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Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2018 2:58 AM Title: Epilogue ~ Decisions, Decisions

Thank you.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2018 12:36 AM Title: Epilogue ~ Decisions, Decisions

:) loved this story   Looking forward to reading the sequel 

Reviewer: Momma Laura 517 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2018 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Daydreaming

I am really loving this story - I came across it just yesterday and have caught up to the last chapter now. If you ever go back and edit, I have a suggestion - and I mean nothing mean about this - the term Alice uses in one of the last chapters - she says Edward was humming and hawing - it's hemming and hawing. Doesn't change the awesome feeling I have for the story - it's one of the best plot lines I've read in ages. I love this stronger Bella and this less controlling Edward. This works much better for the story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. We actually googled this phrase as we were writing it, and it told us "humming and hawing", even though we'd both heard and seen it phrased differently. We will go in and change this. Thank you again.

Reviewer: Momma Laura 517 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2018 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Daydreaming

I am really loving this story - I came across it just yesterday and have caught up to the last chapter now. If you ever go back and edit, I have a suggestion - and I mean nothing mean about this - the term Alice uses in one of the last chapters - she says Edward was humming and hawing - it's hemming and hawing. Doesn't change the awesome feeling I have for the story - it's one of the best plot lines I've read in ages. I love this stronger Bella and this less controlling Edward. This works much better for the story!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2018 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 45 ~ Time to Celebrate?

I enjoy this. It's a better love story than Twilight, in fact it's very close to what I imagine what Twilight should have and could have been. Thank you for sharing this story, and I look forward to more!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2018 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 45 ~ Time to Celebrate?

:) 

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2018 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ Ringing in the New Year

It's so lovely to have the updates. Thank you

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 26 ~ Step Into The Light

I just wanted to tell you that I absolutely love your take on this story. It’s so well written, and they are so sweet they give me a toothache lol. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2018 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ Ringing in the New Year

Loving this story.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2018 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ Ringing in the New Year

I love this!! ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2018 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ Ringing in the New Year

:) 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2018 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 43 ~ Domestic Bliss

I love this! I love them! ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2018 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 43 ~ Domestic Bliss

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2018 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 43 ~ Domestic Bliss

:) 

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2018 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 43 ~ Domestic Bliss

Glad to see you haven't abandoned it!  Keep going and enjoy the ride.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 41 ~ Over the Holidays

Loved it

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Tour

I periodically wean myself off coffee only to start up again when things get busy at work.  The first few cups make me chatter like crazy - very funny.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 41 ~ Over the Holidays

I love it!! :)

Reviewer: faith2905able Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 41 ~ Over the Holidays

Cute

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 41 ~ Over the Holidays

:) 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 41 ~ Over the Holidays

Loved Christmas at the Cullens! The gifts exchanged between Edward and Bella were just right!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ Compromise

Things seem to be going smoothly for them, but I have a feeling that may not continue for too much longer. That last sentence, about breaking a father's heart, really points it out, too!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ Compromise

I love this! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2016 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ Compromise

:) 

Reviewer: dms1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2016 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ Compromise

Glad you're back!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2016 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 39 ~ …And the Next Chapter Begins

Loving this 

Reviewer: JDRAST Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2015 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ …And the Next Chapter Begins

 

Hello.  Wonderful story!  I went back and re-read all the chapters again....took me about 4-5 days, but now I'm left hanging, waiting for more updates.  This is one of the most well-written stories I have read on here.  Kudos to you!  You are a great story teller who gives a lot of attention to detail, and that is what makes it so interesting.  Thanks, Suzan Noerr

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 39 ~ …And the Next Chapter Begins

Loved it. Em is such a hoot. 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2015 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 39 ~ …And the Next Chapter Begins

Glad she had a good birthday, I was concerned for a minute :)

 

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2015 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ …And the Next Chapter Begins

I am so happy for the update! I love this! :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2015 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ …And the Next Chapter Begins

I can't imagine a better birthday, all things considered. This senior year is shaping up really well for Bella and Edward. Their progress with each other is growing and has to make them both happy!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2015 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ As the Summer Ends…

Great chapter!  I enjoyed it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ As the Summer Ends…

I must have missed the email notice of this update since it's been over two weeks ago. N ever the less, I really enjoyed this chapter, the silver ring sounds lovely and very meaningful. I cheer their continued progress and applaud their loving patience!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2015 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 38 ~ As the Summer Ends…

