[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2020 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 35
Sorry about your Nana.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2018 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 41
excellent!!! Bravo
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2018 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow what a start
Date: 14 Jun 2018 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 41
ooh so glad those two got what was coming to them. everyone got their happy ending. i wanted to throttle jaspers dad for what he did. brava!!
Date: 07 Jun 2018 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
My second son was born at Phoenix Baptist.
Love...love...love Green Corn Tamale's . Can't find them where I live, either. Just wish there was a Rosarita's here.
I think the summer is a great time to get to know each.
Date: 07 Jun 2018 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
I remember Filiberto's very well. It was drive thru only when I lived there. Horchata was my favorite drink. I make it fresh now considering there isn't a restaurant in the area I live in that serves it.
As far as these two.... I can see them butting heads already.
Date: 06 Jun 2018 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I lived in AZ for nearly 16 years. I love reading E&B stories that involve areas I'm very familiar with.
Pretty good start on the first chapter. I love Mob stories, as well. I look forward to seeing where this story takes me.
Date: 31 May 2018 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 41
Beautiful story with great plots! Congratulations!
Date: 31 May 2018 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2018 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 41
Loved it! Thanks for devoting the time to write and post it.
Date: 24 May 2018 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 40
So sweet
Date: 24 May 2018 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 39
Yeah Bella!!!!
Date: 24 May 2018 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 36
What a dick move!
Date: 22 May 2018 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 39
The ending of Billy was EPIC! NICELY DONE!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2018 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 38
Hell yeah! Die mother f*cker!!!! Loved it!
Date: 22 May 2018 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 35
I'm so sorry for your loss! I bet she was phenomenal!
Date: 22 May 2018 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 31
I'm loving Alice's dad!!!!
Date: 21 May 2018 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 29
Love this chapter!!
Date: 18 May 2018 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 41
I loved the sentiment from Bella and her having Edward give her purity ring to their daughter. A very sweet way to end their story.
Date: 18 May 2018 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 41
Thank you. I really enjoyed this story.
Date: 18 May 2018 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 41
Thank you. I really enjoyed this story.
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2018 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 41
:) :) loved this story
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2018 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 40
The situation they've been through has only made them stronger.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2018 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 39
Reading on...
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
You have got to know the valley. Filibertos burritos Hun? I prefer their chimis. Another twific mentions the chorizo and egg burrito at Filibertos also , Last Friday Night by amandac3 that story takes place in Ahwatukee . I'm thrilled to read this completed story I have the weekend off and will spend it all with your story.
Date: 17 May 2018 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 40
Some how I missed reviewing this chapter. I'm glad Leah is getting a fresh start. But I'm also glad that Edward is going to keep an eye on her too. Love Edward and Bella reconnecting.
Date: 17 May 2018 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 41
Another great chapter. I have really enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing it with all of us.
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2018 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 41
Lovely ending. Thank you for writing and sharing
Date: 16 May 2018 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 39
What a proper way to deal with Billy. I hope all of them can move on now.
Date: 16 May 2018 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 40
Wow surprised Leah got to live. Nice of you to do that for her. Yummy end scene
Date: 15 May 2018 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 39
I love how all those that Billy killed came back for him! He got what he deserved and then some! Can’t wait for tomorrow’s chapter!!
Date: 15 May 2018 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 39
Justice was served
Date: 15 May 2018 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 39
That was perfect!
Date: 15 May 2018 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 39
Buh Bye Billy You Psychopath.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2018 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 39
He got what he deserved
Date: 15 May 2018 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 38
Wowser Jasper is one bad ass MF.
Date: 15 May 2018 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 38
I’m quite positive Hector has a whole new level of trust and respect for Jasper where Alice and Carmen are concerned. I can’t wait to see what pain and torture is inflicted on Billy for all that he has caused!
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2018 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 38
Loving all the updates lately. You almost had me squirming in my seat with the brutality but Jacob deserved every bit of it.
Sherry
Date: 14 May 2018 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 38
Oh my!!!!!!! Jasper is brutal.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2018 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 38
THAT TOOK SOME BIG BALLS TO DO BUT ....IT IS JASPER AFTER ALL ( wink wink )
READ YOU SOON
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2018 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 36
Oh shit!!! Time is cutting it close.
