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Reviewer: mrstroll Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2019 9:07 PM Title: EPILOGUE

I loved this story the first i read it. Will the continuation  stories connected to this one ever be reposted here or on fanfiction.net?

Reviewer: nikon342 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2017 1:41 AM Title: EPILOGUE

I do hope that you might still continue this story. I could not stop reading once I started! It's absolutely unique and I love it!!!

Reviewer: fairyfae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Twister

Great story! Couldn't stop reading, even in the middle of the night 

Reviewer: story addict Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2012 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Twister

I'm so glad you gave me the ending I was hoping for (though you managed to make me doubt it repeatedly)! I guess I'll spend a lot of the next few days reading the sequel on ff...

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Oui

I knew when he told her to leave her purse that something was going to happen.  Damn he should have thought of what she needed inside. 

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Some like it hot. Some like it cold.

I love this story so much.  I love that he has the power of healing too.  that is just wonderful.  The lemons are so great too.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Bucket List

Hhhhmmm I was not expecting a wall so that his sperm did not go into her.   I was thinking maybe if he got her pregnant that they would let them live  and not kill them but I guess there will be no babies for them.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 5 - First Pact

Finally he kissed her.  How on earth did he know about her tatoo? 

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 4 - What the.....

I really love this story.  Gosh I wish he would have kissed her.  This story is so unique, I have never read one like it and I am so hooked.  I am giving you a 10.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 4:42 PM Title: Prologue

I just found this story and it is VERY interesting. but I cant help but ask, why do you only have the one story posted here and not all of them?  I see you have a lot posted on Fanfiction and I love TWCS so much more because you can post pictures right into each chapter if you want and they are not as strict with rules. 

This is a very unique story and I am very interested in finishing it.

Reviewer: Damsel w Dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 4 - What the.....

Second time reading this. Just love it.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Some like it hot. Some like it cold.

Holy crap, that was intense.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Twilight

OMG. I'm freaking out!!!

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2011 6:56 PM Title: Prologue

Interesting start. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story takes me.

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Twister

I soooo knew Aro would take his memory-I can't believe Bella didn't realize it when Aro kept telling her that she had to keep the secret and that they had a "pact" now.  She is not going to be able to tell Edward a damn thing...

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 14 - The Princess and the Pea

I haven't been reviewing since the story is complete and I didn't know if you were even checking anymore...anyway...I was LMAO at this chapter.  I love this story and can't wait to read more. Ü

Reviewer: Alybethed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Bucket List

wow... that was HOTTT!....gosh i don't even got words....DAMN!

 

ps. and funny too...

Reviewer: Alybethed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 5:15 AM Title: Prologue

great story very different of what i had read before and im intrigued!! love it

Reviewer: peteypie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Some like it hot. Some like it cold.

I love your story but especially the characters, wow. Beautifully described emotions.

Reviewer: nekkou Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 4 - What the.....

*fangirly squee~*

Reviewer: jkcmama0307 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 3:06 PM Title: EPILOGUE

Great Job!! I can't wait to read Part II!

Reviewer: oo2uniq4uoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 4:23 AM Title: EPILOGUE

OMG I CANT WAIT FOR PART 2!!!!

Reviewer: SpunkyBookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 8:32 PM Title: EPILOGUE

SIS was the first fav on this site of mine. I'm bad about reviews. If you're my fav, then know I love it. I can't wait to see what you come up with for part 2!!

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 3:37 PM Title: EPILOGUE

Sweet Jesus! I was blown away by your writing...AGAIN!

I was brought to tears by the fact that Edward doesn't remember Bella at all...the fact that they shared such a passionate relationship only to have it ripped away from her as penance for her knowledge about the world of Gargoyles is just torturous and unfair!  She's going to endure so much pain because of his amnesia.  Bella said it best when she said that Edward as she knew him is dead…I mean what a mess…she gets Edward back…only to have him be a total stranger with no knowledge of what they shared. WOW...just WOW!!!  

