Date: 09 Mar 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'LL GET SICK TO SLEEP NEXT TO HIM.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'M SURE SHE'LL FIND A WAY TO TRICK HIM BECAUSE THAT'S THE CLICHE WAY TO THESE STORIES. BUT..... I'LL KEEP READING IN HOPES FOR A STRONGER BELLA AND EDWARD.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
MAKE WHAT WORK???????????
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
OOOOOOOOOO!!!! THE NAILS ARE CUMING OUT.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
"CHANGE" YEAH RIGHT CHANGE IS CUMING ALRIGHT.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
HE HE HE!!! OF COURSE IT'S ROSE!!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
Our we sure Edward is the father
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I JUST STARTED READING AND SO FAR SO GOOD!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
I knew she would fake a pregnancy
Date: 08 Mar 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
well things are going to get tricky now
Date: 08 Mar 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 17
Looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thankyou just posted it.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 17
Just don't be there when she comes back, she might seduce you and get pregnant to trap you further.
Author's Response:
Next chapter just posted. Hope you like it.
Date: 07 Mar 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 07 Mar 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am waiting for the show down
Date: 07 Mar 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 06 Mar 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
excellent chapter...
Date: 06 Mar 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
Edward needs to be careful with Tania. If they have sex, which I hope they don't, he better wrap his cock or he could be stuck with her forever.
Author's Response:
Yeh she would do that to him If It meant keeping him. Thanks for review.
Date: 06 Mar 2014 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
well I guess the apple doesn't fall far from the tree with mother and daughterI hope ur plan backfires and Bella is the other woman that's okay she gets her man
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm so happy that you update often. Love your story. Can't wait to see what's up your sleeve.
Author's Response:
Glad your enjoying it. Thanks for your review
Date: 06 Mar 2014 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
boy she is a self center bitch.
Author's Response:
Yes she is .Thanks for reading it
Date: 05 Mar 2014 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 05 Mar 2014 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh shit, they went for it..,.why not wait till he is seperated or divorced
Author's Response:
Edward thinks he's wasted 3 years already.Bella's happy he's only married on paper,and Tanya won't let him go without a fight. So they could have been waiting along time. Plus I think once they started there was no turning back. Hope you liked it, and thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love your story. Bella and Edward are being very bad.
Author's Response:
I know and Tanya's due back soon. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05 Mar 2014 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 9
I like the pace of this story. Only one little problem: you need to capitalize " I " in your sentences.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I am trying to let people hear their thought's and feelings, rather than just scimming over them. I was worried it might be too much. But i must admit i am enjoying writing it. Sorry about the grammer, I get a little carried away and don't check. I've got colons where commers should be.
Date: 04 Mar 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
looking forward to more
Date: 04 Mar 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow,another update so quickly. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
Liking this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks, going to try and get one more chapter out tonight
Date: 04 Mar 2014 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
I like that he came to the conclusion that his marriage was not all that it should be, before he pressued Bella. And I like that Bella through in the end the hint that there is noone waiting for her at home...
Date: 03 Mar 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow ungrateful much is she, she doesn't work and goes to the spa and gets facials...golddigger
Author's Response:
Well when you read chapter 6 you will learn alittle bit more about her. she's certainly spoiled and pampered and doesn't see the real world, and she does like spending his money
Date: 03 Mar 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
UH OH...this can't be good....
Date: 03 Mar 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Thanks so much it's my first story,and your my second review. I will get the fouth one out tonight.
Date: 03 Mar 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
well I hope he goes home and try to rekindle what he had in his marriage, but that would be boring and how would Bella become the othe woman which never end good....because most man will not divorce the wife.
Author's Response:
That's so true but who wants to read about a faithfull husband. Thanks for the review i was really scared to view it. It's my first story and your my first review.
Date: 03 Mar 2014 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
Just read all three chapters, I really like this story and can't wait to find out how long it takes Edward to realize he wants Bella. Update soon.