Sherry
Date: 13 May 2018 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 37
I'm glad they got there in time. Will we be getting Billy's POV of what happened to him? Can't wait for more. I'm assuming next we get to see what Jasper does to Jacob.
Date: 13 May 2018 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 37
HE SHOULD WITH HIS DICK UP HIS ASS. WOOO HOOOOO!!!!!
Date: 13 May 2018 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 36
Billy is very twisted
Date: 13 May 2018 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 36
Sadly too many males (I refuse to say men) like them exist in the world. Jake needs to fall down the steps or something. Although that is too good/easy out for him
Date: 13 May 2018 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 36
WELL HOT DAYUM! YOU KNOW IT WOULD'NT BE SUCH A BAD IDEA IF SHE BITES HIS DICK RIGHT OFF BEFORE EDWARD SAVES HER.... DON'T YOU THINK???? ( he he he )
READ YOU SOON
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2018 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 36
I'm so sorry for your loss
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2018 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 36
Hurry up Edward
Date: 12 May 2018 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 35
I love Carmen and her MacGyver ways. I look forward to her getting to Bella. Billy and Jacob are going down finally!!!
I am so sorry for the loss of your Great Grandmother. You are in my thoughts and prayers.
Date: 12 May 2018 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 35
I love Carmen and her MacGyver ways. I look forward to her getting to Bella. Billy and Jacob are going down finally!!!
I am so sorry for the loss of your Great Grandmother. You are in my thoughts and prayers.
Date: 12 May 2018 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 35
I'M SORRY FOR YOUR LOSS BUT BE HAPPY NANA VIRGINIA LIVED A LONG LIFE AND SHE IS NOW IN A BETTER PLACE. I'M SAD THAT YOU'RE NOT CONSIDERING A SEQUEL I WOULD HAVE LIKED TO SEE A FLUFFIER HAPPIER SIDE TO EDWARD AND BELLA BUT IF YOU CAN'T SEE THAT VISION THEN.... OH WELL.
READ YOU SOON
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2018 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 35
So sorry about your Nana
Date: 11 May 2018 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 35
I love this story and I am so glad the Calvary is on the way!
I am so sorry to hear about your Nana Virginia. It sounds like she was an amazing woman and Nana. My granny’s name was Virginia and I was named after her. I will keep you and your family in my thoughts and prayers.
Twi-sessed aka Virginia
Date: 11 May 2018 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 35
Sorry for your loss
Date: 11 May 2018 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 35
I am sorry to hear of your great grandmother 's passing. Her being an inspiration to you must be a wonderful blessing.
Please take this time for yourself and your family. Don't concern yourself with this story now. We, your readers, have been following you for sometime and will be here when you're ready.
Blessings to you and yours.
Date: 11 May 2018 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 35
I am sorry to hear of your great grandmother 's passing. Her being an inspiration to you must be a wonderful blessing.
Please take this time for yourself and your family. Don't concern yourself with this story now. We, your readers, have been following you for sometime and will be here when you're ready.
Blessings to you and yours.
Date: 11 May 2018 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 35
Dayum Carmen is a bad ass kid .Jacob is just pathetic. Lol for Carlisle 's surprise.
Sorry for your loss hun
Date: 11 May 2018 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 35
I am so sorry about your great grandmother.
Carmen is one smart girl. Glad Jasper and Edward are on their way with help.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2018 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 34
I'm biting my knuckles. The time is cutting close. Billy has completely lost it.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2018 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 33
That last line gave me chills.
Sherry
Date: 06 May 2018 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Saw this pix vand had to send itto you.
Date: 06 May 2018 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 34
Evil evil woman you are. Poor Leah. How the calvary comes for her soon.
Date: 05 May 2018 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 34
I definitely didn’t see that twist coming. Poor Bella. I don’t know how she’s going to avoid walking down the isle unless Edward and everyone get to her soon! I can’t wait for the next chapter. See you next week!
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2018 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 34
Please let Edward get to her next chapter
Date: 05 May 2018 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 34
Billy is CRAZY!!!!!!
Date: 04 May 2018 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 33
Billy has betrayed the wrong woman! Look out Billy! Can’t wait for the next half!
Date: 04 May 2018 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 33
Thank you!
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