[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2014 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
great chapter! Update soon!
Date: 16 Jan 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sobbing fucking mess here however I love this fic
Date: 16 Jan 2014 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can't thank you enough for all the love you out into your stories, blog and tumblr! The pics you choose are always so beautiful... I'm speechless looking at some of them...
The new beginning.... I'm sure all of this must be feeling so good but overwhelming at the same time!
Rose seems like a sweet enough person with a cero BS acceptance;) I'm very curious how this friendship will come along;)
Date: 16 Jan 2014 10:01 AM Title: Prologue
I'm not sure if I should glad that he had this one last good day to get his wishes off his chest, or sad because a very good man died to young to see his kids grow up and share the love with his wife....
I'm crying for a very sad beginning of a story and hope the best for Bella and your friend Pam! Please give her my condolonces even if it might be a "fresh" wound anymore in sure it still hurts!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2014 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
AS ALWAYS ANOTHER GREAT STORY TO LOOK FORWARD TOO.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2014 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful story so far and a great chapter. I don't know what it's like to lose a husband personally but I know what it feels like to lose some one unexpectedly, when I lost my uncle and cousin and I see the pain my aunt is still going through to this day from losing them. Because of this I like when I find stories that depict that grief realistically (or close to it) and then have them work on finding their new path in life.
Date: 16 Jan 2014 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think Alice is right about focusing on something other than Jacob's death and the kids. Bella is kind of in a hole and needs to slowly climb out and look around, notice that she's still alive, gain a little confidencemaybe. The reaction to the makeover was pretty sad, her thinking what's the use now, there's no one to appreciate it! Lucky she had Jake's family in Phoenix and she has her folfs and friends in Forks. Support is so vital to her now.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2014 3:21 AM Title: Prologue
Oh honey, what an excellent, but heartbreaking opening. I know it'll be a tough road, but I'm looking forward to Bella learning to live & love again.Thanks much.And hugs & condolences to your friend, Pam.Kat
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story it's starting out wonderfully. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 16 Jan 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I imagine it would be completely overwhelming no matter what age but to have two young kids as well , i think bella's doing the best she can
Date: 16 Jan 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
awww poor B. Really hard starting over. Wonderful build up
Date: 16 Jan 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2014 2:47 AM Title: Prologue
Crying my eyes out. He was so honest there at the end. Wow this one is going to be good.
Date: 10 Jan 2014 9:07 PM Title: Prologue
I'm in tears here
Date: 10 Jan 2014 4:42 AM Title: Prologue
Pancreatic cancer is a real bitch. I had an aunt who died of it. She was in her 70's but still had a lot of life in her before she became ill. She was given six months but we had almost a year with her and that was with no chemo. Her greatest concern was her hubby cause he was not in great health and she was one of those old school wives who had always done almost everything for him. Late one evening he got up to go to bathroom and had massive heart attack and died. Her reaction was that God had taken care of her biggest concern and now she did not have to worry about anything anymore and could go peacfully which she did a couple of months after him... Thanks for sharing your touching, sad story. Strength to your friend...
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2014 4:56 AM Title: Prologue
I find this ironic. My brother was just recently diagnosed with pancreatic cancer and has been struggling for months with the pain. His prognosis isn't good.
Needless to say, this chatper cut deep into my heart.
Bella can only move forward from here. I hope the next few chapters aren's as heart-wrenching.
Sherry
Date: 09 Jan 2014 1:17 AM Title: Prologue
Ok, way to make us cry! I guess that means it's all happy from here?? Anyway, I'm in.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 6:26 PM Title: Prologue
Wow, what a good start.. very tissue worthy: )
Can't wait for more: )
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:49 PM Title: Prologue
Is it stupid that I have tears running down my face?
