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Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 88

And the happy ending I hope!;)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 88

After hearing the wager, I thought for sure Edward would have thrown the game to get his hands on her. All the possibilities of where a sensual massage can lead to.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 88

Awesome story! Thanks ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 88

:)

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 88

*raises BOTH hands*

i tried to learn golf with the hubby, but my Tatas DEFINITELY got in the way, and I decided it was a game he can just play with his buddies. All I managed to succeed at was getting VERY. Frustrated.

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 88

this is getting so good! I can't wait for the next one update soon

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 88

At least they both seem happy with the result of the game. In the end there are no losers... Should be an interesting massage.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 88

=)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 88

If I didnt know better I think he did it on perpose to get his hands on her ;)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 88

I freakin love this!! :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 88

Loved it!!  I'm so happy she won!  Cannot wait to read about the massage!!

Reviewer: BigMac34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 87

I'm loving this story, and can't wait for the exciting stuff to come between our special couple, I just want them to stay in love forever :-)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 87

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 87

This is an amazing story. 

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 87

Good chapter!!

 

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love it! Update please

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 87

WOW!Poor Emmett!I hate Rosalie!

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 87

:)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 87

Now we need to find someone for Em. Wonder what real excuse Rose has for what she's done. That could be an interesting story.

finally E & B are on the right track.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 87

:)

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 87

Totally awesome! Update soon 😉😊😀

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 87

Poor em.  Hope the credit card company sues her too.  Aww e, you'll be fine

Reviewer: edwardgirl27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 87

aww brother love..

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 87

I love this story!! :)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 87

I feel so sad for Emmett! He really is a great guy and there should be some nice girl for him - hopefully in his near future;)

And I agree with Em, Edward should let take Bella the lead...

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 45

This is an amazing story! I love the characters' personalities! 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 87

I knew that call had to pertain to Rosalie in some fashion. I keep expecting her to fraud Edward somehow. Poor Emmett. He was to good for Rosalie.

Glad Edward confided in Emmett about his and Bella's relaionship. I hope Em finds someone that makes him happy soon.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 87

Poor Em that bitch just took more than his heart.  He is very happy about Edward and Bella and I dont think he will be able to keep his mouth shut.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 87

=)

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 87

take your time

no rush

and seriously who said there should be a cap on the number of chapters?

xox

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 87

Em actually gave some good advice. I have not read about a bad Rosalie in awhile. It's a nice twist. Hopefully our kids will learn to communicate and stick together from now on.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 87

I knew Rose was coming back. Let's see how much time she gets for her bad behavior. Hopefully LOTS. Emmett deserves a great girl.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 87

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 86

aww they are too cute.    eeek who was calling I wonder?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 85

lol for going slow. haha

Reviewer: Pop-Ey33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 86

Whos on the phone. Can't wait.

Reviewer: Iteachu4600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 86

Something tells me that's not a Bella

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 86

Seriously?  That's where you end it? :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 86

They are so good together.  Who is calling him??

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 86

I need more!!! It's a dull day at work!!!

Reviewer: roxy34145 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 86

love your story, it is the first thing I do each morning is check and read the next chapter.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 86

:)

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 86

LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!!!

Reviewer: banned2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 86

Crap!  I see angst coming again.  You are the master of the evil cliffie!  Can't wait for the next.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 86

making the call seem so mysterious . . . wondering if maybe it has to do with rosalie 

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 86

OMG! You killing me here! I imagine this will be bad ...

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 85

I had missed these two! They are so hot ... I want to see how they will hide the family that they are dating ...
Rose, the bitch, she will be making an appearance?

Reviewer: Jennyp76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 86

I am loving this story!

Reviewer: bommer1and Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 86

++++++++++++++++REINFORCEMENT per your request. :)

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 86

Wonder who is calling???

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 86

PLZ ITS GETTING REALLY GOOD ,,LOL   CANT WAIT   ....

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 86

loving these two and their progress

this is such fiction

guys like this only exist in my imagination

thanks for contributing to my guilty pleasure

 

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 86

Ooooh...wonder who it is??? It could be anyone from Alice, Emmett, or Esme, to God forbid, someone like Rosalie. Hope it isn't her. :(

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 86

OH WOW.  That was amazing!  I wonder who is on the phone?  

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 86

I hope all Bella is sick from is a hangover...feeling icky and tired are symptoms of something else as well :). Wonder who could be calling Edward ?

