Date: 09 Oct 2017 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
sorry but bella is being such a child. she automatically assumes without
both sides to the story. she hardly knows this maggie and she would
believe her rather than the man she loves. yes, she had bad history with men
but who hasnt? but we all know that does not mean all men are lying cheating
degenerates....bella needs to reach a level of maturity which she hasnt yet to
learn to listen to all sides then react rather than react without listening to get all of the
facts. idk, honestly, she annoys the hell out of me...lol.
Date: 07 Oct 2017 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hiya love this fiction, and glad your back into it...thank you.
One wee favour to ask? Any chance you can repost some chapters? The problem is that some of them do not respond to increasing the size of the font....making reading on a tablet or phone pretty much impossible.
Thank you! Love your work. X T
Date: 02 Oct 2017 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 18
I think Bella is being stupid. She needs to learn to listen and trust. She acts like she was waiting for a reason to be hurt. Yes, she says she loves him, but she needs to realize that part of love is trust. She was suppose to ask questions not blow up.
Date: 02 Oct 2017 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
whoots fianally caught ups love it sofar ...ignore the trolls trust me if i worried about my spoelling i would never tyupe anything lol. and sorry i have not takken grammer sincewhat the 5th 6th grade? so yeah dun worry about it. great story keep up the good work i egerly await your nrxt chappys and as i have finally caught up i am off to fave this story :)
Date: 11 May 2017 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
No. Pronblem. I completely understand, as I too am finishing my first year of grad school and preparing for Summer classes. Take your time, but don't forget about this story. Your stories have amazing premises, and I can't wait to find out what's next!
Date: 10 May 2017 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
Are you going to update soon?
Hopefully soon. Sorry for the delay but i am finishing up my first year of grad school which occupies a good portion of my time. Hoping to have an update up in the next few weeks.
Date: 28 Dec 2016 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really confused at the review for chapter 16 when the maggie thing happens in 17? perhaps i shouldnt have read these first? I am going to assume he ended things with her before he even found Bella again but that is because i am a HUGE Edward supporter <3 !!
It's just a general note as I was getting so many comments about Edward being a cheater that it was just easy to address it now than later before I got anymore hate.
Date: 12 Aug 2016 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
Bella will finally see that he is a slimeball cheater like the rest and loose another friend....POOR BELLA
Can I ask why you think Edward is a cheater? He was technically single and had no attachments to Bella when he slept with Maggie and as far as he was concerned at that point in time sure he would ever Bella again as she was at that point a one night stand. Nevertheless, all will be revealed . This is an E/B story. If you choose to further read you'll see and if not thank you for reading up to this point.
Xoxo Sylvia Cullen