Date: 12 Feb 2024 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
I fucking love this story I've been looking for it for years I used to read it when it was on fanfiction🥹 thank you 👑
Date: 08 May 2022 8:09 PM Title: Epilogue
Absolutely, fantastic, filled with love, comedy, sex, fightin, and a happy ending. One of my all time favorites.
Thank you,
Irene
Date: 08 May 2022 8:08 PM Title: Epilogue
Absolutely, fantastic, filled with love, comedy, sex, fightin, and a happy ending. One of my all time favorites.
Thank you,
Irene
Date: 12 Jan 2020 4:39 AM Title: OT - Bella's Dance With the Devil
I enjoyed this story
Date: 07 Nov 2019 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 24
oooh for the Alice memories. ROFL for the cop car plans.
Date: 07 Nov 2019 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 23
awww for Lilly. ROFL for jailbreak story
Date: 07 Nov 2019 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 22
aww for the presents
Date: 07 Nov 2019 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
wow Lots of info to mull over.
Date: 07 Nov 2019 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 20
ooh guessing this is why B was made human in this iteration. punishment I bet
Date: 07 Nov 2019 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
dun dun dun...Petey 's got lots of secrets.
Date: 07 Nov 2019 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
Glad she got to tell off Edward. At least Alice is being more reasonable. Guessing she can't see Alice because Alice doesn't remember?
Date: 07 Nov 2019 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yea I'm guessing the dreams are important. ROFL for E&A getting arrested.
Date: 07 Nov 2019 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 16
Awesome Vegas time!!!! Woo Hoo for married. Buhahahah for E&A showing up.
Date: 07 Nov 2019 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
ROFL for drunk Bella causing an almost orgy.
Date: 07 Nov 2019 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 14
You go Bella.... get your man!!!
Date: 07 Nov 2019 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome first date and first time too.
Date: 07 Nov 2019 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
Love Em's idea for the first time.
Date: 07 Nov 2019 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 11
Glad Rose and B got some things straight.
Date: 07 Nov 2019 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
The dream thing would be very disconcerting. Hmm Wonder where Alice went? LOL for the diner events.
Date: 07 Nov 2019 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
ROFL for cops interupting again!!!
Date: 07 Nov 2019 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
hmmm Wonder what the dream really was about?
Date: 06 Nov 2019 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
lol for drunk bella
Date: 06 Nov 2019 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
ROFL First Felony and Getting interupted by cops. Another?!?!?!
Date: 06 Nov 2019 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
oooh dark jasper indeed. Yummy
Date: 06 Nov 2019 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
Think Bella is going to have separation anxiety for awhile.
Date: 06 Nov 2019 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
Sounds like an awesome drive. Glad he made her feel better about what that waitress said. hmmm sharing a bath.... almost. LOL
Date: 06 Nov 2019 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
Glad J got to her in time. they both have lots to work through.
Date: 06 Nov 2019 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow Renee is one nasty biatch.
Date: 12 Jul 2019 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love this story and it only took me like a month to find it again.
Date: 12 Jul 2019 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love this story and it only took me like a month to find it again.
Date: 18 Apr 2016 6:00 AM Title: Epilogue
I Have to tell you that I read your story ,Inperfect Love". It has to be one of the best ,funniest and most romantic stories I have ever read !! Thank You! Keep up the good work!
Sincerely, L.Jacox
Date: 08 Dec 2015 3:17 PM Title: OT - Bella's Dance With the Devil
I have truly enjoyed reading your story. It has been an amazing journey. Thank you for sharing with us.
Date: 08 Dec 2015 4:09 AM Title: OT - The Real Story Behind the Burning Bush
Lol, too funny.
Date: 08 Dec 2015 3:35 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved loved LOVED this chapter. So glad they got to experience having kids. Perfect chapter! !!!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2015 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 32
Lol!!!!!!!!Too funny! ! ! ! ! ! !
Date: 08 Dec 2015 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 31
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!! It begins!! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Date: 07 Dec 2015 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 30
Bella's got a great plan. Let the war begin.
Date: 07 Dec 2015 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 29
Love it!! ! ! ! ! ! !
Date: 07 Dec 2015 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 28
Let the battle begin! !! ! ! ! ! !
Date: 07 Dec 2015 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 27
So glad that he remembers the plan. I.think Jasper will have a hard time letting Bella die.
Date: 07 Dec 2015 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 26
Awesome! ! ! ! ! He finally remmbers!!!!!!
Date: 07 Dec 2015 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 25
I like how things have changed for them. Jasper being human and breakable and Bella being supernatural. .....then Bella being human and Jasper supernatural.
Date: 07 Dec 2015 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
Truly enjoyingthis story. Great job writing it.
Date: 07 Dec 2015 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow, more information. This storyline just keeps getting better and better. There are more twist and turns.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for all the reviews, hon! I'm so glad you're enjoying it :)
Date: 07 Dec 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 22
I am so loving this story. Can't wait to see what happens with them.
Date: 06 Dec 2015 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, lots of information in this chapter. But still lots of questions. Thanks for giving us all this information. Love Peter.
Date: 06 Dec 2015 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved this chapter! !!!!!!!!!
Date: 06 Dec 2015 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
What is going on with Peter and Bella?
Date: 06 Dec 2015 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
Are Bella and Peter some kind of Angels? ???????
Glad Jasper and Bella have work things out with Edward and Alice. Can't wait to see how their visit with Peter and Charlotte go.
Date: 05 Dec 2015 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 17
What happened to Alice's visions? Why is she not having them any more? Love Bella's dream of Jasper and his sister.
