the answer to that one, don't we.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 24
All going to come to a head now. I am glad jasper and Alice are okay, if a little battered.
Author's Response:
Yeah, i think they were lucky, well a little lucky.
Nothing time will heal
Date: 29 Jun 2014 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
Yep, definitely a cabin baby in the making. ;)
Author's Response:
Date: 29 Jun 2014 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
Are we going to have a little cabin baby? I doubt Edward has packed condoms and it's not like Bella is in the pill. Hmmmm ...
Author's Response:
LOL
You will see
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 24
:) Great chapter, tension filled.
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 25 Jun 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 23
hurry with the update - pretty please
Author's Response:
I am sorry, my beta was on vacation and is now sick...
So i am waiting for her to send back the chapter...
Hang on please.
As soon as she send it back i update i promise
Date: 14 Jun 2014 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 23
I hope Edward and Bella are gone before they get there.
Author's Response:
We'll just have to wait and see don't we...
Date: 07 Jun 2014 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow they know they can't live. Without each other
Author's Response:
Is that a good thing or not?
Greetz
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
:)really enjoying this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you glad you like it
Date: 04 Jun 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 21
I hope that Alice and Jasper already got away. Happy Drake is gone could not of happened to a better person lol.
Author's Response:
We need to wait and see about that...
But i am glad Drake is gone too... what would he have done if he lived and found Bella
Author's Response:
We need to wait and see about that...
But i am glad Drake is gone too... what would he have done if he lived and found Bella
Date: 30 May 2014 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
I don't like the idea of Alice and Jasper being tortured by Caius. Caius always freaks me out.
Author's Response:
Keep fait....
Date: 25 May 2014 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 20
Now what are they going to do???
Author's Response:
what can they do?
with two small kids in the house, snow around them, gangsters going after them...
what to do?
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2014 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
:) Love the tension building.
Author's Response:
thank you :-)
Date: 23 May 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
Mister jerks sounds scary but he's on our boy's side I hope.
Author's Response:
yes mr. Jenks isn't someone you want against you...
in their world you don't know who to trust anymore...
so let's hope Edward trust the right people..
Date: 12 May 2014 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh dear. I fear for Alice
Author's Response:
let's hope she and Jasper will be ok....
Date: 11 May 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
The gangsters will be sorry.
Author's Response:
let's hope so...
Date: 05 May 2014 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
They were so desperate and needy for each other.... Very hot
Author's Response:
Two weeks is a tiny space....with no sex but a lot of time and sexynisss
I feel for them hahaha
Date: 05 May 2014 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
They are loving each other and having fun I dont think they care if they make a baby
Author's Response:
Well it would be a bit to soon and very bad timing if she would get pregnant.... but they are taking a big risk that is true
Date: 28 Apr 2014 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
What a bunch of creeps.
Author's Response:
Hahaha and i wanted to make it even creepier.... but my beta said no hahaha i listened to her...
Date: 28 Apr 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
I feel sorry for the couple living in Bella's house. This guy is a mean one isn't he!
Author's Response:
he is a real nutcase yes...
Date: 26 Apr 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ops but it was so good ;)
Author's Response:
:-) real good
Date: 25 Apr 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
Silly Edward. There are plenty of ways to enjoy each other without full on sex but it will be hard... Lol.
great that the kids are having a lovely Christmas. Lovely that are sharing care for the kids and they are feeling more and more for each other too.
wonder if she is preggers ... Only takes one time.
thx for the update.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 15
Sexy update. They are so comfortable w each other.
hope you had a good Easter too
Author's Response:
Hi, thank you
Our easter had a black note to it... (grandma passed away the week before easter) but we had fun too
Date: 22 Apr 2014 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great easter and I see Edward is trying to find an egg himself lol.
Author's Response:
hahaha LOL
you made my day with this review
Date: 14 Apr 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
Sounds like they are having fun ;)
Author's Response:
yes ... this is the fun we all like hahaha
Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am sorry for you lose it is never easy to loss loved ones. Thanks for the love in this chapter they are getting it
Author's Response:
thank you.
finally they see the light... let's see if they can make some fireworks
Date: 14 Apr 2014 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
thank goodness for Edward's miraculous control... yummy update
Author's Response:
glad you liked it
Date: 14 Apr 2014 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
well me oh my wasn't that a treat!
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 12 Apr 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my, I need a cool down... Yes the towel incident is my favourite
Author's Response:
hahaha no time to cool down... read... hahaha
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
shower
Author's Response:
:-)
Author's Response:
:-)