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Reviewer: Afwife2016 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2017 12:31 AM Title: Teaser

I have now read all you stories here and on FFn.  I love them all!  You have a wonderful warm style of writing with the right amount of drama and angst. I don't like much angst, too much in real life in my opinion.  If there is angst it should be ExB angainst something else not against each other. I get tired of weak whimpering Bella's. Yours have all been great. Thanks for all the wonderful stories I wish you had completed this story but thank you for writing what you did.  I Have no idea if you get these reviews, I hope you do.  

Reviewer: Afwife2016 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2017 4:49 PM Title: Fifteen

Just read both of these stories and love them!  Bummed this one doesn't appear that it will be completed. Its a shame because its really a wonderful story. 

Reviewer: twinicole Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 4:55 AM Title: Fifteen

Please update again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2014 9:22 AM Title: Fifteen

:)

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Date: 01 Dec 2014 9:22 AM Title: Fourteen

:)

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Date: 01 Dec 2014 9:21 AM Title: Thirteen

:)

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Date: 01 Dec 2014 9:21 AM Title: Twelve

:)

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2014 11:34 PM Title: Fifteen

thankyou

3 fantastic chapters all at once

spoiled

well done

love this fict

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2014 11:28 PM Title: Teaser

umm If this is the Sequel, where is the first one?  I can't find it on the site. PS If you ask Admin Kelly, She'll move your stories from FFn for you if that is where they are. Kelly@twcslibrary.net

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 3:00 PM Title: Eleven

loving this story

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 12:12 PM Title: Eleven

please update

are you putting your other stories on here as my fan fiction link is totally unreliable

the regular season i read it on my friends and it sounds really good

thanks

Reviewer: Lilmissweetsin2380 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 2:09 PM Title: Flashbacks

I love this, good job and I'm looking forward to more!! so get ta writing will you!!!

Reviewer: StillDreaming85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 2:07 PM Title: Eleven

Amazing chapter! I loved it.

Matteo is a smart cookie.

I can't wait to see what is in store for them all x

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2014 7:34 PM Title: Flashbacks

thankyou for updating

great chapter

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2014 11:50 AM Title: Blindsided

please update

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 12:14 AM Title: Blindsided

Oh my I love this story

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 4:18 PM Title: Mothers & Daughters

0h dear poor grace

is she gonna tell renee she fancies her grandson ??????

love this story

well done



Author's Response:

Hello! Thank you, I'm so happy you like it so far. Everyone will meet soon enough. :)

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 2:04 PM Title: Mothers & Daughters

oh no... bella was right.. poor grace n mat

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 5

poor edward his kids are gona drive him insane lol



Author's Response:

I know, right? Lol

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2014 5:52 PM Title: Back to School

Love it and loved hearing from Matteo

Author's Response:

Hello! Thanks so much! 

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2014 5:51 PM Title: Back to School

getting good again

looking forward to more

well done



Author's Response:

Hi! Thank you, I appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

things starting to heat up again already

well done

looking forward to next update



Author's Response:

Hi, Thanks so much. I just posted the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 6:12 PM Title: Photographs

Love it,  I take it we have several years of a time jump, since Matteo is old enough to know what his parents were up too,  and Jasper is home!   Can't wait for more! 



Author's Response:

Hi! Thank you! Yes, Matteo is 15 now. He'll have an important part in the story. :) I'm so glad you are enjoying so far. 

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2014 2:49 PM Title: Photographs

wow loving this again already

fantastic start

well done



Author's Response:

Hi! Thanks so much. I'm happy you like it!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2014 5:25 AM Title: Photographs

Love it, and do they have anymore kids because they were talking as in more than just Matteo

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2014 5:08 AM Title: Photographs

I WAS ALL INTO THE STORY WHEN IN A BLINK OF AN EYE IT WAS OVER!!!!! IT WAS A SHORT CHAPTER BUT... A GREAT ONE NONE THE LESS. IDEALLY I'D LIKE LONGER CHAPTERS BECAUSE I ENJOY YOUR MAGIC BUT WHATEVER YOU GIVE US IS WELL RECIEVED. READ YOU SOON!!



Author's Response:

Hi, I hope you are enjoying what is going on so far. The chapters will get longer as we move along and get more involved with the family. :)

Reviewer: Tootsie1977 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2014 4:09 AM Title: Teaser

I looking forward to more. I hope Esme gets put in her place in this one. 



Author's Response:

Hi, thanks so much for reading! Esme has calmed down a bit ... She has another daughter in law to bother. Lol. 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 7:39 PM Title: Teaser

ANOTHER GREAT START!!!!!!! THANK YOU FOR CONTINUING YOUR MAGIC. I LOOK FORWARD TO ENJOYING THE SEQUEL AS MUCH AS I ENJOYED " UNEXPECTED " READ YOU SOON!



Author's Response:

Hi There! I'm so sorry for the late response! I didn't get an alert for your message. :) I'm so happy you liked the teaser. Full chapter is posted now...eeep!!! I'm biting my nails. 

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