Date: 13 Jul 2015 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ …And the Next Chapter Begins
Hello. Wonderful story! I went back and re-read all the chapters again....took me about 4-5 days, but now I'm left hanging, waiting for more updates. This is one of the most well-written stories I have read on here. Kudos to you! You are a great story teller who gives a lot of attention to detail, and that is what makes it so interesting. Thanks, Suzan Noerr
Date: 06 Jul 2015 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ …And the Next Chapter Begins
I can't imagine a better birthday, all things considered. This senior year is shaping up really well for Bella and Edward. Their progress with each other is growing and has to make them both happy!
Date: 29 Apr 2015 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ As the Summer Ends…
I must have missed the email notice of this update since it's been over two weeks ago. N ever the less, I really enjoyed this chapter, the silver ring sounds lovely and very meaningful. I cheer their continued progress and applaud their loving patience!
Date: 30 Jan 2015 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 36 ~ Wrapped Up
kay, I've just finished reading this story, and I LOVED it. I know it's not marked as complete, but you guys haven't updated it in a while, and I'm getting a little worried! I just wanted to beg you not to let this story die. Keep going - please! The last chapter left me wanting more and I'm probably going to go crazy wondering about that past line. You know, the one with "dreaming about unknown, cloaked figures," or something along those lines.
Anyway, I was so surprised that Bella got Edward to agree to change her without all the stubborn arguing that happened in the original series. Hahaha, it nearly had me hyperventilating in shock! I'm really looking forward to more! Kutgw:) ~ The_Lions_Lamb
Date: 18 Dec 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 37 ~The Start of Summer
Very interesting dreams this girl has! The visit with her mother was both good and bad for both Bella and Edward. I think Bella has a really good grasp of how to make the most of her time as a human. Had a small chuckle over Alice and Jasper conducting the scientific testing for the couple!
Date: 02 Oct 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 36 ~ Wrapped Up
The gifts from his family were wonderfully thoughtful, for sure, but the journal from Bella truly was the top of the list. Unless it was the exploration of their boundaries after everyone left! Great chapter, great birthday for Edward!
Date: 29 Sep 2014 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 35 ~ In the Eyes of the Beholder
hey it's been too long since the last tme you updated....itt's a great story.....do not give it up
Sorry for the lack of recent update, but we can assure you, we have not given up on this story. The next chapter is almost finished, but real life has just been out of control for both of us lately, so we are working on getting caught up.
Thank you for reading and your patience. Take care.
Dawn and Erica
Date: 28 Aug 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 35 ~ In the Eyes of the Beholder
The perfect gift for her man, and he is going to love it! I would like to be a little mouse when Edward and Charlie go fishing together! Next up will be the trip to Jacksonville, which reminds me how irritating the wolves are with their suspicions! How about they take into consideration what Bella wants? Oh no! That would make too much sense!
Date: 03 Aug 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 34 ~ Out The Window
This is shaping up to be a really great summer, for both Bella and Edward, and probably the rest of the family as well! Alice said Bella would like the results of this weekend and it appears that, as usual, she was right! Bella has been so perceptive and thoughtful, and Edward has been so willing to compromise and consider her views. These two are so meant for each other and to be together, forever! I love your take on them!
Date: 21 Jul 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make
I feel as if I have suffered through this with both of them, and am so relieved by the decision he has made! My first thought at the end of this chapter was, Thank God! It looked for a while that there was no way around this problem, but I'm so happy they found a way through it, together! I sure hope writing this chapter didn't give you two migraines!
Date: 21 Jul 2014 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make
Damn... I have been in tears this whole chapter. My thoughts were everywhere. I was so sure she was going to break up with him, or him with her.
But I never thought her would decide to change her.
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 01 Jul 2014 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 31 ~ A Night To Remember
Oh Charlie, if you only knew how really old-fashioned Edward is! All things considered, I think they had a wonderful prom, just as Bella told him. It was so nice of Alice and Jasper to give them their time together, and I love how Alice wraps Charlie around her little finger! May I say Bella is a better person than I, because I would have laughed myself silly over Lauren wearing that sloppy joe!
Date: 30 Jun 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 31 ~ A Night To Remember
Ok.. I dont get it what Charlie was saying at the end about Edward being old fashioned? That Bella responded with an "Oh".
I figured that Lauren would do/say something to E/B at prom..
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 23 Jun 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 30 ~ Two Way Street
What an amazing thing for Bella to do! To actually want to go to prom! Of course I get that it would never have happened with anyone else but Edward! It was very sensitive of Alice to hide what Bella was going to do, too. The bond of friends and sisters is already forming. Nice, too, that Bella wants to be friends with Angela. Hope they both find a dress , but then, how could they miss with Alice's help?