Date: 07 Nov 2017 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
Awesome chapter!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor Bella! Paul is a jerk!
Date: 10 May 2017 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 45
So when are they going go stop dening their true feelings for each other?
Date: 09 May 2017 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Go Bella Go!!
Date: 20 Oct 2015 10:56 AM Title: Epilogue
another great story
Date: 20 Oct 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 138
The Zipper is my favorite ride
Date: 14 May 2015 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 103
I'm loving the story but I'm over Bella and her depressing mood.
Date: 23 Apr 2015 8:35 AM Title: Epilogue
Wonderful! Amazing! Awesome! I loved it if you can't tell!
Date: 01 Mar 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 131
I reserved my judgment of Bella because I realized that she has serious psychological problems, but you as a writer really made her look extremely pathetic then used your other characters to justify her bad behavior. No matter how you try to spin it, it just didn't work in my opinion. She was just plain wrong. She even accused Edward of having a doctored photo, someone who she has known for years and questioned his meticulousness and his integrity. Wow.
Date: 18 Feb 2015 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it! Go Bella!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it! I really hate Rosalie!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is awesome!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awe poor Bella! Does Edward like Bella too?
Date: 17 Feb 2015 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it! Poor Bella! I really don't like Paul!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it! What will Bella's reaction be when he tells her?
Date: 16 Feb 2015 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it! Poor Bella! Paul is a jerk!
Date: 15 Feb 2015 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor Bella! Paul is a prick!
Date: 17 Nov 2014 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 98
i love that edward is so sweet, understanding, patient, compassionate,
intelligent, romantic, loving man...
hope bella doesnt try to sabatage her own future with him again...
xD
Date: 16 Nov 2014 6:30 PM Title: Epilogue
FANTASTIC! Such a cute, fun & hoy story! You truly know the way to a reader's heart! I'm SO reading your other fanfics!! You are absolutely gifted! Keep it up!!
Una geniaa total! 👏🎊💯
Date: 15 Nov 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 85
Just so strange about "going slow" and not having sex after everything they have already done..
I mean they have been BFF for many years so they know they love each other's company so what is the point of no sex?
my take is...everything should remain the same , BFF, add the kissing, continue the sex, just change their relationship status...
what is the big efing deal?
arrgh... Bella has always been annoying in so many of these fictions...
I love confident, liberated, beautiful, hot, not take crap from other women, somewhat needy Bella who doesn't mind being pampered with gifts and being taken care of by Edward ....
xD
Date: 15 Nov 2014 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 84
Here's my issue among others with Bella.
she has known Edward for 10 years and knows how important she is to his family. Knowing how reserved and conservative he is and how his family is very important to him, how can she even think he would tell her he loved her "flippantly" one minute then fall out of love with her shortly after? He being her BFF along with his sister, doesn't she know him better than that? Esp since he does not say those words easily to anyone!
it's one thing to have no faith in oneself, but to think Edward is so shallow after all those years of knowing him the way she does... If she is going analyze everything about how Edward feels, perhaps she should use some of her intelligence that she supposedly has to look at everything from a different view point rather than the misguided self loathing eyes that she has....
just sayin... xD
Date: 15 Nov 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 69
WTH is wrong with Bella?
EVERYTHING!
her annoying over analytical self depraved, self hatred(really lo lo self esteem)
is shining through like always.....xD
Date: 23 Oct 2014 2:06 PM Title: Epilogue
awesome story thanks so much for sharing it with us ;D
Date: 21 Oct 2014 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 45
Listening to DMB (Dave Matthews) crash while reading any of his sexy songs are perfect for your stories especially PFL
Date: 21 Oct 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 44
WOW uhh yeah lets continue please
Date: 21 Oct 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 42
OMG Sexting is the best your an amazing author thank you I am reading all of your stories!!! Keep on posting!! luv luv luv!!!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 2:43 AM Title: Epilogue
Such a beautiful, sexy, erotic at times and heartrenching at others but it was sooooo good and I'm mad at myself for not reading it sooner. I love all your stories!! Keep up the awesome work u do on your stories and I know I will absolutely keep reading them. I know all the feelings Bella felt through this story because I gave felt that way for the past for years with a husband that has ridiculed me, called me names and cheated on me which thankfully will be over soon since we've past the 60 day mark for a judge to grant a divorce now he just needs to agree with everything I'm asking for which is only half of everything we've accumulated while we've been married these past nine years and primary custody of our 3 girls but he's stalling even though if we go to court the judge will grant me what I want since Texas law states I get half of everything! Anyway sorry for rambling I just know what Bella was feeling since I could relate and I think she was an excellent character along with Edward he was so sweet and sexy and naughty! Thanks for sharing this incredible story!!!
Melissa
Date: 27 Aug 2014 8:32 PM Title: Epilogue
Nice chapter long as hell, but the best ever. I love your story telling and your happy ever afters are to die for. Good bye........
Date: 27 Aug 2014 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 150
I hate you got to go, I have truly enjoyed this wonderful story.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 140
I don't like it she slept with Edward and now she's with his brother, not cool. Angela is a name in twilight fanfiction that will do whats right, being with Emmett, not right, but I'm just a reader and I'm in love with your stuff, your way and I love this story it's great, so I will shut the hell up.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 127
I leave you more than some, I've been waiting for Edward and Bella to bring this devil down to hell, he's a slime ball.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 126
Whoa, this has got to be the hottest lemon anywhere, you should offer classes on the internet, damn to glory.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 117
Take him so far down he will see hell. Bella is such a beautiful character, I hate having her hurting and Edward cares and loves her.
