Date: 15 Nov 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 85
Just so strange about "going slow" and not having sex after everything they have already done..
I mean they have been BFF for many years so they know they love each other's company so what is the point of no sex?
my take is...everything should remain the same , BFF, add the kissing, continue the sex, just change their relationship status...
what is the big efing deal?
arrgh... Bella has always been annoying in so many of these fictions...
I love confident, liberated, beautiful, hot, not take crap from other women, somewhat needy Bella who doesn't mind being pampered with gifts and being taken care of by Edward ....
Date: 15 Nov 2014 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 84
Here's my issue among others with Bella.
she has known Edward for 10 years and knows how important she is to his family. Knowing how reserved and conservative he is and how his family is very important to him, how can she even think he would tell her he loved her "flippantly" one minute then fall out of love with her shortly after? He being her BFF along with his sister, doesn't she know him better than that? Esp since he does not say those words easily to anyone!
it's one thing to have no faith in oneself, but to think Edward is so shallow after all those years of knowing him the way she does... If she is going analyze everything about how Edward feels, perhaps she should use some of her intelligence that she supposedly has to look at everything from a different view point rather than the misguided self loathing eyes that she has....
just sayin... xD
Date: 15 Sep 2014 2:43 AM Title: Epilogue
Such a beautiful, sexy, erotic at times and heartrenching at others but it was sooooo good and I'm mad at myself for not reading it sooner. I love all your stories!! Keep up the awesome work u do on your stories and I know I will absolutely keep reading them. I know all the feelings Bella felt through this story because I gave felt that way for the past for years with a husband that has ridiculed me, called me names and cheated on me which thankfully will be over soon since we've past the 60 day mark for a judge to grant a divorce now he just needs to agree with everything I'm asking for which is only half of everything we've accumulated while we've been married these past nine years and primary custody of our 3 girls but he's stalling even though if we go to court the judge will grant me what I want since Texas law states I get half of everything! Anyway sorry for rambling I just know what Bella was feeling since I could relate and I think she was an excellent character along with Edward he was so sweet and sexy and naughty! Thanks for sharing this incredible story!!!
Date: 27 Aug 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 140
I don't like it she slept with Edward and now she's with his brother, not cool. Angela is a name in twilight fanfiction that will do whats right, being with Emmett, not right, but I'm just a reader and I'm in love with your stuff, your way and I love this story it's great, so I will shut the hell up.
Date: 21 Aug 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 42
I just read chapters one thru forty two and I'm breathless, this Edward and Bell ( that you've created) are smokeing hot, damn, I am loving this story, leaving you some somethin' somethin', I am glad it's completed.