Date: 04 Dec 2015 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why are Edward and Alice shocked??????? Did Alice not see it happening? Lol!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Dec 2015 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
I wondering how the limo driver is feeling. Lol. Jasper must have really been horny to pay 10 thousand for an hour. Love seeing Emmett, Rose, and Jasper having such a good time and being relaxed.
Date: 03 Dec 2015 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, that was lots and lots of sex. What is the deal with the weather? What was she dreaming about? A bunny rabbit?
Date: 02 Dec 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
Perfect! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Dec 2015 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
This is awesome.
Date: 02 Dec 2015 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad Bella and Rose worked things out.
Date: 02 Dec 2015 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
What on the world is going on with her dreams? I am thinking that some of Jasper's gift is rubbing off on Bella. So glad that Jasper still has the Cullens.
Date: 02 Dec 2015 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
I knew Jasper interpreted her sleep talking wrong. How did Bella dream what really happened? Also, how did she turn off her feelings to Jasper? I was laughing at the end of this chapter. My husband and I wentered parking before we got married and was caught by a cop. Lol
Date: 02 Dec 2015 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
I think Bella was dreaming of Edward and what happened the night he left but why was Jasper feeling lust coming from her? The dream part of Jasper I think she was asking him not to go, to not leave her. They really need to talk. The conversation with Derek and his friends was funny.
Date: 02 Dec 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 7
That was really HOT! !!!!!!! I was worried that something ws going to happen at the party, like a fight over someone making a pass on Bella.
Date: 01 Dec 2015 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
That was HOT!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Dec 2015 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
So Bella likes Jasper more dark and dangerous side. I don't blame her, but I would like to see more of his kinky side and maybe dominant side.
Date: 01 Dec 2015 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
They are getting closer. What made Bella ask Jasper not to save her if there was a natural accident?
Date: 01 Dec 2015 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am really enjoying reading this story.
Date: 30 Nov 2015 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
So glad that Jasper was there to save Bella. Glad they have earned his other now.
Date: 28 Nov 2015 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, this is a whole new twist on Twilight. Since Charlie died the same night that Edward left. Wow, poor Bella. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 6:58 AM Title: OT - Bella's Dance With the Devil
What an amazing story...I loved how you tied all the twilight things into your story to explain why things happened as they did. Like Alice not having any memory of her life before she woke up as a vampire, or why she was lead to Jasper and the Cullens. Just so cool how you tied it all together. Again I loved it. Thanks Xanath
Date: 16 Jun 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have been up all night reading this. Best. Story. Ever. Thank you!
Date: 25 Apr 2013 5:51 AM Title: Epilogue
Such a Great story, I smiled all the way through it! Thanks for taking the epilogue as far as you did, too.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 30 Jun 2012 8:53 PM Title: OT - Bella's Dance With the Devil
Loved it all. xx
Date: 30 Jun 2012 8:47 PM Title: OT - The Real Story Behind the Burning Bush
hah. xx
Date: 30 Jun 2012 8:11 PM Title: Epilogue
Epic, just great, I love it when I find one of these. There aren't many around, thank you .xx
Date: 30 Jun 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 31
Looking good.....xx
Date: 30 Jun 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 30
Epic, I love it when a plan comes together (a team!) And Lily and Edward...... xx
Date: 30 Jun 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 29
ooh I do love a plan, xx
Date: 29 Jun 2012 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 26
And we bow down to Idreamofeddy for the God of War. fab xx
Author's Response:
Colliding Meteors is still one of my all time faves J/B stories!!! That and Twisted4Twilight's Finding Relief!!!
Date: 29 Jun 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
lets hope he does remember. xx
Date: 28 Jun 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 24
Gah I have to go tobed, no time to read another chapter. xx
Date: 27 Jun 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 23
wow love it. xx
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
hah do love a powerful Bella. xx
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
oh dear. I really hope she does have a plan. xx
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
fab xx
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
ooh I do love a good Peter. xx
Author's Response:
I love a good Peter too ;). Lol glad you're enjoying the story so far!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
ooh nice twist, her and Peter in his dreams. xx
Date: 26 Jun 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
hah how will E/A cope with a night in jail, so funny. xx
Date: 26 Jun 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
hah plastic teeth what fun. Definitely the best way to get married, if Alice had anything to do with it, it would have been long and drawn out far too much fuss, ohh they are there. surely Alice would have seen all this? xx
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
ah he has got it bad. xx
Date: 25 Jun 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
Gah I just love these guys. xx
Date: 25 Jun 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
hah Bella is funny when she is pissed. xx
Date: 25 Jun 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
go jazz. get that car. xx
Date: 25 Jun 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
Gad I would like to share a car seat with him. xx
Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Blimey Bella, drama queen much. snigger. xx
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hi, this is the first review iv ever posted, but i love your stories iv followed you on ff for a long time and when i saw your AN that you werent going to post on ff anymore my heart stopped and i knew it was time to get a twcs account. :) Your Lessons Learned and The Thing About Falling are my two fav stories please keep writing your amazing thankyou! -October
Author's Response:
Aww thank you hon!!! I'm so glad you're enjoying my stories! I will post the thing about falling here once I get LL up and complete here.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:37 AM Title: OT - The Real Story Behind the Burning Bush
So I read this story once on fanfiction and never could find it again. I looked everywhere every chance I got because it was such an amazing story. I am so happy that I finally found it again. Great story. I completely love it.
Date: 13 Mar 2012 10:08 PM Title: OT - Bella's Dance With the Devil
Just wanted to tell you how amazing this story is!! I've read it for the third time and I love it more and more each time!!
Such a beautiful , original story!!
Ps ur Peter is by far my favorite I have read!!
Date: 28 Feb 2012 11:50 PM Title: Epilogue
i love this story,, my 3rd time readin it,, but i know i will read it again
Date: 07 Nov 2011 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh boy.... we are in for a ride aren't we..