Date: 15 Mar 2014 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 78
HOLY COW! Edward should go after her if he was sober but he isn't so I hope he sits & waits for her & that she doesn't do anything to get into trouble.
Date: 15 Mar 2014 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 34
That was fucking hot!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 78
Lol, you didnt do anything Edward. Bella's self esteem issues aren't your doing.
You just wanted answers, which you deserved. She'll get over it. I wish I had an Edward around me, some women are lu-cky!
I was so eagar to read it all, that this is my firstbreview. I'll go back drop one for the other chapters.
Date: 15 Mar 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 33
That was damn sexy!
Date: 15 Mar 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 78
Love your story, but I wanna punch them both! I can't wait for more.
Date: 15 Mar 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 78
He is going to force her to see she is good enough. He loves her he has to show her how much.
Date: 15 Mar 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 78
Well, at least that's out in the open.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 78
Come on, Edward, don't you dare cave or feel bad! He SHOULDN'T feel sorry for what he said, or give in to her little temper tantrum whatsoever! She DESERVED everything he said, & then some! He was only speaking the truth, drunk or not. If she wants to continue to be an insecure twit when true love is staring her right in the face, then that's her stupid problem, NOT his!
Not to mention that she just storms off to go pout & have her little pity party during his apparent time of need, like always. She's NEVER there for him, never helps him out, or does anything for him like he's done, & still does for her. She's a selfish user, plain & simple. Edward better wise up & see the signs that clearly tell him that she would be a LOUSY person to get involved with! Maybe he should stop & think about WHY she's only had losers in her life...because she IS one herself! Those guys are just like her, & that's been what she deserved! At least she done something right when she told him that he is too good for her.
They could & should be enjoying themselves right now during this nice little vacation, but instead, Bella had to make everything awkward & miserable with her stupidity! :(
Sometimes, you have to just count certain things as a loss, & I feel that this is one of those things. You can't keep kicking a dead horse. Edward tried his best. He's been nothing but kind, considerate, & wonderful to someone who has been nothing but a cold, hurtful, unresponsive idiot, so it's her loss, NOT his! Her foolish insecurities are gonna cost her bigtime, as they should! She DOESN'T deserve him, anyway! Never did!
Edward deserves someone who is equally as wonderful & loving as he is, someone who is a lady, someone who is mature, & has a good head on her shoulders, someone who is wife & mother material...none of which Bella is! You can't make a housewife out of a ho! LOL
Date: 15 Mar 2014 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 78
She had to admit to feelingthat before they can move forward.
Date: 15 Mar 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 78
Now it's not so good looking for both of them, especially with the temper from them... But at the end of the day, I'm sure they will both be glad that this big pink elephant finally got acknowledged and work through their problems;)
Date: 15 Mar 2014 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 78
Ahhhhh! He knows, we were so close!! I am on the edge of my seat until the next update to see how this plays out; brilliant!
Date: 15 Mar 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 78
Hopefully they stop being stupid and try;)
Date: 15 Mar 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 78
Love it, cant want for more :):):)
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 78
That's a start!!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 78
Good for Edward! He's been patient enough! Sheesh. ;) I will say he shouldn't chase after her. He's chased enough. ;) Whatever. I love your fic! :)
Date: 15 Mar 2014 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 78
Maybe this what they needed to REALLY talk.
Date: 15 Mar 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 24
I like drunk Esme!
Date: 15 Mar 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm dying for these two to get together!
Date: 15 Mar 2014 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
I want them to kiss!
Date: 15 Mar 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 77
I'm so HAPPY! Thank you for letting them have some snuggling!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 77
No, I don't think Edward would settle for the friends with benefits any longer. He's acknowledged his feelings for Bella, as to where she's knows she wants more with him, but she isn't ready to admit it. At least she subconciously allows the intimacy. I hope she gets her head sorted soon.
Looking forward to Drunkward with loose-lips.
Date: 14 Mar 2014 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 77
aww too cute
Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 77
Well at least her unconscious self knows what it wants
Date: 14 Mar 2014 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 77
I can feel Edward's frustration.
Date: 14 Mar 2014 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 77
Wooooo!!! Can't wait to hear what Drunkward has to say! You're doing a great job!
Date: 14 Mar 2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 77
hope she gets thins figured out soon :)
Date: 14 Mar 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 77
I don't think Edward can go back to the FWB situation now. He is too aware of his feelings. I think he is smart to be stepping back till Bella gets her mind sorted out. Plus if they go back to FWB now, I think it really would be Bella using Edward since they are both aware of his feelings.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 77
I loved it, they are so adorable, they are on holiday to forget the problems and loves.
kisses.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 77
at least when shes asleep she lets her guard down and is honest with herself. now if she can only do that when she is awake. i hope she does think that he took advantage of her when she wakes up in his arms. keep up the good work
Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 77
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 77
Short but very sweet!!
Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 77
Was she at least partly awake?!
Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 77
sooo good!! she's slowing getting her head out of her ass!
Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 77
Oh for the sweet love of Baby Jesus!! I love this chapter. This story! Poor Edward. Heaven I think he meant hell. He is just too sweet! :)=)
Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 77
She needs the closeness to I hope she opens up to him
Date: 13 Mar 2014 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 76
This is a fun story. I just caught up with it now, thanks to the recommended fics. My only complaint is the chapters are way too short.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 76
sorry for the late R&R i hope this trip can fix their friendship and also bring them closer together and help her get past her doubts. keep up the good work
Date: 13 Mar 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 76
Edward is such a patient man. I hope he keeps strong, since Bella is so stubborn.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 76
I guess this vacation is pretty interesting.. ;)
Amazing story by the way :)
Date: 13 Mar 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 76
Ah Edward, patience grasshopper, patience. Have faith that Bella will finally wake up or else she will be regretting it for the rest of her life. Just remember that good things come to those who wait.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 76
Let the fun beging it is time to be young and stupid and pull her head out of her ass.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 76
I want a vacation at a resort, too!
Date: 13 Mar 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 76
I love this story!! :)
Date: 13 Mar 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 76
His patience is beautiful.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 76
Sun and fun. Sounds like a great vaca to me.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 76
Looking forward to the moment dawns on them that they do belong together. For now, I'll settle with some pool fun and games.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 75
Booze and a pool sounds like a great combination. Bella states she's gained weight, could she possibly be pregnant and not know it? Wishful thinking...
Date: 12 Mar 2014 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 76
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 74
I'm hoping this trip will be a turning point for them.
I suspect something is gonna happen with Edward's credit while he's on vacation.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 75
Omg just read all 75 chapters! And I love it!
Date: 11 Mar 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 75
Hope B comes out of her corner soon and joins the real world of adults
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 75
Bella really needs some therapy. She needs to learn to love herself, so she can have a fulfilling life. She will then realize that Edward is perfect for her.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 75
Please please please let them get freaky with each other or at least let Bella realize what she is going to lose if she doesn't get it together!
Date: 11 Mar 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 75
I refuse to get my self excited ...your probally just teasing us ....
Date: 11 Mar 2014 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 75
Booze will happen.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 75
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 11 Mar 2014 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 75
They're really cute together
Date: 11 Mar 2014 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 75
Booze and a pool sounds like just the medicine Bella needs to me!!
Date: 11 Mar 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 75
She cant keep this up she loves him
Date: 11 Mar 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 75
Maybe when all you have dated is bad guys, you think that is all you deserve. Oh Bella, I hope you wake up soon.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 75
Bella, Bella, Bella. Get over yourself! Edward is a catch and he wants YOU. Accept it, girl!
Date: 11 Mar 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 75
BOOOZE IS A TRUTH SERUM MOST OF THE TIME!
Date: 11 Mar 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 75
I wish Bella would pull her head out of her ass and admit she loves Edward
Date: 11 Mar 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 75
Either the alcohol will have them screwing or Edwards going to say his feelings for her.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 75
Are they gonna get drunk and wind up in bed again?
Bella needs to get over her insecurities. The man is
head-over-heels for her!
Date: 11 Mar 2014 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 75
I am excited for you to share! :)
Date: 10 Mar 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 74
I feel so bad for Edward. I think it would be worse knowing you love someone and they state they don't love you the same way, especially since they live together. It is no wonder that Edward is drowning himself in work.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 74
love it, cant wait for more!! :)
Date: 10 Mar 2014 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 74
They are great friend that are in love
Date: 10 Mar 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 74
glad they are going to have some good friend time.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 74
Hope she wises up on this vacation.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 74
Don't make me wait to long ....I am dying for her to get the head out of her ass ......
Date: 10 Mar 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 74
You always keep us began for more
Date: 09 Mar 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 74
uh-oh ... what are you up to, missy???
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 74
I'm anxious for more, they need to be together, you write great lemons and I miss.
I feel that Rose is still around and will cause problems.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 74
Excited!! I can't wait!! :)
Date: 09 Mar 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 74
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 09 Mar 2014 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 74
I loved the light heartedness of the characters in this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 73
Waaaw!!! Amazing story! I can't wait to hear more! Hope you'll update soon! :)
Date: 07 Mar 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 73
not sure.. Oh well.