Date: 12 May 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 112
Hmm... That was sneaky of Edward, gathering intell in a subtle way. And it gave Bella something else to think about. At least her thoughts are a question more than an instant negative. A small step in the the right direction.
Date: 12 May 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 112
B's idea of a wedding sounds good to me.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 111
HOW can Bella NOT love Edward, yet??? She can live with him & share her body intimately, MANY times, yet she doesn't love him at all, "yet"?!? Such a HO!!! Here he unfortunately loves her, yet he can't even say it to her because of her petty problems & issues. I bet he'd be hurt to know that she doesn't love him at all, "yet". She's a complete IDIOT!!! A cold fish!!! :(
It's such an unfair, one sided relationship. What's poor Edward get out of this besides some occasional sex? I've said it before, MANY times, & I'll say it again...she is so WEIRD!!! I honestly can't stand her, & I DON'T think she deserves someone as great as Edward, WHATSOEVER!!! She's a total waste of his time...of everything! :(
If I were Esme, there is NO way in hell I'd want my son with such a dysfunctional tramp like Bella, let alone for her to birth any grandchildren of mine! Either Esme's drinking is effecting her, or she's completely stupid & blind! :(
Date: 09 May 2014 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 111
Esme is a blast.
Date: 09 May 2014 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 111
I wonder if Esme will light the candles for them lol.
Date: 09 May 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 111
Hopefully Bella won't let her insecurities take over in light of the enthusiastic reception from Edwards family. I could see her becoming overwhelmed. Although so far she seems to be ok. Poor Edward is embarrassed enough for the both of them. Looks like they will need to keep their sense of humor this trip. I do like Esme's enthusiasm though.
Date: 08 May 2014 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 111
Loving your Bella and Edward as well as Esme she reminds me of my mom!
Date: 08 May 2014 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 111
I loved Esme, too. She just cut right to the chase.
Date: 08 May 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 111
Fun chapter. Way too short. Sorry for complaining about that. Just when it gets good it done. Love it but frustrating. Oh well :). Bring it.
Date: 08 May 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 111
looking forward to more
Date: 08 May 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 111
I really love this!! :)
Date: 08 May 2014 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 111
Yeah, Esme is a riot! I know MY mom wouldn't be asking me to make babies under her roof, even after almost 15years of marriage!!
Date: 07 May 2014 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 110
I'm very excited bout the defilement of Edwards bedroom!
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2014 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 110
defile it!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07 May 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 110
LOVE,LOVE,LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 06 May 2014 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 110
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 06 May 2014 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 110
Way to go Bella. Longer chapter next time... Please.
Date: 06 May 2014 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 110
Edward is loving it he loves her being playful.
Date: 06 May 2014 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 109
Edward is right that ass hole needs to be stoped Bella needs to understand it is the right thing to do not her just being a vindictive ex.
Date: 06 May 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 110
looking forward to more
Date: 06 May 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 110
I love her!! :)=)
Date: 06 May 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 110
Great chapter, happy that bella is trying to feel better about herself and trying to get through to her self that edward is not perfect.
Date: 06 May 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 110
Nice to see a more confident Bella. Her comment about getting her image of a perfect Edward out of her head is actually a really important one. If she sees that they each have their own flaws, it will help her see them both as equals, which is a key to any healthy relationship. It's a good start anyway.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 110
Bwahahahahahaha! Poor Emmy Bear! That was funny tho! ;D
Date: 06 May 2014 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 110
Em is such a goober big bro. Can't wait for Esme/Carlisle
Date: 06 May 2014 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 110
ROTFL
Date: 06 May 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 109
Go Bella, quite the insight! Maybe, she would feel more secure if Edward told he loved her...maybe even more if he proposed and she knew he wasn't going anywhere. Not that I want to rush the story.
Date: 05 May 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 109
Report him so he can't do it to others. B is lucky she didn't get an STI from the scum bag.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2014 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 109
I hope they nail that bastard Paul to the freaking wall by his pathetic penis!!!!
Date: 05 May 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 109
I hope Bella squeals on Paul as soon as Edward digs up more info.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 109
Yes! Woo hoo! Let Edward do it, Bella! Get Paul!
