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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 95

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 95

Good riddance. This is one of the least favorable Rosalie characters ever. Glad to be rid of her. 

Reviewer: 00miracle36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 95

Hilarious!!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 95

Poor Edward. he needs a shower, fast!

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 95

lmao!!!

:)

 

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 95

Oh Edward, I am sure Bella can help you replace those scary mental images with something better. I guess all that dye went to Rosalie's brain. But our kids do need to find a better balance. Sounds like there are good times ahead.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 94

Knowledge dropping Jasper

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 93

Good update.  Alice is too much! 

Reviewer: sarahplumb Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 94

this bella seriously needs a slap , (just saying) i get that her ex's used her but come on how many times / people is it going to take talking to her before she belives them i  mean come on get a bloody clue dumb bella

 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 93

Love it, Alice is more excited about them than her own engagement.  

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 94

LOVE THIS!! :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 94

Jasper is a smart guy thats for sure

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 94

She better want to work on it!!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 94

=)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 94

Loved it :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 94

Good as always, just too short.

 

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 94

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 94

Sometimes having it pointe out is enough to make a person want it. I hope she does!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 94

Jasper does have a good point. Bella has to want to change and want help for therapy to work. She's gotta do it for herself, not because someone else wants or suggests therapy for her. I hope Bella truly wants it for herself and not being influenced by what she thinks Edward wants. These two don't need any more bumps in the road.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 94

That is true that you have to be willing to change for yourself for therepy to work. You can't change for someone else, just like you can't change other people. Good on Jasper for making Bella think about that. If she only has one foot in the pool than it is not going to work. She has to jump in. Getting a person to like themselves is possibly the hardest battle of all. But she will need to have Edward keep giving her those positive messages to help her fight the voice in her head. Go Bella, you can do it. The hard part will be that a therapist might tell her that she needs to get focused on her before she gets into another relationships, even a good one. Hopefully she and Edward can find a middle ground where Bella can grow as a person and they can grow together.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 94

:)

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 93

hey 

uiiiii great chapter!!

Alice is getting married! This is really wonderful!!

I would have designed my dress myself... I even intend to, but I can't draw...

It#s really good that Alice is soo excited! It's funny!

bye

Lil

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 93

Awesome!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 93

I think Alice is very excited lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 92

I think that is a great idea 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 93

Yeah, finally!!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 93

lol  Alice is such a hyper thing.  aww for Jazz proposing though

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 93

I'm so glad Alice knows!  I wasn't sure if they would hold off telling her.  I like the way she told her by showing her the phone picture! 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 93

I love this story! I love Alice's reaction to the news!! lol

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 93

Congrats!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 93

Alice did the exact thing that scared Bella. She went from finding out that they are a couple to they are getting married in less than 2 seconds. She needs to chill her heels or she will scare Bella. Thank God that Edward knows that Bella needs time to adjust and accept.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 93

Awesome!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 93

:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 93

Loved it :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 93

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 93

I love Alice's description... a hyper and rambuncious elf. She's more excited about Edward and Bella being a couple than her engagement. Not sure what Jasper would say to that. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 93

=)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 93

Only Alice would think this is more exciting than her own engagement. Good for you Bella not trying to hide. Let's hope this good energy keeps going.

Reviewer: TwiAngel92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 93

Laughing because Alice is more excited that Edward and Bella are dating than getting engaged. Was surprised that Bella told Alice about her and Edward, but am happy hat that she did. Now can't wait till see what esme has to say. 😄

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 93

He's gotta be cracking up ... his sister is more excited that he is seeing Bella than that she just got engaged?? Crazy girl. 😳

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 93

Yayyyysss

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 92

Therapy is exactly what Bella needs.

Glad they will not be denying they're in a relationship if anyone asks. That's progress.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 92

I'm glad that Bella is getting some help. She deserves to be loved and to love herself. They will be able to have a stronger relationship, when she feels better about herself. She also needs to talk to someone about her job. If it can't be changed, maybe she needs to look at being a teacher at another school or district. She could also teach at a private school. You spend so much time at your job. You have to be happy with what you are doing. The children will also learn more when their teacher is excited about the subject.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 92

Yea I think she needs a counselor too.    Wow  Jasper is loading her up huh?