It's absolutely brilliant to set up the sequel where the supernatural world of gargoyles is unwilling to tolerate the leniency she received from Aro.  You certainly know how to convey a sense of danger.  I LOVE Alice and I can’t wait to see more of her.

It warmed my heart to know that you included all 7 members of the host in the sequel! I will be on the edge of my seat the entire time! Oh...can we please have more Jake?  I really liked the wolf! :)

It's writing like this that made me fall in love with the world of fan fic! You're so talented; the fact that this story is such a riveting work of art is a testament to the validity of my words! I voted for you and will continue to do so for every category in which you are nominated.

You've created quite a conflict for the sequel, and I will be there every step of the way to see how this pans out!

Please hurry! I hope that you’re writing away because I am on pins and needles until you post the first part of the sequel! :)

BRAVO E!!!!!  I would give you a standing ovation if I could! :)

xxoo,

~T

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 2:30 PM Title: EPILOGUE

OH Thank you god Blade is ok.. a little shaky up but OK.. whew.. very worried about that pooch....

You know i almost wondered if Aro knew how hard this was going to be and did this as Bella's punishment I mean what could be worse then being with the one u love and knowing they will never remember you .. not the way they should or did.. I mean yes on the outside looks like he did a "wonderful thing for love" but really did he...... i don' think so.. i mean yes she has Edward but at what cost and now all these others are out to get her ....... i have to wonder if he also knew that  would happen........ I mean no one said Aro was a "nice" man but this way he 'doesn't have to dirty his hands' the Gargoyles who want to get rid of Bella can to this and he looks "innocent." I don't know but really how could he not know this was going to happen.. SO it seems to me that this is her punishment to never truly be happy with her Edward.. Yes happy to have him alive and with her but he doesn't remember her he won't remember their life together and now the others coming after her..... it's a totally careful what you wish for...... I loved this story.....it brought out a lot of different emotions in me.. and i loved it... You are truly one of the most talented writers out there.. Through this story u have made us laugh,cry, get mad , and scared and sometimes that was all in one chapter.....lol...... SO what is up with the small little things Edward did here and there such as touching the top of Blades head..hmm . that would be about the worse thing that could happen if he did start remembering his life as a Gargoyle.. (yukes).I am also glad he doesn't remember a lot because most ppl would find it odd that he never slept at his "finance's house .. nor had any of his own clothes there plus where is the engagement rings...(LOL). Now one question Alice said 7 who is the 7th Rose and Edward are gone??There should only be 6 is Rose not died ???. Can't wait for the follow up...... It was great....... SAVED BLADE YAY...........

Reviewer: sugunary Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 1:27 PM Title: EPILOGUE

I cannot wait until you start posting part 2. Forgetward kinda breaks my heart, how alone and frustrtated he must feel not remembering anything.

I am excited to see them fall all over again, and wonder what dangers will come for them.

 

Alice said seven, but isnt Rosalie dead at this point, shouldnt there only be six of them? unless wait Emily is part of the Host now?

 

Cant wait!

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 12:39 PM Title: EPILOGUE

I'm so excited about part 2!!! Forgetward....hilarious!!! Poor Bella, she just can't catch a break!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 11:05 AM Title: EPILOGUE

I´m really looking forwad to part 2....

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 8:07 AM Title: EPILOGUE

Great work.  I am loking forward to part 2.  Interesting little tidbits of history.

Reviewer: secret lover of him Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 7:41 AM Title: EPILOGUE

i love this story so much

Reviewer: fairytaleland Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 6:35 AM Title: EPILOGUE

Poor Bella and Edward.  Now they have to fight off other Gargoyles.  Can't wait for the sequel.

Reviewer: littlefaith85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 6:17 AM Title: EPILOGUE

This was an amazing story! It is heartbreaking about Edwards memory because you gave them such beautiful moments.  I know part two will be just as brilliant because thats what you are. I will be holding my breath and crossing my fingers for part two...

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Twister

Ok wiping tears from my eyes.....................first i am soo glad he is still alive .. second nope i forgot that little part of no memory of there life.. so that kind of goes against what Aro said to her  about the only other one who knows him and about his past .......so he kind of mixed words there....... tricky little fucker..... ummmm. omg this is horrible but wonderful.... i mean he is alive but will he want nothing to do with her....... UGH...

