Date: 25 May 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
People get tired of seeing her feeling subservient and shrunken who like to ignore it more if it boost your self esteem they will notice it.
So they are going to have their first night of sex lol.
Date: 25 May 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
I understand the shame of Bella but she has to think of living in the moment and the only way out is this. She will end up being raped by Phil and Edward will want to kill him.
Date: 25 May 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
Phil must have broken some ribs .... Bella has to ask for help from Edward and his family and make a complaint of assault and perhaps provide a home for her until she Interim maybe go to a university, or finish school and get a job and keep, or move to another city after finish school and get a job ..... if it continues as it is, or Phil will kill or cripple and even raping Bella.
Date: 25 May 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
Carlisle thinks ahead ... lol
Date: 25 May 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
They have to take precautions because this relationship is advancing very fast.
Date: 25 May 2014 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward liked to put Tanya in her place ....
Date: 25 May 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
I have with me that Phil is waiting for Bella to lose her virginity so he force her .....cade Bella's mother sees nothing? Because the mother did not see anything?
Date: 25 May 2014 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
This courtship seriously getting lol. They must look better to not catch Phil ....
Date: 25 May 2014 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
He was afraid to tell and it shrinks and understandable.
Date: 25 May 2014 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm surprised Phil let Bella go on a date with a guy at all ...
Date: 25 May 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
Bella perdeu a confiança, quase destruiu uma boa e bela jovem ....
Date: 25 May 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Self confidence Bella this down ....
Date: 25 May 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ódio Tanya e Phil.
Date: 25 May 2014 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm very sorry for Bella ...
Date: 25 May 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
His story is well written and holds our attention, like it.
Date: 18 May 2014 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward and Carlisle both know or have a very good idea of what's going on in Bella's house. Hiwever, it's up to her to do something about it, which is easier said than done.
Date: 17 May 2014 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, shocked he could let her go home. What doe Phil have on her that she won't leave? I get the self esteem but does he threaten her mother??
Date: 09 May 2014 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
She'll never be able to hide it from him. She's 18. Get OUT of there.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
It's nice to see there's a group of nice people circling Bella and caring for her.
Date: 05 Apr 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
Please don't see this as me trying to be rude to you, but Phil's abuse is just into overkill for me. I know that this is your story and you can write it however you want. I'm just speaking for myself when I say that the amount of injuries and where he is inflicting them make it hard to take and hard to believe she could withstand that. Again I respect that it is your story,but I would love to know when such harsh abuse will stop. As an avid reader, realism is important and this is starting to seem to unreal.
Date: 24 Mar 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good chapter
Date: 24 Mar 2014 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
The truth came out sooner than I thought. I son't think they'll keep talking on the hot line, but it might be difficult to open up entirely. What is Edward going to do now about Bella's situation?
Date: 07 Mar 2014 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
I can't wait for the date!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Being lonely and feeling lonely don't always mean the same thing. Alice, and apparently Edward too eant to help Bella with both. It won't be easy si ce it's comfortable and easy for Bella. Which one will they achieve first?
Date: 11 Feb 2014 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
THIS IS VERY SAD.KILL PHIL AND HAVE BELLA AND EDWARD RUNAWAY TOGETHER. SERIOUSLY, THANKS
Date: 04 Feb 2014 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am liking this story ;)
Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
want to hear what Edward is thinking an feeling