Date: 27 Dec 2014 11:01 AM Title: rough housing
Loved it I really hope you update soon
Date: 16 Sep 2014 8:10 PM Title: rough housing
oh no oh no oh no shanice done fucked everything up by fucking around with alejandro!
Author's Response:
lmbo but he is so irresitable! it would be hard not to fuck around with alejandro.
Date: 29 Aug 2014 4:41 PM Title: Everday thing
OMG! How could Charlie do that? :o, One time okay but SIX? WTF??????
oh and I'm Brazilian so just wanted to make some correction about the translations, the first one is not make sence sorry, you should put "transar com você" and the second one should be "seu filho da puta".
Author's Response:
lmao yeah that is all google translation hahaha i dont speak portugese unfortunately
Date: 06 Jul 2014 6:24 AM Title: rough housing
Thank you for this yummy yummy update! I needed something to get my mind off your last update of your other story. ;). This will help me have fantastic dreams & no nightmares! I love how Isabella & Edward had a knock down drag out! Now what does Alejandro & Edward have going on?
Date: 20 Jun 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
please keep uploading, it's so good!!!
Date: 18 Jun 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
I can't even imagine how they are ever going to get along?
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2014 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love it can not wait for more.great story.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2014 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
That was just crazy. A good crazy.
Thanks for putting the translations immediately after. I hate when they are at the end of the chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2014 7:56 AM Title: Party time!
Can't wait to see who this green eyed guy is.
Date: 29 May 2014 7:43 AM Title: first day of school
I feel sorry for Charlie.
Date: 29 May 2014 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
These brats crack me up.
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2014 7:08 AM Title: Everday thing
Story seems like it's gonna be good.
I bet their mom is sending them to keep on eye on their dad.
Date: 25 May 2014 12:51 PM Title: Party time!
Good start so far. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 24 May 2014 10:59 AM Title: Party time!
Can u please finish this story so far it's great!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2014 3:22 AM Title: Party time!
Love it,can't wait for more.great writing.
Date: 23 May 2014 8:15 AM Title: Party time!
She now we're talking how can their mom be do blazie about Charlie's infidelity I'd fucking kill him
Date: 23 May 2014 3:41 AM Title: Party time!
I just love this story and I love that you're updating again! Please keep it up and update soon! We finally meet edward? Can't wait for more! :)
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2014 2:39 AM Title: Party time!
the girls are going to be truble i love it
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2014 9:31 PM Title: first day of school
wow i love this ch
Date: 22 May 2014 6:04 PM Title: first day of school
I absolutely live it is the fullness coming in to play Charlie the cheating bastard he's something else please if u can regular updates
Date: 22 May 2014 3:43 PM Title: first day of school
These girls need a reality check. It is no wonder their mom sent them away. She didn't want to deal with them anymore. Plus she wanted to punish their dad. It would be great if they were cut off from the money. They need something to shake them up to be decent people.
Date: 22 Feb 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
There are so many kids to keep up with! I love all of them already, Especially the twins!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
love this story can't wait for an update
Date: 04 Jan 2014 4:43 AM Title: Everday thing
I like it. Its different
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2014 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
OMG, I truly love this story. It centainly won't be dull!
Date: 02 Jan 2014 3:48 AM Title: Everday thing
These are some bad girls. Will they be redeemed somehow?
Date: 02 Jan 2014 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
More mire mode
Date: 01 Jan 2014 4:09 PM Title: Everday thing
im interested more plz
Date: 01 Jan 2014 12:10 PM Title: Everday thing
What s plot more plesse