Ok i have a BIG concern and Brenna laughed her ass off at me but it is a big concern of mine.(i believe her words were this is the biggest part of the story and that's what u are worried about "falling on the floor laughing my ass off ) that's what she said..

Anyways my concern........when Alice said she had to come with them and then Emmett grabbed her. but we didn't know it was Emmett.......what happened to poor blade......was he left all alone on the roof.. how is he gonna get down.?? I can't believe they left the poor dog on the roof!

SO Aro put her through all that grief i guess doing that was the worse punishment he could do to her because omg thinking she was going to have to watch him be killed made me sick also...... i was totally freaking out the whole time because i didn't  read anything from Edward.....that was so hard..Emmett i feel so bad for him but he really needs to let this anger go. and having this issue against Bella isn't healthy......

on and now this file she has to read i'm so worried about that what if just one time she forgets or doesn't do exactly as it says will they kill Edward?? And by not being able to talk about them does that mean she willl have to make up a lie to Edward about his past???

god when this first started this chapter i was surprised how Bella didn't seem to think or care about edward only that Alice came and saw her but i guess from the way she acted later she did care.....she handled it so much better then me.........and u so fooled me i had no idea that was a dream with Rose in the beginning. and how did Rose die?? and Please let me know about poor Blade.....i hate to think he is stuck on that roof..lol

 

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Twister

WOW What a ride!!!

*clapping wildly*

I voted for SIN in the silent tear awards, and I hope that you win because this is one of the most original Fan Fics that I have been priviledged to read.

I am glad that Edward was allowed to live on as a human.  I figured that he would either end up human or Bella would become one of them, and I would have been happy either way!

I am interested in seeing how Bella is going to react to Edward's memory loss. It's going to be so hard for her to be in love with someone who doesn't remember her! I hope that some of the Host are in the Sequel as well.

I am REALLY looking forward to the sequel, so hurry up E!!! :)

 

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Twister

OMG!!!!!! if you would have left it their i was going to scream. thank god for part 2s. cant wait,youll almost be able to start from scrach with him.

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Twister

Okay Woman!! Definetly not the HEA I was hoping for, but still...Eddie's human!!! Yay for that!!! So glad that there is going to be a sequel!!! SQUEE!!!! You need to do an outtake of what happened to Eddie and how he came about human, unless of course that will be included in the epi!!! (Hint hint)!! Waiting for the sequel with bated breath!!! I really enjoyed this story!! It was very original and different!! Like nothing I've read before!! I wish more people were reading it!! They don't know what they're missing!!!! Loved it!!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Twister

Sequel...... Thank you, thank you, thank you.....

Reviewer: jaykay Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Twister

Sneaky bloody author-type you are! Good riddance to bad rubbish, oops, I mean Rosalie......

Reviewer: chishi09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Twister

Oh yes!  A sequel!  You know I forgot that Aro mentioned to Edward reverting back to human, he would not have no memory of his immortal life.  I suppose Edward's reverse-metamorphisis (is that even word? or the spelling.) is painful enough.  As for Bella's pact with Aro, this means she has to keep this whole gargoyle thing from human Edward too!  I can't wait for your epilogue or the part 2!  gah, i'm so intrigued with your story.

Reviewer: oo2uniq4uoo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Twister

OMG U JUST MADE MY NIGHT!!!YESSSS SEQUEL!!!!!!YESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!OMG I CANT WAIT!!!!

Reviewer: sugunary Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Twister

SQUEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! Sequel!!!! So happy- I knew he'd not have his memory if you went this route, but soooooo glad you are going to continue it! We get to see our fav couple fall in love all over again! Cant wait!

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Twister

definitely didn't expect that!

Reviewer: fairytaleland Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Twister

AAAAAhhhhh!!   You were trying to kill me with the ending.  Glad there is a sequel.