Date: 05 May 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 109
Admitting you need help is half the battle. It sounds like she has a good handle on her issues. I don't blame her for wanting to try it on her own but I'm glad she set a deadline. Hopefully Edward will help her see if her self help is working or not.
Date: 05 May 2014 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 109
If the girl wasn't underage, I'd say let it go but the girl's age def mekes all the difference in my opinon.
Date: 05 May 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 109
I am disappointed this chapter did not address Edward's treatment of Bella in the last chapter - he was clearly uncomfortable with what he was doing I am not so sure he was actually enjoying it when he had to turn off his feelings in order to hit her (yes spanking is hitting and her response was understandable - spanking stimulates the nerves responsible for arousal - it is purely a physical response) I would have liked a explanation of his reasons after he keeps professing his respect for her and how he would never treat her like her previous boyfriends yet he goes on to use and abuse her apparently against his better judgement or is it that really underneath it all he is no better than the rest of them??
I would be grateful if next there is BDSM activity, and yes it was that, you would give a clearer warning, thank you . Apart from that particular chapter I have enjoyed this story immensely.
Date: 05 May 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 109
LOVE THIS! Can't wait!! :)
Date: 05 May 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 109
Bella needs to report Paul.
Date: 05 May 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 109
looking forward to more
Date: 04 May 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 108
That was actually a complete turn off for me I couldn't even read it properly after the first bit. He felt it was wrong to hit her so why the hell did he continue - to me he has just confirmed her belief that she is only good for being used by men.
Date: 04 May 2014 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 108
OH MY!!!! That was just WOW! Please update soon!
Date: 04 May 2014 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 108
Just saying...I'm with you!
hot!
Date: 04 May 2014 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 108
LOVE!!!!!!! :)=)
Date: 04 May 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 108
In my dreams lol.
Date: 04 May 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 107
Roll play is fun stuff.
Date: 04 May 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 108
That was HOTTTT !!!! It's always good to spice it up sometimes...see you next time :)
Date: 04 May 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 108
Dayummmmm Hawtness!!!!
Date: 04 May 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 108
Don't we all?!
Date: 04 May 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 108
All I can say is So Hot! I think its nice that Edward is always paying attention to her in the back of her mind but it seems Bella enjoyed the fact that it didn't stop him from role playing. I bet they will sleep well tonight.
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 108
Whew! I need a cigarette.
Date: 04 May 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 108
hot hot hot ... cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 04 May 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 108
That was so hot!! Wonder what they'll be trying next...? Great chapter!! Thanks!
Date: 04 May 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 108
Gah!! I am almost a puddle of goo!
Date: 03 May 2014 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 107
Gah, yes! More!
Date: 03 May 2014 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 107
Too hot looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2014 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 107
Uh oh now they are Domward and Subbella! Nice.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2014 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 107
++++++++++++++++++
Date: 03 May 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 107
Woo-hoo! Get yer freak on! 😏
Date: 03 May 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 107
I normally like your short chapters but I'm hating this one. I'm soooo looking forward to chapter 108!
Date: 03 May 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 107
a little role play is good
Date: 02 May 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 106
Go Edward! I am glad that Bella can see that even though he is being forward, he is still treating her with respect. I especially liked the part about him making her lunches, even staying up late to do it. I assume that is part of his list of the small things to do for Bella. So far, so good Edward.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2014 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 106
Loved it! Very hot!
Date: 01 May 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 106
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 01 May 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 106
Awwww, such a giving boyfriend!
Date: 01 May 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 103
Hey:
I'm really sorry that you have buttholes reading your work! I think that your characters are wonderful! I think they dislike the fact that this Bella is "REAL", if you get my meaning.
i love everything about this story; so, please continue writing it 😉!
Date: 01 May 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 106
Great chapter! Love this story!!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 106
*wimpers* Gah!
Date: 01 May 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 106
seriously hot!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 May 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 106
*raises hand*
I LOVE THIS!!! :D
Date: 01 May 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 106
ooooh naughty naughty. LOVE IT.
Date: 01 May 2014 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 106
hot hot hot looking forward to more of that
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 106
A whole new wardrobe .... Omg that was fans myself hot.