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 92

Loved it :)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 92

I agree that going into her therapy would be a side tangent. However, I am happy that she is getting help. I have also battled self esteem issues and its not fun. You can get help from others but most of the work has to come from inside yourself. Bella has a head start in that she has good confidence in a lot of other areas in her life. Hopefully with help from others, especially Edward, she can work on this other area. While we are not going to see her actual therapy, maybe she could get some homework that we could see that Edward could help her with.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 92

=)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 92

I love this! I can't wait for more!! :)=)

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 92

Thanks!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 92

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 92

:)

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 92

:)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 92

YEah! Bella is going to get some help and they get to tell people, sorta!

Reviewer: Iteachu4600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 92

Therapy did wonders for me & my low self esteem.  I'm a big advocate for therapy and hope the stigma attached will go away. 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 92

LOL Can the school really force her to teach a subject she hadn't signed up to teach?



Author's Response:

You'd be surprised what schools can do...I was told that I would be teaching a computer class (of which I'm not certified). I did that for a year. You're not an employee of the building, but of the district...you do what they say. It's sad. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 91

Loved it :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 91

=)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 91

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 91

Poor edward

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 91

Edward is afraid to tell her he loves her??  I think they need to fuck there socks off NOW :)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 91

I think Bella is going to wait just long enough for them to get back to Edwards bed. It's good that she is thinking about just needing to find a balance. I think that's the key to all relationships. I think Edward might be wondering about that balance himself. He has always been ahead of Bella about things and I wonder if he is afraid of what will happen once sex gets into the mix. Sounds like they need to have a talk. That will be important once they are no longer in their vacation bubble. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 91

Hopefully whatever drama that ensues, they'll be strong enough as a couple to withstand it. Looking forward to them getting back to Chicago and working on balancing a relationship with everything that comes with that.

I'm betting Rosalie is gonna cause some more trouble.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 90

Pretty damn hot indeed.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 91

:)

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 91

Love it!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 91

I think he's going to be/is very afraid that she is goig to withdraw from him again, and that he is goig to have put his heart on the line only to be broken.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 91

So amazing!  I wonder if the drama will last very long?

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 91

hmm great rosalie is back. Let's get her ass is jail. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 91

don;t think these two will last going slow much longer.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 90

Hawt Hawt Hawt  Dayum!!!

Reviewer: TwiAngel92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 91

Loving the lemons. Looking forward to them being back in Chicago, working on good balance for their relationship. Hopefully any drama that will come up does not split them up or have bella assume something when she sees edward, by it looking like something that it is not.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 91

I CAN NOT WAIT!!! :)=)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 89

hmmm ya making me want a massage.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 88

LOL for B winning.

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 91

Loving the lemons!!!!

 

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 90

at least she wants to return the favor instead of letting a sexy man like that suffer. i am glad things are still oing good for them and that they still have a steamy appeitite for each other. keep up the good work

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 90

Loved it :)

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 90

Awesome!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 90

Wow you are right I need a change lol.  That is some real conection going on love it

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 90

=)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 90

:)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 90

Gah!  I freaking love your lemons!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 90

No complaints here on the longer chapter!  Dirty talking Edward is SOOO SUPER FANTASTIC! 

Reviewer: shopperlm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 90

OMG! That was so hot! I think my husband has a little reading! You write the best lemons!!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 90

Always so great

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 90

Thank you for your generosity! ;) I really can use a shamwow and some new panties right now! lol This is fanfriggentastic!!! Excited for more!! :)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 90

Ah Bella, release is so good. Can't wait till Edwards turn.. I wonder if their secret will hold once they get home.. If they are supposed to be a regular couple but can't act like it around their friends, will it make them feel like they are back in their old situation?

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 90

looking forward to more

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 90

Yeah, she's definitely going to be feasting on his man meat!!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 89

They've known each other for years. Forget slow... just go. Bella is driving him crazy slowly.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 89

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 89

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 89

she is killing him lol

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 89

Loved it :)

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 89

Awesome!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 89

=)

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 89

Yeah, I think ainth is a fair time for her to have him wait!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 89

Loved it!  Cannot wait for more of the sexy times!

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 89

I think it's not a bad idea to have a bit of time to get to "know" each other again. Often people are in a hurry to get to the main event and forget about the fun of getting there. Now the question is whether Bella can really wait a month. Good on Edward trying to make this an authentic massage.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 88

Sweet hope you make it hot

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