Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
It kindof makes you feel sorry for her, she lost her love and everything, and by drinking human blood she's just being a normal vampire. Edward was going to kill himself when he though Bella was dead, she wanted to die also. It makes sence. If only she didn't have to cause so much trouble, if only she could just go to the Voultri like Edward. If only.. well, I like the way you wrote her charactor. I haven't read much of anythink from her Point of Veiw, so it was interesting, and I'm so glad that the silver streak was a newborn vampire and not Edward haha, it would be to soon for him to come back if it was.