Date: 21 Aug 2018 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
This was my review for chapter 4: ( it won't let me review) Crap james is alive!! Edward is such a DOUCHEBAG!! He & bella are going to go toe to toe! they are both attracted to each other but their egos are both so huge!!
chapter 5: what is bella going to wear to the party i wonder?? Now i also see how alice & jasper are perfect a match!! If james is at the party bella is going to lose it!!
Date: 06 Mar 2015 5:46 AM Title: The Hit
I'm hanging with your story. The chapter length is really up to you but a bit longer is more my speed. I'm interested to see how your story plays out, espcially with Bella being all bad-ass. Should make for quite a pairing with mobward.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 2:34 AM Title: All in a Day's Work
Excellent start so far! I've read a lot of fanfics over the years but your story was the very first I have ever reviewed.I desperately wanted to share with you how promising I find your story in hopes that it will encourage you to continue on. It's on my favorites now and I hope to see more from you soon! Thank you
Date: 25 Feb 2014 11:53 PM Title: The Hit
I think you had this story on fanfiction. And then you stop writing it. I loved this story. And I love your Bad Ass Bella. I am glad you are back. And could you post more than 1 chapter and I love the longer story. I like to feel that I am actually watching the movie version that I read thru your words. It all about the details and the story for me
Date: 25 Feb 2014 4:25 AM Title: Waiting
Great story. But don't write it short. Run with a longer version. I love long stories. I love back history on characters. I am sticking to this story like glue. I've been missing Sexilexicullen but not anymore. Write this thing. Home girl. Will their be a sequel. Is Bella a badass. I pray so. I hate clumsy and stupid weak Bella. Sorry Lol
Date: 25 Feb 2014 3:17 AM Title: Waiting
Well, you had me looking for more and was disappointed it ended so abruptly. I would definitely be interested in reading more as you really have a way to hook one's imagination as to where you may be leading. You began this in an unusual way.
I hope you feel challenged enough to continue.