Date: 25 Oct 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 23
beautiful sweet little story ;) thanks for posting it on here ;D
Date: 10 May 2014 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
You have a remarkable style, I like it a lot. A wonderfull little story. Looking forward to more.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
What a sweet little family.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
That is so sweet and a feeling of complete
Date: 19 Jan 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 23
Looking forward to more
Date: 18 Jan 2014 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 22
They have so much fun at it that is love
Date: 17 Jan 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow what a wonderful afternoon delight
Date: 17 Jan 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 20
She likes this game alot
Date: 17 Jan 2014 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
It is a good thing she wants to play or he would explode lol
Date: 17 Jan 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 21
Edward must get a pretty long lunch break. He will need a shower after this one.
Date: 17 Jan 2014 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 18
afternoon delight like it ;)
Date: 16 Jan 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 20
They are so cute.
Date: 14 Jan 2014 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Awesome glad you decided to continue this story love it so sweet
Date: 28 Dec 2013 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 17
Very cute story I loved it short sweet to the point. Thanks so much
Date: 28 Dec 2013 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
So sorry to see this end loved the story your characters are the best
Date: 28 Dec 2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh that was perfect great chapter
Date: 27 Dec 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love this little hot story.
Date: 27 Dec 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great way to start the day ;)
Date: 27 Dec 2013 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great story sorry it's almost over awesome chapter
Date: 27 Dec 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 14
Hot damn that was hot
Date: 26 Dec 2013 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
very happy Christmas lol.
Date: 26 Dec 2013 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
One condom would never be enough for them anyway lo
Date: 26 Dec 2013 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 11
lol who give a shit about the mess
Date: 26 Dec 2013 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
Very happy awesome chapter
Date: 26 Dec 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMG that was fucken hot more more
Date: 26 Dec 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
Yes I agree you are mean to leave it there damn damn damn very hot
Date: 26 Dec 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great Chapter Really enjoying this story so much
Date: 26 Dec 2013 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
so freakin cute I want one
Date: 26 Dec 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love how you switch back and forth giving both points of view.
Date: 26 Dec 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
Damn talk about hot that was extremely HOT
Date: 26 Dec 2013 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Like I said before I hate drabbles but love this sooo good
Date: 26 Dec 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
So good I had to get on the big screen so I can review all of these chapters it didn't take long for me to fall in love with this story Awesome looking forward to more
Date: 25 Dec 2013 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 10
She is to funny lol
Date: 25 Dec 2013 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
They are heading in the right direction or at least the bed room so he has room lol
Date: 25 Dec 2013 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
She knows a good thing when she sees it ;)
Date: 24 Dec 2013 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
I hate drabbles but I got caught up in this before I realized that it was one but I am hooked I love it Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
I hate them too... but I was trying something different, and I think the story works this way. Don't worry, there are 17 total chapters, and all are finished, so you won't have to wait long. :)
Date: 24 Dec 2013 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
Makes me pant ;)
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 23 Dec 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
He is loving her already
Date: 23 Dec 2013 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
That is fun times and telling it how it is
Date: 23 Dec 2013 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
lol they are a match
Date: 23 Dec 2013 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
Sounds like fun to me lol
Date: 23 Dec 2013 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
He is getting right to the point ;)
Date: 22 Dec 2013 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like fun to me
Date: 22 Dec 2013 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! will there be more