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Stop and Go

Oh Rose how could u.......... but then what she was willing to do at the end is so sweet but still poor Emmett........... but i can't get passed Edward......what is he going to do...I mean Rose is willing to give up her life... will he do it..I want him to do it.....but it seems to easy.. UGH... this just took such a turn........i can't believe Rose did that......... any of it........but fuck it let her die if it will save Edward and keep Bella and him together..........I didn't cry so you're lucky , but got quite nervous when Edward kept saying kill me now and let them live...... didn't like that........

Reviewer: susu2731 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Stop and Go

WOAH that was a surprise! Great chapter.. although I feel bad that Rose will potentially die sacrificing her life for Edward, I still hope that ARO agrees and lets Edward live

Reviewer: MrsM Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Stop and Go

Love love love this story!!! I can't wait to see what happens next, please don't keep us waiting too long.

Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Stop and Go

i love it and did not see it coming but im hoping if edward becomes human him and bella will remember there love for one another.

Reviewer: Swirly44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Stop and Go

What a crazy twist!!! Keep it up!

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Stop and Go

WOW @ Rose's sacrifice! This is a stunning turn of events and you certainly have the element of surprise! Who would have thought that ROSE would be the saving grace?? I am stunned SPEECHLESS.  Emmett's thought process was annoying, but as I continued to evalute the depths of the betrayal that he experienced and the feelings that he had for Rose, it made a tremendous amount of sense.

This line was key:

"Once you are released from the deception of your love, the opposite will come to take its place in your heart."

WOW...Just WOW. 

I never anticpated a contention between Em and Aro.  WELL DONE. 

I don't know what to say other than I will continue to wait with bated breath until the situation is resolved...

In spite of it all, this chapter still made me cry...so in that sense there was no "tearless" chapter.  I have great hopes for the next installement.

"E..." I love what you have created. Please continue the magic.

xxoo,

~T

 



Author's Response:

There you are with another smashing review...lol. Thank you. I had this up my sleeve so long. I couldn't wait to dish it out. lol! It caught everyone off guard and I'm so thrilled! WHen did Emmett annoy you..tell me now. I thought he was rather decadent..lmao! U cried? Seriously? Naw. It wasn't so sad. It was just intense and WTF?! I'm glad you consider this magic. Thanks for reading. I emailed you btw.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Stop and Go

okej we all new Rose was a B*** but really.....  poer Emmet..... :)



Author's Response:

I know, Poor Emmett but don't worry. The hypnosis will wear off and he'll be back to normal. It would be as if it never happened :) He won't be so hurt and confused for long. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: laylieb Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Stop and Go

Great chapter!!! Loved the Emmett deal! Quite unexpected!! Soooooo disturbingly curious about Edward!!! Can't wait for an update! Still expecting a HEA!! My heart would break otherwise!! Save me from that please!!! ;)

Author's Response:

lol...sometimes it's good to have a good cry! LOL. Not teasing you, I swear..lol. thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: sugunary Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Stop and Go

Holy crow- so Rosalie had poor Emmett under hypnosis the entire time???

She really is a piece of work, so Edward could live instead of dying, but they will wipe his memories right? Definitely a WTF chapter- hoping you go a certain way with this, but not sure if you will. I do feel really bad for Em. Cant wait to read the next update!



Author's Response:

Yup..the entire time :) I've been dying to write that twist in the story..lol! Everyone is confused..lol. No one knows if we will have an HEA or if Edward will make the noble choice. Soon to be finding out though *wink

Reviewer: oo2uniq4uoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Hour Glass

hey where did u get that pik of edward in ur banner?!



Author's Response:

i found it online somewhere, in google images. Google hakubaiku and u should see it. A friend of mine who designed the banner put Rob's face on the body for me.

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Ready or Not....

WOW WOW WOW I am actually bawling right now, even though I knew that this was coming.  Please don't take this the wrong way, but I don't know if I can bear to continue reading.  I am too emotionally invested and I care too much!

Honestly, I have no words...Congratulations on a job well done.



