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Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 22 - EPILOGUE

This is really great! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 21

I FECKIN KNEW IT!!!! OMFNG! I KNEW IT!!! I KNEW SHE WASN'T ALONE! LMAO! That was quite the gesture! ;) I love it! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 20

Oh man! Leaving it there!! Rude! ;) jk lol So, I have a feeling that you left it there for a reason. :P

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh for the love of cheese and crackers! This is getting out of hand! Man up boy! ;)I hope he has a better plan! lol :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oh boy!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

OH SHIT!! WTF IS GOING ON!!!??!!!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 13

OMFNG!! Sadness. :(

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 12

OMG! That was an evil thing you did there! lol I am soooo happy I can go right to the next chapter! lol ;)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 11

????????

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 10

OMG!?! I am off to find out what happens next! ;)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 9

I absolutely love this story!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love it!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 7

HOLY SH*T!!!! OMG!!! Emmett is the best big "bubba" EVER! lol I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

Fantastic!!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 5

Awww....Emmett is so sweet! ;) I love this! I can't wait to see what they get up to in Vegas! "What happens in Vegas stays in Vegas" is all good until there are photos and they get loaded to FB! That is not cool! :P

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love their brotherly bond! Emmett picked up his girl for him! LOL VEGAS BABY!!! I love Vegas! ;)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 3

I love this! ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 22 - EPILOGUE

excellent story ;) thanks for sharing this on here ;D

Reviewer: monalizzah Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2015 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 22 - EPILOGUE

I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 22 - EPILOGUE

Loved it

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 22 - EPILOGUE

This was well worth your return to fan fic, trust me! A totally satisfying story, complete with a happy ending! Thank you so much!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 21

I see why your beta would stand up and applaud! That final gesture did the trick, too bad Alice got a free show out of it! Bottom line, I'm glad they got together!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 20

I have my fingers crossed that she won't call the police and have him arrested! The pictures and the letter seem to have softened her up a bit, so I have hope!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 19

Okay, I think they both are acting stupidly, and need to grow up! I sure hope Edward's plan works better than Benjamin's did!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 18

What do I think? I think Bella has had a lot of time to change her mind about who was to blame for this mess. It's pretty obvious that she no longer feels as bad as she did when she wrote him that letter. Hopefully, Edward and Benjamin can come up with a plan.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 17

Let's hope that Bella hears him out now that he is finally face to face with her.  That was cool of you to have Emmett score the winning touchdown, especially this year of the Superbowl Seahawks!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 16

I agree that Bella owed Edward a big apology. On the other hand, he owes her one just as big! Now let's see if he's man enough to do the right thing. I'm pretty sure it wouldn't have hurt him so much if he didn't care a lot for Bella!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 15

I see his mother and I agree somewhat on the way he treated Bella. Wouldn't you know that Emmett  read the letter before Edward could?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 14

I was just becoming a little ticked at Edward for being so self-righteous about what happened with Bella. I thought he was overeacting, until his bigger, older brother started punching him! What the hell is up with that?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 13

I kind of wanted to cry right along with Edward and even felt sorry for Bella's dumb stunt! I'm just afraid it broke both their hearts!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 12

If she tells him this was some sort of test, I may want to pop her one!  By the way, I love the way you answered that horrible, cowardly reviewer who was so nasty to you. It really makes them crazy when you reply so sweetly!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh my, what will young Edward do now? He is in so much trouble with Bella on her way up and Rosalie lying across his bed! It sure doesn't look good for him!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 10

This will not turn out well unless Rosalie and Bella are one and the same! I loved that Edward stood up for Bella when she bad mouthed his lady!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 9

That was so cool that they got lost in the moment and entirely missed Professor Cope's lecture! Goes without  saying,  the kissing was the best part of Edward's day! It's kind of sweet that he feels a bit guilty about seeing Rosalie after what occurred between him and Bella!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 8

Except that Emmett got his feelings hurt, the evening went really well for Edward! He met his dream girls and she was as nice as he always thought! The picture and the kiss were just a bonus!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 7

Why do I have such a bad feeling about this?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 6

Several wild and crazy ideas are  spinning around in my head, especially one about why Edward thinks this Bella Swan looks so familiar! I'm not a big believer in coincidence, so it would be too funny if Bella is using Rosalie's name and posing for Bunny Life!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 5

Let us cross our fingers and hold a good thought for Edward, and hope they don't get into too much trouble!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

Edward is right, posing for a magazine is one thing, making porn movies is quite another! It seems the object of his obsession is quite intelligent, too, majoring in computer engineering and all!I'm curious as to what Emmett has up his sleeve for his little brother in Las Vegas!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

Mike Newton is a jerk and what does he know about modeling , or anything else for that matter?Hope their folks don't get too upset about the drinking!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

Sure Mom, they wouldn't dream of getting into any mischief while in Las Vegas! I can see it all now, two young men, eighteen and twenty-two, sure they'll be just fine!(in a pig's eye!)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Rosalie is not a five foot three brown-eyed blonde! What's up with that?

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 22 - EPILOGUE

=)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 22 - EPILOGUE

Oh I loved it how perfect hehehe and Esme's yelling at Emmett for getting married without her was awesome thank you for all of it

Reviewer: flightlessbirdje Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2014 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 22 - EPILOGUE

ah this was a sweet story.

