[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2014 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 11-A Little Salt in the Wound
Ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!
I love it!
Can't wait for more:)
Date: 24 Mar 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 11-A Little Salt in the Wound
Marvelous! The pain, minute by minute detail and desperation comes through here loud and clear. Kudos! Also, thank you for giving us an intelligent, deeply emotional Emmett. He is more than video games here and then some! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2014 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 11-A Little Salt in the Wound
I think you are doing fine. I didn't think rose would do that then. I am wondering what will happen to her from gar and kate. Great job.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 3-Victoria Secret, page 53
Such a seductive opening meeting! It makes my head spin. Also, you have the most remarkable way with a phrase. Take Emmett's earlier thoughts on Alice. Emmett says that she should have been born with wings instead of fangs as her motives were perfectly pure. You word it so much better though. Thank you for all the wonderful work. Know that we appreciate it!
Date: 08 Mar 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 2-Pranks and White Rabbits
Wonderful! You have to feel for the rabbits though!!!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 7-Set Fire to the Rain
man I love this story especially a snarky bella and wiseass emmett. This is an awesome story definitely need more.
love jukie
Author's Response:
Oh, yeah. This is a fun story. Though, just so you know, the next five chapters are more somber. I'll see what I can do to upload another chapter here tonight or tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing. JA
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2013 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 5-The Death of Innocence
wow bella ia impressive
man i love this story
thank you
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for all those reviews!!- JA
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 4-Banter, Banter, and Revelations
alot of revelations
the story keeps getting better and better
love it
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2013 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 3-Victoria Secret, page 53
love it
love sassy bells this story is awesome
Date: 16 Dec 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 5-The Death of Innocence
Loved it! A great unsolved mystery and two very irritated female vampires! Talk about a cat fight! The interaction here is wonderful. Looking forward to more!
Date: 14 Dec 2013 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 5-The Death of Innocence
Looking forward to more
Date: 12 Dec 2013 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 4-Banter, Banter, and Revelations
Fabulous
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11 Dec 2013 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 4-Banter, Banter, and Revelations
Eek! Quite a cliffhanger! I do love the bantering Isa does in this piece. It's a bit out of character, but fits here beautifully! Loved it!
Author's Response:
Yeah, Bella is far from cannon in this story. And so is Rose, but that's for another chapter. Thanks for reviewing.-Jamie Anna
Date: 11 Dec 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 4-Banter, Banter, and Revelations
What the hell happened to her? Can't wait to find out!!
Author's Response:
Oh, it's way fun! This story is far from canon. I have a wild imagination. :) Thanks for reviewing!-Jamie Anna
Date: 11 Dec 2013 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 4-Banter, Banter, and Revelations
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
I'll update tonight or early tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing.- Jamie Anna
Date: 08 Dec 2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 3-Victoria Secret, page 53
I love this Bella she takes the men by their balls lol....
cant Waite for the next chap.
grate job
Author's Response:
She knows what she wants, that's for sure. :) I'll maybe post again tonight or early tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 3-Victoria Secret, page 53
UPDATE PLEASE!
Author's Response:
I'm poating again tonight. Thanks for the vote of confidence. - JA
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 3-Victoria Secret, page 53
Very interesting so far I cant wait to find out how she knows and is she really human
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. I'll post again tonight, but you'll only have questions after, I'm afraid. But your question will be answered shorty. Thanks for reviewing!-J A