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Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2018 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2018 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 41

ooh so glad those two got what was coming to them. everyone got their happy ending.  i wanted to throttle jaspers dad for what he did. brava!!

Reviewer: ReasonToBe Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2018 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

My second son was born at Phoenix Baptist. 

Love...love...love Green Corn Tamale's . Can't find them where I live, either. Just wish there was a Rosarita's here.

I think the summer is a great time to get to know each.

Reviewer: ReasonToBe Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2018 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

I remember Filiberto's very well. It was drive thru only when I lived there. Horchata was my favorite drink. I make it fresh now considering there isn't a restaurant in the area I live in that serves it.

As far as these two.... I can see them butting heads already. 

Reviewer: ReasonToBe Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2018 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

I lived in AZ for nearly 16 years. I love reading E&B stories that involve areas I'm very familiar with.

Pretty good start on the first chapter. I love Mob stories, as well. I look forward to seeing where this story takes me.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2018 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 41

Beautiful story with great plots! Congratulations!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2018 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2018 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 41

Loved it! Thanks for devoting the time to write and post it.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2018 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 40

So sweet

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2018 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 39

Yeah Bella!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2018 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 36

What a dick move!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2018 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 39

The ending of Billy was EPIC! NICELY DONE!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2018 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 38

Hell yeah! Die mother f*cker!!!! Loved it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2018 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 35

I'm so sorry for your loss! I bet she was phenomenal!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2018 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 31

I'm loving Alice's dad!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2018 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 29

Love this chapter!!

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2018 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 41

; )

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2018 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 41

Good story

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2018 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 41

Good story

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2018 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 41

Awe...

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2018 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 41

Great ending.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2018 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 41

I loved the sentiment from Bella and her having Edward give her purity ring to their daughter.  A very sweet way to end their story.  

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2018 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 41

Thank you. I really enjoyed this story.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2018 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 41

Thank you. I really enjoyed this story.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2018 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 41

:) :) loved this story 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2018 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 40

The situation they've been through has only made them stronger.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2018 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 39

Reading on...

Sherry

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2018 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

You have got to know the valley. Filibertos burritos Hun? I prefer their chimis. Another twific mentions the chorizo and egg burrito at Filibertos also , Last Friday Night by amandac3 that story takes place in Ahwatukee . I'm thrilled to read this completed story I have the weekend off and will spend it all with your story.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2018 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 40

Some how I missed reviewing this chapter. I'm glad Leah is getting a fresh start. But I'm also glad that Edward is going to keep an eye on her too. Love Edward and Bella reconnecting.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2018 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 41

Another great chapter. I have really enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing it with all of us. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2018 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 41

Lovely ending.  Thank you for writing and sharing

ty

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2018 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 40

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2018 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 40

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2018 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 40

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2018 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 39

What a proper way to deal with Billy. I hope all of them can move on now. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2018 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 40

Wow surprised Leah got to live. Nice of you to do that for her.  Yummy end scene 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 39

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 39

:) 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 39

I love how all those that Billy killed came back for him!  He got what he deserved and then some!  Can’t wait for tomorrow’s chapter!!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 39

Justice was served 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 39

Thanks!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 39

That was perfect! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 39

Buh Bye Billy You Psychopath.  

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 39

He got what he deserved

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 38

Wowser Jasper is one bad ass MF.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 38

I’m quite positive Hector has a whole new level of trust and respect for Jasper where Alice and Carmen are concerned.  I can’t wait to see what pain and torture is inflicted on Billy for all that he has caused! 

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 38

; )

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 38

Loving all the updates lately. You almost had me squirming in my seat with the brutality but Jacob deserved every bit of it.

Sherry

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2018 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 37

; )

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2018 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 38

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2018 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 38

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2018 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 38

Oh my!!!!!!! Jasper is brutal.  

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2018 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 38

THAT TOOK SOME BIG BALLS TO DO BUT ....IT IS JASPER AFTER ALL ( wink wink ) 

     READ YOU SOON

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2018 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 37

Wow.

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2018 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 37

:) 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2018 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 36

Oh shit!!! Time is cutting it close.