Author's Response:

I don't take it the wrong way at all...lol. But you HAVE to read on. You MUST! You need to know what happens next or else you will always wonder! That could drive you crazy.... 0.0

 

I was waiting for my PM! You didn't sent it..lol! I want to hear about your dream. Ok well, I'm almost through with the next chapter. It should be posted by late tomorrow. I sincerley hope you read. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Hour Glass

This chapter was very moving.  I can't believe that Jane and Alec had the audacity to show up and cause trouble! Alec got what he deserved and I hope that Jane gets hers for taking Rose away! 

It was so touching that Alice, Jake, and Jasper stayed inside with Bella to show their support for Edward.

Your story touched me so much that I dreamed about it! I will PM you. :)



Author's Response:

Oh I'm very intrested to hear about your dream. You must tell me everything....everything!

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Water Bed

OK, so I had to take a break after this chapter because I am so emotionally invested in this story that it's affecting my head.   I dont know if I really want to know what happens at the end because I want this situation to work out but I dont know if it will. 

As I said, you really made me care about these characters and I am a big sissy! I know, I know... So what it boils down to is that you're an incredibly talented writer and you're story is so moving that I can't finish it all today.  Don't worry, I will be back! :)

I think that this story is a gift, and I am glad that you decided to share it with us.

 



Author's Response:

I'm honored! I know it's angsty and I'm a sucker for a good emotional story, so I'm sorry if it pulls you in so deep that it starts affecting you. I've been told that a lot about this story. I have a lot of ppl crying apparently..lol. As always, I'm tempted to give hints about the direction the story will take, but then that will compromise the end effect and I don't want that . All I can say is...you're not gonna want to miss it? lol. Worth a try and I know it's not nearly comforting as it should be, but it's all I got right now. lol. So, I look forward to your futher repviews and thanks again for your thoughts. They are more rewarding that you know.

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Dead End

This chapter made me cry. 

I thought that I would be able to read through this in its entirety but I am almost emotionally drained.  The poingancy of your writing can be overwhelming... and I mean that as a compliment. 

Set in Stone is quickly becoming my favorite fan fic EVER...and I have read a lot of them.

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Some like it hot. Some like it cold.

Dear GOD woman are you trying to kill me?

I think I need a moment. 



Author's Response:

Hi Tameas, I just checked in today and saw all your wonerful reviews. I love them all. Thank you so much! I'm pleasantly overwhelmed by your support. A million thank yous. And you only just to the real juice of the story..lol. It gets a hell of a lot more intense!

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Bucket List

WOW...Just WOW.

You get a blue ribbon for your lemons!!!!!

Holy ***!

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Absconder

This chapter left me speechless. The latin love note inscribed on the roof and Bella's letter was so moving that I teared up.  I think that your story is going to make me burst into tears.  I don't see how this can work out and that makes me sad! :(

 

Reviewer: oo2uniq4uoo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Ready or Not....

UPDATE!!PLZ!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL! I'm working on it :)

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 5 - First Pact

Oh boy...I can't believe that Edward broke his vow of secrecy! I hope that Bella keeps the fairy dust around her neck at all times!  You've got me on the edge of my seat...but this story has also touched me tremendously.  Great job.

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 4 - What the.....

You're an excellent writer and you really know how to tell a wonderful tale!  You've got me hating Rosalie and feeling miserable for Edward and Bella! 

This is one of the best fan fics that I have read.

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 - the Problem of Isabella Swan

This story already has me upset...which means that you've written it really well!  I hope that this works out so I will keep reading, but if Edward really dies you will have me in tears, which neve happens from reading.

Congrats on creating a novel storyline that draws in the emotion of the reader.

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Messenger

I am worried for Bella and the "danger" that Edward warned her about.  I am intrigued by this "stone" that  he gave Bella.  I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Discovery

Uh oh...is this a HEA story?  I have a feeling that this story is going to be sad!!  But I am hooked so I have to keep reading. 

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:37 PM Title: Prologue

WOW this is the most unique idea that I've come across.  What determines whether he will cease to exist or revert to human form?  You're very creative!

Reviewer: arian134 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Ready or Not....

pllleaseee update soon!!