Glad they're moving forward. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ As the Summer Ends…

They are becoming so very adept at reading each others emotions. Even if the words aren't always there to back it up.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2015 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ As the Summer Ends…

Absolutely perfect!! I love this!! :)=)

Reviewer: JDRAST Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ As the Summer Ends…

Hello.  Nice to see an update in my inbox.  I just love these 2.  They are so mushy.  Thanks, Suzan Noerr

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 38 ~ As the Summer Ends…

great update

love this story

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2015 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 19 ~ That's Not Creepy

Starting to open up that is a good thing

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 18 ~ Too Much Time To Myself

That was the longes weekend of the poor girls life and I am sure it was Edwards to they had to drag him away from her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 17 ~ Intolerably Alone with My Thoughts

that was heavy she has made up her mind

Reviewer: The_Lions_Lamb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2015 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 36 ~ Wrapped Up

kay, I've just finished reading this story, and I LOVED it. I know it's not marked as complete, but you guys haven't updated it in a while, and I'm getting a little worried! I just wanted to beg you not to let this story die. Keep going - please! The last chapter left me wanting more and I'm probably going to go crazy wondering about that past line. You know, the one with "dreaming about unknown, cloaked figures," or something along those lines. 

Anyway, I was so surprised that Bella got Edward to agree to change her without all the stubborn arguing that happened in the original series. Hahaha, it nearly had me hyperventilating in shock! I'm really looking forward to more! Kutgw:)                          ~ The_Lions_Lamb

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 37 ~The Start of Summer

This is fun. Sounds like it is going to get interesting with the wolves and Edward better not try - end of discussion - again. I don't think Bella will like that.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 28 ~ First Lessons in Relationships

Perfection

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 26 ~ Step Into The Light

So sweet

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 3 ~ Deductible

Lmao

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 37 ~The Start of Summer

So nice to have a new chapter, thank you.  This is certainly a slow burn.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2014 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 37 ~The Start of Summer

Fanfriggentastic!!! I love it! :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 37 ~The Start of Summer

Mercy!!  Wonderful chapter! so glad that you updated!!

 

Wonder if Alice and Jasper used any of those condoms???

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 37 ~The Start of Summer

Very interesting dreams this girl has! The visit with her mother was both good and bad for both Bella and Edward. I think Bella has a really good grasp of how to make the most of her time as a human. Had a small chuckle over Alice and Jasper conducting the scientific testing for the couple!

Reviewer: edwarda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 37 ~The Start of Summer

hell yeah!!!!!!!!you're back

Reviewer: mnmccasey Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 36 ~ Wrapped Up

This story is very well written and a pleasure to read, however the unpredictable updates leave the reader wanting more and cause the audience to lose interest and move on to more flowing pieces.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2014 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 36 ~ Wrapped Up

Love it!!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 36 ~ Wrapped Up

A nice twist on the birthday scene.
Slow and steady wins the race. Their restraint should be commended.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 36 ~ Wrapped Up

Edward had a wonderful birthday!

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 36 ~ Wrapped Up

The gifts from his family were wonderfully thoughtful, for sure, but the journal from Bella truly was the top of the list. Unless it was the exploration of their boundaries after everyone left! Great chapter, great birthday for Edward!

Reviewer: edwarda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 35 ~ In the Eyes of the Beholder

hey it's been too long since the last tme you updated....itt's a great story.....do not give it up

Author's Response:

Hello,

Sorry for the lack of recent update, but we can assure you, we have not given up on this story. The next chapter is almost finished, but real life has just been out of control for both of us lately, so we are working on getting caught up.

Thank you for reading and your patience. Take care.

Dawn and Erica

Reviewer: cwrhoads Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2014 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 35 ~ In the Eyes of the Beholder

waiting for updates really got frustrating so I'm deleting my interest in your stories. too bad because this one was good.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 35 ~ In the Eyes of the Beholder

You've been missed :)

another delightful chapter. Enjoying the slooowwww burn!