 

 

Reviewer: AstridGreenEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 22 - EPILOGUE

I love it!
Great story!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 22 - EPILOGUE

loved this story

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 21

I loved it and damn bahahahahaha he went full monty for her but that just proved he was serious update soon

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 21

Well if this is the last time you'll visit again - I can say it was worth the trip.  Loved the story.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 21

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 21

good

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 20

Stalker

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 20

=)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 20

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2014 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 19

=)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2014 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 19

:)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 19

Well for both of them being wrong she is being to harsh she is just as guilty as Edward she played mind games with him and he said horrible things to her but he is trying and she is just being a bitch but she is a woman scorned will their next plan work update soon

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 19

hummm  He's a stalker and she a bitch. Nice

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2014 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 18

Well he did deserve whqt he got but they both are to blame but how will Edward make it up to her a d will she forgive him

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 18

=)

Reviewer: AstridGreenEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 18

I love Bella's reaction!

Poor Edward but I think he deserve it.

Oh! And I love Benjamin he is great!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 17

good.

hope you and your kids feel better

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 17

Finally .......

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 17

Well he admitted he was an asshole to himself that's the firest step.

I feel for your family. I'm battling the same thing - allergies & bronchitis. Steroids, inhalers and antibotics are my current cocktails.

Reviewer: jonzie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 16

Yeah, I'm team Edward over here.  I definitely think he overreacted a lil, but he had a right to be upset at the way she handled coming out to him.  If she had done it differently he probably would've been shocked, but he most likely would've looked at it as Emmett did, the best of both worlds.  But the way she threw herself at him made him lose respect first for Rosalie, then for Bella.  It was trashy, and he was never attracted to trashy.  To him it was probably like finding out that your favorite superhero was really just a drunk, who only "saved the day" because he was fighting for the last bottle of booze.  It's devastating to find out that your hero isn't who or what you thought they were.  

But if he can calm down a lil, he'll realize that Bella/Rosalie are exactly who he thought they were.  From the beginning he always said that he liked Rosalie so much because he could tell there was so much more to her.  He saw her intelligence along with her beauty.  I actually think it's his inexperience with relationships that is the cause of his humiliation, and his humiliation is causing him to be overly harsh.  Yeah, Bella handled it all wrong, but she's not wrong for wanting reassurance that he wants her for the right reasons.

Also, it seems like Bella thinks that he is mostly upset about her dual identity, but I think he's upset about her testing him.  He never said anything harsh about what she did for a living, he was pissed that he wasn't trusted with the truth and then she made him look stupid.  The male ego is a powerful thing.  So I hope that he tells her that.  She was far too self depreciating in that letter for my liking.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor Bella

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 16

She wasn't wrong, she wasn't whore.  She took care of herself when there were no choices.  Brave girl.  Shame on baby Edward.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 16

=)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 16

I've said it before, Edward needs to grow up!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 15

good

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 15

While time passed, I think it was needed. Glad Emmett rescued Edwards collection. He wild have regretted it being thrown away. I've done similiar things in the past when I was younger and do regret it.

Looking forward to reading what Bella has to say!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 15

loved this

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 14

  Ed's still being a baby, poor pitiful me.  Boohoo.  I'm on Emmett's side -Edward needs his ass kicked for being a colossial dick.  Thanks for the update.

Love the opening AN. haha  Sounds like Texas w/ anything but hot dry weather.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 14

Edward needs to grow up!  He's acting like a baby!

Obviously Emmett found out about the Bella/Rosalie vs Edward debacle in Vegas!

 

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 14

he figured out rose

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 14

thinking em talked to b

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 14

I think Emmett may have found out what happened

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow Eddie is a drama queen.  Needs to grow the F up he's still a kid, and clearly not ready for any type of relattionship.   Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 13

Awesome

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 13

Poor Edward AND Bella.  I can see things from both sides

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 13

poor e

Reviewer: carebare1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 13

wow

Reviewer: AstridGreenEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 13

I knew it, I knew it, I knew it!

Poor Bella, Edward was mean to her.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 13

Nope....knew they were one and the same and I get why Bella felt she had to do what she did. I'm kinda pissed at Edward. He's acting like the high school teen age boy that he is. He needs to grow up & realize Bella did what she had to do.

He needs to take off his Rose colored glasses!  Yes, maybe Bella/Rosalie should have thrown herself at him (that may have been a bit too much) but seeing if he preferred the true Bella rather than the self admitted fantasy of Rosalie was understandable. 

Reviewer: AstridGreenEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh my God!

now Will know for sure!

great chapter!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 12

I can't believe that someone can be so nasty in a review!!!  Love this story

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 12

mean ;)

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 12

Will I think your are both evil. Mean girls, really Rachel McAdams mean.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 11

thinking it is b 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 11

;-}    still waiting on the big reveal  --  if there is one. ????

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Edward ......

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

=)

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 10

omg i just looked at the pics from the banners.. if those are true it is one in the same.. good job.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 10

Hummmm, gonna be a long wait.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 10

Let's hope it's not double trouble for him

Reviewer: bommer1and Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 10

i am so CONFUSED!

Reviewer: AstridGreenEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 10

Now I'm wondering again!

Is it Bella? Alice? or Rosalie?

Great chapter!I'm so glad that you like the banners! As soon as you reveal the identity of the mysterious Rosalie, I'll make another one with the Anniversary edition. ;)

Hugs

AstridGE

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 9

Bella n Rose are in the same group of filming. I don't think same person. I am curious to the first kiss comment though.

 

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 8

:)

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