Date: 21 Aug 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 75
She's so damn wishy washy, I wish Edward did not want a low on the totem pole Bella, it's a mine thing and her mine can bring him down. I hate her right now, forgive me.
Date: 21 Aug 2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 53
I hate Jacob, he's like a fly thinks he can eat from your plate and not pay, they land on your food with their feet ewee, nasty.
Date: 21 Aug 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 42
I just read chapters one thru forty two and I'm breathless, this Edward and Bell ( that you've created) are smokeing hot, damn, I am loving this story, leaving you some somethin' somethin', I am glad it's completed.
Date: 10 Aug 2014 1:00 PM Title: Epilogue
Love love love it!
that is all
ps: can I have the same Edward for myself?lol
Date: 11 Jul 2014 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 73
Oh my goodness. All of this has my head spinning, What is Rose took all of Edwards trust money and paid his firm to represent her with it? Where did she get the money from? How can snayone be that eveil. AHHH
Date: 11 Jul 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 67
Whew. I was sweating. Totally thought blindie wanted Eddie. no bueno.
Date: 11 Jul 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 66
Grrrrr back off blindie he's taken! sort of.
Date: 11 Jul 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 65
i thought Emmmet would have figured it out right then and there. Geeez. & Taco Bell is not Mexican. Here in Texas saying tha toutloud would start a fight. lol
Date: 10 Jul 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 53
I do hope Alice is ok! I think Jakey will get handsy and Bella will have to hurt him!!!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 50
I really hope she isn't going to deny deny deny and push Edward away. grrrr
Date: 10 Jul 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 46
He is totally head over heels, bat shit cray cray for some Bella.
Date: 10 Jul 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 43
Oral fixation much Edward? lol
Date: 10 Jul 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 41
Rose was only with Emmett to get to Edward. She was a stalker and now they have pissed her off and someone's bunny is going to get cooked! Am I right? Am I Right!?
Date: 10 Jul 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 39
*Chanting* Do it! Do it! Do it!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 36
oh noooo, you know how to make a girl worry. I'm all teared up. Why did he leave? Awww man!
Date: 09 Jul 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
I hope Paul shows up again. He needs to be junk punched!
Date: 09 Jul 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
He better ask Bella, duuuuh. lol
Date: 07 Jul 2014 3:38 PM Title: Epilogue
aaaaaawww I love this! reality true love lol I will miss them and you did an amazing job. thank you for allowing us to read this :)
Date: 02 Jul 2014 4:00 PM Title: Epilogue
This story was awesome im 💔 because is done...loved it
Date: 30 Jun 2014 5:48 PM Title: Epilogue
Loves it as always!!
Date: 30 Jun 2014 3:50 PM Title: Epilogue
Yeah!. I love them and will miss them. Thanks for sharing your story.
Date: 30 Jun 2014 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 95
Carpets don't match the drapes! That's freaking awesome
Date: 30 Jun 2014 8:07 AM Title: Epilogue
Awww loved it! Hate to see these two finished but on to two others, Caught In The Flames :)
Date: 30 Jun 2014 7:03 AM Title: Epilogue
Perfect way to end their journey.
Date: 30 Jun 2014 2:49 AM Title: Epilogue
Yeah. Got to love a happy ending.
Thanks for the great read. Can't wait to see what's next.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 8:34 PM Title: Epilogue
Awe! *sniff* so sweet. I'll miss these two.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 4:28 PM Title: Epilogue
Thanks for the great story!!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 2:52 PM Title: Epilogue
I have enjoyed reading the story and sad it is over. You did a wonderful job and I want to thank you. THANK YOU!!! Can't wait for the next one!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 12:28 PM Title: Epilogue
I love this story so much! *wipes tear* I am sad that it is over. You wrote a really great story! :)
Date: 29 Jun 2014 5:00 AM Title: Epilogue
So glad they go their happily ever after. But it's nice to see that somethings never change. I will miss hearing about their exploits.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 1:38 AM Title: Epilogue
Truly a fabulous story! Thank you for sharing ;)
Date: 29 Jun 2014 12:39 AM Title: Epilogue
Wonderful (and HOT!!!!). Thank you for writing yet another great story.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 12:01 AM Title: Epilogue
I am sad it is over but is was a wonderful story thank you so much I will be looking forward to what else you do.
Date: 28 Jun 2014 11:51 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved it!!
Thanks for sharing
Date: 28 Jun 2014 11:36 PM Title: Epilogue
Wow Jaspers family is nutso. Yea for everyone being happy though.
TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 28 Jun 2014 11:02 PM Title: Epilogue
Awww!!!!! Absolutely perfect!!! *happy tears*
Date: 28 Jun 2014 9:56 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved it all!!!!!
thank you for sharing xo
Date: 28 Jun 2014 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 150
Love it what a great wedding and a wow WOW wow night it all makes it better when you are friends first lovers second.
Date: 28 Jun 2014 9:45 PM Title: Epilogue
One of the best endings I've got the honor to read in this fandom:)