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Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 117

You got to take Paul down. Obviously Bella is not the first victim.

Reviewer: Rachael Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 117

Take the fucker down!

Reviewer: roxy34145 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 117

If she has any hope of overcoming what Paul did without going to therapy then revenge is definitely in order.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2014 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 117

Bwahahaha!!! That's my Emmy Bear! ROFLMAO!! ;D

 

I said it before, but I'll say it again, since you asked, Paul needs to be taken down. It'd be interesting if he and Rosalie once knew each other...

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 117

Hot shower scene. I think Paul needs to go down, but I think Edward should pull the strings behind the scenes to get it done. Bella doesn't need to be involved with that slob any more.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 116

Loved it :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 115

Loved it :)

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 116

Thanks!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 116

Always good but way too short. 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 116

I hope he does tell her. I think she could respond decently to it.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 116

:)

Reviewer: Shemilliah Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 116

So do parent's really pester their kids to get pregnant?
That really weird. And maybe selfish?!

I hope thd infofmation Edward just shared doesn't give Esme the right to go and confront Bella since its none her business.
And besides Edward working to reassure bella, what is bella doing to reassure Edward she wont bolt anytime?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 116

I think Esme is the bomb

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 115

I hope she will say it in her sleep so he can hear.  She is not use to feeling the love but she better get use to it ;)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 116

aww esme is so sweet.  lol  immaculate conception lol

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 115

yummy.  hope she'll be able to say it out loud soon

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 116

Awww!! That was so sweet! Loved their little chat!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 116

=)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 116

Esme and Edward are adorable! :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 116

Mom may help Bella along a little bit.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 116

Cute chapter

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 115

Thanks!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 115

I think they are making headway.

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 115

I think it's so very interesting how different the opinions on characters are in faction! I wouldn't even dare to think bad about Bella, and here you are defending her again for such ridiculous statements:(

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 115

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 115

=)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 115

So adorable! Loved this! :)

 

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 115

These two just keep getting hotter... I hope Bella will feel comfortable enough to tell Edward how she really feels about him soon.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 115

I love this story! I hope the ILY will be soon! I can't wait! This is so fantastic!! :)

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 115

I think Edward really needs to say the words first.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 115

Oh my.  He's wearing her down. While he's at that they need to take down the disgusting teacher.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 115

After the night she just had, I don't think it will be long before they both say the words. Great chapter!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 114

Hawt dayum.  Go bad ass bella

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 114

Loved it :)

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 114

Hells yes!

Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 114

I want the ILY!  These two are so damn stuborn!!!!

Great chapter!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 114

Um, yeah baby. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 114

:)

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 114

Shower lemons are always good!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 114

She just loves to make him happy because he makes her happy something she has never had before.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 114

Why not a 69? *wiggles eyebrows like Emmett* ;)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 114

=)

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 114

Wow that was a scorcher....now it's Bella's turn :) see you next time !!!!

Reviewer: gabrylla Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 114

Damn that was HOT!!!! I need some new panties, you sure know how to write that. 

 

Awesome story so far, I can't wait for more

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 114

Oh, yeah!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 114

Aww...so sweet! ;) I love these two! :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 114

Hot!!

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 113

I wonder if Edward will remember the vomit part with Bella recreating that night. I like this story.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 113

I just love lemons with Edward.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 108

Too hot for words.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 107

I loved this chapter.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 105

I love Edward's pervy mind!!!

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 84

You just reminded me that I like Conundrum wine. I haven't had it in a while. It's a good summer white wine. Think I'll pick up a bottle soon.

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 78

Edward will apologize if Bella sticks around. She might get on a flight out of there.

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 71

So it's fear of rejection? She thinks Edward is too perfect for her and he couldn't possibly stay with her? If that's the case, I understand her actions a little more.

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 69

I just had a vey bad thought. Heidi is going to be at the club and Edward is going to flirt, dance & or hook up with her.

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 68

You can't have them meet someone else at the club!

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 67

I can respect that she just wants to take a step back and not jump back in a relationship but she could be risking the opportunity to be with her soulmate.

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 62

Get a grip Bella!!!!! I don't get it. If she sees that he has feelings for her from the way he kisses her, why does she think he wouldn't want to date her?

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 58

He's going to tell her how he feels and Bella's not going to have a positive response. I know that's what is going to happen. Please don't break his heart, Bella.

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 55

So if your best friends with someone you find attractive and have amazing chemistry with, what reason is there for not being together? They seem to have it all. Bella needs to get on that bandwagon before it's too late. Just saying!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 113

Loved it :)

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 113

Yea...that is every young girl's dream. 

 

Wonder just how much our boy will add lib ..

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 113

:)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 113

Role playing is fun.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 112

I'm betting Edward is wanting to see if he could make her dream wedding a reality someday.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 111

Esme is a hoot. I adore her. She needs grandbabies, asap. The stay at the Cullens will be interesting.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 113

Now is she going to tell him she tryed that back then but he puked on her lol.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 112

Edward wants to make that dream come true

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 113

Awe! Don't we ALL hav someone we wish we could have been brave enough to have said such a thing to 'once upon a time,' and wish we could have recreated tat moment years afterward?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 113

Love it.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 113

Aww! tee hee hee

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 113

FANTASTIC! :)=)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 113

Yes!!!!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 113

=)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 113

Aww, I love it.

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 113

Ooohh me likey!!!  :)

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 113

cute chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 113

ooh a little role play.   glad he's playing along

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 112

Thanks!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 110

Love this Bella's attitude that she's 'all that' and that Edward makes her feel that way.

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 112

:)  Looking forward to the lemons!!  Good chapter!

 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 109

Bella should make a complaint against Paul. That asshole deserves everything that goes his way. Not sure if Edward should get to involved with investigating Paul, it could backfire on him and cause problems with his job.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 112

=)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 108

*fans self*

You sure know how to write a hott scene.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 107

Role playing is really good. Love how trusting they are with each other.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 106

Edward Cullen, exhibitionist. I want more of that too.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 105

I'm liking this side of Edward.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 104

Yes and please...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 112

:)

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 112

She actually thought about the possibility of a future with Edward!! That's a step, enen if it DID come with a 'maybe.' At least she expressed real HOPE!!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 103

Edward sure knows how to make a girl feel special.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 102

I hope Bella's stubbornness won't ruin her changes of 'fixing' herself or ruinning her relationship with Edward.

 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 112

I love this! I can't wait!! :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 112

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Armysister1231 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 112

I am finally all caught up again!! So glad we are done with Rose!! And I hope Paul gets his slimy butt fired!!! As for Bella, she is just a normal girl, with normal girl issues... I find myself thinking sometimes that the other shoe will drop in my life  too.. but Bella is growing and maturing. I love all of the characters in this story! Thank you for continuing to write it. I can't wait to see what's next! :-)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 112

Uh, Bella, no guy asks about your thoughts for your wedding unless he wants to MARRY YOU! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Momma Big Evil Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 112

Loved this chapter :D  Really loved her dream of a "casual style" outdoor wedding  followed by a BBQ as this is what I really wanted for our wedding almost 13 years ago... to be married under the shade of our farms 3 100 yr old apple trees (that formed a triangle), everyone dressed casual and to have a BBQ after.. but I got out voted to a point ... We did have the casual style outdoor wedding under the apple trees, I did have the "big white" dress and my husband wore his rennisance clothing, our wedding party wore thier "renn" clothing and our guests were encouraged to dress casual ... didn't get my BBQ, but instead we had a HUGE potluck meal and about 80 friends and family to share it all with... :D

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 112

Cute!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 112

Looking forward to the next chapter

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