Date: 01 May 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 106
Wow shit that was Wow ;)
Date: 01 May 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 106
Oh my God that was so hot! I love this side of Edward and it's good to see Bella so confident! Great chapter!!
Date: 01 May 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 106
He's just ... Gah! *drools*
Date: 01 May 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 105
Holly hell that is hot ;)
Date: 30 Apr 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 105
Looking forward to the next chapter! I like this Edward ;)
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 105
I'm loving this story can't wait for more
Date: 30 Apr 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 105
OH MY GOODNESS! You are killing me with the build up of them about to get their freak on! Granted I could kiss the ground you walk on since Edward is going to be the next chapter!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 105
OOOh Sexy Domward coming out. Love it.
Date: 30 Apr 2014 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 105
Edward is going to get all freaky on her!!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 105
Fuckward!!! ha ha I LOVE it!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 105
he's super hot!!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 105
Gah! I love this Edward!!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 105
More like your pervy mind love it
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 105
I love your Hornyward!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 105
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 29 Apr 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 105
I'm sorry you've received some negative reviews recently. I think your portrayal of Bella's insecurities reflect how many women feel after bad relationships. She's not going to magically believe she's perfect and Edward will never change. Changing such beliefs takes time. I know it's fiction but I'd rather have this more realistic version than her transforming over night so they can have their HEA. Keep up the great writing.
Date: 29 Apr 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 104
My hand is raised!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 104
Absolutely fantastic chapter!! Can't wait for the club! Thanks :)
Date: 29 Apr 2014 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 64
Poor Bella she sounds like my aunt right before Christmas she fell on ice and broke her right wrist she was out of work for 3 mouths and then when she went back a week later she fell at work and broke her left wrist I told her she needs some bubble wrap lol
Date: 29 Apr 2014 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 104
My hand is raised to say I'm SUPER excited for public indecency! Dirty mouth Edward is sweet goodness!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 104
Sounds like fun to me ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 104
I love your characters! When ever I get an update, I am psyched. Those other trash talkers need to get a life. This is FICTION! and you are a master writer! Love you and your creative genius!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 104
OMG! I love it! I cant wait for the date! :)=)
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 104
The answer is YES!!!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 104
In answer to your last question....pick me!!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 104
Yes!!!!!! Cannot wait for more!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 104
You gotta mix the sweet with the dirty boy. Can't wait!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 104
Awesome! Very sweet! Time to play! ;)
Date: 29 Apr 2014 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 104
*waves her arm over her head*
Me! Oh, pick me! LOL
Date: 28 Apr 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 104
Love the sweet and the dirty.
Date: 28 Apr 2014 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 103
I'm with b about cost of clothes. Utterly ridiculous.
Date: 28 Apr 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 104
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 28 Apr 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 103
I love your story and your writing style and I am totally in agreement on the don't like don't read!!!
While I hope Bella starts to believe Edward's feelings for her are real and won't change, what she has gone through in past relationships is nothing short of abussive. For every negative comment a person hears it takes 10 positive ones to override it. So it will just take time and patience for Edward to convince Bella she is worth it.
Date: 28 Apr 2014 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 103
Edward really is doing very great with helping Bella to see it's HER he loves, not her body or what they can do together!
Alice is a sweet friend, $600 for a dress for a friend?! Hallelujah;)
Date: 28 Apr 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 103
I'm sorry. I didn't realize that we were required to leave nothing but flowery, pretty reviews.
Date: 28 Apr 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 103
I'm sorry people said that about your writing and about this Bella. I might think she's foolish about counseling, because ... let's face it, until she vomits out the poison, it's going to keep making her sick ... BUT, I know of people who refuse help until they hit the VERY BOTTOM. Some people KNOW they new help, but are too stubborn to get it until they are faced with losing everything of value, and even then, some people are too proud to get outside help. (Just watch the show hoarders. Apples and oranges, but same general idea.)
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 103
How cute is Edward. I'm enjoying this story.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 100
Wow that was HOT.
Date: 28 Apr 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 103
PLZ IGNORE ALL THE RUDE COMMENTS. THE STORY IS BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 103
Yay for shopping! I love purple! tee hee
Date: 28 Apr 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 103
Wow Edward is so sweet if that does not say I love you dont know what else will ;)
Date: 28 Apr 2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 102
I like that Bella is talking to Alice about things.
