[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 11:09 PM Title: Escape
I know I already told you on Fb how much I liked your story but I thought you deserved for me to give you an official review! You're story was amazing! It's hard to believe this is your first one. It was beautifully written, the graceful way you described each scene made the story that much more enchanting.
I loved that you surprised me with the situation with Edward, I usually can guess whats coming in a story so when it takes an unexpected turn, I relish it!
I also like that you left the story open-ended so the reader could make their own decision on Bella's & Edwards fate!
Great Job! I am excited to read more stuff from you in the future!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Alice! You've plastered a huge smile on my face.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 6:58 PM Title: Escape
Loved it!! You did wonderful for your first fic!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm very glad you liked it.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:14 PM Title: Escape
Great story! Really well written, and such a great storyline =)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I was very nervous about posting hits. I'm very glad you liked it.