 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 35 ~ In the Eyes of the Beholder

The perfect gift for her man, and he is going to love it! I would like to be a little mouse when Edward and Charlie go fishing together! Next up will be the trip to Jacksonville, which reminds me how irritating the wolves are with their suspicions! How about they take into consideration what Bella wants? Oh no! That would make too much sense!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 35 ~ In the Eyes of the Beholder

Great chapter!!  Loved it!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 35 ~ In the Eyes of the Beholder

I love this so much!! :)=)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2014 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 34 ~ Out The Window

I love this!! :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 34 ~ Out The Window

This is shaping up to be a really great summer, for both Bella and Edward, and probably the rest of the family as well! Alice said Bella would like the results of this weekend and it appears that, as usual, she was right! Bella has been so perceptive and thoughtful, and Edward has been so willing to compromise and consider her views. These two are so meant for each other and to be together, forever! I love your take on them!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 34 ~ Out The Window

"Hold on tight, Spider Monkey!" tee hee hee

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 34 ~ Out The Window

This was a great chapter.

 

I loved how the killed Laurens gossip b4 it got started.

And practice make perfect!  ;)

 

I loved this!!

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2014 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make

Loved this chapter!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make

Yes! Whew! 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2014 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make

Yeah. So stubborn. Very well thought out on both sides. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2014 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make

This chapter is so freakin fantastic!!! :)=)

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make

This is one of the most logical and emotionally healthy discussions of the "changing Bella" issue I've seen in the fandom. Nicely done.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make

I feel as if I have suffered through this with both of them, and am so relieved by the decision he has made! My first thought at the end of this chapter was, Thank God! It looked for a while that there was no way around this problem, but I'm so happy they found a way through it, together! I sure hope writing this chapter didn't give you two migraines!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make

Damn... I have been in tears this whole chapter.   My thoughts were everywhere.  I was so sure she was going to break up with him, or him with her.

But I never thought her would decide to change her.

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 32 ~ My One and Only

Aww, yay! Okay, phew, big sigh of relief that he's not going anywhere! :D

xo

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 32 ~ My One and Only

Sweet. Oh, this is a long, long wait... 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 32 ~ My One and Only

So he is assward, and  he is forgiven.  I'm sure that Alice had nothing to do with telling him to make it right?  LOL... teenagers, gotta love'em!

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 32 ~ My One and Only

I think Bella is right, Edward says the perfect thing at the perfect time and she just melts! It's sweet that her father sees her the way he does! Even better that Edward agrees with him!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 32 ~ My One and Only

This is so fantastic!! I love it!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 31 ~ A Night To Remember

I love this story! Poor Bella. She just doesn't understand teenage boys. ;) I am all caught up and can't wait for more!! :)=)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 30 ~ Two Way Street

Awww...this is so great! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 29 ~ We Can Do Normal

I love this! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 28 ~ First Lessons in Relationships

Beautiful!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 27 ~ Flushed Faces

OMG! This is fantastic!! I love it! :)=)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 26 ~ Step Into The Light

OMG! This is fantastic!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 25 ~ How to ask a vampire if you're dating

This is fantastic! They are adorable! ;)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 21 ~ This is a Test, Only a Test

Progress! I love it! ;)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 20 ~ He’s a Comedian

This story is so great! I love it! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 19 ~ That's Not Creepy

I LOVE THIS!! :)=)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 18 ~ Too Much Time To Myself

Fantastic! I love it!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 17 ~ Intolerably Alone with My Thoughts

She's hooked! ;) I love it!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 16 ~ Simple Logic

This is really fantastic!! I love it so much! :)=)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 15 ~ My Choice

I love it! I can't wait to read more!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 14 ~ I'm a Detective

Fantastic!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 13 ~ Freedom

I love this chapter!! :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 31 ~ A Night To Remember

Oh Charlie, if you only knew how really old-fashioned Edward is! All things considered, I think they had a wonderful prom, just as Bella told him. It was so nice of Alice and Jasper to give them their time together, and I love how Alice wraps Charlie around her little finger! May I say Bella is a better person than I, because I would have laughed myself silly over Lauren wearing that sloppy joe!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 12 ~ Similar

Fantastic!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 11 ~ Friends?

LOL I love this!!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ Overthinking

Have I mentioned my love for this? lol I love it! :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 31 ~ A Night To Remember

Sweet. Love the long chapters. Will it pick up speed anytime soon?

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 31 ~ A Night To Remember

Ok.. I dont get it what Charlie was saying at the end about Edward being old fashioned? That Bella responded with an "Oh".

 

I figured that Lauren would do/say something to E/B at prom..

 

Looking forward to more :)

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