Date: 06 Feb 2022 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really love this.please post the sequel and finish it. Please..
Date: 25 May 2017 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 23
Great fic! Thank you for writing and sharing your story.
Date: 08 Aug 2016 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 23
Lmao loved this story
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2016 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh my goodness.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2016 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
Holy moly she killed Aro.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2016 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love this story.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2016 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm glad I found this rec on FB. I've enjoyed it. Can't wait to start the sequel.
There's no chapter 12.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2016 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
I don't know what to believe.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2016 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
She's one stupid cop. She could fuck up the whole investigation.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2016 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm already hooked!
Date: 23 Mar 2016 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 23
Does this story have a sequel coming? It just seems like there is more. Does she actually marry Edward, what about the baby, just the Cullen's all together? I mean there is so much left unsaid.
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2015 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
Hi, I competed this story on FFN.net but was unable to read the sequel.
Will you be posting Blood Lines here as well?
I hope to finish reading your great Story.
Moltz
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2015 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow so good it's amaing its so smart written congrats honestly
Date: 24 Jan 2015 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 23
I didn't catch any signs of her being preggers. I normally do so that was really good writing!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 22
What a way to answer him! Nothing like giving him something to live & kill for!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 21
She is getting so much great training with all she is learning from Edward! I love that Edward put Emmett in his place about Rosalie!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
Yes I wanted a yes but I understand that I can't have it yet. I did enjoy the morning wake up!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
Please say yes Bella!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
He really wants to be with her but she neeeeds so much softening!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
He does want to marry her!!!! That does make me very very happy!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
Jacob is a part of this too.
Date: 24 Jan 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 15
So she got the holding she wanted! Aro is dead! She is becoming the perfect mob wife.
Date: 24 Jan 2015 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 13
He left his mark on her!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
Something is just a pawn. I wasn't sure.
Date: 23 Jan 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
They are flirting & she likes the view!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2015 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
Staying with Edward already! Here we go!
Date: 23 Jan 2015 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
So Bella & edward might know each other. I am wondering if Edward was kidnapped as a child and that's why maybe e was in foster care,
Date: 23 Jan 2015 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
He is making her into a cop that he has total control of.
Date: 23 Jan 2015 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella is moving to the dark side. Or the yummy side.
Date: 23 Jan 2015 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward mason is the missing son of the Cullen's. I think they gave him a different last name so they could get him into politics.
Date: 23 Jan 2015 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh wow! Now we have some problems!
Date: 23 Jan 2015 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
Holy crap she shot him!
Date: 23 Jan 2015 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
He is the one that disappeared into the club.
Date: 24 Oct 2014 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I've just recently found this story and it is amazing. I was wondering if this is the end or if you will be placing a sequel. It is amazing and had me drawn in to the last word
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 23
great story. can't wait for part 2 :) i know it won't be sunshine and rainbows but i do hope there's a HEA for them. and what is it about Esme?
Date: 29 Sep 2014 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just got done reading and this has to be one of my fave mafia stories. Are you going to be posting Bloodlines on this site or is it somewhere else?
P.S. You are a great writer
Date: 26 Sep 2014 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved the story. Read the story start to finish yesterday when I was supposed to be working ... well it was just too interesting. I read this on fanfiction.net so I started Bloodlines, too. Today as I was reading Sympathy for the Devil it got pulled.
Anyway I would love to preread/beta your stories.
Date: 30 Aug 2014 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 23
That's just mean ending it like this .... Can't wait for the sequel putting you on alerts so I don't miss it ..... Love this bella btw she is bad ass
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
I know I'm late reading this story but why would she think the Cullens had anything to do with these murders?
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh oh poor Seth. Hope Edward and Bella can get him out. Again love your story and thank you
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love it!!! I can't wait to see what's next thanks for keeping the suspense
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2014 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love how slowly they are starting to like each other
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love Bella and Edwards characters
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
Thank you for another awsome chapter. Great writing
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
Another great chapter
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is such a great story. Love your characters
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
I absolutely love this story
Date: 07 Jan 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Making popcorn..... Laughed every time I re-read it :') Brilliant line. Enjoying the story very much.
Date: 29 Dec 2013 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm enjoying your story very much. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 28 Dec 2013 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well it is too short for much. So Seth is implicated, now what?
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2013 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love this story! Can't wait for more!
Date: 28 Dec 2013 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
Unbelievable story did well written what a plot line
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2013 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
oh goodness seth how are you mixed up in the mess
can't wait for more
loving it, thank you
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2013 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 8
i am lost
how does esme know bella
oh my it keeps getting better and better
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2013 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh bella i'd tell you to run but you won't and he won't let you either
wow
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2013 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 6
blown away
oh bella leave it be
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2013 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
i still think edward is the son that everyone thinks died and they reinvented him to be what they needed
love it
bella you are in over your head
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2013 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds great! Thanks for sharing!
Date: 28 Dec 2013 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
keep it coming!! lol i love it!
Date: 28 Dec 2013 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well I am waiting for all this foreplay to be over with already.
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh bella you seem to get your self into trouble so easily
i am hoping for the best
love it
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2013 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
i am wondering how he knew her parents where murdered
wow alot of information
can't wait to see what happens next
love it
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
well this will be intresting
i can't wait for more
Date: 27 Dec 2013 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
I am loving this story. I beleive I read this on another site awhile back but I haven't seen an update in awhile.