Author's Response:

*giggle* I'm working real hard on that. Thanks!

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Ready or Not....

OMG!!!!! i have been on the edge of my seat the hole time i have read this. i cant get over this story. i am on the edge of my seat or in tears with every chapter. cant wait for the next chapter.oh god, hurry!!!

Author's Response:

Hey :) Thanks for an awesome review. Always great to hear from my readers. I"ll try to get the update out quickly. It won't be more than 3 or 4 days. Thanks again!

Reviewer: laylieb Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 9:58 PM Title: Prologue

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

Author's Response:

LOL! You're welcome! Welcome! Welcome! LOL!

Reviewer: sugunary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Ready or Not....

no no no no no please dont kill him...cried my way thru the last half of this chapter- there hs to be an hea right?Cant wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Yikes. eerybody's crying....*hides* Sorry? lol. Next update maybe tomorrow if I can write my ass off all through tonight. *fingers crossed* I know you girls are anxious!

Reviewer: sugunary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 14 - The Princess and the Pea

Oh my frakig Lord, that was hilarious, loved your swipe at the LU cant understand the love for StHh fanfics, but oh well, that was great.

Reviewer: sugunary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Lion and the Lamb

I have so fallen in love with this story. The whole concept of the guardian gargoyles is great, but their love is already like a great tragedy. he only has a month left. Is it even possible for him to change his mind and instead of ceasing to exist revert to human form? Even then thouh he wont remember anything that happened in his immortal years. Hoping this will have a HEA of some kind.

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Date: 08 Apr 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Ready or Not....

I can't  stop crying........when they were "having sex" the last time and he kept saying no and flying away from Alice......OMG the tears started.. when she read part of the jounral i was crying.......by the last part of them saying "goodbye" i was bawling like a baby and i can't stop.......i'm sorry this isn't long.....i'm a emotional wreak right now..lol.



Author's Response:

*hands you tissues* * holds your head on my shoulder* Shhhh.....you cry too much T baby...lol. Sorry for making you an emotional wreck..can't help it. I love angst..lol

Reviewer: chishi09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Ready or Not....

OMG.  I love it.  My heart goes out to all of them especially Edward and Bella.  Beautifully written.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thanks BB. THanks for reading and for all your lovely reviews.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Ready or Not....

ohhh god.... tears just keep coming.:)



Author's Response:

*hands you a tissue* I cried too! Wipe your tears BB

Reviewer: fairytaleland Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Ready or Not....

Great chapter.  Please don't tell me he dies. 



Author's Response:

Ok then, I won't tell you... lmao! lol Sorry for being such a goof

Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Ready or Not....

Ok i love this story and yes it is morbid, but i hope to god you surprise us and let them live and love each other in some kind of way. I really do because at this point I dont think that will happen lol, but im hoping for it.



Author's Response:

I'm usually so tempted to just spill it out..lol. But Ican't. You dont want to miss the end tho, it's all I can say LOL!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 6:08 PM Title: Prologue

i realy hoppe everyting is okej with you..... it´s been a week sins the last update. I´m not complaning.... take all the time in the world. I´m just woryd something may have hapend in your life.......

Hopp all is well..... :)



Author's Response:

Hi hun, I'm ok. Thanks for asking. I've been under some pressure and wasn't in the writing headspace for a whlle, but I'm working on that next chapter tonight. Hopefully I can have it out in 2 days.

 

Reviewer: Macyn Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 16 - The Hour Glass

Great chapter! Your story is amazing!

~Macyn Cullen~



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot. Sorry for the late reply to this :) I'm trying! lol

Reviewer: Ruby Pen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 8:26 AM Title: Prologue

Wow!

I'm speechless. This is ann incredible story and I'm glad I stumbled on it. Keep writing!

Author's Response:

Thank you :) I"m working on it! :)

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Date: 24 Mar 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 16 - The Hour Glass

OMG... ***sighs with a heavy heart..***  How do we get the Elders to sympathize with the Cullen Host?  More over, get them to overrule Edward decision to die and give him other options instead.  Or why not have Emmitt inducted as an elder already.  Emmitt's first act in office can be something... oh I don't know.  I've got a million other things running though my mind trying to guess how this WTF situation can be resolved.  I wonder what was discussed between Edward and Carlisle.  Whatever it was, is it all out the door now?  Beautifully written BYW!