Date: 28 Apr 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 103
Keep writing darling! Don't let the turkeys get you down! This story wouldn't be as good if it was just another cookie cutter Bella.
Date: 28 Apr 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 103
Thanks for the bonus chapter!! :)
Date: 28 Apr 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 103
So amazing!!! I love her dress!
Date: 28 Apr 2014 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 103
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 103
I apologize for not reviewing before, but have been reading all along...I love your Bella because she seems more real-like most of us are!!!! Thinking she is fat, or not pretty enough....So do not listen to those other reviews-I think your story is great and I am really enjoying it!
Date: 28 Apr 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 103
Write your story: don't worry about the 1% who are critical. It's your story, not theirs. Let them write their own.
Alice seemed to get through to Bella a little bit!
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 102
Looking forward to some lemons...
:)
Date: 27 Apr 2014 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 102
she is just too stubborn. She really needs an outside opinion on everything
Date: 27 Apr 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 102
Stubborn and somewhat foolish.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 102
I understand Bella wanting to try on her own but without the tools I don't know how far she will get. Hopefully she won't give up on everything before she works stuff out.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed reading this story in the beginning. There was substance to the plot and the characters and of course, great lemons. I couldn't wait for the next chapter to see what would happen! The thing is, I know that Bella has some really low self-esteem issues that need to be worked out (don't we all) however, lately, you're chapters have seemed like one big run-on sentence that never seems to end or move the characters forward. It's like the story is just standing still. I've stopped looking forward to new chapters because they are all the same. I will continue to read this story in hopes that it will move forward and be just as great as it was in the beginning. Please?
Date: 27 Apr 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 102
looking forward to more
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 101
I can't tell you how much I love this story. Just like every other story you write, fantastic.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 96
Isn't it wonderful to be loved for who you are?
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 101
I expect Bella not to get therapy until after she has or nearly has sabotaged her relationship with Edward.
I'm so looking forward to them moving forward with their lives and getting their HEA.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 99
Paul is a royal ass. I wish Edward would had decked him.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 98
Bella should talk to someone about her low self-esteem.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 101
I hope Bella realizes her worth soon
Date: 26 Apr 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 101
OMG how dumb is this bella i get that she needs therapy but why hsnt she done anything about it . also she is friends with edward and alice so why has she not trusted that knowledge i just want to slap her silly and shack/smack some sense into her
Date: 25 Apr 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 101
Thanks! She needs to work on her self esteem.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 101
You should take your own advice J and get out there maybe writing this will be therapeutic gun lol your t.v. Friend Sabrina'
Date: 25 Apr 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 101
This is new to her she is not use to being treated well. Being treated well scares the shit out of her. I hope when she sees Paul again she punchs him in the face.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm afraid I have become very tired of this Bella. Edward may not be walking away but I'm afraid I am. Bless their hearts, I wish them luck. But as it is they are one boring couple. Sorry.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 101
Low self esteem can be a very stubborn foe but at least Bella recognizes that she has an issue. Just keep reminding yourself to fight those thoughts Bella. Hopefully one day she will realize there are people who can give her tools to help fight them. Edward will just have to outlast the negative thoughts. Hopefully by the time Bella runs into Paul, she will be strong enough to tell him off. That would be great. I just hope Bella stubbornness does not get the best of her. One advantage to Edward and Bella living together is that he can help remind her of all good things in lots of small ways everyday.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 101
Oh for the love of...Bella, Bella, Bella...smh ;)
I love this!! :)
Date: 25 Apr 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 101
ok, someone smack her and snap out of it.
Where is Cher when you need her!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 101
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 25 Apr 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 101
I really want to see Edward call in an anonymous tip to Paul's school and let them know about his despicable behavior with students.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 101
Girl you need therapy and FAST
Date: 24 Apr 2014 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 100
Keep working on her.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 100
Best chapter in a long time!! Loved it!! Keep em coming please!
Thank you!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 100
She has to feel the love coming from him. He is so sweet and caring love him. Paul is just gross and needs to be turned in.