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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter

Reviewer: Solenita Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2016 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 53

Just an FYI note, I'm sure others have mentioned it, I don't know how easy it is to correct a mistake, but within this chapter you switched Angela's boyfriend from Eric to Ben and then back to Eric by the end.  

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 62

surprised you never gave Alice any redeeming qualities but it was a good story, a lot of fluff

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2015 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 27

great

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2015 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 8

where is renee

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2015 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 62

Glad alice isnt pregnant.  Cute story end. Ty for writing and sharing

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2015 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 61

Yea Alice pregnant would.so not be good.   B and e are so cute

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2015 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 60

She did a great job. E is being so supportive;it's really sweet.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2015 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 62

Awesome! Thanks for this wonderful story ;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 35

Alice has a bit of a jealous side, with her pushy way I can see that being trouble to find a nice apartment...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 34

Its great that they fund a doctor who didnt give them any hell to pay about being so young and havung forgotten some contraception

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 33

Alice needed to take a lot here, but I'm proud of her for not making too much of a fuzz about it;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 32

Tanya did need another appearance huh, keeps us on our toes

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 31

Again, things went very well for these two, tthat's nice

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 30

Yeah, an unplanned pregnancy can be scary and for sure bring tension into a room.... 

I wouldn't be surprised if Esme did try to spy on them after that coming home

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 29

At least Alice figured out what he problem is...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 28

So the" forgotten" condoms were a planned thing on your side, guess the lovebirds wont stay a pair for too long....

Lets see how daddy dearest and momma bear take the news, because I'm sure both know what coukd be up;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 27

Renee is an evil person, im glad Bella got the chance to tell her off

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 26

So sweet, these two;)

I'm very happy she can go to college as well now, but im curious if they can stay together at one or will have to part ways for that time

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 25

Luck isn't on her side, is it:(

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 24

:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 23

Doesn't Bella remember that Edward just makes his first experience with her too;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 22

I really don't want to be a party pooper, but are the missing mentions of contraception intentionally or did you just forgotten to say anything about it? 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 21

I'm not sure what either of these two would have done had Phil decided to take things further, but I hope Esme could have taken him down! 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 20

He's ditching a lot of school these days, that cant go over too well

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 19

Hopefully there will mostly be good times now, but of course she still has to give a testimony for what happened to put her in the hospital...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2015 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 18

So the police informed Phil of Bella's whereabouts, why wasnt Renee there as well?!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2015 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 17

Oh no....

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

Seeing that they're both 18, shouldn't college become a topic for them soon, too?

I'm glad they both had a good experience with their first time

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 15

He has his heart at the right place, but he should think more about how its affecting her before he says things like that

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2015 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 14

I think Edward is wrong abut Bella being stubborn, its probably more not knowing where to go and not be a burden.

And she might be thinking like, better the devil you know, than the unknown as well

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2015 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 13

She shouldn't have to hide this...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2015 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 12

So Carlisle at least suspects there's more go Bella's story, that's good. 

Nice, a birthday away from the 'rents

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 11

Aw.... how sweet is that :)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2015 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 10

Slowly shes making new friends, but I like that the "old ones" still have her back too. I'm just very curious why they allowed her to slip away so much

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2015 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm glad Edward took her to the hospital, and Carlisle probably put 2+2 together as well...

As sweet as it was from Edward to drive Bella home, won't Phil not notice her missing car in their driveway (or even on the street) and how will she get to school the next day?!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2015 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 8

Damn, that was a day full of exciting things to do

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2015 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

This could've gone much worse, but im glad it didn't

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

I'm glad he's aware "Anthony" can't be a secret for too long.

Their date was very sweet

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2015 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

Yeah, its so much easier to believe something you get told daily, than if out ofthe blue people start to tell you otherwise. 

It cantake even more years to rebuild her self esteem than it took to destroy. ..

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2015 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 4

He should tell her, this can't end well otherwise

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

I loved how Edward put Tanya in her place, but doubt she'll get it anytime soon

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2015 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 2

This was very sad

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2015 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hm... inteesting start, but sadly you forgot she wore shades to school, so why could he look into her eyes:(

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2015 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 59

It's time!!  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2015 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 59

Alice is still being annoying Alice.  Sigh.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2015 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 58

they are too cute together.  Glad he is being reassuring and attentive.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2015 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 59

Thanks!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2015 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 59

SHE PROBABLY HAS BACK LABOR AND SHE SHOULD BE GOING TO THE HOSPITAL, NOT SURE WHY HER DOCTOR DIDN'T SEE SHE WAS IN LABOR.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 57

Thanks!

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 57

Aww they are so cute together 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2015 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 56

Thanks!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2015 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 56

Edward is so sweet!  Looking forward to the Thanksgiving chapter and the birth of Baby Matthew.

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2015 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 56

Glad Bella and the baby are OK. 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 55

Thanks!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 55

They're so sweet together!  Mrs. Anderson's gesture was so awesome!  You don't see a lot of acts of kindness like that anymore. Looking forward to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 55

Sweet date.   Glad they went.    Aww for supermarket.  That was nice

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2015 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 54

They are getting close.  I hope they are ready. 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2015 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 54

Thanks!

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2015 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 54

; )

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 54

Sweet that he is so attentive.  Only 5 years for Phil?  ugh  should be more. Ah well. Wonder how long till mommy dearest shows up again.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2015 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 53

Hmmm wonder how Renee found out?  Glad Em and all told her to go away.  

 

sweet presents.  I really like angela.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 52

nice date day.  Hate when servers overstep their bounds.   Alice is really annoying.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 52

Thanks!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2015 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 51

Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 51

Bella is so needy. It's crazy.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 51

Glad they liked the name and the party planning is going on.   Alice is a force of nature.  I agree with him about her not taking the bus late.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 51

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Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2015 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

I decided to re~readnfrom the beginning so I'll meet you at the end.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2015 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 50

Thanks!

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 50

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 50

They are too cute together.  Like the name they picked too.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 49

Great meeting with ben/Angela.  Hope they are as sweet/nice as they seem.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 49

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Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2015 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 49

Thanks

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2015 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 47

I couldn't deal with shopping with Alice. 

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 48

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Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2015 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 48

Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 46

They need a dose of reality.  It is nice that Edward's parents are supporting them. They won't always be able to spend most of their life in bed.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2015 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 46

Alice really needs a muzzle and a filter.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 46

Thanks!

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 46

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2015 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 45

I wouldn't want to deal with alice either.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2015 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 44

Yummy honeymoon time.  Nice of that man for wanting to pay

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2015 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 45

Thanks!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2015 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 44

Thanks!

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2015 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 45

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Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 43

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2015 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 43

Glad they had some nice beach time

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2015 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 43

Love it! Thanks ;)

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2015 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 42

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Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2015 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 42

Thanks!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2015 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 42

Helecopter over the volcano sounds cool

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2015 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 27

I wonder if her father left the house to her and Her Mom and Phil aren't saying anything and know they have come to find her because it has something to do with an inheritance her father left her

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2015 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 19

Finally she is at peace, at least for right now..

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 41

Thanks!

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2015 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 41

So sweet! Read you soon.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2015 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 41

nice vacation time.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2015 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 40

Thanks!

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