Author's Response:

LOL. All your theories are inspiring. THanks for the effort. The discussion between Ed and Carlisle will be exposed soon! THanks for reading

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Hour Glass

Ok deep breath today was not the day to read this...... whoa..

first OMG Japser and Alice throwing her around the sky like a toy football.. Edward would have a shit fit if he knew that....lol

Um Rose god i actually feel sorry for her.....i hope nothing happens to her it would kill Emmett plus i don't want to see anything bad happen to her because of what she was going to do... now if it's their last "time " together how is Bella getting home? Will Alice take her home , and if she does won't Bella still be in danger since she still remembers? The think with Alec was cool.. i figure Alice is freaking out because Jasper is possible going to get into big trouble for what he did? The part with Edward and Bella..... broke my heart i kind of thought Bella might sneak out and run away to not bring anymore trouble to them but if they are blocking the door i don't see how she can ....... Such a good chapter and of course sad.. i thought u threw a carefree chapter in there then next chapter would be heartwrenching but nope this one was sad...



Author's Response:

I love this review T. Keep em coming! And don't be so sad all the time!!! LOL

Reviewer: notthemoats Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Hour Glass

A HEA please?  I'm already having a hard enough time dealing with the sadness in these chapters.  Enjoyed the flying games in this chapter.

Reviewer: laylieb Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Hour Glass

I definitley require an HEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please don't tell me that I've read this whole story and now they won't end up together!!! I couldn't handle that!! I read a story over on Twilighted and they didn't end up HEA and I was devastated!!!!!! Please please please!!!!!

Author's Response:

Yes Ma'am! LOL! I can't tell you nything other than ..... you're not gonna want to miss it *wink*

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Hour Glass

I have to sey that Jasper is realy fun in thi chapter.....normaly he is writhen difrently.



Author's Response:

thanks! I'm loving my Jasper..lol

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Hour Glass

I hopp that this has a happy ending..... but you are the writher. I´m hopping for sekuel......:)

Reviewer: fairytaleland Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Hour Glass

Great chapter. I hope there is a HEA.  I don't know how she would be able to continue living a happy life afterwards.



Author's Response:

Almost to the end. FIngers crossed?? lol. Everyone's asking for HEA, but I can't say what will happen. All will be revealed...lol!

Reviewer: jkcmama0307 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Hope

that was so good. I got teary eyed about Bella not remembering Edward/

Reviewer: roxie1207 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 14 - The Princess and the Pea

Please post the out-take--I can only imagine what was running through poor Edwards head!



Author's Response:

The outtake is already posted dear! I put it up today. Just click on my proile to find it!

Reviewer: chishi09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Hope

Oh the suspense!  It would kill me if has a Romeo & Juliet ending.  It just can't end that way.  I believe in HEA!!

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 14 - The Princess and the Pea

LMaO~~!!

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Water Bed

That is so thoughtful of Stoneward!  They need to use the six days wisely.



Author's Response:

Six days or so....of action, adventure, heart failure and love :) Posting the next update tomorrow or maybe very late tonight...we'll see. Thanks for all your reviews!

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Dead End

Oh yeah, I'm so hooked!

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Oui

Yikes!  What's happening?!

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Some like it hot. Some like it cold.

Your lemons are senn...sa..tional!  Whoa.

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Bucket List

;D  Ooh my.  I love it!

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Lion and the Lamb

She ran away with him!!!  Oh yes!



Author's Response:

Oh wow, I'm loving your review on every chapter! Thanks! And I'm so glad you ike Gargoyle Edward... *smile*. He's a keeper!

Reviewer: chishi09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Twilight

I locked my room door and then I cried like hell.  I swear.  I am so intrigued by this story.

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Absconder

Oh Bella, I feel your pain.  I'm in love with your gargoyle too.

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