Sherry

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2018 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 37

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2018 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 37

I'm glad they got there in time. Will we be getting Billy's POV of what happened to him? Can't wait for more. I'm assuming next we get to see what Jasper does to Jacob. 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2018 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 37

HE SHOULD WITH HIS DICK UP HIS ASS. WOOO HOOOOO!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2018 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 36

Billy is very twisted

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2018 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 37

Finally! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2018 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 36

Sadly too many males (I refuse to say men) like them exist in the world.  Jake needs to fall down the steps or something.  Although that is too good/easy out for him

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2018 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 36

good

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2018 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 36

WELL HOT DAYUM! YOU KNOW IT WOULD'NT BE SUCH A BAD IDEA IF SHE BITES HIS DICK RIGHT OFF BEFORE EDWARD SAVES HER.... DON'T YOU THINK???? ( he he he )

     READ YOU  SOON 

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2018 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 36

; )

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2018 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 36

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2018 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 36

I'm so sorry for your loss 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2018 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 36

Hurry up Edward

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2018 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 35

I love Carmen and her MacGyver ways. I look forward to her getting to Bella. Billy and Jacob are going down finally!!!

I am so sorry for the loss of your Great Grandmother. You are in my thoughts and prayers.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2018 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 35

I love Carmen and her MacGyver ways. I look forward to her getting to Bella. Billy and Jacob are going down finally!!!

I am so sorry for the loss of your Great Grandmother. You are in my thoughts and prayers.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2018 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 35

Thanks!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2018 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 35

I'M SORRY FOR YOUR LOSS BUT BE HAPPY NANA VIRGINIA LIVED A LONG LIFE AND SHE IS NOW IN A BETTER PLACE. I'M SAD THAT YOU'RE NOT CONSIDERING A SEQUEL I WOULD HAVE LIKED TO SEE A FLUFFIER HAPPIER SIDE TO EDWARD AND BELLA BUT IF YOU CAN'T SEE THAT VISION THEN.... OH WELL.

     READ YOU SOON

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 35

So sorry about your Nana 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 35

:) 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 35

I love this story and I am so glad the Calvary is on the way!

I am so sorry to hear about your Nana Virginia.  It sounds like she was an amazing woman and Nana.  My granny’s name was Virginia and I was named after her.  I will keep you and your family in my thoughts and prayers. 

Twi-sessed aka Virginia 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 35

Write fast

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 35

Sorry for your loss 

Reviewer: Ellabell 2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 35

I am sorry to hear of your great grandmother 's passing.  Her being an inspiration to you must be a wonderful blessing. 

Please take this time for yourself and your family.  Don't concern yourself with this story now.  We, your readers, have been following you for sometime and will be here when you're ready.

Blessings to you and yours.

Reviewer: Ellabell 2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 35

I am sorry to hear of your great grandmother 's passing.  Her being an inspiration to you must be a wonderful blessing. 

Please take this time for yourself and your family.  Don't concern yourself with this story now.  We, your readers, have been following you for sometime and will be here when you're ready.

Blessings to you and yours.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 35

Dayum  Carmen is a bad ass kid .Jacob is just pathetic.  Lol for Carlisle 's surprise. 

 

Sorry for your loss hun

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 35

I am so sorry about your great grandmother.  

Carmen is one smart girl. Glad Jasper and Edward are on their way with help. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2018 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 34

I'm biting my knuckles. The time is cutting close. Billy has completely lost it.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2018 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 33

That last line gave me chills.

Sherry

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2018 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Saw this pix vand had to send itto you.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2018 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 34

Evil evil woman you are. Poor Leah.  How the calvary comes for her soon. 

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2018 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 34

; )

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2018 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 34

I definitely didn’t see that twist coming.  Poor Bella.  I don’t know how she’s going to avoid walking down the isle unless Edward and everyone get to her soon!  I can’t wait for the next chapter.  See you next week!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2018 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 34

Thanks!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2018 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 34

Please let Edward get to her next chapter

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 34

Billy is CRAZY!!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 34

Poor Leah 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 33

Billy has betrayed the wrong woman!  Look out Billy!  Can’t wait for the next half!

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 33

Thank you!

Xx 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 33

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 33

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2018 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 33

So intrigued, can't wait to read more soon. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2018 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 33

good :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2018 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 33

I'm glad Leah is going to help Bella. Leah has been through a LOT because of Billy.  I think that Leah really loved Billy. 

Reviewer: pink cactus2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2018 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 33

absolutely great chapter!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2018 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 33

At least Leah has woken the fuck up.  hope B can get out ok

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