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Reviewer: KeniNic Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2014 12:39 AM Title: Prologue
Date: 07 Mar 2014 12:39 AM Title: Prologue
I like the idea but the story is a bit hard to read and get wrapped in. I agree that you need a good beta just to help clean it up. But other than that it's a good story so far. Keep going.
Reviewer: RowanBronze Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 4:24 AM Title: Prologue
Date: 28 Feb 2014 4:24 AM Title: Prologue
Okay, so it was a good attempt, but you should find a beta. Thank you for sharing!
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