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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 29: SLR Epilogue – Every Road

thank you so much for sharing this AWESOME!!! story on here for us ;) i loved the pictures you posted at the top os the chapters it was great because i usually don't get to see them ;) i'm looking forward to reading the sequel ;D 

Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 29: SLR Epilogue – Every Road

Very enjoyable and posiitive message. Great story.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 29: SLR Epilogue – Every Road

Thank you for sharing your journey through the eyes of the Twilight Saga characters.
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading and look forward to the sequel....Learning to Love Again.

Esme getting a speeding ticket was a highlight.
While visiting Montana, my husband attempted a steak challenge; 32 ounce prime rib dinner. He did not finish the baked potatoe so he didn't get the t-shirt. He was also very uncomfortable afterwards. Haha

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I loved the outlook you have on each chapter. I have a FB group for my stories. Stories by JRFaab. There is always discussions going on in there. Thanks again. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 28: Viva Las Vegas

Did her father track her down and tell her to seek out Edward?
I love how Angela is fitting into this big family. Their grief in losing a child can beverages be replaced but family does heal deep wounds.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 27: Road Trippin’

Edward's life is about to change. For the better. He now has something to personally take care of everyday.
Angela's story sound kind of sad.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 26: One the Road

Stress and tight quarters makes an explosive combination. Edward's self loathing is at an all time high. Jasper needs to set down with his brothers and talk it out. Heart to heart.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 25: Squared Away

One day closer!
Emmett seems to fund a way into the news almost as much as Edward.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 24: Justice is the Truth in Action – Joubert

The family just keeps growing!
The Denali's are an unbelievable family. At least Carmen removed herself.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 23: The Foundation of Justice is Good Faith – Cicero

Moves are stressful enough as it is, but add the Denali mess and it becomes a three ring circus.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 22: Dirty Deeds

There goes Emmett. Letting his immature thoughts fly out of his mouth. Rose is going to be angry that she missed the excitement, but not her husbands childish sense of humor. Haha.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 21: Tying Up Loose Ends

Unbelievable, father and daughter are both off their rockers! Caught by off duty police officers and giving the media the information that has been them by the courts. Not real smart, are they.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 20: The Truth Comes Out

The media is so quick to react. Why do we even have the judicial system when the media is our judge, jury and executioner? Deciding for the people what we should think and how ee should respond to situations. No matter how much damage is left in their wake.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 19: Setting the Record Straight

Awe, poor Emmett is so overly excited to be everything the Heidi needs that he is a bit irrational in his decision making.
Esme knows her son, and Edward is in need of a little Bella time.
Good thing the hospital board is operating by the books. Aro needs to be reprimanded.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 18: Back to Seattle

Mr. Whitlock is a true friend indeed. Assisting Edward in a smooth transition in the sale of his restaurant. So glad a federal case is being filed against Tanya. Let's hope her corrupt father is implicated in this mess as well.
I'm sure the hospital board will be displeased to lose a highly recognized physician but they made the choice long before his decision to resign.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 17: Hard Work Pays Off

Not enough hours in the day to fulfill all the needs on a huge ranch like this.
How much difficulty will the Cullen family face trying to leave town? So much to look forward to upon their return.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 16: Not an Easy Ride

The family has a new lease on life! Will Carlisle have privileges at the local hospital?
I suppose Edward will create new glue free meals for Cassie?
Will Emmett and Rose adopt Heidi?
Alice gets her horse!
Jasper gets to design new things to aid the ranch.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 15: Chillin’ and Grillin’

Everyone at the ranch us getting involved with some sort of rescue situation. Will Edward be next?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 14: Save Them All

What a huge heart Bella has.
Emmett is so caught up in this work that he can't even express his frustration.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 13: Feeding the Masses

I appreciate the prayers delivered by Billy before every meal.
I'm not sure I totally understand Cassie's limitations or what caused them, but you are explaining her reactions and Bella's methods of dealing with them very well.
I'm as impressed as Rose and Edward.
Sarah may be noticing something in Bella that might indicate an interest in Edward.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 12: Reality Hits You Hard!

What an amazing establishment you have created within this story. If only life could come together like this for all the children suffering through different struggles everyday.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Good Company and Making Friends

The love and respect is abundant in this house.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Just like Family

Everyone is fitting in so well. Almost too perfectly. Should I be worried?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Welcome

The Cullen clan just doubled the staff of Swan Lake Ranch.
Edward just had to let his thoughts fly. Hehe

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Preparations made

City boys meet the great expanse of Texas ranching.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Damn, It's Hot!

The Cullen crew better get used to rising early. They are on a ranch after all. Haha
Has Edward found a sense of peace?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Plans

This trial weekend sounds promising for both parties.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Decisions

There is a bright future for the Cullen clan in the land where everything is bigger.
Leave it to Emmett to provide comic relief.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Think about it

Edward's restaurant needs to be sold, Jasper's construction business could be sold or just moved, the other five just need to give notice of resignation. Two weeks is mire than generous given the circumstances.
The Cullens are relocating to Texas!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Swan's

Well, Esme and Carlisle seem as proud of Bella as if she is their own daughter.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Help Wanted

Truly an answer to both families as they struggle to keep their lives from crumbling.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 1- Answered Prayers

I gather the town is becoming entwined with the crooked ways of the Denali family. And Edward must have rejected Tanya's advances or the continuation of a bad relationship. So, Tanya ask her father to ruin the Cullen family.
An interesting start!

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 28: Viva Las Vegas

OK I love this story but have a major issue with Alice in this chapter. What makes her so special that she skips out on one thing that someone wants to do yet she is allowed to pick two things that everyone does. So not fair in my eyes.

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Decisions

loved it! Poor Emmett!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Think about it

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Swan's

 

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2013 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Help Wanted

Loved it!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2013 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 29: SLR Epilogue – Every Road

Great story. I love it. I also love Texas.

Reviewer: Sbmayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2013 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 29: SLR Epilogue – Every Road

Enjoyed sooo much.  Please hurry and post the sequel. You are very talented. SBM

Reviewer: Sbmayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 19: Setting the Record Straight

really enjoying this story. You've made the characters your own but kept them familiar. I can't wait to read on. Thanks. SBM

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1- Answered Prayers

loved it! Tanya is a bitch!

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Date: 10 Dec 2013 3:55 PM Title: Prologue

loved it!

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Good Company and Making Friends

i just wanted to let you know that i love this story and cant wait to see what happens in the sequal but i was wondering what happend to the rest of the chapters for this story i went back in to read it again and some of the chapters where gone i didnt know if you knew that they where gone or if you pulled them i hope to see them posted again soon and once again i love this story so far and cant wait to see what you come up with next

 

thanks

reneesmay



Author's Response:

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It was my fault and they are being added back now. Come join the group page for up to date info. https://www.facebook.com/groups/StoriesbyJRFaab/

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