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 86

I love it! Can't wait for more!! :)

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 86

Who is it? I don't usually read drabble figs because the short chapters make me feel like the story is going to end too soon or too much important info will be left out. But I am loving this and I feel like I'm not missing anything. Love the story. Love the lemons. Love the characters.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 86

I love these two together. Things seem to be going good now that they got on the same page.

Curious as to who is calling Edward. The bank?

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 86

Can't wait for more luv it

Reviewer: carebare1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 86

i love this story thank you for it

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 86

Its amazing how feelings make things feel more intimate, even if the act itself is less so. Glad to see them starting to get into their new stride. Now there is the question of who is calilng Edward? Maybe it is Alice and she will worm info out of Edward. I just hope its nothing bad. I would hate for that to happen now that these two are finally on the same page. At least we know Bella won't be drinking for awhile. Although it is hard to turn down free food and alcohol.

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 86

Tease. Leaving us hanging. ;) More please. 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 86

Let me guess .... Rosalie?

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 86

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 85

Nice to see them getting Off 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 85

They are stronger than me. If I had that gorgeous man kissing all over me, I would start stripping and beg for the works. She knows how amazing it is, but luckily they had some fun.

Reviewer: Foreverpeetaslove Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 85

I liked the chapter. it made me remember about how in new relationships and how dry humping was so much fun. but Bella is crazy for taking it slow.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 85

:)

Reviewer: roxy34145 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 85

you can't tell that you has WB the chapters flow into each other seamlessly.
Maybe it would help if you had a change in their relationship ie have them come
out as dating to the family it would provide a lot of additional scenarios that would open up. Love the story I always read as soon as you post.

thanks

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 85

=)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 85

That was very hot!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 85

Hopefully the writer's block will go away. Even if you did struggle with this chapter, it came out fantastic. The dry-humping was pretty damn hot.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 85

Taking it slow would be SO hard after having already had such great sex together already. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 85

I love this chapter!! You did a fantastic job!! :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 85

I appriciate your struggle thank you very much.  I just love them being together.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 85

Loved it!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 85

Loved it :)

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 85

Why does Bella seem to think they should get an award for leaving a tip, like it's an original idea their drunken brains thought up? If they got a new server, the old one's behavior isn't his fault, and he shouldn't be penalized for her actions. They left twenty percent, which is considered appropriate for great service. Okay, sorry. Rant over. Once a server, always a server!

The story isn't suffering for your block. Everything seems to be running smoothly. If you need more time between chapters, do what you have to do!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 85

I was good, so worth the week. Hope the next chapter flows for you.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 85

looking forward to more

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 85

It might be short but it's sweet. I see what Bella says about rebuilding intimacy but I don't think they should start from the very beginning. It would be too hard to forget what they know and have experienced.

Reviewer: valentinesgenie Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 84

I loved it good job

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 84

Well the legal part aside, glad the manager tossed her out.  Hate those kind of people

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 84

Loved it :)

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 84

Love it cant wait for more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 84

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 84

Edward is perfect know one talks to Bella like that it is love.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 84

I quite enjoyed the 'take-charge' Edward.

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 84

Love Possessiveward!!!  Can't wait for some citrus!

 

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 84

Glad that Bella got to see Edward sticking up for her. I'm sure none of her exes would have done that so it should be another sign to her that Edward is different. Hopefully she will keep her mind open to change.

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 84

sorry for the late R&R. lol what a cheese ball, at least he stuck up for his girl and reported that skank for her behavior. i am glad she pulled her head out of her butt and is willing to give him a chance. keep up the good work

Reviewer: sarahplumb Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 84

aww so cute edward to the rescue

 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 84

Wow, don't mess with Lawyer Edward.  He is so hot when he gets protective. 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 84

That was very sweet - and hot - from him:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 84

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 84

Yeah, it's mostly unlikely because she would only have gotten ONE chance to not treat customers appropriately in such a place. Even at McD's (where I'm a mgr) a crew member will only get one rudeness opportunity. Period. LOL

That said, I agree, it was cute to see him being all 'lawyerly' and standing up for his girl.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 84

=)

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 84

Has that ever worked, anywhere? Somebody stares at their date, then looks at their passive-aggressive server, realizes their destiny, and pushes their date aside to fall into the server's arms after tossing aside the tray of drinks?

Didn't think so.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 84

Love when Edward gets all protective 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 84

Love thus so much!!!

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