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:30 PM Title: Prologue
need lots of tissues but great so far
Jukie
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2014 3:25 PM Title: Prologue
A very sad start. :( But I do enjoy your stories. You're a talented writer and I am looking forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2014 2:39 PM Title: Prologue
looking forward to reading this
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2014 11:48 AM Title: Prologue
It is a sad begining, but you have a great story to tell, I can feel it and so, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Great writing.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 8:48 AM Title: Prologue
I'm holding on to your promise of a happy endin, eventually. Pancreatic cancer is the pits, I know, as my mother died of it thirteen and a half years ago. Thankfully , Bella has the children and her father-in-law, and Jake's promise to always watch over them, maybe even find her another guy!
Date: 08 Jan 2014 7:39 AM Title: Prologue
I'M SURE IT WILL BE WORTH READING YOUR OFF TO A GREAT START. UPDATE SOON.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 7:06 AM Title: Prologue
Why do i feel like this is not the only time im going to cry like a baby!! ugh i love this cant wait for more and im so sorry for your friends lost.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 6:22 AM Title: Prologue
OMG Im speechless
Cant wait to read this...cathy
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:31 AM Title: Prologue
As sad as it is that he passed at least they got the chance to say goodbye and she got to hear what he wanted for her.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:29 AM Title: Prologue
So heartbreaking! :( Jake sure sounded like a wonderful husband & father. I'm sure he'll be watching them from Heaven just like he promised. ;)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:13 AM Title: Prologue
Fantastic beginning! Can't wait to read this story!
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:13 AM Title: Prologue
Tears are still rolling
But im in
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:06 AM Title: Prologue
That was so sad! :(. I'm here for more tho.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:01 AM Title: Prologue
Great now I'm crying! Can't wait till the handsome cop shows up!
Date: 08 Jan 2014 3:34 AM Title: Prologue
That was a tough first chater. Looking forward to more.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 3:11 AM Title: Prologue
very emotional chapter, I watched my sister in law raise 5 kids when my brother died of cancer at 45yrs...God bless your friend to be strong..
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2014 2:55 AM Title: Prologue
Great new story! Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2014 2:29 AM Title: Prologue
wow having just watched my close friend lose her mom to stage four pancreatic cancer this chapter hit a nerve. It really does happen that fast its a matter of months and just it blindsides you. I was sobbing by the end of this chapter you did an amazing job
Date: 08 Jan 2014 2:24 AM Title: Prologue
omg poor jake and bella. im tearing up right now. i hope that john and gracie can understand that their dad is watching over them from heaven and also that they can get though this rough time without jake there. keep up the good work
Date: 08 Jan 2014 2:18 AM Title: Prologue
Great start to the story, though it is very sad to start out. I feel horrible for Bella and the kids.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 1:04 AM Title: Prologue
Looking forward to reading this.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 12:56 AM Title: Prologue
Always good people and kids who get these crappy diseases.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2014 12:32 AM Title: Prologue
That is so very sad. I look forward to reading more.
I lost my mum to cancer recently and its really tough watching someone you love waste away like that. My prays are with your friend and her family.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 12:26 AM Title: Prologue
So sad :( I could not imagine losing my husband :( Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 08 Jan 2014 12:25 AM Title: Prologue
Well it's a sad start to a story, I am really looking forward to reading this. So glad it has started.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2014 12:10 AM Title: Prologue
*wipes away the tears so I can see my keyboard*
This is a beautifully written start to another of your amazing stories.. In the short amount of time it took me to read this chapter, you managed to tug at my heart strings and the memories of the emotions I felt when I lost my own father back in 2000 within 8 months of his diagnoses of both lung and melinomia cancer.
Bravo Tufano!! Bravo!! on the start of another brillantly written masterpiece :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2014 12:02 AM Title: Prologue
That was so sad! I lost my father to cancer and it was awful! I watched him disappear before my very eyes and even 19 years later it hurts so I can't imagine what your friend is going through.
I can't wait for the happier times, for your characters and your dear friend.
Date: 07 Jan 2014 11:48 PM Title: Prologue
always looking forward to a new story !